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Posted: 17 years ago
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Thanks to all everyone who read n commented on my story, I've written is next part especially for u guys.
I thought of this while I was in getting bored in class and finished it when I got home, I know it's a little too long, so sorry about that...

Heer finally managed to get her breath back and decided to join everyone down stairs. As she walked down the attention drew to her and everyone passed comments to each other of how stunning she looked , Prem just stood there smiling and thinks " ya Rabba, she looks more beauitful than the moon itself..." Heer just stood near the stairs, Geya3 walks up and comments on how beautiful she looked in a Saree and she should try wearing it more often. She asked her, if she had come across any problems while wearing it, at that very moment Prem stands behind his ma and Heer could feel her heart beat, beat a little faster again and was too shy to look at him or reply but just than Lalit comes to the rescue, he makes a comment on her looks and how she was too good for his son. He than tells them all the guest have arrived and they shouldn't keep them waiting any longer. They all follow him ...

Lalit - ladies and gentleman, I must first thank you all for coming on such short notice, and giving your blessing to Prem and Heer who are going to be tied in this new relationship. I know my two kids will fulfill this responsibility with get love and affection.

Time for the ring exchanging had finally come, Meheer handed the ring over to Heer and Heer placed it into Prem's finger. Prem lifted his hand up and just stared at the ring for a few seconds. Gaya3 handed over Heer's ring to Prem , and he slowly slided it into Heer's finger , as the ring slided in , Heer remembered the vows Prem had given her just a few minutes back, the room was full of claps. The dance floor filled up with performs by well known celebrities and than couple dances. Preet walks in the middle of the dance floor, the music cuts off; he looks at Heer and Prem and gives them a devilish, cute smile.

Preet - now friends, we had the exchanging of rings, a lot dancing and masti, but there is still one main item left ...a little game that will test Heer's di love for bro. (Heer looked astonished with the idea, she didn't know what to do or say, and as for Prem, he eagerly waited to know what was on Preet's mind.) Now the game goes like this, there will be five men standing here in those five men there will be Prem bro, Heer will have to recognize from which one of them is Prem bro, blindfolded and Heer your not aloud to say no...

Preet walks near Heer and blindfolds her, he gives Prem the signal to go and stand with the five men. Prem goes and chooses a spot, Preet slowly takes Heer to the guys and leaves her there, she slowly starts touching their face, she feels really uncomfortable touching other men's faces and Prem felt a little jealous watching her do so. Heer slowly makes her way to the next person, she touches him and than moves her hand away. She moves to the third person, her one touch is enough to let her know, who he is, she touches him a little softer, she moves her hand around his face, and speaks softly "Prem" her hands move close to his lips and Prem kisses them. The blindfold is removed as Heer has found her Prem. They stand there with their eyes locked; Preet gives the indication out and quickly moves away from the dance floor. The lights turn off and a spot light glows on Prem and Heer. Prem moves his hand on Heer's hip , places her hand on his shoulder and holds onto the other, they dance onto O re Piya. Prem slowly whispers "how did you know it was me" Heer replies "by your fragrance". She than rests her head on his chest, their eyes close and they carry on dancing.

After a while Prem feels a little tap behind on his shoulder, and a voice "bro, the songs ended." Prem opens his eyes and realizes that there is no music playing and the lights are back on. "Heer, Heer wake up, everyone's looking." Heer opens her eyes and finally realizes what had happened. The room seals with claps and laughter....

do leave your comments behind...😛
The END?????
Edited by Ron16 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#12
ahaha luv the ending!!
gd work
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Posted: 17 years ago
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lovely update.......and no dear it wasnt too long....dont worry write how much ever u can we are here to read....plz do continue.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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very nice dear it was really very good do cont soon dear i will be waiting
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Nice!
Loved it, the end!
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Sunayna
cont. soon!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#16
loved your ff.hope you continue with your f.loved it till the end,hope we get to see this in the show.thanks for the lovely ff and wonderful dose of premeer
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: angel82

lovely update.......and no dear it wasnt too long....dont worry write how much ever u can we are here to read....plz do continue.

thanks .. thats every sweet of you😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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LOVED UR UPDATE
PLZ DO CONTINUE
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Posted: 17 years ago
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thanks guys ... 😳
but now it's come to its end😊
thank you every much for reading n commenting😊
Edited by Ron16 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Awesome!!!..it was really really good...keep it up!!!

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