FF:kaisa yeh pyaar hai(1st part updated pg 3) - Page 2

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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow luved ur character sketch
Best part for me is u made sayogita as younger sis of heer
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: ravioli_11

Love the character sketch. Prem and Ash are twins? Cool!

Can't wait to read part 1

thnxxx after these many comments .i would love to ....update 1 part soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: luckyluv

wow luved ur character sketch
Best part for me is u made sayogita as younger sis of heer

oh u like sanyooo ...well thnxx
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Posted: 17 years ago
#14
Interesting character sketch..looking forward to read the rest..
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Posted: 17 years ago
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if u want any fav celebrete in sketch plz do say me ....i want jodi
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Posted: 17 years ago
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okies here will be my update soon ...stay ..dont go ..do read it in 1 hour ..haan ....i hope u wil be laughing at me and saying 1 hour ...gosh ..chalo theek hai ..bus thoodi dare
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Posted: 17 years ago
#17

hi!!!

here my 1 part of ff ..hope u like it
Its morning , first day of college and every body is tensed to be early to college and here heer woke up ...her beautiful eyes and ........so cute face ...( beauty lies in simplicity ..) heer says to maa : maa mera nahan ne ka pani garan kiya kya
heer's mom says: heer beta riya ko utha de aaj college ka pehla din hai ...watna late hoo jaye gi
heer says : theek hain maa
heer to riya :utho riya warna hum late ho jayenge
riya to heer : haan di ...uth rahi hoon na
heer did her bath and came out and saw riya still sleeping
heer says: riya tum abhi tak soo rahi hoo
riya : sooone do na di
finally riya will wake up ....
now heer keeping her jhumka's in her ears and locket ..and now bangles in her hands .....finally she is ready and waits for riya ..
heer says : riya kahan hoo tum
riya: aaa raho hoon di bas 2 min ..riya is as sweet and simple like heer ....
heer : maa mera tiffin do
heer's mom : haan de rahi hoon beta
yeh loo tera tiffin aur khana time par kha lena tum dono
heer : haan maa kha lenge
And heer and riya leave for college
Prem still asleep ....
prem's mom: prem beta uthoo ..aaj tera college ka pehla din hain ..aur tu late hoo jayega......
she comes inside and finds prem sitll sleeping ...she moves the curtain aside ....sun rays fall on him and he suddenly wakesup ...kya maa
haan maa says gayatri(prem's mom)
app jaldi tayar hoo jaa
theek hain maa ....
prem finally getz ready ..
juneja family on dinnig table ...prem finally eats his break fast ....and says maa mujhe deer hoo rahi hain mein jaa raha hoon ..
gayatri : par ...beta
prem: par war kuch nahi maa
gayatri: ash ko toh lekar jaa
here comes queen of beauty ...Ash
she is still busy in her make up ........
she cums down after and ask mom
maa prem kahan hai ........
gayatri : woh to chalagaya
Ash : chalagaya? kya
Ash cumz out of house ....sees prem waiting for her and says wah bhai hoo toh aisa ....haan barso se toh yahi karta aa raha hoon ....
Ash : chalo ab deer ho jayegi
they leave for college
Adi'sentry : ooo lalalal ooo lallal
Adi still in his dreams ....
here cums his mom and pour water on him
Adi suddenly getz up and says ....kya maa yeh kya kiya ....
his mom :tujhe neend se jagane ke liye yahi rasta toh tha ....
Adi says : itna acha khwaab dekh raha tha aur ap ne use ....
his mom : bas tujhe khwaab dekhne ke alawa aur kya ata hai beta ............and his mom says ..aaj tera college ka pehle din hai ..aur hamar sapna pura kar de ...hum toh bas tujhe ek acha insaan bante dekhna chahate hai ...and gives her bhshan ....preet now ready for leaving
Rahul entry :
he is too ready for leaving ..but waiting for Adi to receive him ...
Finally Adi picked him up ..and on the way to college
hope u like it do comment it ....will update next part soon ..if anythng or grammar is wrong ..plzooo maaf kar dena
luv u all
sara
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Posted: 17 years ago
#18
didnt u like it guyzzzzzzzzzzz
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Posted: 17 years ago
#19
I loved it, you did an awesome job! Continue very very SOON!
Love Vibs x
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Posted: 17 years ago
#20
this is different.....really nice....do continue.....

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