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Lana Ghosh

@lghosh

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#881

Hi Rehana,

Again excellent update. Specially ur little Pratham is sooooo adorable, u can almost picture him & can pull his cheeks! 😊

U must be pretty familiar with small kids, I read ur Everlasting Love & this one & both of them have such lovely narration from a kid's point of view & they react this exact same way most of the time.

Once again very nice as usual!

All the best for Monday exams!

Lana.

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PH4EVR

@PH4EVR

Explorer

Posted: 16 years ago

#882

Hi Rehana Di

I have to ay this is one of the most beautiful shot you've posted it was really touching i loved it every bit of it was truly beautiful i loved the father son moment so much prem and pratham just just too adorable and i liked the way in which contrast you put the text in first referring to preet and his dad and refference to Mr. Mittal and finally to our adorable prem and pratham.

your way of expressing emotions really touches ones heart you truly are a gifted writer.

Thanks for the post and good luck for your last final

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Svetalana Singh

@-svetalana-

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 16 years ago

#883

very well narrated .Beautiful story line.Try update asap.

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ashpush

@ashpush

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#884

omg diiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii that was simply beautiful👏....im glad that mittal has started the regretting process...And the bond between Mr Gupta n Preet was so sweet😳...

Coming to pratham😃..A big hug to my sweety for his accomplishment🤗....aww his unsteady walk to his papa,his fall,him getting up n trying again,taking hold of prem's leg...it was all sooo beatuiful...and i would say that this was pratham's best scene so far in this ff....😳...i can clearly imagine how happy it must have made prem to hear it....and that scene where pratham pointed to the photo n said papa was so natural...i could imagine his chubby fingers on the photo .....u understand n express kids the best di..👏👏.....i loved this part soooooooooooo much....u r really a great write mashallah....

Yay! ur exams will be over by monday!...n arent u happy? ur son has returned!😃

Take care

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Lady_Impala

@Lady_Impala

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#885

awesome update rehanna.loved heers nad prathams surprise for prem.it was soo cute and sweet.thannks for an awesome update

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amana

@AmanaR

Navigator

Posted: 16 years ago

#886

awesome!!!

glad that dumb mttal is excersing his pea sized brain!!!

im so glad preets dad gave him a pice of his mind

and lol.... preets dads too cute..... doughnut!!!!....its ok buddy even im a sucker for doughnuts

and aaaaaaawwwww pratham.. hes too too too cute... loved the papa....bit

continue asap

amana

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ruexangel

@ruexangel

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#887

Hey dt was gr8! so cuteee. you described all the moments so beautifully... & pratham is soooo adorable! the paa-paa bit & walkin was jus soo cute, u cn rlly imagine how prem felt, just so well described. awsome contt soon

~Rue