FF: Hum Saath Saath Hain - *completed* - Page 4

Originally posted by: kimmu

Yesh, i'm first.. WOhoooo!!!
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I've already read this, but I had to read it again. Hehe. You just write so well! As you already know, the part is fantabulous... I love how you kept Balraaj and Lalits friendship still fresh, unlike in kdmhmd they never talked to eachother just cuz Lalit wanted to go to Canada. Tsk tsk, what bad friends. Exactly...I mean look at us! Does a day go by without PM's?? No siree....and these guyz are too lazy to pick up the phone!!Shame on you!
Balraaj's imaptience was kind of funny, he goes 'BOLA NA!' i could totally imagine him ready to strangle Lalit on the phone if he didn't speak up soon. Hehe reminds me of someone.. i wonder whoo.. 🤔I don't get this....me?
Oh and you wrote 'ghatiya' wrong, go fix now! *shoos shabz to go fix*Yea I know, missed the t.....when I went to edit it....all the comma's and stuff were being weird so I left it....oh well, as long as my eng.teach doesn't see it!
I loved the girls entry, could just imagine this thing, like in the drama's.. showing there feets first and then zooming up to each one of there faces... ahh I could imagine it all.. Yea, that's what I was thinking too....hehe I should work for Ekta...it would be a humbaling experience!
Now another thing, i love how you gave a little introduction of each of the girls while Ballu was about to tell them the good news. Then each of the girls went into there own thoughts, thinking about the guy there paired up with. Tehehe thank u jee!
Ash and Harman already know each other, but the others don't know that the know each other. Ahhh if only they did, then that tragic twist of the story would never have to come up. SHUT UP!!! you are going ot give the story away!!!
Okies, thats all i have so far, tell me if I'm missing any other detail.. 🤓Nope....Perfect!

*edited again*
You dedicated the part to vikki... 🤣🤣 Oh gaawwd shabz, you are totally crazy... 🤣🤣 I'll give him a double hug from you now... you want me to give it to now? since he's sleeping? 😆😆 Probably dreaming about you... 🤔😆😆Awwww bless him.....! Sure, but make sure to hug him when he is awake too....he should know...Don't kiss him....our realtionship is not that advanced!

Love ya Back at you!
kimz

Originally posted by: hip-hop

⭐️di its super ..... and sukhii she so intelligent than heer and ash .....as she knew her fathers happiness .....aww di its small but fully meaning full .............now hw may be the action and reaction of heer and ash....two sharmili ......wanna see harman and prem meeting heer and ash ...lovely update di ...soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo

oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo supebbbbbb!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! loved it👏

Originally posted by: shareen

The character sketch and the first part was very well written.Keep up the good work.

Originally posted by: ranrags

Prem asking for money..woh bhi ice cream ke liye??ah ha ha..hilarious..pls continue soon..whenever u r free..

Originally posted by: angel82

First part was awesome 👏....cant wait to read their first meetings and all....seems like their childhood memories are sweet.........The shy shy Prem and Heer in your FF reminds me of Salman and Sonali of HSSH...loved their pair and love Premeer....I have started imagining HC and AG in your story.......🤗 thanks shabs for starting such a nice FF........by the way you can call me Angie....

Originally posted by: shabo24

Thanks!😃Hey we have the same avi and siggy! *hi 5*

Originally posted by: tanyaaaa26

wow yaar very nice dear u r going very well i hope u con soon

tc

lov

Tanya