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you didn't tell me.
i didn't tell shabz either 😆
*edited*
yay!! finally eh? 😉
Hey, at least I edited before Shabz. 🤣 Anyways, loved how you started off with Heer getting up in her bed. Reminded me of a certain Mayank... lmao! Right so Guru Nayak Ji, I was like who the heck is that, then i realized she's sikh... so yea. Are you sikh? 🤔 I think you are cuz your punjabi, and hindu, and if thats that... then your sikh, right? I'm a muslim and punjabi, so I'm just a punjabi. But where both punjabi so don't get why I'm talking about this. 😆 Her skirt coming up to her knees for some odd reason reminded me of your mom's 'song'. 🤣 Your mom is awesome, dunno why you were making fun of her. 😛😆
ah thats true but she has her tournament so it doesnt count! 😆😆 aww thank you!! hehe mayank? oy who you be speakin of? 😆 haila! sharam nahin aati? Guru Nanak Ji ko nahin pehchana?!! tsk tsk lolz nah man im full desi kuri, born and raised in punjab! 😃 hey i know! my mom ish the BESHT and the cutest ever 😳😆 i dnt make fun of her! im just letting others smile by her antics cuz she always does everything cutely and makes something else out of something else entirely...😆
"the prestigious Prem Juneja" That sounded so cute. Oh and I just noticed, you got a new color. Its really cute, like a tealish, sea grean . Really nice, its like really comfortable to the eyes when your reading. Gosh, I keep getting carried away. I could totally imagine Heer in that outfit, like I just remembered her when she was working under Prem in kis desh, except with hotter clothes.
ah thnx hehe it suits him na? yesh new color for me now! ☺️ i love it, its like you said, soothes the eyes and adds more color to the normal black 😆 and i've been using it since i came bak online! 😍 its smexy! but the one i use on here like this one is diff than the one for my fics anyway bak to the other things 😆 ahh so are my clothes hotter or kis desh's? 😆😆 but yea thats only for now, later on she'll be in comfortable jeans and tee, anarkali suits, sari's and dresses knee length or full length, and then course lenghas! how does that sound?? 😳
Aww... Rinkiii!! My uncle sleeping with his teddy bear, and his mustache itching the poor teddy bear. 🤣 Okay okay, i'm just kidding. Calm down.... Rinki, your just like my little sister, I always have to wake up in the middle of the night and go and check on her to see if she's wearing her blanket. Cuz when she's not, she pee's on the bed, and I have to clean it. Awww... cutttiee Rinki woke up... Seriously that whole part was shooo cutee! And hun, your just like me. I never eat breakfast either. *high five* Ooh, and my mom's always nagging at me like Heer too. 😆
ahem ahem, dnt disturb uncle, she's having dreams abt the hotties! ☺️☺️ err anywayy ahh im always buried in my blanket when i wake up, but somedays i dnt have the blanket and im totally curled up against my mom 😳 ah i should shut up before i say more embarassing stuff like me always twisting around...err never mind!! ignore that aww you have to clean up after her? aww how sweet of you! oy dnt call me cute! im not cute! im ebil, and dnt u dare ask the hotties what they say this time too! 😡 ahh me dnt eat breakfast or lunch, the skool serves some nasty stuff 🤢 except for the spicy chicken sandwich 😍 ahh yesh mothers...always nagging yet always caring and loving! 😳😳
Wow Rinki, your so lazy. You didn't pick up till the third time it rang? Uff, but can't blame you, you really don't feel like getting out of your blanket when your in your bed. *sigh* I want my blankyy... Never mind, I want a knife and kill this Rahul. WTF! I hate guys like him, Rinki, you don't have to deal with him. (I hate how i'm talking to you about the parts your in here. I know its all fictional, just can't say Rinki and not talk to her. 😆) And dude, this Kiara is a slut. She got pregnant the 2nd time, and they came to YOU for help. Rinki, your scaring me. WHY did they come to YOU for help? Why are you so angry at Rahul? What did Rahul do? Do I have to get my gun instead? You totally got me hooked on here after that whole thing. So suspicious, really makes me wonder about what the heck is going on.
oy dnt be tlkin abt me laziness! *pets kittie in lap* yesh my laziness is a cat 😳😳 hehe ahh yesh the feeling of the warm blankie when its cold and time for skool..lub it!! ahh rahul...waise maine kuch cheeze badli hain, like kris lekin the other things are almost how i told you, will tell you everything on im or pm kay? just remind me 😆 or you could wait like everyone and be tortured! 😃 lolz you have to tlk abt rinks! its rinks we tlkin abts 😆 ah yesh the mood is back lolz arre kiara ne toh sirf pyar kiya na? anyways let me tell you i never loved rahul, just liked him as a friend and thought maybe i liked him as more but never love, thats being saved for preet ☺️😍 hehe ahh suspense is good no? anyay wanna know? NAH!! lemme just torture you! muahaha
The last part broke my heart. Rinki crying.
arre rinki bhi toh insaan hai, royigi nahin toh kya hamesha apne tears ko andar daba ke rakhegi? 😆
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That cute Heer part makes up for Rinki crying, specially that part where Heer gets all worried by just hearing your voice. Like she can tell that somethings wrong... I'm glad that Heer gets respect at her office, i mean the people at her office seemed really nice. The dude that was giving her the offer was so nice, unlike the people Heer was working under in Kis Desh. Hmmm... Its so much more real here, like it shows the good/better side of working in a hotel. No matter what/where you work, you deserve respect. And if you don't get it, then you just don't work there.
ahh am glad it did ahh yesh the bond of sisters 😳😃 hehe yes respect is important!
Heer knows about your secret too, and you got kicked out of your house because of that secret. Rinki, i'm seriously worried now, what the heck did you do? I'm happy to know that Heer was with Rinki, it shows that no matter what happens she'll be with you. I loved the sisterly relationship you showed between the two of you.
ah behen ko toh batana tha na? hey! i didnt do anything! its all just a..........................err nothing its nothing! hehe ahh yesh heer will be with her rinku always 😳 thank yous!
Ooh Greece, you already told me, but still... OOOH! They speak Greek in Greece, but I think that they know Latin too. Ooh and you were asking what beautiful was in Latin right, well today in my latin class we learned what very beautiful mean, so i asked her what beautiful means, and it means bellus. I'll get you some more phrases in latin if you want, tell me what you want though...
yea greece, am trying to find some info but nothing makes sense to me, so ill look again 😆 i think ill make it all be on an island...ahh a romantic place where premeer go for their....err anyway lets leave that alone yea? ooh bellus? sounds pretty!! kay me will ask...like how do you say "i love you" and "will you marry me?" 😉😆
I loved your reaction to Greece... But i was confused, where you just pretending to happy so she wouldn't wonder about your tired/weary voice... Or did you REALLY want to go Greece. It think you just wanted to get away, and thought this was probably going to be the best opportunity. Oh, and I couldn't help but laugh when Heer was telling all this to you all nervously. I was like 'YOUR OLDER THAN HER, YOU CAN BOSS HER AROUND HEER!'.. uff.. i swear, she's such a shy woman. Then again, thats a good thing. ☺️
ah my reaction...greece!! ah i was hiding my pain but i was excited at the same time also because this would mean the new beginning for everything, heer and my lives and i can live without worrying abt things and heer without wrrying abt me...so it was kinda both arre woh nervous thi because she thought i would say no and she was hoping for a yes, because she knows what this offer could mean for us both...get it? ahh shy woman? only when prem's there! and then again a fighter when he's with her! 😆
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Prem's part was so HOT! ☺️ I totally loved each and everything about it, and Lisa, yea you BE scared. Stay away from the Juneja, you aint ever getting him. 😆 I totally loved his part, it showed how Prem's character is going to be. Does that mean that Heers going to be scared of him too, or is she finally not going to be shy. I'd enjoy both idea's, lets see what you have up your sleeve. Waiting for the next parrt.. 😃
ahh yesh it was! i Luuuurrrrvvvvvveeeeeedddddddddd writing it!! hehe lolz did you pay even the slightest attention to the vampire line? 😉 but heer will be scared cuz of his way of making her feel things yet she'll feel oddly comfortable with him, ya kno? ah ill try to update soon! =)
Spelling Mistakes: (goes in order)
- opportunity (...Sounds like a great oppertunity but...)
- genuinely (...voice genuinly sounded excited...)
- understanding (...little sister's understanting nature...)
- comfortance isn't a word, comfort would work though. (...a hint of his comfortance in his cabin...)
- lightly (...He lighlty rubbed at his stubble and motioned...)
- interrupt (...workers didn't dare to intrrrupt in fear)...
- prestigious (...yelled at by the presitigious Mr. Prem Juneja.)
I think I got them all.
thanks soo much hunz!! your my little editor 😳😃
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