😊PART 11 "I LOVE YOU"
Heer shyly walked away and went and sat on the swing where Prem came. He gave Heer a hard push and stood in front of her a little away from the swing. Prem stood there admiring her. He watched the way she looked up at the sky with a small smile and her eyes full of excitement. Heer slowed the swing and looked at Prem and motioned him to sit down. They both sat in silence for a while looking at the sky. Suddenly a shooting star caught Heer's attention. She excitedly turned towards Prem and said "Woh dekhiye tootha tara..." Prem looked her at her in amazement at how happy she was. He said to her with a small smile on his lips "Tum eesme maanti ho...?" Heer hurriedly and excitedly said "Haan...aabh jaldi se aankhein baandh kar kar kuch maangiye" Prem sweetly said "Toh..aaj haam ek saath hamarey aane wali zindagi ke liye kuch maangte hain. Heer interlocked her hands and Prem put both his hands on her and they both closed their eyes and made their wish for their future life together. Heer gently opened her eyes and Prem opened his and he was not moving his hands that were on topd of hers😊. Prem jsut kept looking at Heer.😳 Just then Heer turned her gaze around and noticed her dad and his best friend Lallu. Heer turned to Prem and said smiling "Dosti ho toh aise...eenhe dekho kitne saalon se ye kitne ache aur wafadar dost hain....aur aabh eenka rishta dosti se badal ne wala hai..." she shyly indicated her and Prem's relationship.
aaghosh mein meri zulf sanwari teri
chahat ke rangon se main maang saja du teri
maahiya ve aaj mainu aaive kyon ve lagda
aashiq je sachha hove roop honda rab ka
ham yahaan hai tum yahaan ho hone do milan
jaaneman jaaneman - 2
Prem looked at her and said "Mujhe yeh lagta hai..ke haar rishtey ki shuruwat dosti hoti hain...aabh hamara hi rishta dekh lo.... dosti se toh shoorouwa hai..dosti toh rahegi..een dono ke beech bhi dostirahegi.. leken hamara rishta..dosti se aabh..." Prem was too shy to say it to her. He was too shy to tell her that he was falling in love with her madly. Heer wanted him to confess. She said "Aur aabh..." Prem jsut kept loooking at her.😳😳😳
Just then someone called them and their lovely conversation was interrupted and they went inside. Here inside all the guests were leaving. The part was wrapping up. Tejji Maan said to her daughter"Kaal se tu phir chooti le lena..." Heer surprised said "Kyon maa..? aabhi toh meri chooti khatam huey thi...!" Tejji said "Main kuch nahin jaanti teri shaddi hone wali hain..." Heer replied "leken maa! shaadi mein toh abhi kuch din bakhi hai!" Tejji said "Kaal hamein shopping karne hai..parsoon tere aur prem ki saagayi hain..aur uske baad saari rasme..mehindi,sangeet.. phir shaadi!" Heer said obediently "Thik hain..". She could not belive the days of her and Prem's marriage was getting closer.😳
The next day they all went shopping. Everyone was selecting her clothes, a pair of anklets caught her attention. Heer had a love for anklets. These weren't jsut any anklets, they were a little different , she saw only one there. She went to the person and said "Bhaiyya...ye paayal dena..." The shopkeeper said "Ye aakhri wali hain filhaal stock mein.. aur main aapko ye nahin bech sakta..." Heer's face fell, she was disappointed. Then the shop keeper continued"Leken aisey hi bohat saari..aadey ghante mein aa jayengi.." Heer said "Thik hain main wait kar leti hoon.." Just then Meher said "Chaliye di..hamein kahin aur jaana hai.." Heer did not want to leave without getting her anklets(paayal). So she tried convincing every1 to stay for half hour and no1 listened. She had to leave without her "Paayal..." Prem overheard all this and decided to stay for the paayal. So he stayed behind.
zindagi mein aaye tum chaahaton ke raste - 2
kaash yeh raste sanam kat jaaye haste haste
sone dildara tere pyar to main vaariyaan
meri ya duvaawa tainu lag jaave saariyaan
chaand ho tum chaandani se bheega jaaye mann
jaaneman jaaneman - 2
The same day Heer was in the kitchen when someone lightly waved the anklets in front of her. She saw that those were her beautiful anklets she wanted to buy. She looked and saw that it was her Prem. heer loooked at hm shly. Heer said smiling and loving him that moment for bringing those anklets. She was excited beyond words. prem saw the excitement in her eyes. He bent down makind Heer's heart race. He touched her soft ankle and raised her salwar held it and put the paayal around her ankle. He did the same to the other one. He got up. Heer looked at the anklets and she was so happy. She excitedly moved her anle and heard the ghungroo and said "Kaisey lag rahi hain..." Prem said smiling adorably "Bohat achii..." Heer was too excited. She suddenlt thre her arms around Prem's neck and embraced him and happily said "Oh..I love you Prem!" Prem was surpirsed at her action. He too embraced her and whispered softly and warmly in her ear "I love you too... Heer" Heer suddenly realized what she had jsut done, she was a little embarassed. She did not think her love confession was going to come out this way.She unembraced him and so did Prem. She shyly moved away a little and tucked her hair behind her ear not looking at Prem. Prem got a little shyt oo and combed his hair back with his hand nervously but his smile was not disappearing from his face😃. Heer said taking two baskets "Woh mujhe jhaad pe se aam todna hai.." Prem confidently said "Main bhi chalta hoon..." Heer felt herself getting a little warm. Prem borke the akwardness by saying "Mere paas ye bhi hai..." He took out a sling shot out of his pocket. Heer looked at him in amazement with her eyes widened. She smiled and asked "Yeh bachpan ka toh nahin ho sakta..." Prem gave his adorable smile with his eyes twinkling and said "Tum thik keh rahi ho..bachpan ka toh nahin hai yeh..ye maine vikram se liya tha.."
They both walkd out towards the garden near the mango tress and both of them thought how they used to hit the mangoes with their sling shots because they could not reach the trees obvioously. ON the way out Heer said "Mujhe aapko kuch bata na bhi hain..." Heer took him ot a huge and healthy mango tree and under it there was an old paper wchich said "Friendship tree.!" Prem's face lighted up with excitement he turned to her and said "Yeh woh jhaad hai!!!" Heeer nodded and smiled happily. She remembered they day Prem was leaving they had planted this mango tree and HEER had promised Prem that she would take carre of it.Prem said to her "Toh tumne aapna waada pura kiya.." Heer shyly looked at him and smiled.Prem said "Yeh hamrey dosti ki nishaani hai.." Now they both set to work on the mangoes. Heer took the sling shot and shot three mangoes at once and she handed it to Prem.😳 Prem was alittle emabrassed to dothis bcoz he had very bad aim.He aimed and he hit a few leaves. HE AGAIN aimed a few more time and missed. Now he turned red😳 and looked at Heer, he thoguht Heer would tease him like when they were kids. Even when he was little he could not aim well and hit..😳 Heer seriosuly walked up to him and stood behind him, with her own hands she made him hold the slinghot the right way. She told him to close on eyes and to pick a mango. She held his muscular arm and then reached towards his hand😳 and held his other handwhere he was going to pull the sling shot and she shot. THey got two mangoes. Suddenly she realized that now she was not jsut teaching her childhood friend "ladoo".. she as teaching her handsome futre hubby😳. She said "Aaabh aap try kariye.." Heer kep helping him but as always she knew what his fault was since childhood..he would hold it wrong but he would always think he had a bad aim. Heer came up to him and softly said in his ear but warmly "Galat pakad rahe ho LADOO..." Heer mischieviously smiled at him and Prem smiled back at her..loved the fact that she at last said what he wanetd to hear. Prem naugtily smiledad said "Kya kaha tumne..?" Heer immediately said "Kuch nahin...". She was a little red.Prem kept smiling at her. Heer walked away from hi saying "Main stool lati hoon..dusre am tod ne.." Heer stood on the stool and plucked the mangoes.She gto alot done then she she gave the basket to Prem whow as jsut stnading there admiring her. Prem thought that he should help her get down. He got infront of her and grabbed her waist making Heer shy. He brought her down. Holding her waist hepulled he close towards him only leaving an inch of space between them. They were so clsoe she could almost hear his heart beats and feel herself agaisnt him. He brought her down and gently removed his hands from her waist, Heeer looked away shyly. 😳
Preet came in the garden with the three kids. Heer and Prem consciosuly moved a little away from each other. The kids came and started playing with the mangoes. Preet said "aaam kehlne ke nahin khane ke hain..chodo unhe.." Heer broguth some plates and a picnic mat and a knife. They all sat down to enjoy the delicious and sweet mangoes. Veera,Meher,Harmant also joined them. The kids started arguing on who could eat the most mangoes. Vikram said "Saase zyaada aam main khaa sakta hoon...!!!" Then his little brother said cutely "Nahin..main!" Vikram said "Chalo ek compettion karte hain..." Prem and Heer observed the kids and rembred that him and Heer used to do the same thing when they were little too.Vikram continued saying "Kaun saabse zyada mangoes khaeyaga!!" Preet said seriosly "Nahin..koi zaroorat nahin hai..tabyat kharab karne ki!" Vikram said "Mammmu..stop being a chicken! let's play.." Preet said no to them both but the kids asked Veera,harmant and Meher and they too refused. Vikram said "Heer maami aap aur prem mammu kariye na ye competetion..." Heer who was sitting next to Prem and cutting the mangoes and giving it to him, looked his way shyly and smiled.Heer said "Main toh taya hoon.." She looked at Prem. Vikram said cutely "Commmon dude! Are you in or out??You can't say no to a girl. Especially to the beautifulll Heer mammi.."Prem playfullly hit Vikram and looked at Heer.Meher and Veera gave them the mangoes and they started. The cmpetetion was something like this whoevr at the most mangoes in 10 minutes would win. Everone was cheering them on. Meher,Veera,Vikram and Preet cheered on Heer.Harmant and the two other kids cheered on Prem.After 2 mangoes Prem thought that he would vomit any minute. Heer was already done with 3 mangoes starting on the fourth one😆. After 7 minutes Prem held his stomach while Heer started on the fourth mango. Vikram said "Commeon dude! You can't loose to a girl!" Prem held him and made his sit on his lap and pinched his cheek and said "Pehle toh tune hi mujhe eeme phasya..aur jaabse Heer ko cheer kar raha hain .. badmash!" Vikram said "No mammu..Iam with you!" Prem started the thrid mango and Heer was done with her fourth one when Preet called the time! Heer had won. Heer smiled and looked Prem's way who was looking sick😳🤢. Prem excused hmself holding his stomach and covering his mouth left. Every1 laughed. Heer understood that her "Ladoo's "health was very sensitive.
Heer walked up to Prem's room with medicine and iced lemon sprite. She saw that he was lyinng in bed with his eyes clsoed, with one hand on his stomach. Heer walked up to his bed. She put the medicine on the table by the bed. She stopepd and adored the way he was sleeping. Like a complete cutie pie! She could not help but kneel in front of his bed and ruffle her hand through his silky hair. She got up and was about to leave when Prem grabbed her hand😃 and she jsut stood there and turned around to see his sitting up. His hand was holding her wrist. HE was just smiling at her.
Preet walked in saying "Big P woh..aaj haam log.." Prem quickly let her hand go and Heer pulled it away. Preet said "Acha hua bhabhi aap bhi yahin mil gayee.." Preet said to them both "Aaaj haam log saabh raat ko ek bohat hi scary movie dekhne wale hain..." Preet loved scary movies and he told them all about the movie. Prem was okay with going. Heer was not. She hated scary movies,they really scared her and she absoulutely could not stand all the scary stuff.😳But yet she agreed at her devar's pleading.
They left that night for the special late night show. Prem,Heer,Harmant,Vishaka,Meher,veera,Preet,Natasha,Ashlaisha all went. When they got to the theater Meher quickly took a seat next to Veera saying "No way.Didi main aapke saath nahin bhaitoongi..aap jabh dar jaatihain..toh.." Prem took this opportunity and sat next to Heer.Harmant and Vishaka too sat next to each other. Ash sat with Meher and Veera. Preet was sitting a few seats down with Natasha. This was really bothering Ash. The movie started. Ash was not at all concentrating on the movie, she was too busy focusing on Preet and Natasha.😆 Harmant too was scared but Vishaka was enjoying the movie, she handed him the popcorn and she turned around and saw his head was turned away and his eyes closed. Vishaka smiled at his scared yet adorable face. Heer was clutching Prem's arm tightly and would turn her head away everyttime something scary came up. Ash obseved that Preet's arm was around Natasha and her head was on his shoulder and this was bohering her very much.They were like that throught out the whole movie. During the movie when really scary thing popped up Heer would bury her head in Prem's chest and Prem would comfort her😳😳😳 When she was realllyyyy scared thats when she got violent. Prem's shirt's sleeves were rolled up. So when she got veryyyy scared she would dig her long fingernails in his skin. Poor Prem did not say anything but his face showed all the pain. When the movie was over Prem's hand and arm had deep and painful nail marks.😆 They all got out of the movie theater and Preet left with Natasha.Prem just gave him a look of disappointment😕😲. Ash was on fire😡!
Later that night Prem was sitting in his bed wearing a white kurta suit/ It was pretty late and every1 was asleep. He sat there examining his hand with the nail marks. Heer walked in...He looked up and saw her standing there quietly at the door.She was looking simply elegant. She was wearing a baby pink night gown. Her long hair down. The color of the night gown suited her and hugged her curves well. Making her look simply attractive. He coould not take his eyes off her...Heer moved her stps forward. She shut the door behind her and drew the curtains. Prem stood up and she took steps towards him. This time SHE was making HIM nervous...😳😳😳
OK GUYZ THATS IT!!! I HOPE YA'LL LIKE IT! I REALLY THOUGHT ABOUT THIS PART! HOPFULLY ITS GOOD!!! PLZZZ REPLY AND SHARE UR VIEWS! I LOVE EVERY1'S COMMENTS! THEY ENCOURAGE ME TOKEEP WRITING!!! SO PLZZZ COMMENT!!!!!😃
Edited by hil4eva - 17 years ago