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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey guys..
well everyones been writting FFs about Premeer , and i've been feeling left out...so i decided to write one too , just for fun .. now i really suck at these kinda things and i',m feeling really stupid for posting it ... but ... i can't help mysetf... so here it goes.... do check it out... if not just read the ending...

Heer stood near the window, looking at the stars. Prem walked in and stood staring at her, and she hadn't even realized it. She was too lost within her thoughts. Prem called out her name; she than a woke from her dream and quickly tried hiding her tears.

Prem - why do you have these tears in your eyes?

Heer replied as if she didn't know what he was talking about, and started walking of saying everyone must be waiting for them. Prem held her hand, "Heer, did I do something wrong? Are you not happy?

Heer - it's just, this all feels like a dream. I can't believe I'm standing here ... with you... I'm scared, what if this dream breaks? Than what will happen? I don't want to lose you, I can't lose you. (Breaks down crying)

Prem - (smiling walks closer) Heer, we have shared our time of grief and sorrow, we have stuffed a lot. But for you, I am willing to go through it over and over again, as long as you're with me. I'm your shadow, everywhere you go, you will always find me next to you. Because you can never separate a shadow from its body. Tonight when I put the ring in you finger, I will be taking a vow.. a vow to always stand by your side, a vow to always be your strength and not your weakness. ..A vow to always love you....

A tearing Heer falls into the arms of Prem...

"Oops" Preet yells out as he enters the room, he hastily covers his eyes acting as if he saw nothing. Prem and Heer let go of each other.

Preet - Don't worry bro, I didn't see anything, I didn't see you guys hugging... but at least you guys should have closed the door.

Prem - Preet....

Preet finally removes his hand from his eyes, and informs them, that the guests have arrived and everyone's waiting for them! With those last words he walks out. Heer tries to follow, when she suddenly step on her saree and the bottom starts falling, she hurriedly tried holding on to it. Prem finally realizes that his Heer was in a saree. Heer looks up to him and he swiftly turns around smiling and giggling. Heer tries to fix her saree up, but she doesn't know what to do, it was her first time.
When she feels Perm's fingers on her hip, he slowly tacks the saree in. Heer is left breathless, a strange wind fills in the room, and her saree's Dupatta starts blowing along with premeers Hair Prem slowly looks up, and keeps looking at her, as if it was the very first time he had seen her, Heer's eyes were closed as she feels his cold fingers, Prem had never seen anyone with so much beauty and grace. He slowly stands up and just grazes at her; Heer opens her eyes looking straight into Prem's loving eyes and than lowers them. Prem moves a little more closer and whispers in her right ear "your looking every beautiful in a saree".
And walks of, leaving behind a blushing Heer, who could still feel the touch of his fingers....

so ...what do u guys think..... 🥱

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: thephworld

hey ur pretty gud!!!.....continue!!

-----anita

Ah😲. really😕....u liked it ???
thanks
sorry , don't think i'm going to continue ...will c later
Edited by Ron16 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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It was excellent.I really liked it.I think u should change the title because u r not stupid at all.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ron16

Ah😲. really😕....u liked it ???
thanks
sorry , don't think i'm going to continue ...will c later



don't b so shocked yaar!!!😆....it was nice!!!....though it's upto u 2 continue or not.......i say u can carry it off!!!...n yeah as shareen said.....ur not stupid!!!😆😆
Edited by thephworld - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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MIND BLOWIN U SHOULD CARRI ON U KNOW IT WAS ABSOULTY AWESOME
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Topic name changed to Premeer FF.

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Posted: 16 years ago
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i must say .. i am pretty shocked 😲.. i didn't really think anyone would like it...
but thanks so much for reading and commenting guys...
Edited by Ron16 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey, that was good. I've read many ff in hindi this one was the first one that was written in english, very well written good job :)

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Posted: 16 years ago
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That was really good!

I loved it!
Please continue soon!

?xXx?

Sunayna

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Posted: 16 years ago
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NICE LOVED IT
U SHOULD CONTINUE

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