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YAY! Update!
OHMYGOD! Prem and Heer were engaged?? And she left him at the mandap due to whatever happened with Rinki? 😲
And that was pretty much all that struck me in the story.. 😆 Once the shock has settled in, will come back and edit this properly.. Theek hai?
Love,
Radz
Okay, let's start from the beginning.. The way you've portrayed the siblings (both pairs) is cho chweet.. They're so close, and loving.. 😃 Really liked it..
Rinki's meeting with Prem was 😆 too cool.. Bonding over telling an old lady to shut up! 😆 Seedha sadha Prem told off an old lady! Then, in the words of Rinki turned into an 'angry young man' (reminded me of Geet from JWM and Nupur from MJHT 😆) when he recognised her.. The twist was unexpected.. "mera sali".. I was 😲 completely when I read that.. And Rinki not knowing why he turned distant all of a sudden, so she got annoyed (I can see you doing that to someone.. 😆)
Then on the other side, Preet and Heer.. Preet finding Heer familiar, than his shout! 😆😆😆 That is so much like Preet, it was hilarious! Absolutely hilarious. And the air stewardess asking him if he needed medication.. 😆 I was laughing so much, thank god no one was in the room with me! And Preet, being Preet, announces to everyone that this is his Bhabhi.. *shakes head* Only Preet.. 😆
Now to the more important bits.. Heer and Prem.. Both sides have strong feelings for one another, and Prem resents and is hurt with Heer leaving him at the mandap, or rather never turning up.. Heer feels guilty about that, and for never calling him back to try to explain.. Both sides have validity.. I feel sorry for both of them actually.. btw, the Twilight reference was funny, especially when you consider your part 1B, and your introduction of Prem.. 😆
Loved the part, good luck with your work! Update when you are free, no stress and worries! Take care sweetie!
Love,
Radz
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