FF: Old Prem Back- Part 23 (Pg 147 - Feb 6)

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Posted: 16 years ago

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waitinggggggg for da update asap.

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Originally posted by: sweta2005
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Hey sweta i am writing the part now almost 75% is done..i will update within 1 hr

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Hello Guys, i am extremely sorry for the late update..I think it is almost 2 weeks i have been updated..Pls Mujhe Maaf Kardho Mere Pyaari Doostho..I was really busy with my Visa work..bad lucK upto now no Visa dates..i had emergency dates from Jan 6-9 but My univ starts from 6th itself..so somewat tensed about the Visa dates..Atlast i managed to update Premeer cute scenes and Meav First Meeting..Confused wat is Meav..Wait And Watch..Happy Reading Guys...

Part 19 - Pehle Mulakaat (Thakraal)

A Wonderful And Bright Morning...It is 7.00 in the Morning..The Sun is peeping through the window of Premeer Bedroom..The bright sunrays are falling on Heer's beautiful face trying to wake up her..Heer is not in a mood to get up..She is hardly managing to avoid the bright sunrays .Atlast she decides to get up but she did not open her eyes yet as she wanted to see her husband's face first..Her husband is sleeping on his stomach and his face is turned towards her..She feels the touch of her husband as Prem is resting her hand on her stomach as if he is feared that she will leave him.at any time

A cute smile appears at the end of Heer's lips.She slowly turns to his side as she was sleeping flat on the bed..Now Heer and Prem are facing each other..Prem did not open his eyes yet..Heer closing her eyes touches his face with one hand to check whether her husband is facing her ..Heer silently touches his face with her hand and confirms that he is facing her..She then slowly opens her eyes and witnesses his face infront of her eyes..He was sleeping on his stomach with a cute and everlasting smile on his adorable face

Prem felt that touch of his better half and a cute smile appeared on his face..But Heer thought that her husband was sleeping with a smile on his face..But Prem being Naughty with his wife not willing to open his eyes as he wanted to enjoy this moment and again expecting a sweet and caring kiss from his wife.as usually.Heer slowly remembers the Reception nite incidents one by one..How she lost in Prem's soft arms while dancing? How they both are staring into each other eyes forgetting the sourroundings ? She feels shy by thinking How Prem sang for her? How he kissed on her forehead at the end of the song unaware of the sourroundings? How she slept on Prem's shoulder in the car ??

But her thoughts got a break at a main point as she is now confused that how she slept on the bed ? she could not remember that she herself walked towards the bed or Prem lifted her in his arms..She thinks that Did Prem carry her in his arms infront of all famly members ?.." Omg, now all the family members will tease me "..she started worrying..At a moment her sweet and cute smile turns into anger , that she should hear the teasings of the family members now..She just makes a crying face and thinks in her mind seeing him " Prem,if anybody teases me, then sure i will not leave you "..

She takes his hand from her stomach without disturbing his pretended sleep..She slightly gets up from her place and comes closer to his adorable and innocent face..She adjusts the hair which is falling on his face and disturbing his sleep.She is just carenessing his hair and comes more closer to her face.Prem thinks that she will kiss on his forehead.Yes Heer did the same.Heer caringly kissed him on his forehead carenessing his hair..Prem then thinks that she will go now . But she did a completely unexpected thing , she came more closer to her face and kissed him on his cheek.Prem is surprised and feels that he is in seventh heaven by her romantic gesture. She gave a romantic, cute and caring smile to him and got up from the bed

Heer left to Washroom to fresh-up. As soon as She left to Washroom, Prem's face became red due to shy and began to glow brighter. A cute and big smile appeared on the end of his lips. He felt shy and again continued his sleep. After sometime she comes out of the Washroom wearing a beautiful Blue saree.She sat infront of the Mirror . Prem slowly opens his eyes and stealing glances from her.Prem is contiuesely staring at her beauty in the mirror while she is wearing her necklace.

Heer feels that Prem is seeing her, so she quickly turns to check him. Prem sees that she is about to turn , so he quickly closes his eyes and pretends sleep again. Heer turns to him and finds that he is sleeping. She smiles at him and again turns to the mirror. She is now done with her make-up except putting sindoor. But she thinks that she will wake him up and ask him to put sindoor , but she again thinks that she will first bring coffee for him and then automatically Prem will fill her maang. Yes she thinks that would be better. she takes the sindoor box and puts that box on a table near their bed so that she can remind him easily whenever he gets up..

Heer quickly leaves from there to help her mom in the kitchen work. Prem thinks that Heer will be sitting beside him and opens his eyes, but its too late, he has no idea that she has left the room. Prem quickly gets up and call her..He gets disappointed that he missed the golden opportunity of romancing with her. Prem falls on the bed with a huge disappointment by thinking that How he did not observe her while leaving, He turns towards the sindoor box. He thinks to himself that why she left the box here.. He further thinks that she did not fill her maanf and she wanted him to fill her maang..Thinking this he becomes happy that Heer will come again..

He then promises to himself " I promise You Heer, I will fill ur maang everyday..Mein tumhe khush karne ka Ek mauka bhi nahi choodungha, You are my air, my fire, my light Each moment with you surreal , Mein hamesha tumare saaya banke rahungha thaki koi bhi musibat tumhe choona sakhe..Prem Heer ka tha, Heer ka hain aur Hamesha Heer ka rahegha..Hum basaenghe hamare sapno ki Duniye I love you Heer, I am yours, till the end of my life "

Heer comes to kitchen and takes the blessings of Gay3 mom who is cutting vegetables . Gay3 mom kisses on her forehead and observes her maang without sindoor, She sweetly replies that she wanted her maang to be filled by Prem but adds that he is sleeping and she doesn't want to disturb his sleep. Gay3 feels happy and amazed by Heer's words and asks to make coffee for him.. Preet and party comes from jogging and asks Heer to make coffee for them also.Heer prepares coffee for them also.

Heer brings coffee for all of them. Just then Ash comes to Heer and starts crying by saying that Preet said that he cant marry her. Preet is laughing as they decided to tease Heer for sometime for the nite romance. It is golden oppurtunity for them as Prem is still sleeping.Heer is shocked She asks for the reason to Preet.All are laughing inside.

Preet : Woh kya hain na bhabhi mein bhai ke tarah great lover nahi hoon jo hamesha apne patni ke aankhon mein aankhon dalkar dekthe rehjao..(teases her)
Heer is confused about his words..She did not get the exact meaning that where comes Prem came in the middle of the discussion..and asks " Matlab"
Karan : Preet yeh kehraha hain ki woh harbaar Ash kho isstarah kiss nahi desaktha Prem ke tarah ( kissing Kulraj on her forehead..Kulraj hits him )
Preet : Mein hamesha apne patni kho apne arms mein nahi uthasaktha Prem bhai ke tarah..(catching Ash in his arms, Ash is feeling shy)Jab mere Patni sojathe hain na bhabhi mere lap mein..Mein usse wake up karne ke liye soochtha hoon..i dont know how to carry her in my arms without disturbing her sleep (laughs seeing ash)
Veera : Issliye bhabhi Preet bhai ne decide kiya hain ki woh aapse love classes join karkhe , he just wanted to learn waht is love?? (she laughs seeing Preet)
Heer : Accha ab mein samjhe ..aap sab milkar mujhe raat ke baat lekar tease karrahe hain..(all are laughing seeing her, Preet puts Ash down)..Preet mein tumhe love classes tho nahi teach karsakthe par petaiye (beating )kaise karthe mein tumhe abhi bathathi hoon..

Saying this she is searching for a stick to beat him..Kulraj gives her a scale to beat him..Preet gives an angry look to Kulraj..she just laughs at him..Heer takes the scale and runs behind Preet to beat him for teasing her ..Preet " Bhabhi pls leave me i am sorry " in a pleading manner..Heer " Bhabhi kho chedtha hain ".in a angry tone..Finally Preet stops at a place she too stops by seeing Preet. Preet sits on the knees infront of Heer and asks her foregiveness. Heer quickly comes and make him get up , she catches his ear and warns him not to do this again.Preet says ok.. All of them laughs seeing them. Heer takes coffee for Prem angrily.

Prem this time waiting for Heer ..He hears her payal sound and again pretends sleep... Heer keeps the hot coffee near the bed.She calls " Prem "..But he is not opening his eyes, she again calls Prem but no response from him..She gets angry and sweetly takes his hand. Prem is becoming curious that what is she going to do with his hand..She simply takes his hand and dips his finger in the hot coffee..Prem feels the pain and shouts " oouch" laoudly

Prem : Yeh tumne kya kiya Heer..it is paining so much
Heer comes to senses that she hurted Prem..She sits beside Prem and starts worrying..
Heer : Prem , i am sorry Prem i donno that the coffee is so hot..is it paining so much (worried and scared)
Prem nods his head and says " Ya "

Heer takes his finger and puts in her mouth..Prem closes his eyes and enjoying the moment..Heer asks that " is it ok now "..Prem says that she catched the wrong finger and shows the other finger..She keeps that finger in her mouth..Prem is smiling and again says wrong finger and almost shows all his fingers..Prem is enjoying this naughty and romantic moment with his wife..Heer again asks him how is feeling now he then shows his hand and cutely asks her to kiss the hand so that all the pain vanishes soon..Heer understood his naughty intensions. She gets angry and hits him on the shoulder for teasing her..She gets up from that place and tries to move from there.

Prem catches her hand and catches her from back..He sweetly says her sorry..Heer is angry on Prem for the nite incident , now this incident.." Mujhe maafi nahi mileghe " in a chidish manner.." Nahi mileghe " she says in a angry tone. She releases his hand from his waist. and leaves from there angrily. Prem shouts " sindoor ".Heer is not listening anything and gives him a pretended angry look and leaves from there..Prem is shocked that why she is angry on him today?..He confronts himself that i will fill ur maang infront of the god and my family members..He feels happy by seeing Sindoor box

Meher is getting ready for her interview in Manav Malhotra's Office as Assistant Lawyer..She quickly gets down as it is getting late for her first interview..She takes the blessings of her mom and dad...Heer gives the aarti and prasad to Meher and wishes her All The Best..Meher hugs her caring and loving sister..Harman is confused that where is Meher going..He just asks her about that , she replies that she is going for job interview.

Harman : Oh thats great.Meher.By the way under which Lawyer u are attending the interview
Meher : i think u know Mr.Manav Malhotra..i am going to attend the interview as the assitant Manager
Harman : What?? Manav Malhotra?? Have u gone mad ??

All are confused and shocked by Harman's sudden reaction..Meher is shell shocked.

Meher : What happen Harman ?? why u are shocked by listening his name??
Harman : Please Meher dont opt for that job..if i will provide you another job under a good lawyer..But not this Guy
Meher : Harman ?? But why ?? why not this job??
Harman : Meher Please try to understand not this job pls try another job..thats all
Meher : Harman , i know i will get job under a good and nice lawyer.But i wanted to do job under a best lawyer..Manav is a Best lawyer.. Upto now he did not lost any cases..He is the best lawyer..i wanted to do job under him..so i am going to attend this interview and try my level best to get this job..thats all..its final...
Harman : Meher tum samajthe kyun nahi hoon??
Heer : Harman what is the matter why are u so tensed?
Prem : haan harman what happen to you why u are not allowing Meher to do that job
Harman : Bhai i am tensed because Manav is a women-hater?
All are shocked and suprised by Harman's words.
Gay3 : harman have u gone mad?? why will that person hates women??
Harman : Maa i have not gone mad..i saw him and his hatred for women why will he give job to a lady..just think
Meher : But why he hates woman??
Harman : Even i too donno abt that reason..may be some girl has bumped him?? who knows..But Meher i saw his arrogance and hatred for woman so i dont
think he will give that job for u or even a girl..rethink of it
Preet : What do u mean by you evidenced his arrogance ??

Harman : this means that i saw his arrogance and hatred infront of my own eyes..my friend Reena went to his office for job..he irritated her a lot with such a silly questions finally she got frustrated and scolded him at the end..But u know all the way he was just smiling while she was scolding him..Nearly 9-10 lawyers work under his guidence. He wants the work to be completed within the limited time..otherwise he will just fire them without caring about their age or experience. This is nature of Mr.Manav Malhotra.

Ash : Omg he is such an arrogant person..how can Meher do job under him??
Prem : Meher will do job under his guidance only..
All are shocked listening to Prem's words..Meher feels happy
Heer : What are u saying Prem..after knowing about his arrogance and hatred how can Meher work under his guidance??
Prem : Heer..Hame uss insaan se kya lena dena hain..Meher wants to do job under a best lawyer..As far as i know abt him he is the best lawyer..i heard
abt his reputation and even i know his father Aditya Malhotra.He is a MD of a garments designing.Even Manav helps his father..some times
Meher : I think u are right jeju..i am going to attend the interview at any cost..

Finally Meher tells her decision..Harman is worried..Premeer blesses her..Meher leaves to Manav's office for her interview..After sometime Meher enters his office and sits beside the other persons who has come for the interview..Here Manav Malhotra's car enters into the office grounnd..He gets out from a dashing Ferrari car..First his feet was shown while he is getting out from his car..He is wearing a black suit.with a tie..He folds his lawyer coat and puts on his arm..His face was shown

**** Character Sketch****

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Naman Shaw As Manav Malhotra

Manav, he is a reputed lawyer by profession..He is an arrogant Person..He wants his work to be completed within time otherwise he will not spare anybody..He has a hatred towards women that reveals his past life in the future storyline..His biggest strength is his parents..His Dad Aditya Malhotra is MD of a Reputed Garments company..He is soft by nature and does not think of harming anybody..His Mom Surekha Malhotra is a house wife..Always takes care of her family..Manav loves his parents a lot..He even doesn't dare to say " no " for their decision..But he is just stubborn on one decision ie Hating girls..He never stop hating girls ..Meher will completely change his arrogant attitude and falls for him..She also makes him fall for her.But How??

****Ends****

Manav enters the ofice.All are wishing him...His eyes fall on Meher..He is surprised to see a girl opting to do job under his guidance..He just gives an evil smile to her..Meher is shocked..Finally the interview begins..One by one enters his cabin and comes out in depression..Meher is worried and tensed about his questions..Finaly now its Meher's turn to enter his cabin..Meher prays god and knocks the door and stands outside waiting for his permission Manav sees meher near the door and asks her to get in ...in a cool manner

Manav gives an evil smile seeing Meher..She feels somewat tensed..Then slowly the interview begins...

Meher : Gud Morning sir
Manav : Gud Morning, toh aap hain Meher Maan..Please take ur seat..
Meher : (she sits on the chair infront of Manav) Yes sir. My name is Meher Maan (in a low tone, but somewat confidently)
Manav : Can i check ur certificates ??
Meher : Yes sir (she gives her certificates)
Meher : i completed my law , i wanted to join as assistant and gain the experience..If u give me a chance i will prove that I am a nice lawyer,

Manav : Nice Lawyer (smiles and gets up from his place ) Nice Lawyer ki koi kaam nahi yahan, I just want a perfect lawyer (confidently)(she is worried)...i just wanted to test ur knowledge by asking you some questions...First answer my questions and prove that u are atleast a nice Lawyer...

Manav : Why should I hire you only I even could promote someone from within?What are ur main strengths ?
Meher : Yes Sir u can hire someone else apart from me , but I feel I'm capable 4 this job If i fail to answer ur questions..i will leave the office myself...
Manav : (thinks in his mind that she is over confident) So u feel that u are enough capable for this job..Let me test you
Manav : Second Query : How many steps did u climb b4 entering in to my cabin?
Meher : (Meher is shocked by his silly question)..woh main 30 steps …..no no 34 steps
Manav : I just want only single answer not double answer..did u get it (angrily)
Meher : Sorry sir (she thinks for a while) 34 steps..(confused)
Manav : 34 steps.??..umm...r u sure??
Meher: : (hesitatingly) yes sir
Manav : So u are confident about ur answer..(Meher nods her head with confusion) Answers will be given at the end of the interview.is that clear
Meher : Ye-yes Sir..
Manav : Third Query : What do you often eat for your breakfast?
Meher : Excuse Me (she is confused and shocked by his another silly question)
Manav : Do u want me to repeat the query..What do you often eat for your breakfast?
Meher : woh sir…….i prefer having paratha in my breakfast
Manav : What are the uses of Pen other than writing?
Meher : What ??
Manav : What are the uses of Pen other than writing?
Meher : It is used to tear the paper, to punch holes and......

now she is over tensed by his questions and she enable to answer him.She is also confident that she will not get the job

Manav : and …….Come on speak it out..(in a frustrated manner)
Meher is still in a confused and worried state that she cannot answer even a simple question now……
Manav : Ok..Tell me about a situation when your work gets criticized?
Meher : My work will be criticized when i make some silly mistakes in handling the case or in preparing notes for a particular case and with this mistakes if i loose the case then it will be such a big mistake which could not rectified..
Manav : At this situation how would you feel??
Meher : I feel guilty at that moment.and will not repeat such mistakes in future..As it is said that Failures are the steps of Success..So my first failure will the step for my upcoming success..(confidently)
Manav : Umm..I am impressed by your answer..(she feels happy)
Manav : Fourth Query : Listen to the question carefully..
Meher : Yes sir...

Manav : Mary's father has 4 daughters
1st daughter's name is www
2nd daughter's name is xxx
3rd daughter's name is yyy
what is 4th daughter's name?? ( He questions it so carefully and stressing each and every word)

Meher : woh………zzz ..(thinks for a while ) na-nahi.Can u please repeat the Query..
Manav : Sorry Miss. Meher Maan i have stressed each and every word..but u are making a mistake in this question also..
Meher : Sorry sir..
Manav : Sorry ?? for what ?? wasting my precious time ??..
Manav gets angry and leaves Meher in a shocked and feared state..
Manav : do u think u r selected?
Meher: : no sir (nods her head indicating no)
Manav : yes u are not selected.
Meher : sir..give me one more chance i will prove myself..
Manav : one more chance ? for what wasting my valuable time??now let me tell u answers for those questions?

Manav : ok listen……u climbed 35 steps not 34 ……..then uses of pen it is also used To hit someone, to play other than writing..then the last answer is Mary not zzz..i think now u got to know ur answers..just leave my cabin u are not selected...

Meher is about to leave his cabin in a disappointed manner..Suddenly a person enters Manav's cabin. Manav is surprised seeing that Person, Meher is confused about that person..He is none other than Aditya Malhotra, Manav's father. Manav welcomes him by a caring hug Aditya is angry on Manav after seeing his way of interviewing through a window.

Aditya : Manav?? in this manner u are interviewing a girl ??
Manav : Dad..What do u mean by that ??
Aditya : u are interviewing a person for a asst lawyer job.but u did not ask a single query about the law and its rules??
Manav : Dad ?? Woh??

Aditya : Ok why are u not giving job to her,she confidently answered all questions but confused about only 1-2 queries..this does not mean that she is unfit for the job.She is far better than other persons who has come for interview.Start the interview freshly and ask her about law.

Manav : But ...Dad??
Aditya : Its my order .

Manav becomes helpless now and ask her to take the seat..Meher takes her seat..Aditya sits beside Meher.Manav starts asking questions about law and its rules..Meher answers correctly to all questions.Aditya becomes happy for her confidence..Manav is getting angry.So he asks tougher questions.But Meher answers them confidenly without any fear or worry in her mind.Manav stops asking questions..

Aditya : What happen??whats ur decision??
Manav : (angrily) U are selected..(to Meher)
Aditya : Are u happy now Miss..
Meher : Meher Maan..
Aditya : Thats nice name..where do u stay beta.
Meher : i think u have heard about Juneja's.i stay in Juneja mansion
Aditya : i met lalit juneja and Prem juneja in some party..how are u related with them??
Meher : Prem Juneja is my sister's husband and lalit juneja is my father's best frnd.
Aditya : Ok thats really nice to meet u, you can join the office from 2mrw..any objection Manav?? (looking at him)
Manav : Why would i have an objection dad?? (angrily)
Aditya : Haan Meher ayr ek baat.do u know anything about garments designing.
Meher : ya sir i do have some knowledge in that field.
Aditya : oh thats really nice..so u can come to our company with manav..

Meher smiles by seeing Manav..But he is giving an angry llok to her and his father. Meher takes a leave from them saying that she will join the office 2mrw.Aditya blesses her, she leaves from that cabin happily..Manav asks his dad abt Meher..But Aditya cuts him in the middle saying that he dont want to discuss this matter now as he has some meeting..Aditya goes out from the cabin leaving a frustrated Manav..

Manav thinks to himself " Miss. Meher Maan.By the grace of my dad u got the job but within no time u will resign this job by yourself..I cant spare you in my office at any cost ..Wait and Watch tumare saath kya kya hootha hain "..With a determined face..

Precap : Meher happily announces that she got the job..Heer is giving aarti in the khushi of Meher getting the job..just then a courier person comes and gives a courier to Meher..Meher opens the letter and shocked to see the picture of their parents..

i think now u understood what is Meav (Meher- Manav )..Special Thanks to Neha (12345xxx) for helping me in the interview part.credit goes to her..Hope u liked the update..sorry for the delay in the update..😭

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swati

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Posted: 16 years ago

#814

awesomeeeeeeeeee too good very nice part cute part waitinggggggggg for next asap.

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Neha12345xxx

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Posted: 16 years ago

#815

di u r welcome.......di excellent👏.......prem again pretending and always think only about heer😆😆.....hmmmmm preet ko tho peetna hi padegha😆............ye heer bhi na kya sochthi hain hamesha😕😕......................lagtha hain prem sona bulgaya😆......... heer putting other finger in to her mouth .........so funny........ ye prem bro bhi na hamesha heer bhabhi ko tease kartha hain ........love classes veera aur nihal ko bhi attend karna chahiye😆😆..................di update soon

Edited by 12345xxx - 16 years ago

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Nitty

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Posted: 16 years ago

#816

hey that was a nice update.. after such a long wait but really enjoyed reading all the parts,,,, waiting for next part.....

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Batameez.

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Posted: 16 years ago

#817

...awesome update ..yaar ...i jus read updates ...but dont comment ...commenting ..this time ..very nice ..love ur FF

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Nadia

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Posted: 16 years ago

#818

my sweet anu

see didi this time not late never mind you made us wait but it was worth waiting . life is really very busy now days every one life.

i cannot commets like you but i will try to give comments

premeer

scene awesome as it was very cute sindoor and payaal all you add but 100 time better than some one 😳 heer put his hand in coffee and prem naughty romance

ash and preet

cute their chit chat and naughty things or teasing

maa

maa is maa

meher and harman

anu you are awesome a new guy👏👏

🤗🤗

keep writing and always smile i am speech less actually what to say 🤗

Edited by pisces26 - 16 years ago

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Sunayna

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Posted: 16 years ago

#819

Hey!

Fantastic part!

I loved the Premeer scene at the beginning and Meher's interview, Manav really is arrogant! His dad seems really nice though! Heer going after Preet to beat him was funny...lol!

I can't wait to find out what will happen to Meher, and the precap about her parents pics....???

Can't wait till you next update!

Good luck with getting your visa on time!

xXx

Sunayna

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Rani

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Posted: 16 years ago

#820

Hey Anu..how u doing??it was a very nice update dear..liked how Heer was teased by her BIL and SIL..he he he poor girl..and all thanks to Mr.Prem!!This Manav guy has to have his head checked..hating women eh??attitude..overall it was a nice update Anu..looking forward to the next update!!

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