FF: Old Prem Back- Part 23 (Pg 147 - Feb 6)

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Anusha

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Posted: 16 years ago

#291

Originally posted by: 12345xxx
wow di excellent
i'm speech less i enjoyed more than what i hav expected
tickling scene made me🤣
di meru na suggestion thisukunaru🤣
actual ga this part kdmhmd lo vaste matram uff........my mom chudanivadhu kani🤣🤣
ikkada matram motham chadivanu😆😆😆
real ga superb
di send me deleted dialogues plzzzz

Thank q soo soo much my little sis....🤗🤗
I am so happy to hear that i havee crossed ur expectations.....😃😃😃😃
Really i too enjoyed tickling scene a lot 🤣🤣🤣...i really imagined each and every scene and put into words...
I did not get u nenu ne suggection em tesukunanu ra...😕😕😕
Even i could not wtach this part on TV infront of my mom...but i want more and more premeer scenes😭😭😭...Hope for the better....
I have added the deleted dialogues in the coming updates...i will inform you which i have deleted ok na
Thank q soo much for the commnets🤗🤗🤗
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Anusha

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Posted: 16 years ago

#292

Originally posted by: fijiana
☺️look what you have done aaj se pehle i have never blushed like this but it is never your fault .put the blame on premeer for being so romantic that it sometimes leaves us shameless.love the update and especially because it wasa long and filled with premeer moments that i was premeer dreamland😍but thank god for the water pot warna tauba tauba kya ho jaata.but it definetly a spoiler.and loved how you made them argue about the number of kids they wanted.arreh shaadi hui nahi and prem future planning ,not bad mr juneja not bad. this is for you for wonderful update,you deserve it and for making it long👏 by the next update preview looks very intersting.so will read when you update. take care.

Yay i finally succeded in making u blushing for the first time...Ya its not my fault...its really premeer fault...🤣.....i really enjoyed each and every scene while writing and imagined it i was blushing ☺️.....ya water pot is a spoiler ....thank q for the woderful comments...loved them so much....my next update will be on thursday yaar

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Nadia

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Posted: 16 years ago

#293

sorry sis

it was really awesome it was like a Romantic movie scenes . plz teach your stupid sis as she still cannot write ..

i wish some moive director read your ff and cast HARSHAD AND ADDITI in your FF . as it was really great . i was ☺️ while reading it i am thinking what you will do when they will get married waiting for that part just kidding sorry for late reply as i was not feeling well dear

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Anusha

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Posted: 16 years ago

#294

Originally posted by: pisces26
sorry sis
it was really awesome it was like a Romantic movie scenes . plz teach your stupid sis as she still cannot write ..

i wish some moive director read your ff and cast HARSHAD AND ADDITI in your FF . as it was really great . i was ☺️ while reading it i am thinking what you will do when they will get married waiting for that part just kidding sorry for late reply as i was not feeling well dear

Hey di how r u?? i am happy that u r fine now...😃...Thank q soo much for ur comments ...hmmwat i should teach you can a student teaches his teacher?? i really don't have idea to write FF, but u encouraged me....i am really thankful to you di?????
wishing to see our fav jodi in a movie lets take ur FF..ur FF is so nice than me..so emotional scenes ...u r a best writer than me yaar..👍🏼..marraige ke baad kya hota hain yeh mein bhi nahi jaanthe..i have not planned yet...now i am concentrating on their marriage rituals only.🤪...No need of any sorry di..i am really happy that u are alright now....😃
Loved ur comments a lot 🤗

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Nadia

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Posted: 16 years ago

#295

Originally posted by: anushka10

Hey di how r u?? i am happy that u r fine now...😃...Thank q soo much for ur comments ...hmmwat i should teach you can a student teaches his teacher?? i really don't have idea to write FF, but u encouraged me....i am really thankful to you di?????
wishing to see our fav jodi in a movie lets take ur FF..ur FF is so nice than me..so emotional scenes ...u r a best writer than me yaar..👍🏼..marraige ke baad kya hota hain yeh mein bhi nahi jaanthe..i have not planned yet...now i am concentrating on their marriage rituals only.🤪...No need of any sorry di..i am really happy that u are alright now....😃
Loved ur comments a lot 🤗

dear i just make people cry 😭😭as you make them all☺️☺️oh what sisters we both are i just ask u not to waste your time in what will be next every weekend start a ff as your predictions were great as you your self is great just make us ☺️

Edited by pisces26 - 16 years ago

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Lamia Tasnim Liana

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Posted: 16 years ago

#296

Hi Anushka im a new reader of ur FF&im sorry for replying late ,i must say i just loved the FF great writing tht was toooooooooooo good👏[=D>👏i think the night was not only passionate but also very sweet,cute&lil funny the agruement of Prem Heer tht was toooooooooooo cute,i cant imagine PH fighting like this😆😆really enjoy reading it&wish to read the next part as well😳Keep It Up dear👍🏼

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Anusha

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Posted: 16 years ago

#297

hello guys i am back with my bada update....

Part 13 - Premeer haldi & bachelor's Party

Its 5 '0' clock in the morning. Prem and Heer are in a deep sleep. Prem is resting his back on the wall and places his head on the heer's hand. Heer puts her both hands around his neck and resting her head on his chest. Prem's both hands surround her back inorder to catch her tightly from falling in sleep. Bedsheet is covering both of them. He slowly opens his eyes and a cute smile appears on his face seeing his angel sleeping with a shyly smile on her face. For him she is looking like a sleeping beauty. He did not dare to wake up her. He sweetly kisses on her forehead and puts her on his lap without disturbing her. He is completely busy in adoring his angel who has enlightened his life with her love and affection. He slowly removes hair from her face which is disturbing her. He is stroking her hair caringly. Suddenly he looks at his watch. He then remembers his family members especially his mom for whom he made a promise that they both will be back so soon.

He then unwillingly dares to wake up his sleeping beauty. He slowly whispers ' Heer ' in her ears. But she did not hear. Then he again whispers somewat loudly ' Heer ' in her ears. Heer in a low voice whispers ' Ummm' but did not open her eyes. Prem again says ' pls get up '. Heer is a soft and sleepy voice ' Kya hain Prem , soone (sleep) dona '. Prem stroking her hair caringly says ' Heer , uto na ghar mein sab log hamare intezaar karrahe hoonge '. She quickly opens her eyes by listening to his words. She observes that he is staring at her lovingly, she feels shy and gets up from his lap and gives a cute smile to him.

Heer : Good Morning..(smiles) Prem .chalo jaldi se ghar chalthe chalthe hain waha sab log hamare intezaar karrahe hoonge (tensed voice) (pulling his arm to make him get up)

Prem : (pulling her from back towards him) itne bhi jalde kya hain. Tumhe netho kaha tha na ki tumhe soona hain , chalo aaram se sojao.

Heer : Prem'(angrily) yeh mazaak karne ka waqt nahi hain. Yaad hain maa ne kaha hain ki aaj hum dono nahi mil sakthe lekin we are seeing each other'pls prem no jokes make it fast we have to go home..(annoyingly)

Prem : ok baba'tum pareshaan mat hoo, chalo uto, jalde se ghar chalthe hain..

They both slowly gets up from that place. Heer folds the bedsheet and keep it in the corner. She slowly picks up her dupatta from the grass bed and wears it. Prem picks up his shirt from the wooden log and wears it (omg prem without shirt whole nite and romancing with heer remembers me of Soap scene 😍) Heer sweetly gives him his coat. He folds it and puts on his arm.

They both slowly walks towards door. Suddenly she stops walking forward. He too stops walking seeing her..

Prem : Kya hua Heer, tum rukh kyun gaye ???? (confused)
Heer : Prem ' (remembering something ) Ek minute.

Saying this she turns back to have a final glance of their dreamland. Slowly she gets flashes of the cute nite they spend together in the wooden cottage'She remembers all those incidents one by one how they both lost in eac other arms?? How they fought for kids??

Remembering all those incidents, a little smile appeared on her face. She slowly moves towards a wooden pillar. Then she gets an idea
Heer : Prem'Give ur car keys once???
Prem : (confused) My car keys?? But why??
Heer : First give ur keys 'afterwards I will say u why I took them..(confidently)

Prem gives his car keys to Heer. Heer starts to write something on that wooden pillar . He is really confused and donno wat she is writing on wooden pillar that too with his car keys''.Prem continusly asks her that wat is she writing??. Heer says to wait him for a minute. Heer finishes her writing. Then she removes her hand from the wooden pillar and signals him with her eyes to read it . He reads it.

Heer
❤️
Prem

Prem becomes extremely happy and surprised by reading it. Heer asks how it is??. Prem simply puts his hands together and starts clapping slowly by saying excellent.

Heer : Who made it (raising her collar )
Prem : OK..apart from praising..you really deserve a gift also'
Heer : Gift ?? wat gift?? (surprisingly)

Prem slowly moves towards her with his naughty intensions. She thinks that again he is going to do a naughty thing. Prem comes closer to heer. Heer is staring at him shyly. Suddenly Prem turns his face after coming so closer to her. He sweetly kisses on 'Heer' name written on the pillar. She sees it and feels shy. After kissing he turns towards heer to see her reaction. He gives a naughty smile by seeing heer feeling shy and looking down.

Prem : Aree Heer , Mujhe tho abhi tak pata nahi tha..(she is seeing him) ki tumko sharmana bhi aata hain (teasing her ) (gives a naughty smile)
Heer : (gives an angry look) Prem..(beating on his shoulder ) Phir se surru hogaye tum'
Prem : Sorry..sorry main tho sirf mazaak karraha tha'ab chale we are getting late..(changes topic)

They both walk out of the cottage in a hurry. They walk towards their car. Prem tried to repair the car but failed. They both decide to take lift from some vehicle. Prem tried to stop nearly 3 vehicles, but he fails. Now its her turn, he opened his car door and sat in the car watching heer. Heer also tried to stop 2-3 vehicles, she too fails. Prem asks her to take rest, then saw a lorry coming. He tried to stop that lorry. The lorry driver stopped his lorry by seeing him. They both feels happy and gets relieved by seeing the lorry.

Prem : Bhaiyya, hamare car break down hogaye, pls aap hame city tak lift deghe ??
Driver : Achha chaliye ..baitiye aap dono..
Prem : Lekin bhaiyya ek problem hain'(driver gets down) mein mera car ko iss tarah highway par nahi chood saktha'aap kuch madad karsakthe ???
Driver : Achaa tho thek hain 'mein ek kaam kartha hoon'I will tie a rope to car and pull it with my lorry..and you both sit inside the car .
They both gets happy by listening to the driver's words. Then the driver removes a rope from his lorry and ties it to Prem's car. He asks both of them to sit in the car. They both sit in the car..The driver starts his lorry and pulls Prem's car with the help of rope'

The scene switches to Juneja mansion'Gay3 could not sleep properly whole nite, as she is worried abt her two kids. Even lalit is worried abt the kids..Preet felt tired of calling prem again and again and felt asleep in his mother's lap. Karan and Kulraj also could not sleep properly and worrying abt the safety of Prem & Heer. Rest of the others felt tired and slept in the hall itself. Gay3 is getting tensed abt the safety of Prem and Heer. Karan assures her that they may be stuck somewhere in the rain'and asks her not to worry'Gay3 , our sweet and caring mom can stop worrying abt her ladla beta and pyaari bahu..she as usual worries abt Prem and Heer.

Prem and Heer are in a car. Heer is feeling tensed abt wat gay3 mom is thinking???

Prem : kya hua Heer , tum itne pareshaan kyun lag rahe ??
Heer : aise koi baath nahi prem..mujhe iss baath se darr hain ki maa kya sooch rahe hoonge..
Prem : Mujse behtar mere maa ko koun jaantha hain'woh tho pareshaan ho rahi hoonge ki ab tak hum ghar kyun nahi pounche??
Heer : Haan mujhe bhi iss baath ke chintha hain ki maa ko ek call bhi nahi kiya..ki hum safe hain..pata nahi maa kitne pareshaan ho rahi hoongi??

Prem : don't worry we will reach home within so soon

He assures her by putting his hand on her hand. She turns to him and gives a cute smile saying ok. The driver stops the lorry as they reached the city. Driver gets down and walks towards prem. Prem also gets down from the car. Driver says that he has to go in different way and says them that he can't help them further. Prem assures him that no problem and asks to help him by putting the car in a parking place. They both push the car in a safe and parking place. Prem locks the car and thanks the driver for helping them.
Driver leaves and prem tries to hire a taxi. Prem finds a taxi successfully. They both sit in the taxi and go to Juneja's Mansion. Prem pays the money and enters the home by catching heer's hand.

All the family members are happy and surprised to see them. Gay3 is relieved to see her kids safe'Kulraj wakes up all the others. Gay3 feels happy by seeing them and all of a sudden she remembers abt Prem's promise that he said that he will come back within 3hrs but they both reached the home in the morning. Preet woke and feels happy to see his beloved bhaiyya and bhabhi safe. All are happy to see them except one person who loved Prem more than anything in the world ie sweet Gay3 mom. Prem and heer observes the angriness in their mom's eyes.

Gay3 is walking towards them angrily. They both understood that she is angry and sees each other. All are watching Gay3 in anxiety that wat is she going to do???. Prem and heer puts their heads down. Gay3 comes and stands infront of Prem angrily.

Prem : Maa'.Woh kya hain ki'..???
Gay3 : (cuts him) wat is the time now??
Prem : (confidently) morning 6 '0' clock
Gay3 : at wat time did u promised me that you will come home??
Prem : Night 10 '0' clock' (confidently)
Gay3 : this means that u have breaked your promise''.wat punishment I have to give u???

All are shocked by seeing Gay3's angry that too on her ladla beta prem 'Heer and Prem looks at each other'

Prem : aap jo bhi sajja deghe woh mujhe manzoor hain maa'.
Gay3 : Soochlo Prem '.u will accept any punishment given by me??? (Preet comes and stands beside Gay3 )
Prem : Ya Maa'. (Heer tries to tell the reason but prem cuts her)

Gay3 angrily comes closer to Prem and sweetly catches his ear'All are shocked..

Gay3 : yeh hain tumare punishment..badmaash maine kaha na raat tak ghar pounchna'tumko ab ghar yaad aaya (naughtily)

All of them bursts into laughter by seeing Gay3 naughty mood'.Heer also laughs keeping her hand on her mouth'

Prem : Maa'pls leave me ..its paining..i am sorry'(sweetly asks for forgiveness)
Gay3 catches his ear still more tightly'Prem is shouting with pain..all are laughing seeing Prem..Heer this time laughs loudly'Gay3 sees her and catches her ear with her other hand

Gay3 : Bohut hass rahe thi na tum..tumhe bhi milne chahiye sajja'(teasingly)
Heer : Maa..Maa..pls leave me ..dard ho raha hain..maa'I am really very sorry'(in pain)
Gay3 : pehle galthi karthe hoon aur upar se maafi maangthe hoon'(catching their ears)
Kulraj : maa chodiye na bechare ko..ussne maafi maanghe hain na maa'
Gay3 : Chood dho (asking prem and heer)
Prem : haan maa pls leave us'we will explain why we are late..pls maa'

Finally Gay3 leaves them.. Premeer gets relived 'they sweetly catches their ears.and rub it to relive from pain'

Prem : Kya maa'aap bhi'first listen to my words then scold us'actually we are coming home on time only'but my car gave a trouble in the middle road ...then I tried to call you but kya karu battery down hain 'and then we saw a cottage and hamne soocha ki baarish ki rukne tak hum uss cottage mein rahenghe'(all are listening carefully)

Karan : (talks in the middle )
Hum tum ek kamre mein bandh hoo
Aur chabhi ko jay'. (teases prem)

All are laughing. Prem gives a serious look to Karan and karan laughs teasingly '.

Kulraj : Karan ..aap bhi na'..(beating him on his shoulder)
Karan : Aree mein ne kya kiya'yeh mera fav gaana tha'mujhe accanak yaad aaya tha issliye maine gaa(sing) diya'Kyun Prem '.(teases prem)
All are laughing. Premeer are feeling shy'
Prem : (seeing his naughty jiju in anger) but rain is falling heavily..so we thought to spend the nite in the cottage only maa'and we reached home early in the morning'.(finally completes)

Gay3 : Woh tho theek hain beta'lekin maine kaha na aaj ka din aap dono nahi dekh sakthe'bahut ashubh hain'.main panditji baath karthi hoon iss bare mein'jao aap dono aaram kijeye'.
Heer : Sorry maa'we did not do it intensionally'woh aachnak' (tensed)
Gay3 : tumhe kuch bhi bolne ki jarurat nahi hain'mein sab samaj gaye'(assuring heer) 'Kulraj (calling kulraj)..heer ke kamra neeche shift karna'
Heer : Neeche lekin kyun maa..(confused)
Gay3 : because from ur window u can easily see prem'mein nahi chathe ki phir se koi ashubh hoo'aur yeh mera laadla tumhe dekhne ke liye koi na koi plan sooch raha hooga (Prem opens his mouth in shock)'Kulraj beta Heer ko lejana..

Kulraj : Jee maa'
Gay3 : Preet'(preet sees her) tumhe pata hain na ki tumhe koun se kaam karna hain..
Preet : Ya mom, I will follow prem bhai from now itself and dektha hoon ki yeh bhabhi ko kaisa dekh tha hain'(teases prem)

All of them go to their respective rooms. Gay3 calls Pandit and tells the whole thing and asks for suggestion. Pandit assures that nothing will happen and asks her to not allow them to see each other from now onwards'Gay3 is relieved .. and shares her happiness with lallu'.They take rest for sometime. Prem takes rest for sometime and falls asleep so soon. Heer also sleeps for sometime'Kulraj and Gay3 are working in the kitchen'All the other children takes rest for sometime as the time is still 6.30 in the morning

After 1 hr heer gets up and moves to kitchen to help Gay3. All the others slowly gets up. After sometime prem slowly wakes up. Gay3 comes to Prem and tell him to come down soon as his haldi will start within 1 hr and after his haldi heer's haldi will take place. Prem agrees and goes to washroom to fresh up. Gay3 asks Heer to sit in her room as Prem will come down so soon. Heer agrees and goes to her room. Prem comes down wearing a white kurta'All the others gather in the hall to receive the other ladies who come to haldi ceremony.

Gay3 asks Ash to accompany heer as she is alone in her room. Ash leaves from there and goes to heer's room. All the ladies began to come one by one. Kulraj and Veera are receiving them. Ash goes to heer's room and sees heer standing near window . She slowly closes heer's eyes from back with her hands. Ash feels that her eyes are wet.

Ash : Heer didi 'aap'aap roorahe hain'???
Heer : Nahi ash aise koi baath nahi hain'something fell in my eyes so they are watery..thats all'(wiping her tears)
Ash : no you are lieing to me..did anyone said you something??? Pls didi baathaye na kya hua??
Heer : nahi ash aise koi baath nahi hain'woh mujhe aachanak maa-papaji ka yaad aaya tha issliye automatically tears came out from my eyes
Ash : (wiping heer's tears with her hand) Toh aapko badi maa aur papa ke yaad aarahe hain (sadly)
Heer : Haan Ashlesha, agar abb maa aur papaji hoothe tho kitna khush hoote thee mere shaadi ko dekhkar'Aaaj unki bahut yaad aarahe hain'(cries)

Ash : mein aapke dukh samaj sakthe hoon didi'but I have lost the right to control your tears (Heer is seeing her with confused eyes)'even I can't dare to talk you looking into your eyes (sadly and almost tears come out from her eyes)
Heer : Ashlesha'yeh..yeh tum kya kehrahi hoon (catchin her cheeks)
Ash could not control her tears and falls on her knees infront of Heer'Ash is crying so much
Ash : Mujhe maaf kejeye didi'.(bursts into tears)
Heer is completely shocked by her behavior and slowly makes ash to get up on her feet.
Heer : (wipes her tears) tum mujse maafi kyun maang rahi hoon'??
Ash : Kyun ki maine apne maa ke saath milkar aapko bahut takleef diya hain didi..uss waqt mujhe pata tha ki aap prem se bahut pyaar karthe hain aur bachpan se unka intezaar karraki hain'but I did not care for your feelings..i did wat my mom said and even I did not care abt you when my mom is beating you'(heer is catching her cheeks and asking her not to cry)..lekin..lekin mein bhi majboor thi didi 'I could not dare to argue with my mom 'I am really sorry for every pain I gave you'.(Ash hugs heer)

Ash hugs heer and crying a lot. Heer donno how to control her.
Ash : Mujhe saaja dejiye didi..i really deserve punishment
Heer : saaja??? how can I punish my small sister??? (catching her cheeks and smiles)
Meher : Nahi didi'sajja tho isse milne chahiye (Meher enters'as gay3 asked Meher to bring Ash down for haldi ceremony'Meher comes to heer's room and hears all their convo)

Heer : Meher??????yeh tum kya kehrahi hoon???(shocked)
Meher : saach hi tho kehrahe hoon didi '(comes towards them) issne jo kuch bhi hamare saath kiya uss ke liye isse sajja tho jaroor milne chahiye'.(confidently)..batao ash koi bhi punishment manzoor hain'(facing ash)

Ash : Ya meher'tum koi bhi punishment do woh mujhe manzoor hain'(confidently)
Heer : Meher'.Tum paagal tho nahi hogaye hoon
Meher : mein paagal nahi hoogaye hoon didi'isse usske kiye ke saaja milne chahiye, aur Ash (turning towards Ash) tumari saaja yeh hain ki'.(mute for sometime)(Heer is worrying and ash is tensed)..ki tumhe heer didi ke shaadi mein bahut masti karnehoogi aur bahut naachne hoogi (sadly)
Ash : Meher'.(shocked) (Heer feels relieved)
Meher : Haan ash yehi tumare saaja hain..(catching her cheeks) shayad you did not feel us as ur sisters, but we always loved our small sister'(assuring her)

Ash could not control her tears anymore, she hugs Meher and cries. Then a song plays in the background

Meri saanson mein tu hai samaaya
Mera jeevan to hai tera saaya

Heer is carenessing Ash by putting her hand on ash's hair. Heer is wiping Ash's tears

Teri pooja karoon main to har dam
Yeh hai tere karam, kabhi khushi kabhi gham

Heer hugs Ash and Meher also joins them. Heer is hugging both ash and Meher (like prem hugs his two bro's)

Na judaa honge hum, kabhi khushi kabhi gham
Na judaa honge hum, kabhi khushi kabhi gham........

Heer and Meher decide to tickle ash inorder to make her laugh. They both tickles Ash. Finaaly Ash laughs. Heer hugs Ash and kisses her on her forehead.

Meher : - thank god u stopped crying'(ash laughs) haan Ash..mujhe ek baath yaad aaya hain, kabh se mein tumhe kehna chahthe thi'.

Ash : Koun se baath Meher??
Meher : woh,..mere paas ek accha plan hain, jisse hum joothe churanewali rasam mein aasane se jeet jayenge'(happily and excited)
Ash : wow..wats ur plan?? (excitedly)

Meher tells her complete plan to Ash (in mute). Heer also listens to them carefully'Ash feels happy by listening to meher's plan

Heer : Yeh tho cheating hain???
Ash : Aree didi, agar game mein cheating nahi hotha tho, maaza kaise aayega??(giving highfive to meher) meher tumare plan perfect hain..lekin'.agar preet kho pata chala tho'woh mera band bajadega'(tensed)
Meher : Preet ko pata chalet ho tab hum dekhlenge'tumhe pata hain na ki tumhe kya karna hain?? (assuring ash)
Ash : ya I know wat I have to do'(assuring meher) (three of them laugh)

Suddenly Gay3 comes there to take Ash and Meher for the haldi ceremony. Gay3 asks Heer to get ready as after prem's haldi then her haldi will start . Heer says ok. Gay3, meher and ash leave for prem's haldi

Haldi ceremony

All the ladies are gathered in juneja mansion including our special guests like Kasturi, Prachi, Tulsi, Parvathi, Ganga (sangam), Prerna, Nandini . Prem is sitting on a small chair . Gay3 comes first to apply haldi on Prem. She applies haldi firstly on prem's hands and then on his face. All the other girls are dancing' Then Kulraj applies haldi to prem and kisses him on his forehead in joy.Then Meher comes and applies haldi on prem. Next Ash comes and sweetly applies haldi on prem. She teasing applies haldi on prem's nose also. Then slowly Veera comes and cutely applies haldi to complete prem's face inorder to tease him. Prem sweetly catches her ear. All of them laughs. Prem gives a shyly smile and leaves her ear.. (imagine guys our cutie prem with haldi '.). Slowly one by one comes to apply haldi on prem. Tulsi comes and sweetly applies haldi on his body. She too teasing;y applies haldi on Prem's nose. Prem smiles. Slowly kasturi and all the other special guests apply haldi on prem. Prem alltime smiles and feels shy. Prem's haldi rasam is complted finally. Gay3 asks Prem to get up and go to his room as now heer's haldi will take place. Gay3 warns him not to dare to see heer and come here. Prem agrees and goes to his room. There preet , Harman , karan and nihaal are waiting for him. Prem sits in the chair. He sees his face in the mirror and feels shy'All the others laugh at him

Gay3 goes to Heer's room and brings her for the haldi rasam'.Heer sits in a small cot. Then the haldi ceremony of heer starts just like they did for prem. Ash , Meher, Veera and kulraj are happily dancing . Gay3 comes and apply haldi for his sweet bahu.. she kisses her on forehead. Kulraj comes and applies haldi to heer and does nazar uttar for heer. Then slowly ash , meher,and veera apply haldi for heer and teases her by prem's name. Heer feels shy. Next all the guests come and apply haldi to heer. Tulsi, parvati, prerna applies haldi on heer's body and blesses her with lifelong happiness. All feels happy. Here our naughty prem tries to see heer with haldi on her face.he slowly moves towards the window, but our shaitan preet closes window door cutely and asks prem to sit silent. Prem gets disappointed. Ganga, Kasturi, Prachi, Nandini applies haldi to heer sweetly. Then finally haldi ceremony is completed. All the guests leave one by one blessing heer.

Slowly all the other family members became busy in marriage arrangements' all the men are decorating the house with flowers . Heer sits in her room with Ash. Prem is sitting in his room with Preet as he is his guard for today. Gay3 asks Prem to take bath and leaves. Preet follows prem everywhere when prem is taking clothes from the cupboard, preet stands behind him. He follows prem everywhere as his shadow. Even when prem is going to washroom, preet also tries to come. Prem turns back and gives a serious look to him with folding his hands.. Preet says ' oh sorry bhai, u carry on..i will wait '. Prem sweetly beats on his head and goes to take bath. Kulraj says Heer to take bath and she will wait for her in her room. Heer goes to washroom to take bath. Kulraj is checking heer's dresses and her jewellery.

Prem takes bath and comes out from the washroom. Karan calls Prem and Preet to come down as he has to talk something urgent. Prem and Preet comes down. Prem is searching for his angel. Preet understands it and sweetly says that heer will not come to hall today as she is siting in her room only. Prem gets disappointed. Karan discuss abt the London project as the deal will finalized today only. Prem says that he will go with karan to finalise the project. Gay3 objects him and says that prem can't go anywhere today . Prem says that we have to submit the file today only. Then karan says that he along with preet will go to finalise the deal. Kulraj says that preet can't go with him as Preet has to look after Prem . Lallu finally says that karan and Harman will go to finalise the project. All are relieved. Gay3 asks Karan and Harman to get ready soon and come home fast with good news. Karan says ok.

Heer comes out after having bath. Heer and Kulraj are talking abt Jewellery. Suddenly Ash comes and asks heer to come with her. Heer says Kulraj that she will come within 10 mins. Heer leaves and Kulraj likes one dress of heer. She decides to try it once. Here Prem atlast escapes from Preet.as Gay3 gave some work to Preet. Prem slowly like a theif looking here and there moves to Heer's room but heer is not in her room. Kularj wears heer's dress and seeing her in the mirror. Prem sees Kulraj back and thinks she is heer. As she is wearing heer's dress. He slowly comes and hugs kulraj from back thinking her as heer

(before u guys point out it as blooper let me agree that it is blooper. Because prem can find his heer even in 100 members.. I am making a small attempt to make u laugh. Enjoy reading)

Kulraj is shocked and is about to shout. But prem quickly closes her mouth.

Prem : Heer don't shout..mein tumara prem hoon.
Kulraj is shocked and gets angry.

Prem : I am removing my hand from your mouth ..pls don't shout..koi aajayega (Kulraj nods her head and decides to not speak anything)

Prem : (sweetly puts his chiin on her shoulder) kab se doondh raha hoon tumhe. Lekin rasam hi aise hain..I can't live without seeing you even for a second (kulraj is smiling for his bro's naughtiness)...Yeh preet tho mera peecha hein nahi choodtha....bahut shaitan hogaya..(kulraj is laughing)..you don't turn to see me..i will talk to u for sometime and leave..as I don't want to hurt my mom .(kulraj is touched by prem's words)..lekin mujhe yeh baath samaj mein nahi aaraha hain..ki tum itne moti kaise hogaye kul di ke tarah ..(Kul gets angry)..aur tumare baal ko kya hua..itna chota kaise hogaye..bilkul kul di ke tarah (kul fumimg in anger).choodo koi baath nahin..shaadi ke khusshi mein tum moti hogaye hoonge.... lekin listen to my words if u become fat like my kul di..i will not talk to u so take care from now itself...wat happen to u why u are not speaking anything...

Kulraj : Agar mein heer hoothe tho baath karte (in anger)

Prem identified his sister's voice and in fear slowly leaves kulraj. Kulraj slowly turns towards him and stands face to face with prem . She is fuming in anger and Prem gets scared

Prem : di....a-aap yahan ?? (shivering)
Kulraj : kyun chook gaye mujhe dekhkar woh bhi heer ke kamre mein'(in anger)
Prem : (shocked ) woh di kya hain ki'(cutely stroking his hair with his hand)
Kulraj : Badmaash..mujhe moti kehthe hoon'

She sweetly runs after him to beat him'Prem is running to escape from his sister. All the family members sees them running in the house. They gets shocked. Prem continuesly says ' sorry di..i am extremely very sorry ''But Kulraj runs after Prem to beat him. First she finds a flowers in a basket and throws on him. All the flowers are scattered in the house. Gay3 is getting angry. Karan stops Kulraj and asks wat happen.??. Then she tells the whole thing to Karan and says 'ussne tumare biwi kho moti kaha??.. . saying this Kulraj again chases Prem. All are laughing by seeing them. Karan gets laugh while imagining the scene..Then Preet catches Kulraj and says ' Kya di..aap bhi 'PB ne tho saach he kaha tha'aap moti hain issliye moti kaha tha' . Kulraj gets angry still more by listening to Preet's words. She catches Preet's ear and says ' Achha'.PB ke bacche..mein tho tumhe prem ke saath rehne ko kaha tha na'lekin tumne kya kiya??? Issliye tumare aur Ash ki shaadi kabhi nahi hooge '.

By listening to his sisters words , Preet gets a 1000 watt shock and shouts ' didi'..'. Kulraj again chases Prem..now for a change Preet is begging kulraj and following her.. Kulraj prem ke bag rahe hain aur preet kulraj ke peeche bag raha hain'Prem moves to the dining table and they both are revolving around the dinning table. Kulraj takes apple and throws on Prem'but accidentally it hits Varun. Varun is shouting with pain. All are laughing for their naughtyness'Then Kulraj takes another apple to hit Prem'But Prem hides behind Nihaal. Nihaal is saying not to throw. But Kulraj throws it and it again accidentally hits in Nihaal's stomach. Kul says sorry to Nihaal. Nihaal says it ok (catching his stomach)

This time Preet brings some more apples to help Kulraj. Prem is looking at him in anger. Kulraj again takes an apple to hit Prem. But again it hits Preet (kiye ke saja mile hain')'Preet shouts in pain. Kularaj again throws apple for the last time, but this time it hit lallu's bald head. (imagine guys I can't control my laugh🤣)..All are shocked. Lallu rubbing his bald head with pain (just like in Kuljeet's entry)'.Kulraj says sorry to his father..Again she tries to chase Prem. But Karan catches her and says to forgive him..Kulraj says she will not forgive him at any cost. Prem sweetly sits on his knees infront of his sister and catches his both ears, putting his head down and asks forgiveness..Kulraj goes into flashback of small prem

****Flashback**

Little prem teasingly pulls Kulraj's hair and runs around the whole house. Kulraj gets angry and chases Prem. Gay3 asks kulraj to forgive Prem as he is smaller than her. Kulraj angrily says that she will not talk to him until he says him sorry.. Then our little prem asks sorry but little kulraj does not say a single word.. Little Prem sits on his knees and catches his both ears, putting his head down and asks forgiveness . Kulraj melts and hugs Little prem'.

*** flashback ends***

Kulraj eyes are watery remembering that incident . Then she makes prem get up and hugs him. Kulraj sweetly beats on his shoulder. Prem sweetly kisses on her forehead and says ' sorry di 'mein tho sirf mazaak karraha tha 'if I hurted u I am really sorry'..Kulraj sweetly hugs prem tightly saying that she is ok. .All becomes happy by seeing them'

Preet : aap dono tho theek hain'lekin apples se pitaye hamko hue hain (prentends crying)

Kulraj : (catching her ear) achha'u can't do a single work properly which I have given to u (shouts)

Preet : soory di'mujhe kya pata ki prem bhaiyya itna naughty hogaya hain'.

Gay3 : Aacha hua prem ne heer ko nahi dekha (hitting on prem's head) warna pata nahi kya hooga'(angryily)
Preet : Trust me mom..now I will not leave PB for a second also'(catching prem's hand tightly)
Kulraj : Phir se galti hue tho'mein tumhe nahi choodunga Preet..
Preet : ok di'trust me once again
Karan : aree harman..we are getting late for meeting'lets go

Karan and Harman leaves for the meeting taking the blessings of Gay3 and lallu'Harman also takes blessings from Prem'Karan hugs Prem and he says all the best for Karan'They both leave. All are busy with the arrangements. Kulraj comes to Heer and tells abt the recent incident as heer is busy in chit chatting with Ash. Heer heard the noises of Preet but as Prem is there in the hall. She did not dare to go there. Ash could not control her laugh when Kulraj is explaining abt the incident. Kulraj beats Ash slowly and asks to stop laughing..Heer is laughing inside.

Kulraj teasingly says to heer ' shaadi ke pehle he yeh mujhe tease kararha hain..shaadi ke baad tho yeh mujhe bhool hi jayaega '. Heer becomes emotional and says ' aise koi baath nahi hai didi'prem aap se bahut pyaar kartha hain'unki khushi uske parivaar ke khushi mein hain'woh apne parivaar ke liye kuch bhi karsaktha hain didi'..Kulraj assures heer that she is just joking and adds that she knows her prem 'Kulraj hugs Heer caringly

IN THE EVENING

Karan and Harman comes home . Prem asks abt the deal. Karan happily says that we won the deal with London'Prem becomes happy'Karan adds that he has talked with London deligates and they said that after few days prem should go to London to sign the deal'Prem becomes excited. Harman hugs Prem in joy'Harman breaks the good news to all the family members'all of them become happy'Preet brings sweets and gives to all. Prem is missing Heer..he wants to share his happiness with heer'but no chance'he slowly understands and assures himself that he will share his happiness with heer 2mrw in their dreamland'(suhaag raat)

Preet takes Harman aside and says something..Harman says that ' prem bhaiyya ko yeh sab pasaand nahi hain''Preet assures that nothing will haapen..we will take prem bhaiyya'Harman agrees'Its night 8 '0' clock. Preet decides to implement his plan. Karan, Harman, nihaal are waiting for preet and Prem outside. Preet comes to Prem and asks prem to come with him'Prem asks where but Preet does not say anything'.Preet asks to change his dress. Prem changes his dress.They both come down. Gay3 asks them wer are they going?? Preet excuses that he has some urgent work with PB, and discuss abt the project with somebody. Before Gay3 says a word..Preet takes Prem outside.

Prem is shocked to see all the others are waiting for them. Even Nihaal donno wer they are taking him. They come to their hotel. Prem is confused. Preet takes him inside. All of them goes inside. Prem is surpised to see some guests.

Prem : Preet yeh sab kya hain ??
Preet : PB we have arranged a bachelors party on behalf of your marriage
Prem : (angrily) preet tumhe pata hain'mujhe parties pasand nahi hain..phir yeh sab kya hain preet..
Preet : Bhai'pls we know that u don't like this kind of parties 'but pls PB we want to party on behalf of your marriage pls PB
Prem : Maine kaha na mujhe yeh sab pasand nahi hain'I am going (tries to go)
Karan : Prem'bas prem only for sometime'all the guests have come'pls prem mere liye

Prem is assured by Karan's words. Then preet goes to stage and announces

Preet : good evening gentleman..as we all know that our pyaari prem bhaiyya'ke paas kuchhi pal left to enjoy his freedom(prem is smiling)..kal se woh shaadi ke bandhan mein phaas jayega'issliye guys lets enjoy the party on behalf of our PB..(he opens the shampaign bottle)'all of them shouts..and one more thing..aaj ke sham kho aur bhi rangeen banana aarahe hain hamare NB4 ke contestant Reshmi Ghosh (bhoomi)(no offense for her fans..she is just a special appearance'I did not get any other actor)'enjoy the party guys
(its just a coincidence'I decided to include this song..from the beginning only)

Lehraake Balkhaake Lehraake Balkhaake Balkhaake Balkhaake (Reshmi is shown)
Aag Laga Ke Dilo Ko Jala Ke Karoon Main Ishaara
Sharara Sharara Sharara Sharara Sharara Sharara Main Hoon Ek Sharara
Sharara Sharara Sharara Sharara Sharara Sharara Main Hoon Ek Sharara

All are dancing happily'Preet joins her and dances with her. Prem is smiling. Preet brings Karan on the dance floor'They both dance with her.

Shola Hai Yeh Tan Mera Are Dehko Tum Paas Na Aana
Shama Ke Jo Pass Aaya Are Jalta Hai WohiParwana
Oh Mere Deewano Baat Ko Samjho Door Se Dekho Mera Yeh Nazara
Sharara Sharara Sharara Sharara Sharara Sharara Main Hoon Ek Sharara
Sharara Sharara Sharara Sharara Sharara Sharara Main Hoon Ek Sharara

Reshmi is flirting Prem'she is dancing around Prem'Prem looks like he is not interested'She takes him to the dancefloor'but Prem doesn't dance with her. He gets down from the stage.

Bijli Banke Girti Hoon Main Nagin Banke Dasti Hoon
Cheene Hosh Jo Sab Ke Main Hi To Aisi Masti Hoon

In Juneja's mansion some frnd of preet call him . Gay3 lifs the phone. Preet's frnd thinks that the person who lifted the phone is preet and says him that he is not able to attend the bachelor's party in their hotel. Gay3 understands the matter and tells that to all the family members including heer. Lallu says that he will check them and leaves for the hotel

Rang Jalka Doon Saas Mehka Doon Pal Mein Zadka Doon Main Yeh Dil Tumhara

Preet sees Lallu coming towards them..all stop dancing 'Preet gets down from the dance floor and stands beside prem. Lallu sees preet in anger. Lallu removes his coat and tells to on the music..all are surprised'Prem is shocked'the music plays again

Sharara Sharara Sharara Sharara Sharara Sharara Main Hoon Ek Sharara
Sharara Sharara Sharara Sharara Sharara Sharara Main Hoon Ek Sharara
Sharara Sharara Sharara Sharara Sharara Sharara Main Hoon Ek Sharara

Lallu and preet are dancing with her happily. Prem is laughing seeing his father dancing'Lallu comes to Prem and asks him to dance..Prem dances for sometime'..

Lehraake Balkhaake Lehraake Balkhaake Balkhaake Balkhaake
Aag Laga Ke Dilo Ko Jala Ke Karoon Main Ishaara
Sharara Sharara Sharara Sharara Sharara Sharara Main Hoon Ek Sharara
Sharara Sharara Sharara Sharara Sharara Sharara Main Hoon Ek Sharara

Prem is dancing happily'all the others are enjoyimg the party'the song ends and the girl wishes happy married life for Prem and leaves..All the guests began to leave one by one'They all reach home'.

Gay3 and all the others are seeing them with anger. Gay3 scolds Lallu that he too joined their party. Preet understands the situation and slowly tries to move , but Ash catches him and scolds him'Preet assures that he will not repeat again and promises her'Kulraj is angry with Karan..Meher says that Heer also knows abt the party and she is angry on you. Prem is worried

PRECAP : Prem tries to call heer and explain abt the party. But Heer cuts his call. Prem is worried and sends Kulraj's son to heer to say sorry for her on his behalf. Heer says to Kul's son that she is angry on prem..Kulraj's son kisses heer on her cheek on prem's behalf. Heer is shocked .

Hope u liked it guys.. in my next 3 parts there will be only premeer wedding with all the rituals..but I will not able to update it soo soon..as I am busy with some work'pls leave ur comments guys..ur comments make my day

Edited by anushka10 - 16 years ago

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lala

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Posted: 16 years ago

#298

😲😲😲it takes me about 1 hour to read!😲😲😲love this part!😳there is so many things to tell but i m very busy so no time i need to do some revision so see u all latar😳love ur ff plz continue soon n do give the promo😳

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swati

@sweta2005

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+ 7

Posted: 16 years ago

#299

awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee too good very nice part waitingggggggggg for next asap.

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ruexangel

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Posted: 16 years ago

#300

Hey

it was rlly awsome, lol i totally forgot prem was doin all dt without his shirt, haii lol☺️ i loved the bit with prem hugging kul thinkin its heer😆, lol but nobody helped poor varun? aw. oh i also lyked the cute pre-cap 😳.

please contt soon wen u can, i rlly wanna see them married 😳

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