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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Anhdara13

YAY! Update!

yes radz! update!! πŸ˜†
OHMYGOD! Prem and Heer were engaged?? And she left him at the mandap due to whatever happened with Rinki? 😲
um hehe...yea
And that was pretty much all that struck me in the story.. πŸ˜† Once the shock has settled in, will come back and edit this properly.. Theek hai?
lmao kayy
Love,
Radz
Okay, let's start from the beginning.. The way you've portrayed the siblings (both pairs) is cho chweet.. They're so close, and loving.. πŸ˜ƒ Really liked it..
okies lets do that...thanks!! hehe 😳
Rinki's meeting with Prem was πŸ˜† too cool.. Bonding over telling an old lady to shut up! πŸ˜† Seedha sadha Prem told off an old lady! Then, in the words of Rinki turned into an 'angry young man' (reminded me of Geet from JWM and Nupur from MJHT πŸ˜†) when he recognised her.. The twist was unexpected.. "mera sali".. I was 😲 completely when I read that.. And Rinki not knowing why he turned distant all of a sudden, so she got annoyed (I can see you doing that to someone.. πŸ˜†)
ah yea i would wanna meet prem all cool and stuff πŸ˜† hey that lady was annoying ya kno! hehe yayy i shocked you!! blame the plot bunnies in my head abt this new twist nd all...umm i can imagine myself doing that too, except i would smack em πŸ˜†
Then on the other side, Preet and Heer.. Preet finding Heer familiar, than his shout! πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜† That is so much like Preet, it was hilarious! Absolutely hilarious. And the air stewardess asking him if he needed medication.. πŸ˜† I was laughing so much, thank god no one was in the room with me! And Preet, being Preet, announces to everyone that this is his Bhabhi.. *shakes head* Only Preet.. πŸ˜†
ah yea preet...tehehe loved writing that πŸ˜† lmao glad to have made u laugh radz πŸ˜† hehe yesh only preet *sighs*
Now to the more important bits.. Heer and Prem.. Both sides have strong feelings for one another, and Prem resents and is hurt with Heer leaving him at the mandap, or rather never turning up.. Heer feels guilty about that, and for never calling him back to try to explain.. Both sides have validity.. I feel sorry for both of them actually.. btw, the Twilight reference was funny, especially when you consider your part 1B, and your introduction of Prem.. πŸ˜†
yea premeer....hm lmao yea atleast someone remembered the way i introduced him!! see heer's so rite abt prem, reading twilight while imagining him....tehehe
Loved the part, good luck with your work! Update when you are free, no stress and worries! Take care sweetie!
thanks radz!! -hug-
Love,
Radz
love ya too
rinkz

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: shabo24

Shuddap Radz, it's not my fault you live in godamn Singapore...Rinki updated during like your daytime...I wa sfast asleep...dreaming...about Prem....☺️
ahem ahem! dreaming of him with UR bhabhi rite shabz πŸ˜†
DHUSHAM DHUSAM DHUSAM!!!! *balaji shocking music style* OMGGGGGGG!!!! errr creepyy
OMGGGGGGG!!!!
OMGGGGGGG!!!!
OMGGGGGGG!!!!
OMGGGGGGG!!!!
THEY ARE ENGAGED?!!?!!? yes
OR WERE??????????????????????? i think ill make it still but then again no! not anymore...this will be a good way for the romantic scenes in rasams to play out
OMGGGGGGG!!!!
OMGGGGGGG!!!!
OMGGGGGGG!!!!
OMGGGGGGG!!!!
OMGGGGGGG!!!! yea tlk abt blonde much πŸ˜†

*pjew* OK I'm ok now....!!!!!! But wow, there is a shocker!!!!😲The sibling bond was really cute, its so pure and all naa? Shoo shweet!!!
er ur never kay shabz! hehe thanksss
Haha, Rinki and Prem talking was so cute, Rinki being amused so easily and then Prem going like "Ahh acha...toh ye hai meri natanki saali" Can so see that happen! You know what I love? When guys KNOW that they are hot....☺️☺️☺️makes them even hotter...☺️☺️☺️
eyyy im not!! nautanki!!....-hides- hehe i kno rite! smexxyyness rite there
Hayye, Preet was so....PREET...no other word for it...and the air hostess asking him if he wanted medication and him looking at her like wtf is your problem lady???🀣So Preet, and then yellign Bhabhi....I could actually see that!!
lmao glad u could see it
Ahh Premeer's past is haunting....I really want to know what happened? Prem was stood up at hte mandap because Heer didn't show up and this all related back to Rinki?πŸ€”What do you have planned woman???*tsk tsk*
nah ill keep YOU in suspence...this time me wnt tell kimz either....wll tlk with my other partner...muahaha and no its not radz πŸ˜† wellll yes....rinks is to blame πŸ˜† i have lots of things planned, like graduating frm high skool, going to college, getting my degree in medical, becoming a doctor, takin my mom on world tour or just tokyo like i promised...and more and more πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ
Update whenever!! And good luck with school.....I'm drownign as well...don't worry, we are comrades in misery....!
ah yea i kno....comrades in misery! πŸ˜†
Shabz

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: angel82

Rinki,

di!! kaisi ho??
Finally I made it here....I'm really sorry I'm late * holding ears* ....I did comment on your Mine epilogue last week...And now here....I will comment on Woh Mile the later ok...
I know I havnt commented on any parts here, so this is going to be long...I did want to comment on this earlier but I had to read it from the beginning as there were a few things confusing me...So I thought I will take my own time and do it araamse...
aww its okayy didz! kayy comment however and whenever u like di, no pressure πŸ˜‰πŸ˜ƒ
Coming to Part 1 A
hehe lets see what u have to sayy

Aha, so Balraj and Teji aren't together anymore... hmm actually they are "together" they didn't divorce but its basically him drowning himself in wrk and teji staying at home thinkin of her life, daughters...im plannin on a chapi where ill show them both...ballu regreting his mistakes and all that...and show teji supporting him silently and finally later on prem and preet will get them to meet the girls and they'll be happy again πŸ˜†

and Heer is a quiet and sensible girl...Well in the first page where you have given a rough idea about the characters Heer was supposed to be kinda tomboyish.....Did you change it ?? ah yea i think i changed it, its more like her being quiet and stylish but she doesnt go out to parties or flirt and all that like other girls, shes more sensible and likes to think in a quiet place...do u get what im trying to say? πŸ˜†

Rinki is the naughty oneπŸ˜ƒ and she has caused their father to drift more away from the family' yea its more like her always pulling pranks and annoying him made him go to wrk more and less at home and the final straw was when she comes home with a baby boy, kris and he throws her out of the house, u can imagine what he must;ve thought then

Hmm wonder whats that big mistake Rinki made...Will get to know in the coming parts..

Heer got a job at a popular Magazine...Cool....her mistake was to trust rahul yea heers wrkin in a desgining type of role...thats kinda changing too πŸ˜†
I loved the sisterly moments in the part...it was fun to read....thanks didz!! 😳

Part 1B

Heer is to work for Prem's company...does she know that she is going to work for Prem's company at this point, or she doesnt...from the sentence I thought she knows but as I read further I felt she doesnt know.....no she doesnt anymore, i might have indicated at her knowing but then i changed it to her not knowing, goes better with the twist πŸ˜†

Rinki gets a call from Rahul ...Rahul was Rinki's friend?? But becoz of Rahul Rinki had to leave her house and Heer had to come with her and its become difficult for Rinki to face her Dad...

This makes me eager to know more about Rinki's past and what her mistake was...

Kris?? Is he another friend of Rinki ??But Kris' Nana lets her know about him,does that mean he is a kid??...... oh no , another suspense....making me very anxious to know...

yea...basically rahul and her "dated" and then him getting kiara preggers and all that makes her "dislike" him immensly πŸ˜† ah yea kris is a kid...he's Kiara nd rahul's kid that they were abt to place in a orphange but rinks takes him in her shelter nd goes home with him...and told that in the top
Heer gets appointed to work under Prem in Greece...sounds romantic...and the sisters need a change of location to get out of the past...it becoming very interesting...
Love the rinki -Heer relation here...hehe yea...romantic, which is why me changed it πŸ˜‰ thanks didz 😳
Wow Prem's introduction was cool ...hmm..sorry hot ...πŸ˜†πŸ˜† lmao hehe
Prem- in his mid twenties, white shirt ,sleeves rolled up, stubble ,Tough to work with.( ofcourse it would be tought to work with such a disturbingly handsome boss) u got it all, even the () prt πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

Aha ,Preet's introductionπŸ˜ƒ...prem's younger brother ...πŸ˜•Again in the first page you mentioned that Prem doesnot have a family...πŸ˜•I guess you changed that and brought in Preet for RinkiπŸ˜‰...I know Rinki has an eye on him...but that was cool to bring him in too....He is always fun...and here Rinki and Preet will rock for sure...ah yesh srryyyy me did change that, hehe yea he's there for rinki and they'll be helping premeer get together again πŸ˜‰ hehe thanks, ooh yea am also adding baa from kyunki as prem and preet's baa, he needs a family member which can cause premeer to be together in the "house" also πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰

Now Part 2

Wow so they are on their way to Greece'cool..yesh hehe

Preet got to sit near Heer and Rinki near Prem'πŸ˜ƒLiked the way he put off the lady...πŸ˜†

Heer was reading Twilight 'who isn'tπŸ˜†lmao im not! yet...hehe

Prem was her senior at college and Prem was in love with her and she too had fallen for him later...I like college romances...its fun...They were supposed to get married...and Heer never showed up at the mandap...Heer left the house with Rinki on the day before her marriage..And Rinki didn't know about the marriage??πŸ˜•she wasn't there for the engagement'.Nobody let her know, not even her parents'I want to Know Rinki's secret now.....ok will wait till you update it... yea rinki was in london for her studies, she knew abt the marriage just not to who and when...so yea...ahh rinki's secret is kinda wack...i somewat explained it up in the other comments of urs πŸ˜† hope u got the little hints nd managed to place it together

Prem had been in her mind for the last two yrs,she loved him and wanted to marry him but couldnt ...She knows what she has done was not right....hmm I assume she doesnt know she is going to work for HIM....its not going to be easy for her....muahaha of course its not gnna be easy!! me will make sure of that! -evil- tehehe
Oh Preet was soo funny when he realized who she was'Absolutely loved that whole scene..it was funny...and you have written it well...hehe thanks didi 😳😳

''angry young man'' actually remimded me of Geet's dialogue in Jab we met'Rinki kinda resembles her....ah yea both are hyper nah πŸ˜†

Kulraj is Prem's current secretary....Heer is appointed to work as his secretary rite..So she will replacing her? ooh yea that also is kinda confusing..kay kul is his secretary that takes care of everything for him and all that, heer comes in to wrk with/under him as a artist for the designing becuz they're magazine house is abt desgins for clothes, arcitecture and the likes and shes gnna be the head of the creative team/his secretary [the personal one] who will have to go everywhere with him...does that help kinda? πŸ˜ƒ

Teenage girls giving Prem flirty glancesπŸ˜‰πŸ˜†, can you blame him....and was he following her all the while or he just happened to notice her at that moment...he just happened to notice it at that moment, cuz he was busy thinkin abt his meeting πŸ˜†
I know I have asked a lot of questions but what to do , me cant help it......sorry...but you need to answer them only if you are free ...arre nahin di, i liked ur questions, it told me where i should pay more attention so they'll be answered in the prts nd no one wil be confused! no srry needed! i tried to answer em all, hope it hlped, if ur still confused then lemme know, ill explain in details πŸ˜ƒ
Eagerly waiting for the next part...but know you are busy..take your own time...
thanks didz!! 😳
Luv
Angie

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rinkz

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: lian

Hmmmmm,u had changed the story line but this 1is also really goodπŸ‘this part was good i just loved the part whn Prem said Madam dont u think u talk to muchπŸ˜†πŸ€£πŸ€£but y did she run frm her wedding with PremπŸ˜•????will wait for the next part😳

thanks liana! hehe yea i changed a lot of stuff πŸ˜†πŸ˜† dnt wrry will explain it all later on! thanks for the sweet comment!! 😳😳
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: premeer

Love Part 2!!

Mee Want To Read Moree..
Continue When You Can..πŸ˜ƒ
-Priyanka x

hey pri
lolz thanks! hehe will try to cont. soon! 😳
rinki
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: ~Rinki~

thanks, uh yea i did...hm what do you mean by "boy that was different language....so is that the difference between u two?" i am slightly confused at ur meaning behind this...
thanks for the tip, but i wnt be following it πŸ˜† if u know me, then u'll come to realize that i always have to make changes to something....i write what comes to mind becuz i dnt have anything outlined that this wil be in the next prt...so its all abt what i think and what i come up with in my mind, i always have something changing in the storyline because i dnt stick to one thing...i like to just go with wat comes in mind...but still thanks for the tip



i was just pulling your leg..... your note was very stern.... and i promise not to bother u abt updates😊
and the tip was also in jest... i can understand everyone has a different way of writing and schedule, most of what i write even in comments and emails and stuff has to be reedited bfore it makes sense to anyone...πŸ˜‰
i like all your FFs, and am looking forward to reading them

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Posted: 16 years ago
Me is here. πŸ₯³Don't blame for anything weird I say, I've been through a whole-loada homework and I feel like strangling my teacher for making me go through that. But reading this will prolly make my mind better, so I prolly won't be writing anything stupid. I know i'll be smiling a lot though. ☺️

Anyyywaayy... I know about the twisstt... *dances* And I love it, so quit the evil laugh. I should be laughing for ruining your 'evilness'. Its so cute you think your evil. πŸ˜›πŸ˜† Aww... yea I hate pm's/messages telling you to continue. It does get irritating so no need to stress it. We all have lives out of i-f and people should respect that. Plus I know how hard you try... 😳

Ooh you changed the title....................... again. 🀣 I was half expecting you to come up with something totally wack. But I love it, thought I'm curious where the phone comes in. πŸ€” P.S. Times new roman never looked this SMEXY! Seriously, loving it... Its all narrow and cuteeee. Totally professional.

Flight 201? Where'd you get that from? I'm not laughing, i swear. I would have been laughing if it was 101 though. Or 420! If it was 420, i'd be in splits. Get it, chaar-so-bees. Gosh rinki, you is so slow. *shakes head* But loved how you started off with the ladies voice, even though I was imagining a guys voice... don't ask. πŸ˜†

Awwww... Preet! Loved him. First he wants to spend time with his brother, then he's all "i can't believe i just did that". I feel for him though, meetings are really boring. I went to one when I was 4. I was sitting on this dudes lap, and he kept pretending to throw away the keys. AND I BELIEVED HIM! Ughh.. stupid big people, always trickin lil kids. Wow, Preets not happy to be sitting away from Prem? I woulda been happy, well I mean if it was my family. Hehe.. not prem, if it was prem then.. ermm.. yea. But you remember that airplane story right? With one of the air-hosts as my BFF's. Aaah i miss him. He taught me how to draw birds. 😍

I'm so glad Preet didn't try to hit on Heer or something. And then when he realized it was Heer, he would've been like 'ewwwww...' and then he woulda been all 'pb's gonna kill me'. But since he didn't and turned on his i-pod instead (JUST LIKE RINKI - Kismat Konection how jaaye... I bet they were both listening to Aai Paapi . Show me your moves Preet!.......... Please.) Faint memory, eh? I knowwww, and preet doesn't. *its my birthday, its my birthday, its my birthday, OH YEA*

Hahaa... Rinki's stuck with an old lady. Don't feel bad for her at all. πŸ˜› But I am surprised she didn't just get up and yell 'SHUT UP YOU OLD WOMAN!'. Then again, I liked Prem's way of doing it better. Cuz I could totally imagine the fury/controling fury. Ahh, amazing. I was cracking up tooo! Twinnies in the story too. *high five*

The way Prem talks is so smexyyy! With all the big words, and the proffesionalism. Loving it. ☺️ And then Rinki totally breaks the atmosphere with the bubbliness. Its like a popping soda, next to HOT coffee. I think you can make out which is which. (P.S - To many 'but's' in para 7).

Oh yea Rinkii.. Your his saali. I have a very bad feeling about him smirking though, as if he has a plan going on his mind. Does he know that Heer's going to work for him? That would make it ever so interesting. Him having it all planned out, to seduce her back. Then again, he had to know why she left him in the first place. Hmmmm... does that mean he's gonna comfort Rinki one time or another? Or are we leaving that to Preet?

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!! Rinki's listening to rap music. πŸ˜’ That totally ruins Kismat Konnection. Ooh btw, what was Preets voice doing thinking for Prem? 🀣 I guess it missed Rinki... 🀣 Aww... Poor Prem, Heer ran away from the day of her marriage. That really changes a lot. Where you really the only reason she left, or was there more? Hmmmm... Im curious. Poor Rinki, getting ignored by Prem. Bad Prem, she didn't do anything. Then agaaaaain.... πŸ€”πŸ˜†

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Did Heer hear Prem's voice? Thats why she glanced up? After all Prem was on the same airplane, and he was remembering her and taking 'thandi aahein'. Aaah too cute. ☺️ OMGOSH!!!!!!!!!!! --- TWILIGHT!!!!!!!!! *screams like she just saw her fave celebrity*. Good job Rinki, getting Heer to read the book. I was hooked from the first page too. And I don't read books that often... tehehee... Edward is the perfect guy, but in new moon, he was TOO perfect. I felt like giving him the tightest slap for leaving Bella. Sure you can be all perfect and giving. But if there's one thing you HAVE to be selfish about, is your family and your lover. I learned that from Usmi. He was 'explaining' himself when he beat up this guy. I just added family though... Cuz familys important too, and you can't leave them for any reason. I have a feeling though, that the perfect I have in mind, Prem is. ☺️ Totally possessive about Heer, and all.

Awww... Heer thinks Prem's perfect too. *high five* So do it. ☺️ What, why are you looking at me like that? Its not like I'm going to go and kidnap him from you!! Errrrmm... Not entirely though... Prem will be enough, you can keep the Juneja.

I don't know why, but the entire time I was reading the Heer-thinking-about Prem. This keep playing over and over in my mind. "Tujhme Rab dikhta hai, yaara mein kya karoon?". It was as if she was admiring his sincerity. I could feel a lil guilt though. Like all she got from him was true love, and she left him.

Hehe... Preet was so awesomely cute. He yells "AHA!" I could totally imagine that too. With his finger pointed towards her, and just staring down at her. Hilarious. 🀣 Preet is awesome, seriously. I loved Heer's reaction... She thought he was a psycho. 🀣 This is from shabz.

🀣

Hmm... how come Heer didn't recognize him? Did they never meet? Preet only saw pics? Thats why he only kinda knew her? Thats why she was a shadow in his memories?

Poor Preet, didn't realize what he was making people think. πŸ˜† Omg! He sat up, totally imaginiable. Him with his knees on the seat, and examining Heer, like she was some kinda doll that came alive. Okay wait another pack of these for the meds think.

🀣

Preet killed it! Telling her he didn't need meds. Oh godd! I could imagine him saying it in a total psycho way though. Heer musta gotten the shock of her life when he said 'bhabi'. She's musta been like 'what kinda psycho am i siting next to?' Aaah... it was all totally hilarious. But I loved the bonding that came between Preet and Heer. Atleast Prem didn't go all up in Rinki's face going 'AHA! I just found my saali'. That would be a think to imagine now. πŸ˜†

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Yesss! I knew she was guilty... But if she's guilty, then why doesn't she go back to him? Whats stopping her? Do we have more shocking secrets? πŸ€” Aaaah... Heer remembering Prem, put knots in my stomach. It was so sad to imagine Prem just at the mandap, waiting for Heer to come. Not wanting to let go of the hope that she would come. And she didn't even give him a reason. Did you watch Bachna Ae Haseeno? It happened to Bips with Ranbir. I totally felt bad for her. Cuz she kept waiting until nigh, until it rained, until her wedding was ruined. *takes deep breath* Don't wanna think bout Prem like that.

Poor Heer too. She feels really bad for ditching him too. But whats stopping her from going back to him? That question is totally killing me. That is true, if Rinks was at the wedding, then they all would be leading happy lives. Or maybe if there father was understanding, they would STILL be living happy lives. I hate those parents that care more about there self-respect then there kids.

The song you chose, killed it.

I love how whenever Rinki's with Heer, she forgets about it all. Thats why i'm loving the whole bond you made between the sisters, and same with Prem and Preet. Angry young man! Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah! Heheee... Rinki's being the angry yound woman though. I could totally imagine you ranting about while sitting in the cab. It is kinda annoying though when people get all mood-y on you. I hate it.

So did Heer like kinda zone off after the word Prem? Awww... cuteee. And the whole feeling pulled by something. Haii! I seriously love all that. I can't believe she didn't realize that Prem musta been there. I mean hellloooo there were girls giggling and pointing at a guy. Who do you think it coulda been? Other then Imran Khan. ☺️

Yea, you think to much Rinki. Pop goes the weasel! That was random, dunno where I got that from. πŸ˜† Anyyywaayyy... The dupatta. ☺️ You know how much I loved this scene right? Totally fell in love with it. Specially the way they felt connected, the payal, the everything. It was all just amazing. Like I already told you, it was one of the best scenes ever!!

But you changeeddd it! It didn't go on Prem's face a cute lil kid was holding it. Awwwww... That was awesome too! I loved it! Hailaaa... Wind likes Prem too? Hmmm.. so many deewanis. How does Prem manage. πŸ˜†

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Hey guys! long time no see huh? Yup.

okay this was part 2, be happy i posted it today, or else you would've had to wait a couple more days because trust me only me, kimmu, and meera know how many times i've gone back to change something or make this happen and all that jazz. Oh yea, I mean just the title was changed like, what, 6 times? Been working on this part for a whole week now, i swear...very tiring to tell the truth. *laugh* anyway hope you all enjoyed and understood! Aww... yea, I know. You told me when you were writing it... I think.

and please do pay attention to the note at the top...because i really am serious about no PM's asking for updates, i am really really packed with work! like seriously, no joke at all! I did write Inactive along with a tiny note in my siggie box, because seriously it might say im online, but most likely im logged on, am listening to music on Youtube and am doing my hw while checking in some updates and pms here. And now more than ever, i will be inactive except for those reserved spots i have to update, PM's i have to check on, but other than that i will most likely not be around... Awww! You aree? Aaah, the raunak of kis desh is gonna be gone. When do you have your winter break, then you can be all over i-f.

i am doing a book report on a controversial topic and mine is Media: How fair and balanced and its due in December i believe, so thats like a month, thats already kind of a hint that its pretty big and time consuming, along with that preparations for exams will be starting some time soon and next week i have like 4-5 tests and/or quizzes so yea, wont be here chatting with you all on some topic. Ahhh... that sucks. I have a science fair project due in Jan. But we aren't starting on it for a while now, so yea. Good luck on it all. And I totally understand your situation. School comes first.

Now after that another announcement of mine, lets get to the usual yea?

5 comments minimum...so more are always welcome! hehe critisism is always expected cuz i know this part is not perfect...do tell if anything confused you or you really enjoyed...feedback is really important for me... Naah I think it was perfect! I loved it. And hun, you are so getting more than 5. πŸ˜†
ignore all mistakes...seriously dont tell me which sentence is structured wrong or what word i spelled wrong, cuz i really dont care...lolz its 11 at nite rite now, am tired, still have to do english hw and my back is killing me so not in the mood to go bak and edit anything *grin* see ya all later! Was that meant for me? πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
luv to all Luv ya too.
rinki!
Kimz

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Posted: 16 years ago

Rinki!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I just found your FF... and so I read it... I enjoyed it... annd.. uh... I LOVEDD ITT!! πŸ˜ƒ

aaahhha!! RINKUUU THASSH SHOO GOODD!! am in love with your FF's... i dunnu how mmany you have.
but i read your "Woh Mile The" and now this oneee...
just in the FIRST part you make your readers into and addicted to your stories.. honestly, i love it πŸ€— oh and soo suspencefull.. very nice idea/concepts that you have... πŸ‘
first of all, i love all the seettings, your descrriptionss, the people.. and nicenice, your Heer's sister. 😊
and btw is Kris your sonn?? πŸ˜• im kinda confused who Kris is... hehehe...can't wait till you open all the raazan!!
okie so i love how rinki met prem. and heer met preet. oh and btw it was HILARIOUS. HAHAHHA *rolls on the floor laughing* omggoosshh, the part when Preet was omg-ing that he found his Bhabhi!! 🀣
i love all your funny parts. and suspencefull parts. and and everything parts!! πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†
and its soo cool, prem and heer already know each other. 😳 i wonder what will happen when they meet with each other again.
well a very job well done! you are quite talented Rinki. πŸ‘ hatts off to youu!
- dee
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Aww thanks a ton RinkiπŸ€— for taking time to answer my questions....I'm really looking forward to this FF....you have an awesome story in mind and I know you'll surely bring it out in the best way....coz you are really good at it..

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