FF: Hamara Pyaar*(NOTE; pg 112; 3rd oct)* - Page 38

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Posted: 16 years ago

Hi guys

This is todays update, hope you like it

Next one mostly day after tom

Don't forget to leave comments…………

Chapter 16

"excuse me how long is it gonna be before this flight takes of??", asked a frustrated heer to the air hostess, "we've been sitting like this for the past 1 hour!!!"

"im sorry ma'am there been some technical error, it might take a while but we're trying are best. Is there something I can get you??", said the air hostess apologetically.

" yeah…. California maybe!!", mumbled heer grumpily, " um …no … thanks just keep me updated will you" , replied a tired heer

It was barely 10 in the morning but it had obviously harrowing, for heer was willing to murder anyone in sight. Heer hated anyone who ruined her mornings, it was assured that the rest of the day would go bad. And today that prem was the cause. Why couldn't he just shut up after he said he didn't wanna come ?? I mean I didn't ask him to justify himself, he didn't hav to reason out. I mean im not anaconda, I wouldn't have gobbled him down, just because he said no.

And that sanjana!!! How much difference would have 3 days made??

We'll have loads of fun she mimicked . what the hell was that supposed to mean. Im not dumb , I knew that was directed at me!! Whats he making a dig at me for??

"For running away ms smarty pants", her mind chastised," for running away to find the 'supposed' answers that you are already well aware of"

" oh thanks so much wise one, the last thing I need right now is to have my mind hate me, so I would appreciate it if you could mind your own business", she fumed.

"haha are you the funny one today ", her mind snapped back," and as a matter of fact YOU are, as you so eloquently put it, my business. And right now all I can tell you is that you don't give a damn about this, its not its delay that pisses you off, it's the fact that sanjana is getting the attention which you somewhere deep down desired had prem come along. And that is a fact!!"

Having no retort heer decided it was time for her to shut up and thankfully the flight took and she drifted of to sleep.

"common u stupid thing work!!!...... WORK!!! WORK !!! WORK!!" she screamed.

" I get it you hate me but for heavens sake couldn't you decide to crap out later, I swear ill give you all the time, but pls just work this once you stupid pile of crap!!!"meher continued sceaming at her computer

"okay ppplllllleeeeaaaasssssseeeeee, pppppllllllsssss ,ppppplllllllssssss good boy, good computer, I swear ill get cookies" tried meher changing her strategy, maybe being nice to it would make it work.

"you mean you'll get rid of all the cookies",corrected prem,leaning against the door frame and watching meher in her act. "computers don't like cookies, they prefer getting rid of it!!", continued prem

"oh!!",said and embarresed meher

"need some help??", asked prem

"um … yeah …desperately", said meher helplessly," I need to mail an assignment, which I don't see anywhere in the near future as my darling computer decided to break up with me", meher said sardonically.

Chuckling he moved towards the table in the study and turned her computer to face him. Seeing the computer in a complete mess he exclaimed," this is gonna take a while." "really??", asked a concerned meher bitting her lower lip.

" you know you remind me a lot of veera, and don't worry it can be fixed", he smiled.

"thank god", said meher looking upwards.

Trying to make good use of this opportunity, prem tried to get to know more about wat exactly happened to them …. Or rather her

" so meher, ur a med student right??" he asked to which she nodded

" so why don't you tell me bout yourself , heer tells—um told me that you wanted to be a cardiologist.", he said a little too innocently trying to pry step by step. But meher out smarted him," so is this the 'important' work huh??" she said with raised eyebrows.

PRECAP

I don't know where to start from, its weird but even though I hated you I still want to thank you for what you did to heer di

Love

Amana

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Posted: 16 years ago
hey amana
great update, nice try prem, getting all information from meher instead of heer, might be more successful, and heer and her mind bickering was really nice 😆
so day after tomorrow, right? will be waiting
thanks for the pm
tc
fatima
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey thanx amna dear
thanks for the PM and your Update was good!!
i guess that was a good idea to get meher and prem talk about heer i hope that brings things better between them
thanx for the update.................anxiousy waiting for the next one ...............
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Posted: 16 years ago
awesomeeeeeeeee too good very nice part waitinggggggggg for ext asap.
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Posted: 16 years ago
hi, i really like ur idea for this ff. ur doing a great job,👏.
jeez... looks like heer isnt having a nice day... that to beacuse of PREM!!!😆
WAITING FOR UR NEXT UPDATE. KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK!!👏
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey amana...great update as always...
gosh! this update was too good....lmao...heer's convo with her mind was too funny..🤣ooooooooooh heer is really grumpy wen she is in a bad mood no? n telling her own mind to mind its buisness..lol...all that was put very well...was this 1 also put like this due to ur friend's insistance?anyway, i just loved it...
hmm so, prem is now trying to get info from meher...he has brains...like u said, he is turning into a sherlok holmes..lol...
ah....n that precap is very interesting...
So now ur having hols no? wen will ur school reopen? jan 3rd?
Merry xmas!!
cya
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey
awesum super update
prem try to get info
can't wait...
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Posted: 16 years ago
wow amana! fantastic update!👏 ahaha heer's own convo with herself was hilarious! lol heer in a bad mood eh? hmmm i wonder cuz of who!😆 omg prem is just tooo good....getting info from meher! lol hope you continue soon!
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Posted: 16 years ago
AWESOME update like always!!!!👏👏👏... hope heer give prem enough info about heer!!!!!!!.... will be wating for the next part!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: fj08

hey amana hi fatima!!
great update really?? thanks, nice try prem, getting all information from meher instead of heer, might be more successful, and heer and her mind bickering was really nice 😆 well keep ur fingers crossed
so day after tomorrow, right? will be waiting yea... im totally free exept with a little hw which i intend taking care of today
thanks for the pm hey no problem
tc yea u too bye thanks for reading
fatima

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