FF: Old Prem Back- Part 23 (Pg 147 - Feb 6)

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Posted: 16 years ago

#351

Originally posted by: 12345xxx
Excellent promo di
waiting...........

Hey neha thank q soo much ra for ur comments
really loved the word excellent🤗🤗
i will update the next part soo soon

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#352

Originally posted by: kis desh Rocks!
nice promo, waiting for it to be updated......

Thank q sooooooooo much for ur comments
loved ur comments🤗🤗

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#353

Originally posted by: Thapanee
interesting promo.....waiting for the next part

Thank q soo much for ur comments🤗🤗
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Posted: 16 years ago

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Originally posted by: fijiana
ooh exciting promo.cant wait to see who wins the junejas or maan but tell you the truth iam with the maans.joote toh saaliyaan hi lejayeenge but then you are the writer so you will decide.but looking forward to the next update.thanks for the lovely feedback on my comments.

Loved ur commnets as usual 🤗🤗....so u are supporting maan's ....let see who wins in the update only 🤣....i always wait for ur comments...thank q soo much for the commnets and also thanking me for my feedback🤗🤗....
I will update the next part soo soon

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Originally posted by: sweta2005
update plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

hey swta i will update the next part soo soon...yaar🤗

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#356

Originally posted by: angel82
Hi Anu, sorry for the late reply...

The promo seems interesting...I dont mind D
J creating any probs in their life after marraige coz then they are one and will handle it together....

Coming to Part 13,

That was a sweet part...me had forgotten that Prem was without shirt the whole night in those romantic scenes between them ...thanks you reminded it in this part..The scene between Gayathri ,PRem and Heer was cute...and so was the Ash- Heer -Meher scene......lol, Prem-Kulraj scene was funny ..and the FB scene was cute...The bachelor party was cool..Lallu too joined in...lol...the precap sounds very interesting...eagerly waiting for the next part....

Hey angie i am really feeling happy that u liked my promo and finds intersting🤗🤗
premeera are alwys lets see how they will handle their probs ?????

ur commnets on the part was really awesome yaar..i am very happy that u like all the parts...loved it a lot..i generally don't get any words when someone appreacite my work
soo thank q soo much for ur comments
i will upadte the part soo soon🤗

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DRESS COURTESY

Heer's Bridal wear.....

PREM's Sherwani

PREM's SEHRA

NOW FAMILY MEMBERS"S WEAR

PREET's SHERWANI

ASH's WEAR

HARMAN's SHERWANI

MEHER's WEAR

NIHAAL's Sherwani

VEERA's GAGRA

KARAN's SHERWANI

KULRAJ's WEAR

LALLU's SHERWANI

GAY3 MOM saree

VARUN's SHERWANI

DHARUN's SHERWANI

Finaaly the MANDAP

U can interchange the dresses also.🤣..i am sorry if u don't like them...😭

Edited by anushka10 - 16 years ago

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Hello Guys i am back with my bada update..Firstofall sorry for the delay in the update..

PART 14 - Preet's Proposal & Prem's Baraat

All the men reach home. Gay3, Ash, Kulraj are seeing with anger. Gay3 asks Preet that where did they go??. Preet lies that they went to hotel to check the marriage arrangements and Mandap decoration.

Ash : (interrupts) aacha , tho aap sab hotel gaye the woh bhi mandap ke decoration ke liye
Preet : ya we all went to hotel (covers up)
Ash : preet when u went for hotel, ur frnd called and said that he won't be able to attend the bachelor's party conducted in our hotel due to some work

Preet is completely shocked..Prem is smiling.
Gay3 : bachelor's party karne gaye the aap sab loog..Prem tum bhi (in anger)
Prem : Maa, mujhe tho issbare mein pata hi nahi tha..trust me...even i am shocked after reaching there...pls trust me maa...

Gay3 goes to catch Preet's ear...but preet runs from Gay3 and hides behind Ash. Lekin Ash bhi koi kam gussa nahin hain preet par.

Ash : (catches his ear and makes him come front)..
Gay 3 : (goes to lallu) aaptho bade gusse se gaye hain na , lekin kya hua bacche ko samjane ke badla...aap bhi uss ke saath party mein dance karke aaye hain...(angrily)
Lallu : Nahi Gay3, mein tho waha bacche kho daantne gaya tha, lekin yeh...(thinks) Yeh Karan ne mujhe dance floor par lekhe gaya tha (pointing to Karan)
Karan : (shell shocked..lallu thinks that he is escaped) Bauji..yeh aap kya keh rahe hain..When did i asked u to dance...Kulraj mujhe tho issbare mein kuch nahi pata tha (Kul looking at him in anger)..Yeh sab plan Harman ka tha (pointing to Harman)
Gay3 : Harman ......(angrily)
Harman : (shocked) jeju...its unfair..apne purra inzaam mere upar daal dhe...mein tho sirf preet ka saath deraha tha (Preet is shocked and signals harman that not to tell his name)..Yeh purra ka purra plan tho preet ka tha...mein usse kaha tha ki prem bhai ko yeh sab pasand nahi hain..
Ash : Preet ..mujhe pata tha..yeh planning tumare alava koi nahi karsaktha. (catching his ear more tightly)

Preet : Ash..Ash pls listen to me , first u leave my ear , its paining yaar (he removes Ash's hand from his ear and puts his hand on Ash's shoulder like Prem put his hand around heer in the cute chawl scene infront of that couple).. ya i agree that i have planned the party..but the idea was given by someone..(smiles)
Kulraj : achha..toh idea kis ka hain???

Preet sees all the faces of the family members..all are looking at him confused..Finally preet points his finger to a person to tease him..that person is none other than our Innocent Nihaal..Nihaal is totally shocked..All are looking at him ..

Nihaal : Aap sab mujhe iss tarah kyun dekhrahe hain (Naughty Preet is smiling). .mera yakeen maniye maa..mujhe tho iss party ke bare mein kuch bhi nahi pata..mein tho waha hotel mein mandap ka decoration karraha tha...Yeh preet ne mujhe party mein lekhe gaya tha...Preet...tum bhi na

Veera : Haan Bhaiyya, ab sab tho involve ho chuke hain.. aur aap Nihaal ko isme involve karna chahthe hain na..its unfair bhai (swwetly supports Nihaal)
Preet : achha... Veera tum kab se Nihaal ko support karne lagi.woh bhi mere saath choodke (teases her)(feels something fishy)
Veera : (shivers) no bhai i am not supporting Nihaal, i am supporting the truth..Nihaal already said me that he is busy in the mandap work...understood

Preet : Ohhhh...(relieved)
Ash : tumhare plan hain aur tum Nihaal Bhaiyya par inzaam lagaraha hoon..mein tumhe nahi chodunghe

Saying this Ash runs behind Preet to beat him.. Preet is escaping from her..All are laughing..Karan laughs seeing Kulraj but Kulraj is looking at him in anger..Karan stops laughing..Finally Preet runs towards his room and Ash follows him.. Prem is smiling

Veera : has lijeye bhaiiya abhi jeebhar kar hasligiye..warna kisko pata itna accha mouka kabhi milega ya nahi....(teases him )

Kulraj and Veera are laughing.Prem is confused to Veera's words. Karan is looking at Veera and signalling what is the matter???

Prem : Veera...?? tum aise kyun kehrahe hoon ??? (confused)
Veera : Bhaiyya , Heer bhabhi aap par bahut gussa hain...jayeye apni honewali patni ko manalijiye..(teases him)

Gay3 hits Veera on her head for her naughtiness..Kulraj is laughing

Prem : Heer..heer mujh par gussa kyun hoogi???maine kya kiya??
Kulraj : party pe gaye the na issliye woh tumse gussa hain....
Prem : Lekin mujhe tho kuch nahi pata tha..party ke baare mein...
Meher : Woh sab kuch hame pata nahi..lekin didi aap par bahut naraaz hain jeju..
Prem : ok, mein abhi jaakar heer ko mana letha hoon..issme koun se badi baath hain
Gay3 : Prem beta ...kaha jaaraha hain tu???? (teasingly)
Prem : Maa...Mein heer ke paas jaraha hoon (confidently forgot abt the thing that he should not meet heer)
Gay3 : Prem..jyada anjaan baneke khoshish matkar ..maine kaha na beta aaj tum heer se nahi milsakthe..(angrily)
Prem : oh....i am really sorry maa ..i forgot abt that thing...ok can i call her and talk with heer..
Gay3 : Ya..u can call and talk with her ..but no meetings ok
Prem : ok ..maa..
Veera : All the best bhaiyya..
Prem : Thankyou my sweet sis..(kisses on Veera's forehead)..Bye goodnite to everybody..
Gay3 : haan..prem u must get up early in the morning...i will come to wake up you ..ok
Prem : ok..maa..bye goodnite...

Prem leaves to his room saying goodnite to everybody..Kulraj goes to her room looking seriously at Karan..Karan follows her saying sorry..Meher and Harman leaves to their own rooms...Veera and Nihaal are moving to their rooms..while going to her room..Veera suddenly is about to fall from the steps..Nihaal catches her in his arms..Veera is completely lost in his eyes..Nihaal is just adoring her beauty..Then a song plays in the background..

Pehla nasha, pehla khumaar
Naya pyaar hai, naya intezaar
Kar loon main kya apna haal
Ae dil-e-beqaraar
Mere dil-e-beqaraar, tu hi bata

Veera is not making any effort to get up from his soft arms..Nihaal is staring at her continuesly..Suddenly kulraj calls Veera's name..they both are startled..and tensed..Kulraj comes there and asks veera to come with her..Veera
says ok .Kulraj leaves from there. Veera gives a shy smile to Nihaal and runs happily..Nihaal is felling shy and moves to his room happily thinking abt that incident..

Here Preet enters his room and hides near the cupboard to tease Ash..Ash feels tired after a long running session..and stands in the middle of Preet's room calling his name and taking her breaths..Preet comes from the behind and hugs Ash..Ash is shocked by his sudden reaction..Preet is holding her from back and puts his chin on Ash's shoulder..

Preet : thak gaye hoon?? (sweetly)
Ash : Haan..bahut thak gaye hoon..lekin tumhe kya farak padtha hain??..u go and enjoy ur parties..(angrily)
Preet : (turns her to his side, now Ash is facing Preet) Sorry Ash..aur tum aise kyun kehrahe hoon..ki mujhe koi farak nahi padtha hain...mujhe tumare harbaath se farak padtha hain ..kyunki pyaar jo kartha hoon tumse
Ash : Achha..pyaar yeh kabse karrahe hoon...(angrily)

Preet : oh..so confusing question...let me think..(pretending that he is thinking) ..Haan..yaad aaya..i really donno when i started loving u but i know only onething ..(Ash is looking at him seriously)..I will love you forever ..i will give u all the happiness..which u deserve..Trust me (catchin her both hands close to his heart).

Ash gets emotional listening to his words..tears are rolling from her eyes..Preet takes two steps backward..and sit down on knees infront of her..Ash is looking at him confusedly..

Preet : (puts his hand forward) WILL U MARRY ME???????

Ash is extremely happy by listening his marraige proposal.She has no words to express her happiness.Tears are falling from her eyes..She slowly puts her hand in Preet's hand.." YA..I WILL MARRY YOU " (in tears)..Preet slowly gets up and looks at Ash with a lot of love in his eyes..Ash could not control her happiness and hugs Preet..Ash is crying by hugging him..He is carenessing her hair..

Preet : Ash..
Ash : umm...
Preet : Mein ek baath bolo..??
Ash : Haan, bolo ??
Preet : when u get angry..ur nose will look like a circus joker's nose..(teases)
Ash : (hits him sweetly) Preet..tum bhi na..mein tumhe ek baath poochu..
Preet : Haan..poocho ..
Ash : Hum shaadi kab karenghe ??
Preet : After 1 year (confidently)
Ash : What ?? (gets up from his chest)
Preet : ya..i must settle in bussiness, Harman bhai should get married..Veera should get married..afterwards we both will marry..
Ash : OMG..after 1 yr that means even Heer didi ko bachhe bhi hojayenghe..(teases)
Preet : Haan..yeh tho maine soochna hein boolgaya...ur correct..upto the time of our marriage prem bhaiyya ko bachhe bhi hoonge..woh bachhe hamare shaadi mein bahut shoor machayenghi na Ash (teases her)
Ash : Preet...nahi mein 1 yr thak intezaar nahi karsakthe..
Preet : Ash..pls try to understand..aache bacche zidd nahi karthe (catching her face in his hands)
Ash : Preet ....(keeps a childish face)
Preet : Ash..it is matter of only one yr yaar..tum nahi chahthe ki tumara husband big position mein hoon..kisko pata we will get married before 1 yr only..who knows..pls ash give a single smile for my sake
Ash : ok ..(gives a smile)
Preet : thats like my good girl..(kisses on her forehead)..achhe ab bahut hogaya chalo jaakar soojao..subah jaldi utna hai mujhe ..hotel ka decorations dekna hain mujhe..aur tum bhi bhabhi ke saath early morning hotel jaana hain
na..bhoolgaye
Ash : woh kya hain na Preet..i am not going to hotel with heer didi..
Preet : not going ?? but why??
Ash : Woh..woh..(remembers Meher's words)
Preet : Yeh woh woh kya hain??? (confused)
Ash : meher, Kulraj didi and mom are going with bhabhi so i thought of going with baraat only
Preet : ok ,...thats fine.i am going to sleep bye Ash..goodnite
Ash : good nite preet (hugs him)...

Preet leaves from there and goes to Prem's room..Ash thinks of telling abt Preet's marriege proposal to heer, but she thinks that heer may be tired and have gone to sleep..so she decides to tell abt this matter tommorrow..Preet enters into Prem's room and finds him sitting dull on the bed..

Preet : Bhai ...(prem sees him)..kya hua??..aap itne udaas kyun hain..??
Prem : wah..kya sawaal poocha hain tumhe??? aisa pooch raha hain ki tumhe kuch bhi nahi pata hain(angrily)..yeh sab tumara kiya hua khel hain..mein tumhe nahi choodunga....

Saying this prem runs after Preet..Preet is confused but runs around the room to escape from the bhai..Preet is contiusly asking wat is the matter??? but Prem runs after him..Preet and Prem are standing on the bed and jumping..Atlast Prem catches and throws him on the bed..Prem is sitting on his stomach and beats in his stomach..

Preet : Ouch..(in pain) bhai pls kya hua bataye na...???
Prem : Zyada Anjaan baneki khoshish matkar..Heer is angry on me because of u and ur socalled party...
Preet : Kya ??(shocked) Bhabhi is angry on u ?? pehle aap mere upar se utharo..it's paining bhai ....
Prem : Mein nahi utrunga (get down)..kyun agar mein uthar gaya tho...baagnekha irada hain kya ???

Preet thinks that prem will not get up from his stomach..so he hardly pushes prem on the bed next to him and he then sits on his stomach....

Preet : achha ab bataye kya hua ???
Prem : kyun ?? tumse baatha ke kya faida..mera problem hain na mein khud solve karunga..
Preet : ok..if u can solve ur own problem..why did u beat me and run after me...(teasingly)..pls bhai tell me wat happen???i will try to help u...

Prem tells abt the whole thing wat Veera and Kulraj said that how heer is angry on prem??..after listening abt that Bachelor's party...Preet is listening silently...

Preet : Bas...itne se baath ke liye aap mujh par gussa horahe hain...
Prem : i am thinking so hardly that how to convince her ??? and u are saying it is a small problem..
Preet : ya..bhai its really a small problem...pehle aap bhabhi kho call kariye..aur baath kariye...
Prem : woh mein pehle hi kar chuka hoon... lekin koi faida nahin....
Preet : Kya ???? yeh aap kya kehrahe hain Bhai..u have talked with bhabhi before only..
Prem : Ya..i have talked with her before only..when u did not enter my room.
He explains what happen when preet did not enter the prem's room

****Flashback*****

Prem after saying goodnite to his family members enters his room and freshes up..he slowly sits on the bed and decides to call heer and clear her doubts..he calls heer . Heer is in her room, thinking abt the party..sudenly she gets a call from Prem . She gets angry and cuts his call. Prem is shocked. He again tries her number..Heer again cuts his call..But Prem is not a giving up character. he thirdly calls heer..she gets angry and even she did not cut the call also..The call goes on..prem listens the voice mail of heer..he saves a message...

Prem : Heer mujhe tumse baath karni hain..pls heer i want to talk to you..abt the party..pls lift the phone
Heer recieves the voice mail and hears it and decides to talk with Prem ...she calls him..Prem becomes extremely happy to get call from her..He happily recieves it..
Heer : Bolo prem..kya baath karna chahthe hoon mujse..yahin ki tumhe usse party ke baare mein kuch nahi pata..preet tumhe waha leke gaya tha...isnt'it???"
Prem : exactly heer...u have said what i wanted to say ..i really donno where i am going..preet took me to that party..Trust me..
Heer : come on prem..i don't want to listen your excuses..bye Prem i am going to sleep..pls don't disturb me..bye
Prem : Heer..Heer..mere..

Before he could finish the sentence Heer cuts his call...Prem is again trying to call her..but she is not lifting the call..sad prem throws his cell on the bed and catches his head with his hand and sits dull. Then Preet enters his room

*****Flashback Ends *****

Prem has narrated all this story to Preet . Preet slowly gets up from Prem's stomach and sits on the bed..Prem also sits next to Preet...Preet gets an idea..and he takes Prem's cell and types a message..Prem gets confused..Preet is typing " Bhabhi mein preet..aapse kuch baath karne hain..pls bhabhi..call to Prem bhai's cell once..plsss"...Preet shows that message Prem. Prem feels happy that Heer will surely call him now. Heer recieves that message and return calls to Prem's cell. This time Preet recieves the call..

Preet : Hello, Bhabhi..
Heer : Preet..bolo kya baath hain..y u told to call me..
Preet : Bhabhi aap se Bahi ke baare mein kuch Baath karne hain ..issliye.. (stands up from the bed and goes little far from Prem)
Heer : Mujhe pata hain ki tum kya baath karna chahthe hoon..yehi ki prem innocent hain ..aur tumne usse jabardasthi party pe lekhe gaya tha..
Preet : Nahi bhabhi..mein yeh sab baathe karne ke liye i did not ask to call you..
Heer : Then...wat u wanted to say???

Preet : (Preet comes far from Prem ..prem cannot listen his words and thinks that preet is explaining heer abt party)..bhabhi aap bhai ko bahut innocent samajthe hain...lekin bhai itna innocent nahi hain..jaise aap soochthe hain...bhai ne aap se yeh kaha hain ki usko pata nahin hain ki mein unhe kaha lejaraha hoon..lekin bhai ko sab pata hain ke mein unhe kaha lejaraha hoon..phir bhi woh mere saath aaye the..aur pata hain bhabhi..usne Reshmi ke saaath bahut dance kiya hain...

Heer : Yeh Reshmi koun hain..(cuts him)
Preet : Woh ek acchi dancer hain aur hamare special guest hain..aur woh bahut cute bhi hain..sooch ligiye bhabhi..aur ek baath don't tell bro that i have told u all this,,..i am giving to bhai..talk to him..(Preet gives cell to prem and laughes )
Prem : Heer ...preet ne sab kuch baathaya na..ab tho tum khush hoon na...
Heer : Ya..Preet had said everything abt u and ur party...prem ..mein sapne mein bhi nahi soochthe ki tum mujse jooth bologhe..and ur blaming preet ..who is so innocent and did not do anything..bye prem.. don't again try to call me...

Saying this Heer cuts his call ..Prem is confused abt wat did preet tell to Heer and why she again become angry???..he asks to preet..but Preet pretends that he supported him and told that the party was his plan and also adds that prem doesn't know abt the party..Preet smiles inside and prem is confused..Preet says that prem should only solve his problem..and leaves from there laughing inside...Prem is worried and confused ..Then Kulraj's son (Atharva..he is child who danced with heer on premeer engagement day-hulchal hua) comes to Prem's room asking Prem to see his sherwani..Then Prem gets an idea..

Prem : Atharva beta..
Atharva : Yes ...mamu..(cutely)..
Prem : Mera ..ek kaam..karoge beta...
Atharva : Ya..mamu i will do it..
Prem tells something in his ears..Atharva understands it and says ok..Atharva then goes to Heer's room..Heer sees him

Heer : Atharva beta..koi kaam hain mujse...(taking him so close)
Atharva : mami..mein aapse ek baath batane aaya hoon...
Heer : Batao Beta..
He slowly moves away from heer's grip and catches his both ears with his hands and does sit-ups.Heer is confused....she comes to him and sits on her knees..and stops him from doing sit-ups..

Heer : Beta..yeh tum kya karrahe hoon...why are u doing sit-ups ..what mistake u did???
Atharva : no mammi..i did not do any mistake..Prem mammu told me to do this on his behalf...and he asked the reply for this..
Heer : ok..ur mammu said you to do this..and he asked for the reply no..i will give u the reply..
She too tells something in his ear..Atharva goes to Prem's room..Prem is eagerly waiting for him..Prem sees him and gets excited..

Prem : Kya hua beta..tumare mammi ne kya kaha???
Atharva sweetly punches on prem's nose with his hand...Prem is shocked.
Prem : ouch..yeh tumne kya kiya beta..???
Atharva : mein ne wahi kiya..jo heer mammi ne mujhe karne ke kaha tha..
Prem : Achha ..tho tumare heer mammi ab bhi mujse naraaz hain...beta mera aur ek kaam karoge..
Atharva : ya ..mammu..
Prem again tells something in child's ears..he slowly makes his steps towards Heer's room..Heer smiles by seeing their mediator...

Heer : issbaar kya karne aaye hoon tum ???..u did waht i said to u to do???..
Atharva : ya..mammi..i hardly punched on mammu's nose..
Heer : very good beta..(kisses him on his cheek)
Atharva : but mammu has given the reply...

Heer is confused..Atharva asks her to close her eyes..Heer closes her eyes..Atharva cutely kisses her on her cheek..Heer is shocked..She too decides to give reply for this..she says somthing in the child's ear..Atharva agrees and goes to Prem's room..Prem again eagerly waiting for the reply..Atharva comes to Prem's room..and prem sits on his knees and asks him about Heer's reply..Atharva cutely asks prem to close his eyes..Prem thinks in mind that the kid is going to kiss him..Prem closes his eyes happily..Atharva comes close to prem's cheek..Prem is excited..suddenly Atharva bites his cheek so hardly..Prem again shouts with pain..

prem : mein tumhe choodunga nahin..(catches his hand)
Atharva : Mammu mein ne kuch nahi Kiya..i did wat mammi said me to do..
Prem : ok tho yeh tumare pyaari heer mammi ke kaam hain..now she must accept my sorry at any cost (with a determined look)

Heer is waiting for the kid to tell what is prem's next step to convince her...but she gets confused as the child did not come yet..she thinks that prem might felt bad and she decides to call prem and end their fighting..she is about to call Prem..But the kid comes to her room..by seeing the child she gets relived..Atharva comes to heer..and gives a letter to her...Heer asks who gave it ???..Atharva cutely says Prem mammu..Heer slowly opens the letter..

" mere pyaari Mrs.Heer Prem Juneja.(heer blushes).i know officially its from 2mrw but as we both know that we are made for eachother in the childhood only..so u are my wife from the childhood itself (she smiles)..first give a choclate to my cute kid otherwise he will kill us for making him roaming here and there (she laughs and gives a choclate to Atharva..now atharva is busy in eating the choclate)..
ab batao tumare problem kya hain..maine kaha tha mujhe uss party ke baare mein kuch bhi nahi pata hain...tho tum mere baath kyun nahi
maanthe..(she falls on the bed and reading the letter)..uss preet ke bacche ne mujhe party pe lekhe gaya tha..aur jab mujhe pata chala ki woh bachelor's party..i want to leave that party..but i really don't want to hurt the guests ..so i stayed there..even i did not enjoy the party and even the dance of that girl..see i even donno her name also..but at the ending i danced with bauji only not with the girl..(i know prem..heer sweetly thinks)..understood miss.wrong number..(heer is confused)..i know u are confused..let me explain why i used that word..tumhe pata hain hum dono yeh sooch rahe hain ki hamrare pehle meeting ludhiana mein hue hain..lekin hamare pehle mulakaat phone par hua tha ..remember when i was in canada and u are in ambala..u dialed a wrong number and talked with some one abt baisakhi and jodis made in heaven..later u found it a wrong number and cut the call immediately...that someone is myself..tumara prem.(she is shocked).
.aur mein bhi kaha tha na tumara aur mere sooch hain marriages made in heaven par..le ab saach hogaye ...even after reading this letter also u are angry on me just tear the letter in pieces and give it Atharva..then i will understand that u are still angry on me...if u love my letter then give reply for that letter..then i will feel happy..ok my miss.wrong number..bye... "

Heer smiles after reading this letter and gets an idea..Here prem is waiting for his little mediator..Then Atharva comes to prem's room with eating a choclate given by heer..Prem is excited to see him and ask him abt the
reply of heer

Atharva : Mammu..maami ne apko yeh letter diya...(cutely)..
The kid gives letter to Prem and gets tired and sleep on Prem's lap..Prem is adoring him and slowly make him sleep on his lap..he is patting on the kid back inorder to make him sleep..Atharva sleeps after sometime..Then Prem slowly opens the letter......

" Mere Pyaari Mr.wrong number...tumhe yaad maine ek baar kaha tha..ki tum ek number ki bhuddu hoon..aur ab bhi mein wahi kehte hoon...tum bilkul ek number ke buddhu hoon,,(he keeps sad face)..tumne aise kaise sooch liya ki
tumari heer tumse kabhi naraaz bhi ho sakthe hain...(he smiles)..mujhe pehle se he pata tha ki tumko parties pasaand nahi hain..
.woh bhi when i am not there with u...agar bhagwan bhi aake mujhe kehtha hain ki tumara prem tumhe dokha deraha hain ya tumse jooth bolraha hain..tho mein uska baath bhi nahi maanungha..mein khud se jyada tum par barosa karthe hoon..no need to get emotional ...aur wahi baath Preet ki..Preet ne mujse kaha tha ki tum party mein bahut enjoy kiye aur uss ladke se dance bhi kiya hain..(Prem thinks yeh preet ke bacche ko mein nahi chodungha).but Preet thought that i would defend him and tell that my prem is not like that..but i did not say a single word..
i pretended that i listened to his words..i think he too got a shock..aur jaha thak mein Preet kho jaanthe hoon..bas 10 min mein woh tumare paas aakar tumse maafi maangegha..pls accept his sorry and don't tell him a single word..understood..(yes madam)..Prem tum saach kehrahe hoon..mein ne tumare voice ko pehchana hain..but i am an idiot i am still thinking i heard this voice somewhere...(he smiles)..tho tum ho mere Mr.Wrong number...ok don't call me now already time is 10.30 we should get up early so we should sleep early got it..bye Prem good nite..haan aur ek baath bacche ke tumare saath hi soone dena..again goodnite "..

Prem feels happy by reading the letter and kisses the letter..he slowly makes the kid sleep on the bed..Just then Preet enters hi room..Prem smiles abt thinking Heer's words..Preet comes and asks abt Heer's fighting..Prem pretends that heer is still angry on me..and keeps a sad face..Preet says that he will call her and tell that its all his fault..Prem smiles for his innocence..Preet is about to call heer..but Prem take his phone and says no need of calling her..Preet asks why??..Prem says abt the whole atharva thing and letters..Preet is about to say sorry but Prem closes his mouth and says that no need of any sorry and says " tum mere bhai hoon..tumhe purra haq hain mujhe tease karneka ok"..Prem hugs preet and asks him to go and sleep..Preet leaves..Prem sleeps beside Atharva and kisses him on Forehead..

NEXT DAY ie SHAADI DAY

All the family members get up early in the morning..Preet along with Nihaal , Varun , Dharun went to hotel to check the decorations of the mandap ..Gay3 wakes up Prem and Heer as they slept late in the nite..Atharva is still sleeping..Prem quickly goes to wash room to have bath..Kulraj Pushes Heer in the bathroom..Ash and Kulraj are arranging the jewellery and Lehengha as they have to move to the Hotel..Heer comes from the bathroom wearing a beautiful gagra..Here Prem took his bath and wears a kurta..

Gay3 along with Meher and Kulraj leave to the hotel so that Prem cannot see heer..Veera and Ash are checking the other arrangements in the home..Prem slowly comes down and asks abt Heer..Veera says that they have left to the hotel..Prem says ok..All are busy in their own works..After sending all the things to the mandap..All of them have their bath..Karan is dressing his three kids and Veera is helping Karan...Harman wears a beautiful sherwani..Veera after dressing the kids freshes up fastly..and wears a beautiful gagra..Ash is getting ready in her room..

Preet , varun, Dharun , Nihaal , Kulraj comes and freshens up fastly...Nihaal wears a beautiful sherwani and leaves to hotel hurriedly as he has to recieve the baraat with Meher..After all are dressed up with beautiful
lehengas and Sherwanis they slowly comes to Prem's room to make him ready..Prem already wore his sherwani and waiting for them ..Kulraj ties Sehra on his head..All are laughing seeing at him that how much happy is he
today..Just then Preet hears the drums sound..and tells that all have come and they have to leave now...

Then they all comes down and makes Prem sit on the horse..with his face covered with sehra..Preet asks the drum's person to beat the drums louder..Then a song plays in the background and all of them starts dacing to that song..

Dil da mamla hai dilbar hone na sone hai is dil par (Preet dances)
khalbali dil ke andar Ohhhh Mast mast Kalandar (Karan joins him)

Dil da mamla hai dilbar hone na sone hai is dil par (Harman also dances)
khalbali dil ke andar Ohhhh Mast mast Kalandar (Karan brings Varun)

one (preet) two (Karan) three (harman) four (Varun)

Dil da mamla hai dilbar (Preet)
hone na sone hai is dil par (Harman)
khalbali dil ke andar (Nihaal)
Ohhhh Mast mast Kalandar (Karan does balle balle)

mast maste maste maste mast kalandar (all the 4 of them dances and prem is laughing)
mast maste maste maste mast kalandar (chorus)

Preet brings Ash, veera and Kulraj to dance with them. Kulraj dances with karan...Veera with Harman..Ash with Preet..Varun and Dharun are dancing with them

mast maste maste maste mast kalandar (chorus)
mast maste maste maste mast kalandar (chorus)

All are dancing happily..Prem is smiling at them...looking so happy..

Dil da mamla (preet) hai dilbar (Varun)
hone na sone hai (harman) is dil par (karan)
khalbali dil (Dharun) ke andar (karan)
Ohhhh Mast mast Kalandar (chorus)

All the family members are dancing happily...including Lalit

Dil da mamla hai dilbar (Preet dances in punjabi style)
hone na sone hai is dil par (karan competes him)
khalbali dil ke andar (Varun dances)
Ohhhh Mast mast Kalandar (Karan dances happily in punjabi style)

mast maste maste maste mast kalandar (chorus)
mast maste maste maste mast kalandar (chorus)

All are dancing Happily..Varun and Dharun goes to bring Prem but Kulraj says once the groom sat on the horse he should not get up..Baraat is slowly moving front

mast maste maste maste mast kalandar (Lalit joins them and dancing hapily)
mast maste maste maste mast kalandar (chorus)

Baraat is slowly moving front according to the music

meri nazar toh tumpe pare toh man me tha tera sedhai (Karan Flirts Kulraj and dances around her)
betabion ko lahat mili toh dhoor hui meri tanhai (Preet Dances around Ash)
mere rang ka tere roop ka hai aasar tere surroor ka (Harman is dancing with Veera)
mere haal se mere dard se tu hai bekhabar (All are dancing happily with full josh)

dil da mamlaaaaaaaaa (Preet dances)

Dil da mamla (Varun) hai dilbar (Karan)
hone na sone hai (Harman) is dil par (Preet)
khalbali dil ke andar (Dharun)
Ohhhh Mast mast Kalandar (All are dancing in punjabi style..Prem is watching them happily)

mast maste maste maste mast kalandar (chorus)
mast maste maste maste mast kalandar (chorus)

Lalit is happily dancing with all the kids..Prem is happily watching them..Thay surroound Prem's horse and dances ..Prem is laughing..

mast maste maste maste mast kalandar (chorus)
mast maste maste maste mast kalandar (chorus)

Ash goes to the tape recoder and changes other song.....

I'm a kinda gal Who likes a little fun So let's go, come on let's play
I think naughty is nice And sugar is spicy Are you listening to what I say
Kisi ka na dar Na koi fikar To aajaa baby get down
Bas charo aur ho yehi shor I'll tell you what its all about

(Ash and Veera are happily dancing to the song...Kulraj joins them ..all are watching them)

Hey paaji come on come on
Let's get down get down
Get to it.

Ash brings Preet..Kulraj Brings Karan..all are dancing happily...

Hey paaji have a little fun
It's really really nothing to it
He paaji why you're forced to go
Get a move on boy and you'll see
Hey paaji on ur mark be steady
Are u ready to play with me

All are dancing happily with the beats of that song..Lalit joins them..Prem is feeling excited to look their dance and happiness...

All my ladies going crazy
With rhythm that the
Music's spinning its heating up the night
Life's a party toh jee lee tu khul ke jee lee
Kal kya hoga jo hona hai ho jaye

Preet is dancing with Ash..Karan is dancing around Kulraj..Varun is dancing with the kids..Dharun and Harman are dancing with Veera

Jee Karda bai jee karda (Preet dances)
Tenu kol baithawa jee karda (Karan joins him)

Jee Karda bai jee karda (Harman dances)
Tenu kol baithawa jee karda (Varun, Dharun dances with him)

As the music plays the barrat is moving forward and all are dancing to the punjabi steps..Karan takes Atharva in his arms and dancing with him happily...Tanu sits with Prem on the horse and dancing with her hands..Prem is laughing seeing at her...

Jee Karda bai jee karda (Lalit dances)
Tenu kol baithawa jee karda (Harman joins him).

Jee Karda bai jee karda (Karan dances with them)
Tenu kol baithawa jee karda (Varun dances with Kulraj's other son)

Ek vari ek vari ek vari ho ek vari (Preet dances)
Tu seene naaleeeeee (Karan joins him)
Tu seene naal lag soniye o balle balle (Harman joins them and dances in punjabi style)
Tu seene naal lag soniye o shawa shawa (Preet dances with Ash)
Tu seene naal lag soniye (Karan dances with Kulraj)

Everybody wanna join the party
Wanna have some fun n get down tonight
Everybody put your hands up in the air
Its time to sail on with the time tonight

All are dancing happily in the punjabi style and Prem is watching them..sitting on the horse...

Jee karda bai jee karda (Preet dances )
Tenu jhapiya pawa jee karda (Harman joins him)

Jee karda bai jee karda (Varun dances with them)
Tenu jhapiya pawa jee karda (Dharun also joins them)

Ek vari ek vari ek vari ho ek vari (Preet is flirting Ash and dances with her)

Tu haath meraaaaa (Karan dances with his son)
Tu haath mera padh soniye o balle balle (Harman dances with Veera)
Tu haath mera padh soniye o shawa shawa (Lalit is dancing with Kulraj)
Tu haath mera padh soniye (all are dancing happily)

Then the hotel comes..All are looking happy..Karan makes Prem get down from the Horse..Meher and Nihaal welcomes Them with Aarti ..Meher puts tikka on Prem's forehead..Ash suddenly changes the party and stands beside meher..Before anyone could see Prem..Ash pulls Prem's nose..Preet, Harman are shocked..Prem is smiling..Kulraj hits Ash on head,,Ash says that its rasam...Meher welcomes each and every family member with tikka and throws flowers on them...Prem then sits on the chair...Ash says something in Meher's ears and Meher feels happy and they both run to get that ...

PRECAP : Juneja's and Maan's are fighting for the joothe..Prem is watching them to see who will win...After that stealing scene ..Veera comes dressed as Heer..Nihaal comes dressed as prem..All are surprised ..They both dance to the song " Tenu Leke "..Prem also dances with them in the middle ...

Hope u liked it..my next update will be mostly on 10th nov as it is my birthday...or may be 11th nov...PLs leave ur commnets ....ur commnets really make my day

Edited by anushka10 - 16 years ago

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swati

@sweta2005

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+ 7

Posted: 16 years ago

#359

awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee too good very nice part waitingggggggggggg for next asap.

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lala

@Harshitipremeer

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#360

Anu Di this is for u👏its too good di!😳i like preemer's part lol prem is givng kiss n sweet replies n heer is giving nauhty replies to prem n bite him😆😆😆And that kid busy in eating chocolate😆😆😆hahaha preet become a fool he came back to say sorry(what he though prem is doing nothing are mere bhai prem toh chupa ustam hain!)😆n i like prem-preet fight!😆😆😆oh my god sitting in each otehrs stomach that too much!😆😆😆i brust into laughter n my mom was like😕whats wrong with her😆but i didnt let her to read😆😆😆And all of dancing😛so good mere akhoo main asoon agaye sab ko itni khush dekh kar!😆😆😆(just kidding)And i like preet-ash scence too😆preet was such a romenti person n now proposed her so easily😆😆😆also so funny in their married prem-heer's bacche!😆😆😆Ash pinched prem's nose?😆Also i like preemer saying each other Ms.wrong number and Mr.wrong number!😆Let me talk about the promo!😆😆😆wow!Maan VS Juneja!😆😆😆Last but not the least when i read the precap i was like😆Preemer part 2!😆😆😆i really like veera and nihaal in this ff butnot in the show😆Haha maybe Nihaal will hold veera's face like prem do to heer!😆😆😆u r just too much n thx alot for the long update actually i saw read the update before i got ur pm😆But still thx for the pm but i had already read!😆😆😆

Plz tell us when r u going to update ur next part looking more forward for the next update!😆