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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey great part read da previous ones to luved it cnt w8 to read more do update soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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thnxxx every1

PART-5(LAST PART)

prem ka phone aya.prem phone main bate karraha tha or heer cottage k kitchen dekhrehi thi.bohot old cottage hain issliyea bohot dhul hain.prem heer ko dhundte dhundte kitchen pouchgaya.suddnely ek sound hua or heer darkemare dourke prem ko hug kiya😳.yea actually ek billi ka sound tha.)

prem:ek billise dar gaie.hahahaha😆

heer:nehi bo bo

prem:haha achaa chalo preet haamhe leneke liyea aaraha hain.

heer:chalo.

(prem, heer or preet or ash ghar chalegayea.)

(heer ki exam chalraha tha or kuch din baad khatam ho gaya.)

(heer ki bauji heer se uski shaddi k baremain baat karna cahte hain)

surikanth:heer beta dekh bohot ho gaie yea parahain aab teri shaddi ka ummar ho gaya hain beti

(heer chup hain becoz bo prem se thoda thoda payar karne laga han paar bo samajhnehi paarehi hain or prem bhi heer payar karta hain paar samajhta nehi hain.)

surikanth:kaya hua heer?

heer:bo bauji didi ki shaddi hojane dijiyea na

surikanth:achaa thik hain teri marji.

(heer or uski family ko unke rishtedar ne ek party main bulaya hain or unfortunately usnke bo rishtedar daljeet chachi ka bhi door k risthtedar hain.bo dono parivaar party main ayea.prem ne heer ko dekha heer bhi prem ko dekhi.daljeet janti hain k heerr or prem ek dushrese payaer karte hain issliyea prem ko saabke najromain girane k liyea uske ek plan banaya.unki ek frnd hain gita usko usne kaha:)

daljeet:gita tu ek kaam kar.main prem ko ek letter deti hoon bo parhke bo uppar k kaamremain jayeaga or tu boha prem k sath rehegi.

gita:oh prem haan haan main to uske liyea kuchbhi karsakhti hoon(😳)

(daljeet ne prem ko ek letter diya usmian likha hain k heer usko uppar k room main bula raha hain.fir prem uppar k room main gaya.)

prem:heer!heer kaha hoon ho tum?

gita:prem!

pren:tum!tum koun hoon or heer kaha hain?

(gita prem ki haat pakar k usko bed main lekar bethaya or usse payar ki baatekarrehi hain.preem utthh gaya.)

prem:wat rubbish!!yea kaya bool rehi hoon tum?

(gita prem ki haat pakar k joorse usko aapni taraf khicha or prem uske uppar gir gaya or thik iss tym pai prem k family or heer or heer k family uss room pai pohoch gaye or saab dekhliya.saab prem ko galat samajhrehe hain koi uska baat nehi suunraha hai or saab bohase chalegayea..)

(prem dukhi hoo kar rivar k kinare main beitha tha then preet aakar usko samjhaya or bola k bo heer se payar karta hain paar bo samajhta nehi then prem heer se millne gaya.)

prem:heer!

(heer baat na sunke jaa rehi hain)

(prem heer ko aapne taraf khicha)

pren:heer meri baat suno..

(heer ki bauji ne saab dekhliya or prem ko bura bhala bool k nikal diya.)

(2day ash ki shaggai hain.prem preet ko lekar heer ghar pohouch gaya.)

prem:rouk do yea shaggai.

(saab chup ho gayea hain.)

surikanth:tu...tu frse yahan aagaya..??

prem:haanyea saggai nehi hoon sakhti.bauji aap aapni beti k khusi ko samajhne nehi sakhte k bo preet se payar karti hain

surikanth:baas...baas...chala ja yahan se tu..

(daljeet chachi aie)

daljeet:hain re mera prem tu to heer se payar karta hain to ash ki shaggai q roukna cahta hain?

surikanth:kaya!!!!!

daljeet:haan...kaya prem maine sach bola na

surikanth:prem kaya yea sach bool rehi hain?

prem:HAAN...HAAN MAIN HEER SE PAYAR KARTA HOON.

(heer surprised)

surikanth:😡


prem:haan karta hoon main usse payar lekin main usske liyea yahan nehi aya hoon main aapne bhai k khushi k liyea yahan aya hoon.

heer:baas prem.........baass..bohot bool chuke tum..tumhe kaya lagta hain yea payar ka dhoung karoge to main bikhal jaoungi..haan?

prem:heeer tum galat samajhrehi hoon

heer:baas or kuch nehi sunna cahti hain tum chale jaou yahan se chale jaou.

pren:paar heer

surkanth:suna nehi k heer ne kaya kaha.aab tu khud jayea ga yea..

ash:bauji!!!

surikanth:ash tu!!!!

ash:haan bauji yea sach bool raha hain main or preet ek dushrese bohot payar karte hain.

surikanth:chi..chi..meri betine mera sara maan samman dubahi diya.iss preet ko to main

ash:bauji nehi.choriyea isse.main isske bina nehi jee sakhti

surikanth:nehi jee sakhti na toh chali ja isske sath yahan se ja chali ja.aabse mere liyea tu marchuki hain.jaa

(surikanth ne jaab ko bohase nikal diya.prem oir uska family ash ko lekar mumbai chala ja raha hain.)

(heer roo rehi hain thik is tym tv main news aya k mumbai janebale ek car ka road main accident ho gaya.surikanth news dekhke doorke chalegaye or heer (dev daas k paru k tarah)doore preem bool k jaarehi hain uss accident k jagapar.)

(heer uss jaga pouchkar dekhi ek laash(dead body)hain boha or prem ki full family hain boha paar prem nehi issliyea usssne samjha k bo dead body prem ka hain issliyea bo body ko joor se pakar kar bo roo rehi hain)

heer:prem!1uttho pren!!main tumhari bina nehi jee sakhti..mujhea maf kardo prm

(pichea se ek voice aya ""heeer"".heer pichea dekhi or dekhi k prem saamne khara hain.)

heer:prem!!tum !!

prem:haan heer mujhea nehi pata tha k tum mujhse payar karti hoon or karti hoon bhi toh itna karti hoon k laash ko bina dekhei roo pari.hahaha😆

(surikanth aya)


surikanth:heer beta maine bohot bari bhul kardiya.mujhea vikhram or preet ne or ash ne sabh khul k bataya k preem ka koi galti nehi hain saab dosh to hain us daljeet ka jo main bharakh gaya.mujhe maaf karde beta prem

prem:are nehi nehi yea kaya karrehi hain aapke tarafse aapne jobhi kiya thik hi kiya tha.now aab saab thik hain to lets enjoy....

(aab saab ek sath baate karrehe hain or prem heer ek sath romance 😳karrehe hain.)

prem:heer bolo na

heer:kaya?

prem:bohi jo uss lash ko bool rehi thi

heer:prem!

prem:chalo mainhi boolta hoon.kaya boolu?

heer:😳

prem:I. LOVE U HEER

heer;😳😳

prem:tumbhi bolo

heer;I LOVE U PREM................................


(BO DONO EK DUSHRE K GALE LAAG GEYEA....)

YEHI THAA PREM OR HEER KA SACHAA PAYAR KA SAFAR..............


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MAARBHI JAYE....MEET BHI JAYE....

JEENDA REHTI HAIN UNKI MOHHABATE!!!!




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FRNDS I HOPE TUMSAAB KO YEA FF ACHAA LAG.......ENJOY...

RIA.................









Edited by priya.ria - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#33

beautiful😳 and cute😛 updt.thank u soooooooooo much for such a wonderful ff

-sugi

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Posted: 16 years ago
#34
great ff...loved it...it was so amazing...........
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Posted: 16 years ago
#35
loved it your ff was awesome you are a great writer
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Posted: 16 years ago
#36
hey
that was awesome. 👏 nice ff....keep up the good work. 😊

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