Mere Jeevan Saathi FF PRT17 pg29 sept19 updated

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😉Hey guyz😊! I am going to be writing a new FF on Premeer! Plz read and share ur views!😛Hope you guyz like it!!!😃*~MERE JEEVAN SAATHI*~
CHARACTER SKETCHES!!!
Prem Juneja-- Prem is like his name. He is Prem. He is a loving, caring and down to earth guy. He is also very intelligent.He always puts everyone before himself. He is the eldest son.He loves his family. He loves his brothers and sisters very much. His parents mean the world to him, he respects them a lot. He helps his father out in his business. Eventhough he has loved in Canada for many years, he is 100% Hindustani. His heart desires a traditional wife with much senitments. All his life he has been told about a girl that will become his life partner... He knows that a girl who he has not met,spoken to in years will be his wife. She has been chosen by his Baauji who he trusts in more than himself.
Lalit Juneja--> He is Prem's father. He is a very strict,serious but also a very loving person. His family is his everything. He has chosen Heer for Prem. He thinks Heer is perfect for Prem. He is the best friend of Heer's father.
Gayatri Juneja---> She is Prem's mom. Prem is the apple of her eye. She loves and cares about her family a lot. She is also a very protective woman about her family. She wants the best for everyone. She is very much happy with the decison of Heer becoming her Bahu.
Harmant Juneja-->He is the second son of Gaya3 and Lallit. He is a very simple and straight forward guy. He is very responsible and also a big hearted and giving person.He is done studying law..adn he had his degree.. but he is very much interested in his family's business...
Preet Juneja-->He is a fun loving guy. He takes life lightly and lives on the edge. He is a complete payboy and flirt. He loves all girls. One person he admires,loves and respects a lot is Prem.
Veera Juneja--> She is a spoiled brat but at can times she can be a sweetheart. She is a very confusing person to understand as she changes everytime.
Kulraj Juneja---> She is the eldest sister in the family. She is marrie and has 3 children. She is very much like the character of Kajol in K3G. She is a true indian at heart.
Heer Maan-- Heer is a sweet,caring,down to earth and shy girl. She is also very traditional. She loves everyone and cares for everyone equally. She is also a girl with a lot of self respect. Heer is waiting for her "Jeevan Saathi" who has been chosen for her.She has faint memories of him from childhood...How will he be?? she wonders...
Teji Maan --> She is Heer's mom. She loves her family and adores Heer.She is very excited for Heer's marriage.
Balraj Maan--> He is Heer's father. He is a loving and fun man. He is the best friend of Lallit. He is eagerly waiting for Heer and Prem's "rishta"
Meher Maan-->She is Heer's sister.She is a funny,openmouthed and sweet girl. She can put anyone in their place!
Nihaal Maan-->He is the only brother of Heer and Meher.He cares and loves his two ssiters dearly. He respects his parents a lot.
Balwant Maan--> He is Heer's chachu and Heer is his favorite. He loves her like his own two daughters.
Daljeet Maan---> She is Heer's chachi.She is a very cunning and sharp woman. She is very selfissh.
Vishaka Maan--> She is the oldest daughter of Balwant adn Daljeet. Vishaka is a very sweet and loving girl. She is simple and traditional.Vishake is a teacher for the deaf and the dumb.She has a diability. She cripples with her foot a little when she walks.
Ashlesha Maan--> She is the second and the youngest daughter of Daljeet and Balwant. She is a very confused person but also can be viscious at times...
WOH WAQT AAGAYA HAIN ---part1
The Juneja family was on the air plane headed to Ludhaina,Punjab. Prem was sitting between Harmant and Preet his twon brothers. Veera was sitting with Lallit and Gaya3. Kulraj was sitting with her three children. Her husband could not come due to work. Just then an airhostess came with some snacks and drinks. Preet as usual was set off. he started flirting with the airhostess but to his luck the airhostess was too busy serving to flirt back with him.😆Prem and Harmant were laughing. Then Prem remebered all that Bauji said b4.
******Flashback******
Lallit and Gayatri sat down to talk to Prem about his marriage to Heer. Lallu had just spoken to Balraj and everything was set. Lallu was sure that prem wud never say no.😊Lallit said "Prem Aaabh woh waqt Aaa Gaya hai ki jo rishata hamen saalon pele tay kiya tha..aabh pura ho jaye..Tum jaante ho na main kya keh raha hoon prem" Prem was very well aware that his Baauji was tlaking about Heer. Lallu explainted to Prem about how best of friends him and Balraj were. Prem and Heer were born on the same date but there was a 3 year difference bcoz three years after Prem's birthday on the same day Heer was born. That is when both friends decided to get them both married to each other.Lallu explained when he left for canada he promised balraaj he wud come back. Lallu explained how it was not time for them to go. lallu said " Prem. Tujhe ees rishtey mein jud nahai. Kya tuh Heer ko aapni Jeevan saathi banayega. Kya tujhe apne baap ke chune hui paar bharosa hai?" Prem agreed and said "Khud se bhi zyaada aap par bahrosa hai Baauji. Main aap ki di huey kasam ko poora karoonga." Lallu and Gaya3 were excited!!!!!
******PRESENT********
So here was Prem going towards his destiniy. He was going to make a girl his lisfe partner who he had only seen when he was a child. He rembered that how good friends they were when they were both children. He remebred how they used to play under a big tree whihc had a big swing in the aangan of Heer's haveli. He thought "Kyaa use woh saab yaad hoga. Kya woh eesi traha bechan hogi??" Just then Preet interrupyed Prem's thoughts and said "Mujhe to yakeen nahin aa raha hai Big P...ki aapki shaadi ho rahi hain. Aaap jaante bhi ho aap kya kar rahe ho..?? Ek aisi aaanjan ladki se shaadee...Jisse aapen dekha nahin hai..baat nahin ki hain." Prem smiled turned towars preet and said "Dekha hain.." Preet interrrupted and said "Haan haan..woh jhula..woh jhaad.!! Kya Big P...Woh taklu ki choice bharosa kar rahe hain aap.??" Then Prem said "Baauji ke baare mein kuch nahin... aur mujhe un paar pura bharosa hain.." Harmant said "Preet .. waisey bhi shaadii Prem bhai kar rahe hain..tu nahin..woh jaante hain ke woh kya kar rahe hain..tu kyun eetna pareshan hai.."Preet said "Haan..thik hain.. waise bhi main ek aandekhi aur aanjani se shaadi anhin kar sakta..." Prem said "Preet aandekhi sse shaadi ...teri toh shaadki ka socuh kar hum saabh ko heart attack aajeyga."Harmant laughed.. preet jsut said "very funny..leken Bifg P agar woh moti aur kaali..ya aisey waasiey huey toh.." Prem said confidently "Jiasey bhi ho mujhe maanzoor hai aur waise bhi shakaal suratat se zyada maine rakti hain sirat aur dil" Preet respected his brother's opinion. Harmant thought a lot lot about what prem said "surat se zyada maine rakhti hia sirat"
Then Prem faded into memoried and he was trying to recall heer and him during childhood. He could not get any father than the swing. Then suddenly it popped into his mind. Heer called him Ladoo when he was young. Prem then rembered😃 that he used to be a little chubby when he was a kid. He rembered that she used to say that ina playful,sweet,jokingly way. She said "Nahin ladoo aise nahin..aise bhaito" when they used to sit on the swing.Prem smiled to himselff thinking that he was a Ladoo....😉
************Ludhiana**********
Teji Maan scremaed and said "Jaaldi jaaldi karo..thik se karoo...dekho sirf kuch ghante reh gaye hain!1" Then Meher came eating something and Tejji said "Dekh to zaara puttar Heer kahan hai??"
Heer was in the yard of her father's big haaveli. She was sittiing on a swing under a big treee.. She thought of the times she used to sit so much on thw swing. She suddenlt thought of Prem. She thought how much they both used to sit on that swing. She thought of all their childhood memories. How they bothloved magoes and during the summer how much they used to eath them... They sued to have a competiton who ate the msot mangoes and heer woudl always win. Heer was miling while thinking of all this and she thought "Main toh use ladoo keh kaar bula ti thi!"😳😳Heer thought mischieviosly "Aaabhi ladoo hoga?" Heer thought "Kya usse ye saab yaad hoga. Kya usse main pasand aaongi!"Mehre came from behind and puched Heer on the swing and said "Prem ke baare mein soch rahe ho!?" Heer scareamed and said "Oh tu hain..tune to mujhe dara hi diya tha! baap re!!" Meher said "chaliye chachu,chachi🤢,vishaka aur ashlaisha aaye hain." Heer and Mhere went and greeted their cousin and chachu and chachi.. Vishaka and Heer were very godd friends...They instantly started talking. Meher on the other hand loved to hate Ashlaisha and tease her. Vishaka said teasingly to heer "Kitne ghaante bakhi hain Heer?" Heer got shy and did not say ntyhing but gave a mango to Vishaka
*************PLANE**********
Just then Prem turned towards his Maa and said "maa ees waqt toh summer hain yaane ke ludhinaa mein aam to bohat hoonge na." Gaya3 laughed and said "Haan jaanti hoon ki tujhe aam kitne pasand hain.." Just then it was announced ont he plane that they were about to land in Ludhiana. Then Preet said "This is it Bro" to Prem. Prem replied "This is it.."Just then Prem took the barf bag and threw up again.Poor Prem, he always ahd to deal with airsickness...He thought Heer was not going to find this attractive.
He relaxed again and faded into thoughts of Heer😳
Heer stood in they yard and was watering the plants and faded into thoughts of Prem😃
~~~~~~~Then a song played in the back ground from Mujhe Dosti Karoge..Andekhi Anjani Si"~~~~~~
LYRICS
Andekhi Anjaani Si Pagli Si Deewani Si
Jaane Woh Kaisi Hogi Re
Andekhi Anjaani Si Pagli Si Deewani Si
Jaane Woh Kaisi Hogi Re
Chori Se Chupke Chupke Baithi Hai Dil Mein Chupke
Jaane Woh Kaisi Hogi Re
Andekha Anjaana Sa Pagla Sa Deewana Sa
Jaane Woh Kaisa Hoga Re
Andekha Anjaana Sa Pagla Sa Deewana Sa
Jaane Woh Kaisa Hoga Re
Chori Se Chupke Chupke Baitha Hai Dil Mein Chupke
Jaane Woh Kaisa Hoga Re
Andekhi Anjaani Si Pagli Si Deewani Si
Jaane Woh Kaisi Hogi Re

Mere Khayalon Mein Na Jaane Kitni Tasveeren Banne Lagi
Bas Aasmaanon Pe Do Dilo Ki Takdeere Banne Lagi
Bin Dekhe Hai Aisi Bechaini Tauba Oye Rabba Dekha To Jaane Kya Hoga
Sapno Mein Aane Wali Neende Churane Wali
Jaane Woh Kaisi Hogi Re
Oh Palko Ke Upar Niche Dil Ke Dhadkan Ke Peeche
Jaane Woh Kaisa Hoga Re
Andekhi Anjaani Si Pagli Si Deewani Si
Jaane Woh Kaisi Hogi Re

Na Jaane Kya Hoga Na Kya Hoga
Pehli Mulakaat Mein
Kaise Chupaoongi Chand Ko Main Us Chaandni Raat Mein
Bas Ab To Main Uska Ghoonghat Kholoonga
Chupke Se Dekhonga Kuch Na Boloonga
Oye Oye Yeh Bechaini Oye Oye Yeh Betaabi
Jaane Woh Kaisa Hoga Re
Jis Ko Dekha Na Barso Usko Dekhoonga KalParso
Jaane Woh Kaisi Hogi Re
Andekha Anjaana Sa Pagla Sa Deewana Sa
Jaane Woh Kaisa Hoga Re
Andekhi Anjaani Si Pagli Si Deewani Si
Jaane Woh Kaisi Hogi Re
Jaane Woh Kaisa Hoga Re
Jaane Woh Kaisa Hoga Re
Just then the Plane landed in Ludhiana!😊
OKAY EVERY1!!!! THATS IT FOR NOW!!!That was the part 1 "aab waqt aa gaya hain" of the ff "mere jeevan saathi"..I hope u guys like it!!! Plzzz replyyyy!!!!!!!Let me know wat ya'llt hink and if i shud continueeeee!!!!!!!plzzzzzzzz commenttttttttttttt!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😳
Hi every1!!! thanks to all those who read and replied to my FF..!!Those comments mean a lot to me..plz keep those coming...!! Here is the Part 2 "Mulakat" Plzzz do reply and share ur viewsssssssss!!!!!!!!!!😳
MULAKAT part2

The Junejas had just landed in Ludhiana and were heading towards the Maan haveli. In the car Lallu was quite excited and happy and said "Gaya3 India toh bilkul change ho chuka hai..Kitni taaraki kar li hai ludhinana ne eetne saal mein." He kept talking about how things were b4 and how wat he was seeing now waz so diffrnt.😆At this Preet said to Harmant "Just bcoz eenke baalon mein koi growth ya taraki nahin hai..eeska maatlab ye toh nahin ki India taraki na karein..Eeene baalon ki tarha india ke growth to h nahin rukege" He laughed to himself. Harmant couldn't help but smile but he gave Preet a look which said that he should shutup😲😆. Then the Mann house came and they got off the car and rang the door bell.Balraj opened the door. Both friends went krazzzyyyy seeing each other after so many years!!They embraced each other in a tight hug.Teji and Gaya3 were hugging too but the kids were akward. Ashlasha,Vishaka,Meher and Heer were standing back.So were the Junejas. Atlast Kulraj took veera with her and they introduced themselves and talked. Prem,Harmant and Preet were standing back.Prem's eyes were searching for his "Jeevan Saathi." He saw four girl and he could not recongnize which was his girl! One girl in a red and white salwar kmaeez stood out to him. There was something different about her that made him attract 2wards her..but he was not sure if that was his girl..😳Heer on the other hand recognized out of the 3 men which was her man!She noticed that there was still the same sweetness and childish like chubinnes on Prem's face. She immediately knew which one was her Ladoo😛.Then Harmant,Preet mingled with Meher ,Ash and Vishaka.Then Kulraj introduced Prem and Heer. To Prem's surpirse the girl that stood out the most to him was his Heer. He noticed wow had she grown..From that girl who used to put her hair in braids .... she was now a beautiful full figured woman. Heer had her long hair down...There was a softness and grace on her face. Kulraj made Heer stand in front of Prem but they both did not say anything. Kulraj said "Agar Heer tum Prem se koi baat ka expectattion rak rahi ho..toh woh kuch nahin kehne wala hai..Prem bohat sharmata hai." Prem truly was feeling a shy, so was Heer.. but Heer noticed that Prem's face was pink. Then Meher jumped in and said "Toh aap ees department se bhi kuch maat expect kijiye..deede bhi bohat sharma ti hai." Just then Tejji interrupted them and said "Baatein hoti rahengi..leken aao aakar saab kuch kah lo..aa prem puttar tu bhi kuch kha le." Prem said "Jee" akwardly...but the thought of food made him sick. His air sickness still hadn't worn off. First they all went into their rooms to freshen. Co-incidentally Prem's room was right across from Heer's. Heer went into her room to get soemthing..then she heard someone say softly "Heer" She turned around it was Prem..Prem asked shyly and politely.."Woh bathroom kahan hai😳" Heer showed him where it was..to Prem's surpirde it was a few stepd down the hall..he felt so stupid for not knowing..he tohught to himself "Heer ko toh ye lag raha hoga ki main us se flirt karne ki koshish kar raha hoon😳😳" He was embarassed! HE WENT into the bathroom and started throwing up again. Hefelt like he would actually vomit his intestines. Heer went into her room and got the guest towels out for the bathroom..she thought she wud knock and give a towel to prem. Prem was in a hurry and his vomit was coming out..he left the door open and no1 was in that halwlay..Heer stopped by and saw him vommiting iin pain..He was holding his stomach...moaning and groaning..in pain..and throwing up...😕. The sight of this worried Heeer. She quickly went downstairs and got a glass of water with lots of ice..went up and saw that prem was jsut resting over the sink bretahing heavily.pREM SAW hEER and was a little embarassed...Heer handed him the glass with water and ice and gave him a towel. Prem drank the water and wiped his face..and said "Woh actually mein..jaab mein travel karta hoon toh mujhe severe air sickness hoti hain..baas..wohi.." Heer was extremely concerned..she could not see any1 like this and her heart melted...She said "Aaap apke rooom mein rest kariye..taabh tak mein aap ke liye kuch laati hoon." Prem was so touched by her concern..he thought that she was acting like his wife already. Heer went into the kitchen and Vishaka was there. She made iced lemonade and took some saltines (crackers). Vishaka said "Heer ye kiske liye". Heer had a worried look on her face and explained how sick Prem was and she said "Woh Vishaka..Prem ki tabyat bohat kharab hai..unhe severe air sickness ho gayi hain.! woh bohat ultiya kar rahe hain." Vishaka said cutely "How sweet Heer.tum toh aabhi se hi patni wrata dharm nibha rahi ho" Heer got shy and headed upstairs towards Prem's room.😛Vishaka was walking and she felt a little pain in her leg..that sometimes happened with her disability. She walked limping. Daljeet came up behind her and said "Arrey meri laangdi Jhalan ..pair mein daard ho rahan hai..toh..yahan aayikyun..hamara taamsha karne.." Vishaka wanted to say sumting back..but she did not.. she was used to this...more than any1 else her own mother taunted her about her disability...this hurted her deep down veryyy much..so she jsut simply said "Maa..Main yahan Heer ka saath dene aayi hoon.... aaj uska bada din hai..main yahan uske liye hoon." She jsut walked away..she was thinking to herself..why her own mother had to be so cruel..in her tohughts she did not notice harman heading in her way..she bumped into him..she was about to fall..when Harmant caught her in his arms..😛He held her tightly and was not letting ho..They both had an eye lock session..hARMANT Was looking at Vishaka..into her big almond shaped Hazel eyes...she had the msot beautiful eyes he had ever seen😃. To him she in herself was beauitful. Vishaka snapped out of it and said "Suniye..jee.aap ..chodenge"harmant did not realize the way he was holding her and looking deeply into her. Vishaka too liked the way he was holding her in his big protective arms😃😛😊He let her go..she was limping..Harman suddenly was concerned and said "Aaap thik toh hain..aapke paair mein moonch toh nahin aayi?" Harmant had not noticed that she had a disability with her leg and he tohught that she might have twisted her ankkleor something.. Vishaka knew that he was mistaken and she said "Jee...nahin..woh main thik hoon..actually main..mujhe ek disability..hain.mre paar mein..es liye mian lagda rahi thi." Harmant felt extrenmely guilty and embarassed😲😕😕for not realizing this.. he said "Woh i am sorry..mujhe pata nhain tha.." Vishaka with her happy go lucky nature calmly said "Its okay...aap ki galitee nahin hain.." Then Harmant and Vishaka both walked into the living room where Balwant and Lallit were chatting way..Balwant called Vishaka over and said "ye hai meri pyaari beti vishaka.." Lallu said "Jaanta hoon" smiling. Balraaj came in and said "haan leken tu ye nahin jaanta ki ye kitna aacha aur purnaya kaam karti hain..ye hain na woh gunge aur behre baachon ke teacher hai..aur tu jaanta hai..eetni se umar itne ye baachon ke liye bohat kuch kiya hai.." He explained how Vishaka was responsible for organizing the school and wat a big part she is of the skool.. Harmant was sitting there and taking in Vishaka's tareef like lallu. He was very impressed.. he thoguht "Ye to dil se bhi khubsoorat hai." Just then Prem's sentence came to him"Soorat se ziyada sirat maine rakhti hai..dil aacha ho na chahiye." HARmant thoguht even though she had a disability she nevr let that come in the way adn she achieved so much..Vishaka jsut smiled and she knew that Balraaj chachu was jsut being kind to her...but to Vishaka listening to her tareef made her feel a bit good about herself..she thoguht that she really was not as useless as her mother thought of her..bcoz of her disability..she had very low self esteem..
Heer was heading upstairs towards Prem's room and was thiking how immediately concerned she got for Prem and he had just came into her life but then Heer cared about every1 equally and could not see any1 in any pain..She walked into Prem's room who was lying in bed with his arm covering his forehead..She rembered how he used to nap..cutely with his arm over his forehead.😳Now that she saw him..old memories were coming back to her...😛When heer knocked Pem got up and sat staright and fixed his shirt.. Heer said "Sorry..aap so rahe..the..leken mujhe laga ki aapko ye khaa kar sona chiaye." Prem said "nahin heer main so nahin rahan tha..main to baas.".. Heer cut him off and said "Mian toh chota thoda soh raha tha.." Heer rembered how Prem used to take naps and used to say main chota thoda soh raha tha..Heer was amzed at where he guts came in ane she said this to prem..usually she is very shy..Prem smiled and was amzed that she remebred...His mom used to tease him for saying that. Prem smiled and said "tumhe yaad hain.." He laughed..😆😃Heer said "Haan.." She gave prem the saltines and lemonade..she said ye aap thoda thoda kar kar khaiye aur pijiye..ese aap ko better feel hoga..aur aap ki tabiyt thodi improve huet toh aapko garden mein walk karna chaiye.."Prem was so happy with her concern😃😳Prem did not know ehre he came round from and said boldly smiling "Kya tum mujhe company dogi..?" heer said "Thik hain..aap ko jaabh bhi jaana hai mujhe baata dijiye.." heer was now nervous about the walk..wat sud she say to him..😃😛but she was feeling a little ecitemet from inside..she wud get to refresh her memoried with her childhood frend and her to be husband. Then Gaya3 came in said "prem teri taabiyat.." She saw Heer and saw Prem holding the lemonade.. Gaya3 was impressed and sai d "Arrey wah Heer..tum toh aabhi se hi apne hone waley paati ka khyaayal rakrahi ho..." Heer go really shy and thats when Vishaka came to ehr rescue adn said "Heer" ..Heer walked out saying "Mujhe vishaka bula rahi hain.." smiling to herself..Gaya3 was smiling at Prem adn Prem said shyly "maa aap bhi" hE coverd his face with a a pillow😳Prem was ecited about the walk..he wanted to talk to her so much..get to know her...she semmed like a bit of a mystery to him..but why did he get so toungue tied infront of her?He tohught to himself that during the walk he will definitely make some good conversation with his "Jeevan Saathi."😃
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Thanks again!! 4 reading and replying!!! plzzz continue replying...i luk 4ward to reading every1's comments.. Here is the 3rd part "Sehar aur baatein"😃😛
"SEHAR AUR BAATEIN" part3

Prem woke up after his "chota thoda sona"(nap)..he reembered about his walk with Heer. He was feeling this excitement from inside, he really wanted to get to know his "Jeevan Saathi". So he went downstairs where everyone was busy doing things. Ballu and Lallu had gone to the fields. Tejji and Gaya3 were in the kitchen along with Heer and Kulraj. Meher,Preet and Ash were playing carrom board. Harmant was talking to Vishaka😃. Prem had just gotten downstairs and he saw that in the living room Preet was playing carrom with Meher and Ashlaisha and Veera..Ash was cheating. Meher and Ash were arguing. Just then Preet noticed his Big P and said "Big P aap kahan jaa rahe ho."Prem said "Woh main aise hi garden mein walk ke liye jaa raha hoon."😛 Just then Heer turned around and remembered about the walk...but wat would she say to every1 in the kitchen and how would she get out..??While Heer was trying to figure this out. Preet said "Thik hain Big p..main chalta hoon aap ke saath." Prem immediately said "Nahin Preet..main .." Just then Ash interrrupted and said "Prem bahiyya aap jaiye..aur suno Mr...tum..kahin nahin jaa rahe..hamara aabhi game khatam nahin hau hai.." Preet said "Haan..leken tumhara aur meher argument khatam hoga toh haam continue kar payenge game."Ash said "Wateva game conitue karein.." Preet said "Haan tohmaine kaabh mana kiya..god .girls!" Ash said "Excuse me..wat girls?" Just then PREM interrupted their argument thatw as aboutt to start and then Prem said "Tu apni game continue kar le preet..main chala jaoonga..thik hain." He loved his bro like anything..but eh really wanted to spend some time alone with heer😳. Finally Prem figured out that Heer wouldn't say anything..she was also shy like him..so he was trying to think of wat to do..to get her and him outta there. Thats when Kulraj di's kids came and said "Maamu Mammu haam bhi aap ke saath chalehege." Prem did not want to say no to them..Then an idea hit him!!!HE whisperes something in one of the kids' ears. Then the one of Kul di's kids went and said to heer "heer maami ..heer maami..aap bhi chaliye na hamare sath..bahar..please" Please Please the other two kids scremaed..Gaya3 said "Haan heer tu bhi jaa..😃" Then Heer left..Prem and Heer went outside with the kids.😛 Here inside Preet and ASH got into an argument again wtih ..Preet said "That's it..mujhe nahin khelna.." Ash said "Haan..toh..jaao..jaao..kisne roka.." Preet said "Tum hi ne to roka tha..aabhi.." Ash confused like blonde said "Haan..well..abh nahin rok rahi hoon." Meher and Veera laugghed. Preet looked out the living room window and he caught Prem with heer and the kids..Preet figured out why his Big B did not want him there...Just then he caught Prem's eyes ..waved and mouthed from the window"Maina a raha hoon.." Heer was busy talking to one of the kids..Prem noodded his head in a NO..Preet contiued teasing his brother and nodded his head YES and said "I am coming Big B." Then Prem waved his hands in the air and nodded his head saying "NO!!"One of the kids looked up and said "mammu aap kya kar rahe hain." Heer looked up and said "Kya hua?" Prem quickly put his hands down and with one hand combed his hair with hiss hand( like he does when he is nervous).. prem said "Kuch nahin..tum yahin ruko main aabhi aata hoon." Just then Preet got out of the door and Prem stopped him..Preet continued with his teasing "Main bhi chalta hoon aapke aur bhabhi ke saath.."Prem said nervously yet excited "Dekh mere bahi..baadi mushkil se mujhe uske saath akele baat karne ka mokha mila hain..please"Prem was amzed that he came right out and said that he wantedd to be alone with Heer..but it was diff..with preet..preet was preet...u cud share anythingg wid him..😛..Prem left with Heer and the kids..Preet got back to his game and said smiling "Change of plan...main tum log ke saath game kheloonga." Just then Ash got up and said rudely "Hello..tum kya samjh te ho..jaab chaho game quit karoge..aur jaabh chahe join kar loge.." Veera did not want them to fight again and said "Bhaiyya please..haamne already new game start kar li hai..so please..." Just then Preet's cell phone rang and he said "Hey babe...main yahan india main hoon..kuch kadus logon ke saath..." Ash gave him a look and whispered under her breath "Girlfriend?" Veera said "Kuch kahan tumne ash" Ash said "Nahin kuch nahin..let's continue the game" Just then Meher noticed Vishaka and Harmant..it looked like to her that they were flirting..😃😆..Harmant was talking about his career..so was Vishaka...Just then Harmant asked "Kya mein aapke saath aapke school chal sakta hoon..kaal?"😳Vishaka was amazed that he wanted to come so she said yes...Harmant got a little excited...😃😛
HEER AND PREM were walking down the garden and Prem said "WOH JUHULA!!!aabhi bhi yahan hai!!mujhe to yakeen nahin ho raha hain..eetne saal baad bhi!!" Heer said "Aaabhi bhi waise hi mazboot hain..aap chahein toh bhait sakta hain."Prem smiled at her sweet offer..😊Just then the kids shouted that they wanted to sit on the swing. So Prem and Heer took them to sit on the swing...hEER said "Jaante ho..eetne baar es jhule ko hatane ki..ya ees jhaad ko katne ke baat aayi..leken maine unhe aisa kabh nahin karne diya.'" Prem asked "Kyun??"..he knew very well but he wanted to hear it from heer..Heer said "Ees jhule se itni yaadein jhudi hain..aur ye jhuli aapki aur meri dosti ki nishani hai...hamare dosti ka gawah hain."Prem smiled and said "Kya tumne mujhe miss kiya hum saab ke canada jaane ke baad. Heer just nodded a yes and said " Aaap aur mein ees jhule paar kitna baitha karte the..aapke jaane ke baad..woh baat nahin thi ees jhule..akele nahin bhaith paati thi..leken jaab bhi baitha karte hoon...hamare bachpan ke yaadein tazzi ho jaati hain."Just then the kids got off the swing and startd playing. Prem took this opportunity and said "Toh aaj eetne saalon ke baad hamari dosti ko kyun na hamm taza karein.." Prem was about to sit down..as usual he was sitting the the other way..Heer said "Nahin aise nahin..la......" She stopped herself..she did not knw wat came over her..she felt like she was a little kid again with prem..😛Prem knew wat she was going to say, he wanted her to call him Ladoo..but he knew she wud not...Prem turned around and sat the right way..and motioned Heer to sit next to him..She sat there..Prem said "Jaante ho..main jaab bhi canada mein koi jhula dekhta tha..toh mujhe tumhare yaad ati thi.aur ess jhule ki.."Heer felt cheeks burning up a 😳little.Heer said "Yeh waqt bhi kitni aajib tarha se guzar ta hai..eetne saalon ke baad hum is paal yahan hai.."From the fields Lallu and Ballu saw them and Ballu said "Kya inhe pyaar hoga..." Lallu said "Mere dost pyaar to eenhe ek dusre se bachpan mein hi hogaya tha...ye pyyar hi toh eenhe eetne saalon ke baad use mod par le aaya hain.." Prem got up and Heer was about to get up when he motioned her to stay seated..He got behind her..Heer could feel her heart racing,she knew wat he was about to do..Prem pulled the swing back and pushed it as hard as he could...Heer screamed from joy.. Prem saw the same tingle and excitement in her eyes..but now their relationship was different..it was turning from friendsship to love..After giving her the hard push..Heer was swinging back and forth..Prem stood beside the swing..holding the tree trunk..watching..her..With her delicate hands she was hodling the swing tightly..she was looking up at the sky..her eyes searching..her rosy cheeks more red from excitement..Thats when heer sensed Prem looking at her and she slowed the swing down..her heart was beating faster..Prem helped her slow down the swing..HE CAME IN FRONT OF hEER...With his full masculine force b4 the swing could come farther he held it hard and it stopped...he was looking at Heer...whose gaze was on her..Prem's passionate look was burning Heer from her head to toes..😳😳😳 She looked up to see that he was still lost in those attractive eyes...that wanted to say so much..there was so much mystery in those eyes..Suddenly Heer got off the swing and said "Aaabh apki baarey.."Prem laughed and said "Tum muje dakha dogi..thak jaaogey.." Heer said naughtily smiling "Kyun aapko nahin lagta ki mein strong hoon..." PREM was smiling adorably and said "Nahin aise baat nahin hai...bachpan mein main jaabh mota(fat_) tha..toh tum mujhe dhkaha toh deti thi..leken thak jaati thi..." An image popped in front of Heer ..chubby Prem sitting on the swing and he used to say "Zhor laga ke haya Heer..zor laga ke haya..aur zor se push karo Heer.." Heer would do her best but then she would get tired and sit down😃...Prem waved his hand infront of her and said "Kahan kho gayee..bachpan ki yaadon mein.."Heer snapped out of it..she nodded and smiled and said "Bhiatiye.." Prem sat down..Heer knew that it would take her a lot of force to push Prem...petite heer how was she going to push the muscular Prem...She managed to push him😊..and he was rocking back and forth...😛Prem said "Zhor laga kai haya" Heer laughed and she pushed a few more times and was tired and she sat down on the grass in front of him..Prem got down from the swing and said "Thak gayee?" Prem pulled out his hand for her to hold it and get herself up..He held it out..heer looked at his hand..😃she slowly put her hand on his..Prem as usual with his strong force pulled her up..he pulled her hard...she was pulled and was standing really close to Prem..She could feel him breathing..she could feel his passionate gaze...Prem could not help but get attracted to this beautiful girl..Heer still standing only an inch away from him looked up into his eyes...she could drown in his eyes..Prem felt like he could look at her forever..he never wanted this moment to end..😳
Preet came out and screamed "Bhaiyaaaaaaa!!!!!!" Just then they both snapped out of it...Preet was laughing and said "aap log ko dinner ke liye bulaya jaa rahaa hain..Prem and Heer were so into each other that they had not noticed that it was dark outside now..They gathered the kids and went in..Heer took all three of them and went in..Preet stopped Prem and said "HHMMMMMMMM..ahem ..ahem...Kya ho raha tha...mujhe toh laga tha..ki baatein hongey...par yahan toh main kuch aur dekh raha hoon..romance??"Prem hit Preet playfully..combed his hair back with his hands..smiled and blushed and walked in..😛😛Preet said to himself "Bhai ki toh nikal paadi" Just then Ash came and Preet said under his breath "shaitan ko yaad nahin kiya aur shaitan hazeer ho gaya." Ash heard wat he said but she angrily asked "What??!!..kyaa kahan tumne..??!" Preet quickly said "Kuch nahin" he did not want to get into another argument..he was really hungry....Ash just said "Whatever...tumhe dinner ke liye..bula.. rahen ..hai" Preet said "Haan..thik hain..mujhe bhi bohat bhuk lagey hai.." Ash just smiled and went to join every1 for dinner..
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Teri Ore

Heer woke up earlyas usual ...and hit the bathroom for a bath. As usual she was the first person to wake up..Heer was soaking in the water of the bath tub which was full of rose petals and the smell of her favorite bath posder..She was playing around..Thats when she thought of Prem. She thought of yesterday , the time she spent with him..She thought ofhow he pushed her on the swing, the way he kept looking at her passionately, when he gave his hand to her to get up and how close she was to him that she could almost hear his heart beating..😳She was definitely getting attracted to him.. She thought from the chubby kid prem had turned into a handsome gentleman..whom she was getting attracted...She definitely wanted to spend some more time with him.. While she was thinking all this ... the song teri ore in the bg played
Dil Kho gaya
Ho gaya kisika
Abb rasta mil gaya kushi ka
Aankhon mein hai khwab sa kisi ka
Abb rasta mil gaya kushi ka

Rista naya rabba
Dil chu raha hai
Kheeche mujhe koi dorr teri ore
[Teri ore
Teri ore
Teri ore
Haaye Rabba
Teri ore
Teri ore
Teri ore]2
Then she imagined something naughty yet cute...***Prem shirtless walks into the bathroom...For a minute he watches Heer play in the water..The he walks over to her and gazes into her eyes witth deep love for her..He looks into her eyes and she looks into those perfect adorable eyes..then suddenly his lips curve into a smile..He takes the wet rose petals ...raises his hand..and drops them gently on her face...They all slip away..some he removes with his hand gently and he caresses her rosy, pink cheeks...There is a small one by her lip..and he bends down to kiss it away...*** Thats when she snapped out of it and thought "Ye mujhe kya ho raha hai.."😳 Kyun main Prem ki taraf eetna khichiye jaa rahi hoonn..Aaabh Prem sirf mera bachpan ka dost nahin..balkye woh hai..joh.." She blushed at the thought of him being her husband..😳
Prem woke up and rolled over and the first person he saw was Heer. He was sleeping in his bed. The Mann house had glass doors...the curtain was aside on Prem's door but they were hiding the room mostly..except there was an opening throught which he saw Heer. Heer walked in with wet dripping hair in a baby pink robe. The robe fit her well and she looked like a cute girl that Prem just wanted to Cuddle... She looked simply gorgeous in her wet hair...With her delicate hand she was holding the towel and drying her hair and she was looking at herself in the mirror...Prem couldn't hely but notice her big roud beautiful brown eyes with long drak lashes.. her thin pink cheeks, her soft pink lips..that light on her face.. Then he noticed she picked up her dryer and had a confused yet adorable look on her face..whether she should dry her hair or not..she made a face..shook her head no to herself..and decided not to...then again she looked at the mirror at herself...Prem saw her delicate face with little water droplets..which he wanted to get off from her perfect face..Prem was smiling while watching all this..He sat up..put his hand under his chin adorably and his were twinkling😃..Then he imagined*** Prem walks into Heer's room ..shuts the door behind him..walks towars Heer who is standing in front of the mirrow brushing her hair..for a minute he just stands and admires her beauty...Then he walks over ..making Heer nervous...he stands behind her grabs her waist tightly from the back..heer looks down and gets all shy..He slowly moves all ther hair to a diff. side of the shoulder...making room so he can see her neck😳..then gently brings his lips to her soft neck and places a soft yet magical kiss on her neck..Heer feels a chill down her spine..He slowly releases her when Heer gets shy, smiles,blushes and pushes him back and runs...****** Then Prem snapped out of it and saw that Heer had already left.. while he was day dreaming... Prem smiled and combed back his hair with his hand and adorably thought" Kya ho raha mujhe...Kyun main soch raha hoon Heer ke baare mein eetna😊😳" Prem thouught that he was completely loosing it already, wat would happen once he got married to her..He grabbed a towel and went to hit the shower...Prem too was used to waking up early..plus the jet lag was killing him..😃After he got out of the shower...He got dressed and was putting on a watch..when he heard a voice of someone doing pooja..he walked downstairs and sw the by now every1 was gathering around..It was Heer who was doing the pooja..She was wearing a creme colored and printed salwar kameez...she looked simple but simply beautiful..Prem smiled to himself...While Heer was doing the pooja..and prem could not get his eyes off Heer..a part of a song played in the background and focused on them.. the song is Janeman from Aryan
khwabon ki is ghar ki khair karey ooo rabba
khwaabon ki is ghar ki khair karey ooo rabba
door karey pareshiyan aur vair karey
ooo rabba naazon se padey maine teri har
taiyaariyan din raat pyaar di nazraa
utariyaan yeh mohabbath hai ibaadath
kabhi hona kamm janemann janemann janemannn janemann
Then Prem finally focused on the pooja....Heer walked her way around every1 with the aarti and Prasad..She came upto Prem who was still daydreaming about her...Heer got shy when his turn came for the aartie..Prem looked at her and smiled...his eyes sparkling when he looked at her..Prem took the aarite..Heer was walking away..and Prem called out her name "Heer.." Heer got a little nervous...but Prem jsut simply said "Mujhe prasad nahin doge?" Heer got a little embarassed..she was busy focusing on him..that she 4got to give prasad to Prem..she gave it to him..he ate it ran his hand up his head...justt smiled and walked away...😳 To him she was justt simply stunning😳😛

That morning Heer decided to make breakfast for every1 and she wanted to make every1's favorite..Heer asked Kulraj about every1's favorite..But one person that she did not ask was Prem.She was sure wat was his favorite...That morning Heer served breakfast to every1...Veera made a fuss at the table...that she did not want any spicy,oily parathas or anything..she nicely said to Heer "Bhabhi main..itna spicy kahan nahin kha saakti..aur main aapna weight bhi watch kar rahi hoon.." Heer said "Jaanti hoon..ees liye..ye raha..tumhara cereal,fruit,toast...." Heer served everyone but Prem..His breakfast was not yet prepared...While very1 was eating..Prem was jsut sitting there and Heer softly said "Aaapka nashta aabhi baan raha hain.."Prem smiled and thoguht to himself..was she really going to serve him wat he was thinking..???Did she really know wat he waz thinking???Till then every1 else shared their food with Prem...Heer went into the kitchen and checked and Prem's breafast was ready..Gaya3 was there..Gaya3 tasted it and said "HHMMM ..bohat acha bana hai...tumhe aab bhi yaad hai ki owh bachpan mein itni pasanad se ye khaya karta tha.."Then atlast with a tray Heer appeared with Gaya3.. she put a trya on the table..Prem could not belive his eyes...He was eating his two most fav things after yeard..Khichdi and Gajar ka Halwa...Prem tasted it and loved it and said "Thanks mom..paar aapne achanak ye kaisey banaya..." Prem had no idea that Heer made breakfast today...Prem continued and said "Bohat acha bana hai..." Every1 praised their food and said it tasted diff..than normally Gaya3 would make it and the thought Teji Maan made it..Heer who was standing behind Kulraj and heard all this..and she was disappinted and her face fell..She really thought that Prem would knw. ..she was disheartened .then she tohught to her self..how wud he know that i know his fav fooD?Immediately Gaya3 said "Maine nahin banaya prem " Prem said "Kul di aapne" Kulraj then moved from front of Heer..Behind Kulraj Heer was standing...Kul said "Heer ne banaya..aur tu jaanta hai..eesne saab ke maan pasand chezon ke baare mein pucha..sivayae tere...eesne khud se ye banaya.." Prem was amazed and once again Heer blew him away..He was jsut looking at her..smiling...Prem mouthed a thanks to her..Heer replied smiling with her eyes...Prem loved the way her eyes sparkled... They were having a moment//When the song from Janemna played...from the male side...

sajan ghar aana tha sajan ghar aaye
tum piya mann bhaana tha piya mann bhaye tum har
khusi hai ab tumare mujhe dedo ghum
janemann janemann janemannn janemannn


zindgi mein aaye tum chahaton ke rastey
oooo zindagi mein aaye tum chahaton ke rastey
kash yeh rastey sanam kat jaye hastey hastey
soney dil daara tere pyaar tou main vaariyan
meriya duavaan tenu lagjaave sariyaan
chand ho tum chandni se bheega jaye mann
janemannn janemann janemaann janemann
Just then Preet said "Tabhi main sochu..ke aaj ke khane ke baat his kuch aur hai...warna normally khana toh..." Gaya3 defensively😆😆 said "Normally kahan toh kya??" Preet immediately said "Mera maatlab ye tha ki maa canada mein khana..aur yaha..woh kya kheta hain...uh..wat do you say?? Huh! aApne deshe mein khane ki baat hi kuch aur hoti hain!"Preet covered pretty well..Just then Vishaka came and Harmant could not take his eyes off her..she was looking simply stuning today..She was wearing a creme colored anarkali..She had her hair pinned back..he could see her beautiful almond shaped hazel eyes...Vishaka could sense he was looking at her..😃..she felt her cheeks getting warm...She said that she had already had breakfast...and was wating for Harmant..Harmant had justt stopped eating....was looking her way..He was seated between Prem and Preet..Prem turned adn looked at harmant and he clearly noticed that he was looking at Vishaka..He simply said " Tujhe kya hua??😆" Harmant said "Kuch nahin bhai..." Harmant had only eaten a little...He got up and gaya3 asked "Kahan Jaa raha hain.." Harmant said "Woh..maa..mein..Vishaka ke saath uske school jaa raha hoon.." Prem started to realize a little wat was going on...Suddenly Preet's interest turned towards Harmant too..he smiled michieviosuly...and said "Main bhi chalta hoon.." Harmant and Vishaka looked a little hesitant..😳..They were both quiet..Harmant said "Preet tu naashta karle..phir kabhi saath chalna.." Preet was ready to make a scene and ready to put his brother in a embarassing yet funny situation😆😉He said "Nahin..unless...Is there a problem agar mein tum log ke saath chalo vishaka.." Vishaka said "Huh..Ofcourse koi problem nahin hai" Vishaka tried to sound confident but sounded a little hesitant..she was getting embarassed at the situation...where all the adults were observing the scene interested...Just then Prem came to their rescue and said "Preet ..breakfast jaaldi khatam kaar...mujhe tum se important kaam hai." Preet said "Kaam??kounsa kaam Big P?" he knew Prem was trying to get them otu..but preet was not ready to quit..😆 Preet said "Bhool gaya tu..thik hai tu nashata toh kar lein..main samjah deta hoon.." Prem said "Tum log jaao...eese meri help karni hai..yeh nahin aayega..."😳They both were escaping and Preet said "Ruko...AAAOOOOO!!!" While Preet tried to stop them ...Prem kicked his foot from under table..Prem gave him an angry look... Preet simply said "Byeeee..yahi kehne roka tha" The both said Bye and finally escaped
Harmant and Vishaka both reached school..Vishaka showed Harmant the school and talkeda bout every1..she got really excited about showing him the school...He saw the excitemnet and thought she looked adorable when she got excited..Harmant was asking how to say many things in sign language...Like Hi,Bye,How are you,Nice to meet you,I want this,I do not know,.....a dn so on.." Vishaka and Harmant were surronuded by kids watching them..Atlast Harmant asked "Aur I love you kaise kehte hain??"😳Vishaka unknowigly jsut like any other things sshowed him the symnos..Just then all the kdis went crazy,laughed and smiled..Vishaka realized wat harmant had jsut tricked her into doing😃..she blushed and smiled but she saw that the kids were getting outta control..so she got a alittle teacher angry..and continued with her day..Harmant sat in a corner and even tohught he did not understand at all wat Vishaka was doing...he was having a gr8 time..He enjoyed the time wit the kids and especially with Vishaka😃..Finally the school was dismissed....but the kids asked vIsHaKa to got to the park and play with them..she could not refuse...so harmant and vishaka both played..Harmant got to see the childish side of her..which was simply cute!Then they both went out for coffe...At the coffe shop Harmant kep praising Vishaka about her work,the way she taught and understood the kids, wat a good teacher she was and how much she cared for the kids... Vishaka thought pp hardly praised her soooo much..now here was this guy who nonstop praised her..😊 Later while they were walking to the car..Vishaka felt a little chilly..Harmant like a gentleman took off his jacket and put it on Vishaka..😛 While he had his arm around Vishaka he could not help but drown into her eyes again...Vishaka also looked at him..They had an eye lock session...😛Harmant dropped her off after a fun day at her house..HE headed home
BACK TO THE MANN HOUSE!
After every1 cleared the dinning table and left..Prem started scolding Preet😕 for his behaviour with Harmant..Prem said "Jaabh tu jaanta tha ...toh..kyun uske taang kich raha tha..." Preet innocently😉 said "Mujhe kuchnahin pata Big P ki aap kya keh rahe ho??😆" Preet was well aware..! Prem said "Eeetna bohla maat baan..woh Vishaka ke saath akele waqt bitana chahta tha..😃" Prem knew his brothers so well..They did not have to say anythinng and Prem knew wat they were going through😊😊😊
Preet simply said "Mujhe toh lagta hai..ki ees gahr mein dusre loe story start ho rahi..ek hai aapki aur Heer bhabhi ki..aur aabh Harmant bhaiyya aur Vishaka ki.." Just the slight mention of Heer brought a smile to his face..He left to find Heer and talk to her...Prem went into the kitchen where Heer was there..Heer seeing him there asked "Aaapkokuch chahiye tha...?" Prem did not know wat to say .."Haan..woh..uh..Paanii..pani chahiye mujhe.." Prem thought to himself nervously "Gr8 going..prem...woh tujhe ek number ka buddhu samjegi.." Heer interrrupeted his thoughts and said "Paani" Prem held the glass tightly and nervously..He drank the water😊Then he finally said "Heer aaj khichdi aur Halwa bohat acha bana tha..." Heer said "Pehli baad bana rahi thi...toh...daar rahi thi..ki aapko pasand aayega ya nahin.." Prem simply said "Dobara zaroor banana" and walked out..He left a blushing and smiling Heer..Prem's compliment thrilled her to peices..she had a huge smile on her face...😊His compliment meant so much to her...Heer knew why...He himself meant so much to her...Prem had made a place in Heer's life and heart...😳
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Hi every1!!! thanks so much again for reading and replying to my FF!!! Keep those comment coming..they truely encourage me to explore the creative side of my mind😆😆😳!!! Here is Part 5 "Under the table.." of my FF "Mere Jeevan Saathi"
UNDER THE TABLE....!😆😆😆

That evening Harmant came home after his day with Vishaka with a smile on his face...😳When he walked into his room Prem and Preet were sitting there..ready to pull his leg😆..Harmant knew his brothers were definitely not going to let this all go..Preet started by saying "Mujhe toh lagta hai ki schools normallly 3 baje tak toh dismiss ho jaate hain.. Hai na Big P???😆Aur ees waqt time toh 8 baaj rahe hain..." Prem too then got in the mood 😃and said "Haan..main bhi aabhi yahi soch raha tha.....Harmant tu toh sirf school jaane wala tha... aur phir tujhe school jaane mein itna interest kaise aa gaya??"Harmant was just smiling and was quiet..and Preet said "and Mr.Harmant Juneja's answer is.." Harmant was hardly every shy around his brothers who were also his two most best friends..Harmant trying hard not to smile but his face was giving everything away..He jsut simply said "Aisa kuch nahin hai...jo aap log samaj rahe ho.." Preet interruped and mischieveously said😆"Nahin..nahin..hum kuch nahin samj rahe ..hum aabh any second aapke explantaion ka intezaar kar rahe hain..."😊prem just smiled completely well aware of his brother's feelings..Harmant said "Okay..main baas curious aur interested tha..aur bas aasey hi school jaana chaha raha tha...baas...i have no idea wat u guyz r talking about! Mujhe aate huey shaam ees liye hogayi..ki..vishaka se uske students ne uske saath park mein kehlne ke request ki..toh main bhi wahi park mein tha..aur phir haam log coffe peene gaye the..thats it!! aur koi explanation chiye tujhe preet???"Preet said "Whoa calm down bhai...!"😊Prem said "Harmant hum log sirf mazaak kar rahe the..aur hum eetne toh close hai ke hum ek dusre se saab kuch share karte hain.. aur waisey bhi hamein teri personal life mein interefere nhain karna chahiye....chal preet..tu eeske taand maat khich" They were both about to leave when Harmant finally confessed"Main nahin jaanta ke mujhe kya ho raha hain...paar pata nahin kyun.. main uske taraf khicha jaa raha hoon.. Jaabh bhi main use dekhta hoon pata nahin muhe kya ho jaata hain.." He leaned against the wall and banged his head lightly...Preet said "WOW..bro..dude...u sound like romeo!" Prem gave preet a look..preet just did the zipping the mouth action with his finger.. Prem stood behind Harmant and put his hand on his shoulder like a brother and friend and said "I think I know wat ur going through..." Just then Heer walked by the room..Prem's gaze shifted towards her..Preet said "Yes..bro you would be the one to know.... aap bhi toh Heer bhabhi ke liye..yahi saabh kuch feel kar rahe ho na..?" Prem smiled his adorable shy smile and said "Anyway..filhaal..harmant ke baat ho rahi hai..." Harmant turned😊😳 around and said "Let's talk about you bro.." Prem was turning red 😊😃😳and argued and said "Harmant ki baat ho rahi thi..." Just then Gaya3 walked in and said "kya baat ho rahhi hai..?" Preet said underhis breath"ki aapke do beetey ranjhe hain...total romeos.." Harmant and Prem both heard this but their mom..😛Prem said "Kuch nahin..maa..." Harmant also said "Haan..kuch ..nahin baas asey hi haam baatein kar rahe the😃" Gaya3 said "Acha thik hain..tum log dinner ke liye neeche aa jao.." All the brothers went downstairs for dinner with their conversation unfinished ...Every1 was seated for dinner..Prem grabbed a seat..by the time Heer got to the table all the seats were full..One seat was empty..the one right next to Prem..Prem wall all smiles!😳Heer cheeks were flushing from the warmth..Behind Prem's chair there was a wall..Prem had his chair pulled back pretty far..heer could not possbily pass through with his chair that far back.. Prem's eyes were completely on her when she moved herself around the dinning table..He did not look behind..he was facing the front..he did not want any1 to think he was crazy😊..crazy about her😃. prem then engaged himself in a conversation with Preet who was sitting across from him..he ttried not to show how thrilled he was about being so close to her....Heer was now standing behind Prem's chair..without saying anything she xpected him to understand to pulll the chair back in so she could pass through..Prem had no idea wat was going on..he was busy in his conversation with Preet😊..Just then Preet said "Big P..aapke peeche" Prem noticed Heer just standing there..her face pink...Prem was now embarassed for not understanding😃..he quickly pulled his chair in ..too quickly and too inside he hit his stomach on the table..and whispered a little "Ouch"😃 Heer had [passed thorugh but her dupatta had gotten stuck..Heer and Prem noticed this at the same time..prem did not want to seem ignorant and not help her..So he reached for the dupatta the same time as Heer did😛.. They both reached for at the same..then their hands touched..Then their eyes met..😃 Prem wanted to look into those eyes forever..he noticed her pink cheeks..Heer moved her hand that was underneath his..Prem unstuck the dupatta..😉 Heer sat down to eat..Then Prem adjusted his seat..Prem's eating utensils were on the right side..Heer's were on her left side..which would make their eating utensils on the same side😆{[haaa..aahhh..*sigh* wat co-incidences]}Prem accidentaly knocked over both their utensils..They both ducked under the table to get their utensils..not thinking that they were both going down at the same time and how weird it would look at the dinning table with everyone watching them..Then under the dinning table they both realized they were theere..Just then Prem's head hit the table..he said "aaooww"Heer looked at him and said while picking up her utensils "aap thik tohhain..?" Prem smiled his adorable smiled and said "Haan" Prem let Heer get out first..as she was about to..Her dupatta again got stuck in one of the legs of the dinning table..Prem decided to help her again..This time it was taking long..The dupatta was stuck..he did not want to rip or damge any part of her beautiful yet delicate dupatta..So he wa taking his sweet little time in helping her😊😳Heer was jsut looking at his adorable face with a frown ... coz he could not figure out how to get it offf..This was all under the dinning table..Meanwhile at the dinning table Meher thought toherself "Chamche nikaalne mein eenhe eetni deer kyun ho rahi hai" Preet had a frown on his face , his eyebrows arched thinking wat they were doing...but he could not control his laughter..Kulraj's kids also ducked under the dinning table..Kulraj called out after the kids..to..not to duck..but they did anyway!!It turned out to be a puzzled,confused and hilarious situation at the dinning table!😆😆😆{u guyz just have to imagine this..to enjoy it..}The kids ducked under and one of the kids said "Mammu Mammu aap log kya game khel rahe ho..haam bhi kheley app aur heer maami ke saath??" Prem who was busy helping her with the dupatta glanced at the kids once and said "Nahin beta hum log game nahin kehl re..aap log upar dinning table paar jao.."Two of Kul di's kids went out but one.. He said "Main aapke saath hi upar jaaonga.." Prem let him stay..Heer held out her hand and reached for the dupatta,again both their hands met..so did their eyes..Heer moved her hand..Finally, atlast Prem got the dupatta unstuck!!!😆😆😆They got out from under the table with the one kid of Kul di.When they got out..every1 was straing at them..every1 was trying to control their laughter..!Heer's face was read and her cheeks were burning..she was expecting Prem to say something..Prem started to say "Woh.." Heer at the same time said "Woh..actually mein mera dupatta atack gaya tha..table ke neeche..Prem meri maddad kar rahe the..use nikalne mein.." Prem then continued and said "WOh time ees liye eetna laga kyun ki..Heer ka dupatta buri traha se phas gaya tha.."Preet said under his breath with a smile "Right" Kul di's kid said "Mujhe laga ki heer maami aur prem mammu game khel rahe hoge..leken heer maami .ne to prem mammu ka haath pakad liya tha.. aur prem mammu hai na Heer maami ko dekh raahe the.." The kid said this all innocently😛 .Preet ,Meher and Harmant, Veera were about to burst from laughter.. While the oldies including Kulraj was looking at them.. she felt embarassed bcoz her kid had ratted them out..😳Prem was embarassed from head to toe..She never held his hand..then he rembered when their hands met..Prrem would have strangled this kid if he was not his own nephew😆😆😆Heer's face was now dark red..she waqs burning up from embarassment..she had no words to say..Every1 was straing at them.. Kul di then started scolding her kid saying "Tumhe jaane ki zaroorat hi kya thi neeche..aur ye saabh aakar yahan kehne ki kya zarrorat thi..chup chap khana kaho.." EVery1 proceeded with dinner pretending like nothing happened and ignoring..but Prem and Heer were embarassed at the scene created at the dinning table in front of every1!!!😆😆😆 After dinner Prem walked up to Heer and said "Sorry Heer..for the embarassment that was caused at the dinning table.." Heer said shyly "aapko sorry kehne ki zarrorat nahin hai..eesme aapki koi galati nahin hai.." Just then Preet walked into the kitchen and saw them both "OOPS ..wrong timing..." Prem then left as he did not want her to be mroe embarassed
Later that night Meher and Heer were gathered in Heer's room...Meher was teasing Heer sooooo muchhhhh!!! heer said "Dekh Meher...vikram(kul di's kid who was under the dinning table with them ) ne jo kahan...woh saachnahin hai... main baatati hooon tujhe kya hua..." Heer was about to explain when Meher cute her off "Saabh samaj gaya ki aap aur prem jeejo romance kar rahe the..woh bhi table ke neeche!!!"Heer said "Dekh Meher..." Meher said "Kya mein aapni di ko nahin jaanti..main toh baas aapki taang kheech rahi thi.." Heer said "Paata nahin..maa papa jee..bauji aur maa kya soch rahe honge.."
In Preet's room all the Jhuneja's siblings except Kulraj were sitting around...Veera and Preet were teasing Prem soooooooo muchhhhh about the dinning table situation!! Preet was saying "Big P waisey aaj toh prove hogaya..ki aapko toh moka..ya situation chaiye heer bahabhi ke saath romance kar ne ka moka chaiye...😉" Prem hit Preet playfully "Aisa kuch nahin hai..vikram ne saach nahin kaha tha." Preet said "Eeeka faisla toh abbh hoga..woh dekho kul di aur vikram..Kulraj embarassed wlaked upto her brother...Kul said "Bolo vikram.." Vikram said "Ima sorry..mammu" he said cutely...😊Kul also then said "Sorry prem..tumhe eetna embarass hona pada saabke saamne ne bahar.." Prem helpd out his hand towards Vikram and pulled him to his sdie and said "C'mon..di..jo kuch bhi hau bahar..bass eetefaq tha..aur ye toh bacha hai..bass sene khe diya..aapko sorry kehne ki zaroorat nahin hain😊" Preet said "Di..aapne toh saab kuch seriously le liya..mujhe toh laga kafi funny situation tha...!!!" Prem picked up Vikram and said "Kya kaha tha..tumhe vikram..ke heer ne mera haath pakda tha..aur main use dekh raha tha....leken baadmash tune ye nahin kaha ki main uske help kar raha tha uske dupatte ke saath......" Veera said "Prem tum hi ne eese bigad diya hai..." Prem just smiled and vikram said "I love you mammu" Prem cutely smiled and said "Mammu ko table paar embarass kar diya..aur aabh i love you.."He pinched vikram's cheek adn then said "I love you too beta.." Vikram hugged Prem. Prem said "Mammu dhante nahinn ees liye eetna pyaar aur laad kra raha hain.." Then Preet said "Vikram mere baare aise kabhi aat kehna...di agar prem bhai ki jagah main hota aur ye mera bhanja nahin hota toh main eese khidki mein se bhara paek deta.." Preet said that jokingly .. Preet loved Kul Di's kids like anything and he lovedddd to scareeee them offff and joke around with them..Preet jaan bhi unti hi nichawar karta hai..un bachon paar.. Vikram got scared and made a face that he was about to cry..Kul and Prem said at the same time "Preet!!" Preet then took vikram calmed him down and gave him a kiss on the cheek and said i love you😊 After comical dinner and after discussions all hit the bed tired but happy😊😊😊
The next morning Prem woke up at 4.45AM..He still had the jetlag problem..He tried very hard to sleep but he could not and he thought that it was no use and he should just get up and divert him mind into something and once there was light..he should go for a walk..He freshened up and looked acorss into Heer's room.. He could see right throught her room..the curtains were aide..there was no sign on her...So he jsut went downstairs..There was a lot of hustle downstairs..Prem saw that Kulraj,Gaya3,Tejji were eating..eating a LOT!!Prem stopped when he saw Heer there too..He jsut stood there and she was wearing a red salwar kameez..Prem as usual tohught she was looking beautifull..The color red really suited her he thought to himself..The dress hugged her every curve and she looked beautiful( the dress looked osmething like this -- here is the link http://www.seasonsindia.com/eCom/closerDressLook.jsp?m=2&type=DATA&rowNum=6) Heer said "Aaap log ke saath main bhi aaj wrat rak hoongi" Prem listened to this and thought "Wrat?" Gaya3 got really excited and said "Main jaanti thi Heer ki tum Prem ke liye zaroor karwachauth ka wrat rakh hogi!!!Ees liye maine tumhari saargi baanake tayar rakhi thi..waise toh ek saas apni bahu ko yeh saargi deti hain..leken maine tumhe aabhi se apni bahu maan liya.." Heer smiled at her and touched her feet and was happy that her saas considered her as her baahu😃"Heer started stuffing herself like the other ladies.. Prem listened to this and thought "Heer mere liye wrat rakh rhahi hain.."Heer's concern and thoguth to fast for him made him feel that he had already made a place in Heer's heart ..He smiled to himself.. and then walked in..Tejji mann said "Lagta hai aabh surak nikal ne waala hai.." They all stopepd stuffing themselves😆 Prem walked in and gaya3 said "Prem tu ees waqt yahan kya kar raha hain..?"Prem said "Woh mujhe neend nahin a rahi thi..jet lag..aap log toh Karwa chauth ki tyarae kar rahe hain na.?" Gaya3 said "Haan Prem..Dekh Heer tere liye wrath rakh rahi hai.." Prem looked at Heer..her eyes were down..then she took lookd at Prem..they were having their moment..Prem did not want to take his eyes off her..The song from Mere Jeevan Saathi played..the ttile songMere Jeevan saathi in the bg....😃 ( the song is a little fast beat but it fits my FF's title adn the words are really nice..here is the link http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9CLLRIMvY0g imagine it being played from 0.54 to 1.30😛😛-- hope ya'll like it..:)p😛 here r the lyrics --- aankhon main chupa ke rakho
sanson main basa ke rako
seene se laga ke rakho
palko main bithake rakho
main tujhe chahoonga is taarah is taarah
mere jeevan saathi - 3
tere bina meri jindgi kutch bhi nahi
mere jeevan saathi - 3
tere bina meri jindgi kutch bhi nahi

While the ladied were doing pooja. Prem went for his walk..The whole time during his walk he only tohught of Heer...He thoguht of her sweet concern to fast for him..Why did she have to be so sweet? He thought😃 "God she is amzaing and I am crazy about her"He was thikning of his and her moments.( the same song in the bg played ..imagine it being played from 2.23 upto 2.48.. focus on the lyrics guyz on how well they fit the situation 😊 dekha bas dekha tujhe
chaha bas chaha tujhe
socha bas scha tujhe
manga bas manga tujhe
sab mere pass hai
bas teri hai kami
mere jeevan saathi - 3
tere bina meri jindgi kutch bhi nahi
) He tohught of yesterday about the chair scene and the dinning table scene..How shy she got when their hands met...Even when she was shy she was beautiful....
Later that afternoon Tejji Maan suggested that since todayw as their day they should shop for the mini karwachauth function/party that night..but she said "Leken Hamein kahin jaane ki zaroorat nahin hai..amin hai na store walon ko phone karkar yahi bula leti hoon aur jewelers ko bhi" Allt eh ladies got excited.. The men were hanging around all over the house when the ladies shopped...Heer was sitting in a seperate corner a little away from the ladies.. There was mirror in front of her..She was looking at herself whhen Prem appeared in the mirror.. He sat in a chiar..prem could see him sitting down and prem could get a good view of Heer..Heer got a little shy and felt a little uncomfortable... a shopkeeper was showing her sarees and salwar kameezes..Meher shouted from a corner "Di aapko aaj saare pehni chaiye..aapne aabh tak saree nahin pehni.."heer jsut nodded and could not decide ..she tohught wat if she is not able to carry a saree wel..wat if she didn't look good..Prem was looking at ehr closely and admiring her beauty..{ the song from janat zara sa played in the bg during this whole scene.. imagine it being played from 0.25 - 0.56. and then again from 1.20-1.42here is the link

Zara si dil mein de jagah tu
Zara sa apna le bana
Zara sa khawbon mein saja tu
Zara sa yaadhon mein basa

Mein chahun tujhko
Meri jaan bepanah
Fida hoon tujhpe
Meri jaan bepanah

Wooooo hhhhooo ooohhhh hooo'

Zara si dil mein de jagah tu
Zara sa apna le bana
Zara sa khawbon mein saja tu
Zara sa yaadhon mein basa

Mein chahun tujhko
Meri jaan bepanah
Fida hoon tujhpe
Meri jaan bepanah (the song continued on in the bg..in the scene described below)

Heer held up a saree in her hand and a salwar kameez..she looked at the mirror..at Prem who was looking at her ..Prem smiled and pointed to the saree and showed a thumbs up and nodded his head in a yes.. Just then Heer decided that she would wear a saree..if prem liked it she did not care about anything else..Heer saw many different sarres but she could not make up her mind...Heer knew that she wanted to wear a red saree..She narrowed her choices to a few sarees..she looked up in a hopeful way at Prem ..she wanted hum it out a saree to wear for tonight..So she started holding up many differnt sarees, putting them on her shoulders..looking at Prem. Prem gave her differnt reactions to each ..She held up this one http://www.seasonsindia.com/eCom/closerDressLook.jsp?m=2&type=DATA&rowNum=3 he said no shaking his head .. then she held up this one http://www.seasonsindia.com/eCom/closerDressLook.jsp?m=2&type=DATA&rowNum=4 he cutely scrunched up his nose in a no... Then she held up this one http://www.seasonsindia.com/eCom/closerDressLook.jsp?m=2&type=DATA&rowNum=2 Prem widened his eyes which meant no...Then she held up this one..she liked this one http://www.seasonsindia.com/eCom/closerDressLook.jsp?m=2&type=DATA&rowNum=3 He did an action with his hand that said okay..Prem was really enjoying this..Heer tohught that he was giving really cute expressions and reactions..she wanted to take her own sweet time and wanted Prem to jsut keep looking at her😊 just then meher walked up and haned ehr a banaarsee sari and said" Di ye aap paar bohat aachi lagaye gi.." She left .. She held up Meher's saree in the mirror for Prem to decide😉http://www.kaneesha.com/store.cfm~pid~4633 prem again gave an expression that said nice...Heer wanted to pick out a saree that Prem thought was perfect..Suddenly Heer's eyes fell on this beautiful saree..It was a red georgette saree with golden sequins and a green broder http://www.kaneesha.com/ex_large_view.cfm?pid=4919&cid=11..she really liked it..she put it on her shoulder..Prem was blown away by ehr choice..he loved it..He tohught that when she wore it she would look out of this world!! he gave a thumbs up and smiled..😊Heer was satisfied..Just then the shopkeepers were packing up and leaving..Prem stopped the jeweler and bought jewelry for Heer b4 they left..In the hall Prem put the jewelry at a table..heer was packing up..once more she put the saree on and was admiring herself..Prem noticed the smile from her beautiful face had vanished into a frown and she thoguht "Oh no..Maine toh jewelry hi lena bhool gayee..kya karron??" (( a part of zara sa played again in the bg..here r the lyrics.

Zara si dil mein de jagah tu
Zara sa apna le bana
Zara sa khawbon mein saja tu
Zara sa yaadhon mein basa

Mein tere mein tere
Kadmoon mein rakh du yeh jahan
Mera ishq deewangi

Ohhhhoo..

Hai nahi hai nahi
Aashiq koi mujhsa tera
Tu mere liye bandagi

Mein chahun tujhko
Meri jaan bepanah
Fida hoon tujhpe
Meri jaan bepanah( this played in the back ground..for the scene described below..))

.Prem wanted to turn that frown upside down into a smile..He walked up to Heer and gave her the jewelry..he did not say anything..Heer said "Thank you" She was amzed by his sweet gesture..Heer thought that he truly made her complete..Prem was happy to see that she was smiling again with that bluch on those pretty cheeks..heer put the jewelry aside and put the saree again on her shoulders..Prem was walking away and turned towards her and came back
(( a part of zara sa played in the bg for teh scene described below.. here r da lyrics for that part

Zara si dil mein de jagah tu
Zara sa apna le bana
Zara sa khawbon mein saja tu
Zara sa yaadhon mein basa

Keh bhi de keh bhi de
Dil mein tere jo hai chupa
Kwahish jo hai teri

Rakh nahi rakh nahi
Parda koi mujhse aye jaan
Kar le tu mera yakeen

Mein chahun tujhko
Meri jaan bepanah
Fida hoon tujhpe
Meri jaan bepanah

Prem walked up to Heer and stood behind her...Heer's back facing him..Heer was shy and blushing again but it felt good to her , him being around her..being so close to her..He gently took a part of the saree..leaving some onher shoulder..He tok the pallu on put it on her head..Heer looked down then she met his passionate gaze again..He ran his hand down her arm all the way down to her soft hand and held it..hand... Heer felt a chill run down her spine..His touch wa feeling electric.. He lifted iher hand and made her hold her pallu..Heer was turning red..Then he brought his lips close to her ear adn whispered in her ear softly bbut warmly "Perfect.Simplay perfect"He walked away..leaving a smiling Heer..Heer was blown away by wat he jsut did..She looked at the mirror, smiling and blushing said "Perfect". heer said to herself "You are Perfect" indicating Prem.."Mr.Perfect" She smiled again...😃

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Hii!! Thank you to all for reading and replying to my FF...Plzzz keep commenting....Here is Part 6 "Kissing you in the Moonllight...😳"
Part 6 "Kissing You In the Moonlight"

The evening of Karwachauth.The whole Mann haveli was decorated beautifully with candles,flowes and diyas.Overall everything was red and gorgeous in the Haveli. Soon it was going to be time for some close relatives and friends to arrive at the mini karwachauth function. Eveyone was busy getting dressed.
Prem was the first one dressed and downstairs in the hall. Prem was wearing a traditional kurta suit. He was looking absolutely dashing.He was looking around admiring the decorations. Just then Meher joined in and said "Decorations dekh rahe hain jeejo..?" Prem said "Haan..Jis kisi ne bhi kiya hai..Bohat khubsoorti aur waqt laga kar kiya hai..Haveli toh bohat achi lag rahi hain.."Meher said "Saari decorations Heer Deede ne kiye hain.." Prem thought to himself that Heer along with being beautiful and sweet she also had a very creative side to her. Meher informed him "Jaante hai..unhone Interrior Decorating mein major kiya hai...Heer deede ko ye saab karne ka bohat shok hai.." Prem smiled and nodded at wat Meher said and looked more closely at the Haveli admiring his to-be-wife's creativeness.. Prem said "Kafi aachi choice hai Heer ki.." Preet jumped into the conversation said "Aaachi kaisey nahin hoge choice..aakhir aapko chuna hai as a husband." Prem just smiled to himself. Preet too was looking quite nice in his kurta. Meher left the two brothers to check on Heer if she had gotten ready. Heer had jsut gone upstairs to get ready.Meher was all dressed and she was wearing something like this -- http://www.kaneesha.com/larger_view.cfm?pid=2986&cid=4
Heer came out of the bathroom after a quick shower. She was blow drying her hair. When Meher walked in and said "Yeh kya di..aap aabhi tak tayar nahin huey." Heer said "Meher main baas aabhi do minute mein tayar hoti hoon.." Heer now started wearing her saree. Meher was helping her do her saree and said "Di..yeh saree prem jijoo ne pasand ki hai na..aur aap suit nahin saree bhi eesi liye pehen rahi hai..kyo ki uhe yahi pasand hai na.." Heer looked at Meher her face was a little pink and she said "Woh..Meher..Sirf Prem ko pasand hai ees liye nahin pehen rahi hoon..mujhe bhi pasand hai..aur tune bhii toh kaha tha ki main aaj saree pehen no.."Heer was lying a bit..she all that Meher said was true..She thought to herself. Why am I dressing up for Prem? Am I falling in love with him?Heer concentrated back on the saree. Now she had to do ehr makeup and put on her jewelry..if only she could find where she put the jewelry Prem gave her😃
At Ash and Vishaka's house both the girls were getting ready. Ash walked into Vishaka's room and and looked and Vishaka was adding finishing touched to herself. Ash was wearing something like this http://www.kaneesha.com/ex_large_view.cfm?pid=5034&cid=4 She stood behind her sister who was standing in front of the mirror. Ash whistled at Vishaka and said "Oye hoye..Tanu kiske liye eena saaj sawar rahe ho..Gosh Dee..You're looking hot!😊" Vishaka turned around and said "Saach?" Ash said "Nahin dee ..main aapki jhooti taraf kar rahi thi..god..u kow ash har kisiki tareef nahin karte aur jaab karte hain saache dil se karte hain"Ash looked at the mirror ran her hand through her hair and was admiring herself. While dressing for the function..Vishaka only thought of Harmant. Vishaka then snapped out of the thoughts of Harmant and said " Ash..tu bhi bohat aachi lag rahe hai..." Ash said as sual praising her self "I know dee Ash se zyada eed duniya kaun khubsoorat hai..Vishaka rolled her eyes and said "Acha meri Miss.World.. Abh chalen..hamein der ho rahi hain...Aur hamein jaate jaate Natasha ko pick up karna hai.." Ash made a face and said "Natasha ko kyon..?" Vishaka said "Kyon Ki maama maami out of town hai..aur woh akli ha..toh maine socha kyun na woh hamare saath chale..maine chachi se baat kar li hain.." Ash hated Natasha, she thought that her own cousing Natasha was a complete flirt and tramp.😆 Ash rolled her eyes at Vishaka and said "Aaapka naam Vishaka nahin Devi hona chiye tha..Devi!"Vishaka's dress lokked something like this http://www.kaneesha.com/ex_large_view.cfm?pid=4827&cid=31
At the Mann house..Every one was socializing and welcoming the guests. The Jhunejha brothers were seated on a couch.Preet was squeezed in between Harmant and Prem. All the three borthers were looking amzingly handsome😳. Harmant was about to say something when he saw Vishaka walk in .He just stopped talking... He was speechless. To him she looked like an angel dressed beautifully in red. To him she truly was an angel😳. Tonight she looked absolutely stunning to him. The red color went well with her fair complexion and highlighted ehr perfect body. Her hazel eyes looked even more beautiful and were standing out.Her smile was making him go weak in his knees. Prem and Preet were waiting for him to finish his sentence, then they shifted his gaze to where Harmant's was..they both understood that their brother was lost. Just then as Prem was about to say something a ravishing looking Heer walked in her red georgette embroidered saree. Her saree and jewelry looked something like this -- http://www.kaneesha.com/ex_large_view.cfm?pid=4919&cid=11. Prem absolutely was blown away by how beautiful she was looking. Heer's red saree worked with her creamy complexion. The saree hugged her figure and body well. She had bangles in both her delicate hands. He noticed that she left her hair down and Prem liked them like that. She had a little makeup on. Her eyeliner brought out her big eyes even more. The lipstick made her lips look even more luscious. To him at that moment she looked like his wife..he tohught all she neeeded was sindoor and a Mangalsutra and him. Prem too was speechless like harmant and was boldly staring at her. Preet noticed that both his brothers were completely lost in a different world. Preet raised his hands and snapped his fingers in front of both his brothers' eyes. Then they both snapped out of it. Preet said "Hello.!Romeos aap log ka yahan ek bhaii bhi hain.." Harmant said "Main abhi aaya" and left to talk to Vishaka. Prem did not leave but in front of his eyes he saw Heer disappear. Preet said "Aaap aur woh Harmant bhai aashiq ban gaye ho..Canada mein eetne saal rehne ke baad aap dono ne ek ladki ke taraf mud kar bhi nahin dekha aur yahan aate hi India mein.." Prem said "Tu nahin samjega..tujhe aabhi pyaar nahin hua..jaabh tujhe hoga toh tu samjehga.." Preet said "Pyaar..no way..main pyaar vyaar mein belive nahin karta.. waisey bhi Big P aapko toh paata hai ki mera dil bohat bada hain..main koi ek ladki ko pick nahin kar sakta..maineetni baadi na eensafi nahin kar sakta..I love all girls.." Prem said nodding "Acha ...tu aur tera dil..leken tujhe pyaar hoga..." Preet said "Nahin hoga.."Prem decided to get to know his brother more so he asked " Acha..ek baat bata ..tu ek ladki mein kya qualities dekhta hain..?" Preet answered "Khubssorti ,Khubsoorti aur kaun laaon batata hoon.." Preet whispered in Prem's ears. Prem's eyes widened at his brohter's inapprapraite words and just smirked and said "Tu Kabhie nahin sudrega" He hit him..Preet said "Kya kaha maine..saach hi toh kaha..haar ladka yahi toh chahta hai.." Prem gave Preet a look and said "Agar tu woh qualitied ko chod kar"He gave an brothery angry look and onctinued"Khaaskar last quality ko chod kar..aagey dekha ga..toh hi tere life ke liye aacha hoga..aur kisi ka dil nahin ttotega..."Preet jsut listened to his brother. He respected his brother a lot but he could not change the way he thought...Then that would not be Preet?😉
Tejji mann was talking to herself "Hay Rabba..terrae par bhi saabh kuch thik thak hai ya nahin dekhna hai..kya karoon..yahan par bhi log hai.." Prem walked up sweetly and saaid to his to-be-mom in law"Aaap kyoon chinata kar rahi hain...Main hoon na..main jaakar upar saabh kuch dekhta hoon" Prem was such a sweet heart.Tejji jsut ruffled his hair and said "Jiyunda rahe puttar" She explained to him wat he had to do on the terrace. Prem headed up towards the terrace...
Preet eyed a girl talking to Ash and he thought to himself that she was quite hot. He thought why not give it a try. After all no one can reject Preet. The girl was none other than Natasha!Eventhought like Ash described Nataasha like a flirt and tramp which she was. She liked to play hard to get with men.Preet walked up to both the girls and said nicely to Ash "Hi Ash... aapni ees khubsoorat friend se milwaogi nahin.." Ash felt herself burning up with anger and did not want her trampish cousin to meet Preet..At Preet's comment Natasha jsut gave a small smirk.. Ash introduvced them. After the introduction Preet said "Tumhe koi bula raha hai Ash" Preet's indication was that Ash leave him and Preet alone. Ash understood that and at that moment she wanted to slap preet and kill Natasha..😡 😆 She just left angrily. She went to talkto Meher and eat something.
Preet said "You're looking beautiful" to Natasha. At this Natasha said " 10th" Preet said "Iam sorry..tumhare b-day 10th ko hai..?" Natasha laughed and said " You're funny..tum 10 th ladke ho jisne mujhse ye kaha hai..So Why don't you tell me something that I don't know.." Preet thought to himself khud ki tareef karne ki aadat kuch zyada hi lag rahi hain...He knew that she was playing hard to get but Preet was up for a challenge....
Meanwhile Harmant was talking to Vishaka. After some time of conversation Harmant finally got up the courage to give Vishaka a compliment. Harmant said "Tum Aaaj bohat khubsoorat lag rahi ho Vishaka..Red really suits you.." Vishaka looked up at him and met his bold and passionate gaze with her own sparkling Hazel eyes. Vishaka gave a sweet smile and said "Thank you." Harmant noticed that she was blushing. Just then Ash called out "Di" Vishaka excused herself
At the Terrace Prem was checking if everything was the way Tejji Mann wanted it. He was about to leave when he looked down at the garden and there he saw her.
Chand Chupa Badal Mein, Sharma Ke Meri Jaana ,
Seene Se Lag Ja Tu, Bal kha Ke Meri Jaana,
Gumsum Sa Hai, Gupchup Sa Hai
Madhosh Hai,Khamosh Hai,
Haan Ye Sama, Haan Ye Sama Kuch Aur Hai,
Han Han Han Chand Chupa(Repeat)
(song is played in the bg..for the scenes below)
His lady love sitting there gracefully looking like a absolute angel. Heer with her delicate eyes with a sparkle of excitement in her eyes. The moonlight and the diyas' light were reflecting on her beautiful face, making her face glow more. Just then Heer felt someone loking at her. She looked up and saw him. She saw her Prem looking extraordinarily handsome. She met his passionate gaze full of love for her. This time she did not look away or put her eyes down. She kept looking at him. Theway he was looking at her made her feel like the most beautiful one. Heer gave him a small shy smile. Looking at Heer's smile Prem's smile widened and his eyes twinkled.They were both looking into each others' eyes...
*Prem walks into the garden with Diyas to put in the pond. He seats himself behind Heer who is putting the diyas in the pond. He puts his diyas in. Heer too is done with the diya but her hand is around the pond, so is his. He reaches forherhand and holds it.. Heer looks back at him then shyly looks at him and embraces him. Then she lets go of him.Turns around. She shows him the moon. Prem puts his hands around her and holds her and Heer holds his hands and they both look at the moon smiling.*
Just then Prem and Heer both came back to reality. Someone called out "Heer" Heer left her moment unfinished..
Ash was talking to Vishaka and said angrily "Kya zarrorat thi aapko us Natasha ko yahan bulane ki..Usne aabhi se aapna kaala jadoo chalan shooro kar diya hai.😡"Vishaka sais "Kya hua Ashalaisha..tum kyun aisi baatein kar rahi ho!" Ash was looking at Preet and Natasha. She observed they way Preet was all over her and flirting with her. She saw him whisper something in her ear and she laugehd and they both laughed. Ash angrily said "What a bloody b****" Vishaka angrily turned her younger sister aorund and said "Aaabh keh diya..aagye se maat kehna..maat bhuloke woh hamrai behan hai!" Ash just gave her sister a look and left.
Vishaka was now talking to Meher. Eventohugh Harmant was talking to some guest. He kept looking at Vishaka. They both kep stealing quick glances of one another..
* Harmant and Vishaka are both alone on the beautifully decorated terrace. The song Chand Chupa plays and they are both dancing.*
Nazdikiyan Badh Jaane De,
Arre Nahin Baba Nahin, Abhi Nahin Nahin Nahin,
Door Se Hi Tum Jee Bhar Ke Dekho, Tum Hi Kaho Kaise Door Se Dekhoon,
Chaand Ko Jaise Dekhta Chakor Hai,
Aye, Gumsum Sa Hai, Ye Sama Kuch Aur Hai
Ho Ho Ho, Chand Chupa Badal Mein(Repeat)
(At these lyrics..). * Harmant is moving towards Vishaka.. Vishaka is moving her steps backward.He is about to kiss her.. when she moves away.. and sings "Door se hi tum jee bahr ke dekho" Harmant smiles and said "Tum hi kaho kaise door se dekho." Vishaka points to the moon smiles and and says "Chand ko Jaise dekhta chakor hai.*

Aanchal Mein Tu Chup Jaane De, Arre Nahin Baba Nahin, Abhi Nahin Nahin Nahin,
Julfon Mein Tum Kho Jaane Do, Arre Nahin Baba Nahin, Abhi Nahin Nahin Nahin,
Pyaar To Naam Hai, Sabra Ka Humdam, Woh Bhala Bolo Kaise Karen Hum,
Sawan Ki Raah Jaise Dekhe Mor Hai,
He Rehne Bhi

*Vishaka is moving forward when Harmant pulls her dupatta and opens in "Aaanchal mein tu chup jane de " Vishaka moves forward "Arre nahin baba nahina abhi nahin nahin nahin" Harmant is close to her and is about to bury his face in her hair "Julfon mein tum kho jaane do, arre nahin baba nahin, abhi nahin nahin nahin". She moves far away from him but he has her dupatta in his hand "Pyaar to naam hai, sabra ka humdam" Harmant stands there smiling at er "Woh bhala bolo kaise karen hum" She blushes " Sawan ki raah jaise dekhe mor hai" *

Vishaka is and Harmant are having an eye lock session while this is being imagined.😳

Heer was sitting on the floor talking to someone..and then that person left. Prem took this opportunity and came and sat next to her. Heer was looking at the window waiting for the moon.Heer suddenly became a little conscious. She fixing her saree which was already fine. She felt her cheeks getting a little warm but then she wanted him around her. Prem said "Chand ki rahan dekh rahi ho.." Heer looked at him nodded and said "Haan.." Prem came closer to her and said "Woh dekho chand.." Heer excitedly said "Kahan.." Prem with his hand turned her head towards a mirror. He said "Wahan.." Heer was looking at a mirror at herself. She now understood wat Prem meant. She just smiled and looked down shyly at his sweet comment. Just then someone said "Woh Dekho Chand!" Everyone headed up to the beautifully decorated terrace.

Everyone was on the terrace. The Karwachauth ceremony had started.

sajan ghar aana tha sajan ghar aaye hain
sajan ghar aana tha sajan ghar aaye hain
piya man bhaana tha piya man bhaaye hain
har khushi hai ab tumhari mujhe de do gham
jaaneman, jaaneman, jaaneman, jaaneman

sajan ghar aana tha sajan ghar aaye tum
piya man bhaana tha piya man bhaaye tum
har khushi hai ab tumhari mujhe de do gham
jaaneman, jaaneman, jaaneman, jaaneman

zindagi mein aaye tum chahton ke raste
ho zindagi mein aaye tum chahton ke raste
kaash yeh raste sanam kat jaayein haste haste
sone dildara tere pyar toh main variyaan
meriya duavaan tainu lag jaan sariyaan

Heer and Prem was standing in front of each other. Heer felt her heart racing. She was excited but yet a little nervous about her first karwachauth. They way Prem was looking at her made her heart beats go faster and her blood run cold. Prem looked at Heer and at that time he felt like he was married to her. He was feeling like a husband. He felt loved that Heer for his welfare and long life had fasted for him. Prem's smile was plastered on his face , not once disappearing. His eyes were twinkling with excitement.Heer took the round net thingy(sorry idk wat its called hope u all know wat i mean) She held it towards the moon. Then she aimed the round net thing at Prem. She met his passionate gaze. Heer smiled at him. Then she put that down. She did his aartie. Prem was feeling out of this world.
aagosh mein meri zulph sanwaroon teri
chahat ke rangon se main maang saja doon teri

maahiya ve aaj mainu aaive kyon ve lagda
aashiq je sachha hove roop honda rab ka

hum yahan hain tum yahan ho, hone do milan
jaaneman, jaaneman

janeman, janeman
jaaneman, jaaneman

Just then Heer was bending down to reach for his foot for aashirwadd. She did not want to this bcoz it was a rasam because along with the love for him she also had much respect. She was a tradional indian girl at heart. Before she could reachPrem stopped her by holding her and made her move up . She as standing meeting his eyes. Prem said "Tumhari jagah wahan nahin heer , yaha hai." he put his hand on his heart. Heer could not help but flash a complete smile at his sweet comment. Prem said "Oh..Paani" He took the kalash and help it while she drank out of it. Then he gave fed her a peace of Meethai.
Vishaka was standing on the terrace observing all the couples then she imagines herself being in those ladies postion. Fasting for someone for their welfare and long life. The man infront of her with whose hand she would drink the water... she could only imagine Harmant in that spot😳😃😛
Everyone went downstairs to enjoy the feast. Heer was busy attending the guests. All the guests had cleared. She had not gotten a chance to eat anything..She was about to sit down to eat when Meher stopped her. Heer said "Meher maine suabh se kuch nahin khaya hain..mujhe boaht bukh lagi hai.." Meher said "aAAP yahan kahana khane wali hai aur wahan jeejo ne subah se paaani ka ek ghoot bhi nahin piya hai..!!" Heer shocked said "Maatlab..prem ne..??" Meher said " Prem jeeho ne aap ke liya wrath rakha..! aapne toh apna wrath tod liya..leken unhone ne toh toda bhi nahin." Heer was amazed that prem fasted for her and did not even let her know. Why was he so sweet? she thought.. She immediately had to make him break his fast. She asked "Prem kahan hai...?" Meher said "Chaliye mere saath.". Both the girls headed to the terrace.
Heer and Meher walked in and there Prem back was towards them. He did not know they had arrived. The terrace was looking beautifu.. There were candles and flowers everywhere. Then Heer's eyes landed on a candle light dinner. There was a small around table with a beautifult table cloth with rose petals on it and two long beautiful red candles.. and food.and her favorite choclate cake. there was something written on it but Heer could not read wat exactly was written..Heer smiled and knew that Prem had done all this. Her Prem had done all this for his Heer.😳 Meher said "Jeejo.." Prem turned and looked at heer. Meher said "Mera kaam toh hogaya..." Prem said "Thanks..." He was eager to be alone with Heer..
mujhe hak hai tujhako jee barake main dekhu
mujhe hak hai bas yuhi dejhataa jaau mujhe hak hai

piyaa piyaa piyaa piyaa bole meraa jiyaa
tumhe hak hai- 3

dhal rahi pighal rahi ye raat dhire dhire
badh rahi hai pyar ki baat dhire dhire
chudiyaa gungunaake kyaa kahe sajanaa - 3
raat ki raat jagaau mujhe hak hai (song plays in the bg for teh scene described below)

Prem moved his steps towards Heer, making Heer nervous. her gaze was down , she did not want to dare meet his gaze which so full of love,passion and desire that wanted to come out. Prem stood in front of her. She looked up and met his eyes. He stood there looking at her admiring her shy beauty. She stood there like a statue, did not dare to move. He put his hand on her arm. Heer lookd down shyly, his touch felt warm, she did not dare stop the passion that was running in him. He slowly and gently ran hin hand down from her armn all they way down to her bangles and down to her hand adn he stopped there. He interlocked his finger with her and held them tightly. Her hand was cold from the nervousness and excitement. Prem's hand felt warm from his burning passion. Finally he broke the silence and said still holding on to her hand "Aaao Heer.." He staretd to pull her ..but she jsut stood there took her other hand and put it on his hand and stopped him from moving. He stoppped and looked at her. Her eyes and her face demanded an answer. She said softly "Aaapne mere liye wrath rakha..aur aapne kuchnahin kahan..!"Prem looked at her questioning eyes but with a thought filled in them . He answered "Meher tumhe bata diya.."Heer said "Aaapko wrath rakhne kikya zarro..?" Be fore she could finish, Prem's passionate side kicked in and he pulled her towards him...She was only about an inch away. she could almost hear his heart beating.She was looking down. Prem took his hand and raised her chin. Heer looked up at him. She was so close to him. She could feel his warm breaths. His face was so close to hers.Prem raised his hand and held her face with his warm and tender hand . His four fingers on her cheek and with his thumb he was stroking the corner of her lips. Heer felt like she was melting against his touch. Prem did not want to get carried away by his wild desires and passion for Heer. He confidently spoke and said "Agar tum mere liye eetne pyaar se mere lambi umar ke liye wrath rakh sakti ho..toh kya main tumhare liye wahi cheez nahin kar sakta.." Heer looked up at him in his eyes that were telling the truth that came straight from his heart. Heer thought toherself "Pyyaar kya hota hai, raasme kya hoti hai aur rishte kya hote hain..koi aap se sikhe..." Heer was feeling more love and respect for Prem. Prem noticed that he still had his hand on her cheek and he was still stroking the end of her lips. He moved his hand away and held her hand and said " aao heer" He pulled the chair out for her to sit. She said "Ek Minute" She took the glass of water saying "Aaapne aaabh tak aapka wrath nahin toda hain.." She held the glass out to him. Instead of drinking the water.He put his hand on her hand which was on the glass and looked at her smiling. She said "prem .." He drank the water. He was about to move when Heer stopped him by holding his hand and pulled him towards her. She noticed a drop of water by his lips. She wanted to remove that from hs perfect face. She raised her hand and took her thumb and cleanedaway the water droplet. She was still holding on to his glass. She drank from the same side of that Prem had put his mouth on. Prem noticed this.😳 Then they both sat down for dinner. The cake said " with love Prem" the cake was heart shaped.Prem cut the cake took a small slice and fed it to her. She took another slice and fed it to Prem. he ate it.. there was some choclate by his mouth. Heer imagined *Prem is about to wipe the cake away with his hands and Heer tops him by holding his hands, he is looking at her. Heer moves her face towards his. With her lips she removes the choclate by his mouth* Heer realized that she was dreaming again..she wished she could do that. Instead she reached with her hand and wiped his face with a napkin.😳Prem gave a her a sweet look of thanks.Prem got off from the chair and sat on his knees in front of Heer's chair wthhis hand and asked her for a dance. heer held her hand out and put his hand on his. They both got up for a dance.

The song is from Mere Jeevan Saathi-- It's called "Tum Bin Na Hum Jee Sakenge"{ this is my all time favorite song..i love this song with all my heart...😳😳😳} http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uNH65pRc8Wc
1st part -- FEMALE-- Jab se mile ho tum aaisa laga hai ki
tum bin na hum jee sakenge
ehsaas dil ko hoe laga hai ke
tum bin na hum jee sakenge
yeh dooriyan lagti sitam
aaghosh main tum bharlo sanam
Jab se mile ho tum aaisa laga hai ki
tum bin na hum jee sakenge
2nd prt--MALE-- yeh lamhe yahipe thehar jaane do
hume toot ke bikhar jaane do
jawaan dhadkanon main utar jaane do
hadhoh se bhi aage gujar jaane do
tanhaiyon ka kehna yahi hai ke
Tum bin na hum jee sakenge
Jab se mile ho tum aaisa laga hai ki
Tum bin na hum jee sakenge

3rd part -- FEMALE-- Ab zindgi mein tamnna nahi hai
tum aa gaye ho - 2
barso se pyaasi humari nazar main
tum cha gaye ho - 2
har arzoo ko yeh lagne laga hai ke
tum bin na hum jee sakenge
ehsaas dil ko hone laga hai ke
tum bin na hum jee sakenge
jab se mile ho tum aaisa laga hai ki
tum bin na hum jee sakenge

4thpart --FEMALE --hum jismo jaan se lipat jaaye aaise
phoolon main khusbu simat jaye jaise
sanson ko chu le sanson se aake
sab kutch bhula ke tumme samake
nazdikiyon ne bhi humse kaha hai ke
tum bin na hum jee sakenge
ehsaas dil ko hone laga hai ke
tum bin na hum jee sakenge
5tth part MALE-- yeh lamhe yahipe thehar jaane do
hume toot ke bikhar jaane do
jawaan dhadkanon main utar jaane do
hadhoh se bhi aage gujar jaane do
humko yakin yeh hone laga hai ke
tum bin na hum jee sakenge
Jab se mile ho tum aaisa laga hai ki
tum bin na hum jee sakenge

ha tum bin na hum jee sakenge - 5
{I have divided the dance of Prem ad Her into 5 parts.. and the song into 5 parts.. there is a diff. scene and imagination of premeer with each part..}
1st part -- FEMALE-- Jab se mile ho tum aaisa laga hai ki
tum bin na hum jee sakenge
ehsaas dil ko hoe laga hai ke
tum bin na hum jee sakenge
yeh dooriyan lagti sitam
aaghosh main tum bharlo sanam
Jab se mile ho tum aaisa laga hai ki
tum bin na hum jee sakenge
Heer has her one arm around prem .Prem is holding her tightly withhis one arms. With their other hand they are both holding hands. They are moving slowly to the music. They are looking at each other with wild passion and desire in their eyes.
2nd prt--MALE-- yeh lamhe yahipe thehar jaane do
hume toot ke bikhar jaane do
jawaan dhadkanon main utar jaane do
hadhoh se bhi aage gujar jaane do
tanhaiyon ka kehna yahi hai ke
Tum bin na hum jee sakenge
Jab se mile ho tum aaisa laga hai ki
Tum bin na hum jee sakenge
*Prem takes Heer's hand and kisses it and he is kissing her hand all the way up.. He is moving his lips all the way up to her arm and he kisses her shoulders which are bare bcoz her saree's blouse has a big opening from the back.He kisses her neck..He is about to reach her lips...*

3rd part -- FEMALE-- Ab zindgi mein tamnna nahi hai
tum aa gaye ho - 2
barso se pyaasi humari nazar main
tum cha gaye ho - 2
har arzoo ko yeh lagne laga hai ke
tum bin na hum jee sakenge
ehsaas dil ko hone laga hai ke
tum bin na hum jee sakenge
jab se mile ho tum aaisa laga hai ki
tum bin na hum jee sakenge
Prem has come out of his wild and passionate full of love imagination. Heer is looking at Prem with a lot of passion in her eyes.She is not moving her eyes away from his face. She is thinking of how madly she has fallen in lvoe with him and what a big place in her heart he has made. How much he is starting to mean to her in her life.

4thpart --FEMALE --hum jismo jaan se lipat jaaye aaise
phoolon main khusbu simat jaye jaise
sanson ko chu le sanson se aake
sab kutch bhula ke tumme samake
nazdikiyon ne bhi humse kaha hai ke
tum bin na hum jee sakenge
ehsaas dil ko hone laga hai ke
tum bin na hum jee sakenge

Now Heer's extremely wild,passionate and loving side somes in. *Prem and Heer are against the terrace wall. Prem is kissing her neck passionately. The kisses are making her go crazy. She is holding on to him tighlty and pulling onto his hair and she has traces of pleasure on her face. He looks up at her face. He looks at her luscious lips. He reaches with his lips to make both their lips meet.* Heer snaps out it and she realizes that there is a thirst inside her for him. A fire is burning within her.😳😳😳

5tth part MALE-- yeh lamhe yahipe thehar jaane do
hume toot ke bikhar jaane do
jawaan dhadkanon main utar jaane do
hadhoh se bhi aage gujar jaane do
humko yakin yeh hone laga hai ke
tum bin na hum jee sakenge
Jab se mile ho tum aaisa laga hai ki
tum bin na hum jee sakenge

*Prem and Heer are dancing.Heer's back si towards Prem. He is holding her waist and they are both moving against each other. Prem reaches into her saree and strokes her soft stomach..From behind his lips reach and kiss her neck and her cheek.She is running away from her. He comes and hold her from the back tightly* Prem cannot believe wat he is imagining. He never thought that he could be so passionate and loving towards someone.😳

ha tum bin na hum jee sakenge - 5

At the end part of the song. Prem cannot control himself anymore.He picks Heer up in his arms. Heer has her arms around his neck. Her gaze is lowered. Prem reaches and kisses her forhead softly. Heer looks up at him. She feels this urgency to kiss him back , so she kisses him too soflty on his forehead. Prem does not want this to end. Her kiss makes hi want to go further. He reached and kissed her cheek. Heer closes her eyes at his touch , again she feels an urgency and a passion in her that wants to kiss him back. She responds to him by kissing his cheek. Prem's thirst is still not quenched. His passion and desire is out of conrtol. He kissed her other cheek and lets his lips rest for a while on her cheek. Heer feels the need that se needs to kiss him back on his other cheek. Heer is on fire. Like hi she kisses his other cheek and lets her lips stay for while on his cheek. Heer feels that their is one more place that she needs to kiss him, that will physcially show him how much she loves him, what she feels for him. That place is his lips. She removes he one hand from his neck while the other one is stroking his hair.. She takes that hand raises it and closes Prem's eyes with her gentle fingers. prem closes hi eyes. Heer with her lips reaches for Prem's lips. She softly and delicately kisses the spot very clsoe to his lips. Heer refuels the passion and fire that burn in them both. She moves her lips slightly now amiming to kiss his lips....😳
OKIE GUYZ! THIS IS IT!!!! I REALLY THOUGHT ABOUT THIS PART!!!! HOPE U GUYZ LIKE IT!!!!!!!!!1 PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ SHARE UR VIEWS AND COMMENTS!!!!!!!!!!!!!😊
Heyy guyz..so i have decided to do my update now!! thanks soooo much for da lovely comments...keep them coming plz😃😊. Here is part 7 "Payaaal"
"CAUGHT" Part 7

Heer was reaching for Prem's curvy,adorable lips with her own soft and pink lips. Prem's heart was racing but Heer felt calm and comfortable. She was feeling very heated up. She felt like she neeeded to kiss , she wanted to kiss him! She brought her lips close to his lips. Now all they had to do was touch...
Meanwhile Preet was on the phone heading upstairs towards the terrace. While heading upstairs he said to his "girlfriend" in canada "Hold on babe..." Her voice was not clear to him on the phone. So he thought that if he went on the terrace he would hear her voice better for some reason. He reached the top of the stairs. He said "Hello" not looking up and then he yelled into the phone while looking up at Prem and Heer. He saw Heer was in his big brother's arms. She had his arms wrapped around his neck. They were about to kiss. As he raised his heaad up he yelled "HELLLLLLOOOOOOOO", then saying this he saw the situation.
Prem opned his eyes startled. Heer saw his face about an inch away. She pushed him , and moved her head back and she was amazed and shocked at what she was about to do. Prem put her down. Her cheeks were burning from emabrassment and she was red. She walked out pushing Preet out of the way who was standing facing backwards from them. After Preet saw them he immediately turned around. He was a little embarassed him self catching his bhaiyya and his to-be-bhabhi in this sort of situation.
Prem was still in the moment. Soon he snapped out and he saw Preet heading towards him. Prem's face was pink from emabrassment. He was feeling a little nervous. Preet walked up to Prem and said cutely cmiling "Bhaiyya." Prem angriy answered clenching his teeth 😆"Preet." Preet again smiling and embarassed said cutely 😳"Bhaiyya.." Prem again said now a little lightened "preet.." Preet again said "Bhaiyya." Prem said "Main tujhe chod ne wala nahin hoon.." 😆Prem ran around the terrace chasing Preet. At last both tired stood face to face. Preet said "I am sorry Big P.." Prem said "Tu ees waqt yahan terrace paar kya kar ne aaya tha??" Preet answered "Woh..Kaitlyn ka phone aaya tha.." Prem knew kaitlyn was Preet's girlfriend in Canada. Preet started touching his borther and naughtily said "Aaap yahan ees waqt??😉" Prem felt embarassed. Preet said " woh bhi heer bahbhi ke saath..candle light dinner...😳" Prem walked out emabrassed saying "Mujhe neend aar rahi hain.." Preet yeleld after him "Haam se baat karne ke liye neend aa rahi hain..aur unke saath........samj gaya Big P..I see how it is😉😉"😆😆
Heer was in her room sitting on the bed thinking about Prem😳😳😳 Heer was thinking about how SHE was going to kiss on the Prem. Heer truly had gotten swept up in the moment😳 Then she was starting to feel emabrassed about how Preet caught them both. She got up to change. While she was taking out her jewelry she saw Prem looking at her from his room's glass doors into her room's doors. She was feeling really shy now. She went to her doors covered them with curtains, making Prem sad.😆
That night Prem and Heer both laid awake thinking of their wonderful night together. Heer jsut kep thinking of how sweett it was of Prem to fast for her. She tohught of them both dancing. She tohught of closee she was to him that she could almost hear his heart beating and feel his warm ticklish breaths. She thought of the kisses they gave each other. Prem's touch made Heer felt ecstatic. She tohught of how hot she had gotten. She could not belive that she had actually kissed him back so many times. She could not belive that SHE was going to kiss him on his lips...She just could not stop thinking that whole night about him. Prem too laying awake in bed was thiknking the same. He could not belive they way Heer had answered back to his kisses, he was amazed that she was going to kiss him on his lips. He was angry at that time for Preet walking in and interrupting their moment. He tohught how it would feel to taste those lips of hers. HE tohught "Hai..Ye subah kabh hogi..?"
Prem woke up,freshened up and walked downstairs. That morning Heer was no where. He had no idea where she was. He was too shy to ask any1. Somehow every1 semmed to know bcoz no1 mentioned Heer. Prem at last manged to get up the courage and ask Meher, so he asked "Heer kahan hai.." Meher said "Hospital mein..."
PART 8 "LOST"

Prem walked up to Meher and askked "Heer kahan hai?" Meher was looking at a magazine and calmly said with out looking up "Hospital mein..." At this Prem did not react bcoz Meher's reaction was luke warm. So he asked "Kyonn..?" Preet walked up saying "Aaabh doctor hospital mein nahin toh kya school honge Big P.. Bhabhi ki chutti khatam ho gayi thi..." Prem said "Doctor..chutti..ye tum log kya khe rahe ho.. mere toh kuch samaj mein nahin aa raha hain..???"😲 Prem continue and said "Heer doctor hai...kounse doctor??"Meher answered "Aaap..tph aise pooch rahe hain..jaise aapko pata hi nahin!.. Heer di City Hospital mein Obsterician hai..." Prem was shocked and amazed that he did not know that his to-be-wife was a Obsterician.!!! Prem turned towards Preet and said "Aur tujhe ye baat pata hain..?" Preet cooly said "Ofcourse pata hai..it would be so ignorant of me if i did not know what my future bhabhi does" Prem said to Meher "Kaal toh tum hi ne kaha tha.. ki Heer ne Interior decorating mein major kiya tha!" Meher said "Major nahin minor..sorry agar maine major keh diya toh"😲😲Prem jsut could not believe it that Heer was a obsterician and no one had told him. HIM, HEER'S TO-BE-HUBBY!!Prem furious walked out of the hall and walked into his mom's room where Harmant,Veera,Kulraj were seated . Furiously he asked "Heer kya kar thi hai aap log ko pata hain.. I mean Uska Career kya hai..aap log bata sakte hain. All three of them said at teh same time "Obsterician" Prem was now more furious and he said angily and shocked with his face red "Great..Just great..Heer ek doctor hai..ye kissi ne mujhe bata na zarrori nahin samjha.." Gaya3 confused said "Haam ne tujhe bataya tha beta.. tu bhool gaya hoga.."😆Prem angrily but softly said "Maa..agar aap log ne mujhse kaha hota toh main kyun nahin yaad rakh ta!! Heer ki koi baat main kaise bhoolonga woh bhi eetni badi baat.."Prem furiosuly walked out the room and sat in his room thinking Why had no1 told him that!!! Why!!He out of all the peopl needed to know what his wife's career is!! This was unbelieveable!!!

That whole day Prem was trying to remebber if any1 had told him! Prem did not recall any1 telling him. He was very angry now!!😆😆😆Later tha evening Gaya3 walked in and said "Pandit Ji..aye hain Prem..tumhare aur Heer ki shaadi ke date fix karne..zara niche aaogey.." Just like that the tohught of him and Heer's marriage amde his anger vanish away.😳😳 Everyone was gathered downstairs. The pandit was looking at both their kundalis.

Just then Heer walked in and saw every1 gathered in the hall. Heer was very happy that daY. She walked in smiling. She stood there in her white doctor coat. Again Prem's anger appeared! Why did no1 tell him!!😆😆 Lallu said "Aaa heer putta aaethe bhaaet..tere aur prem ki shaadi ki date fix ho rahi hain.." Heer blushed at the thought of her and Prem's wedding. Then the pandit said "Pehla shubh mahurat saat din baad hai.." Prem was thrilled to pieces, in seven days Heer would be with him officaily😳😳 Just then Tejji maaan said "Leken shaadi ki tayariya saat din mein kaise hongey??" Pandit said "Dusra mahurat 6 mahine baad hai.." Prem said under his breath "6 mahene..noooooo" Gaya3 said "Taayariyan ho jaegi .." So it was fixed Prem and Heer's wedding was in 7 days!!!! Every1 was happy!!
In the kitchen Meher asked "Kya baat hai dee aap aaj bohat khush lag rahi hain!??" Heer excitedly and happily informed Meher "Jaanti hai Meher! Aaaj maine tidwa(triplets) deliver kiye!!! aur woh log bilkul normal aur healthy hain!! Aaaj main bohat khush hoon!!" Prem who was walking by the kitchen heard this and he felt the excitement in her voice. Heer kept on talking about how cute they are, how happy their mother wat. Heer said "Aisa pehli baar hua hain mere career mein!"
That night Prem,Heer,Meher,Harmant,Veera,Ash,Vishaka and Kul Di's kids were all going to go to a special night fair. Prem and Harmant walked into Preet's room and Prem said "Sure..tu hamaray saath mele mein nahin chalega?" Preet said "I love you bhaiyya leken i would rather go to a night club with natasha than go to a fair.." Prem said "Suit you're self..leken Natasha kaun..?" Harmant said "Ash aur Vishaka ki cousin.." Prem said "OOOOOOOO" Preet turned around from the mirror and said "OOOO se kya maatlab.." Prem said "Nahin kuch nahin..woh ash ki cousin hai..." Prem and Harmant were looking at each other.😃 Preet said "Aur vishaka ki..toh kya hau...ek second" Preet's cell phone rang. He hung up frustrated. Preet turned to his brothers and said "Use bhi Mele mein jaana hai.." Prem said mimicking Preet "I would rather go to a club than a fair.."😆
Veera,Prem,Heer,Meher,Harmant,Vishaka,Preet,Ash,Natasha and Kul Di's kids were at the fair. Every1 split up.. Veera,Meher and Ash went in a diff.corner with rided. Preet and Natasha too left and so did Harmant and Vishaka.Prem and Heer were now the only ones left with the kids. Poor Prem and Heer could not be alone😉. So they both took the kids and fulfilled the kids needs. They were both feeling a little akward being alone after what happened last night between them. While the kids were in a ride. Premeer were watching them have fun. Prem said "Congratulations.." Heer replied "Kis Liye" Prem said "Tumhare triplets paar.... 😳I mean.. tumhare pehli delivery of triplets as a doctor.."😆 Heer said sweetly "Thank you.." Prem and Heer spent the whole time at the fair watching the kids and fulfilling their needs..
That night they all were heading back to the house. The car ran over a sharp thing and a little further stopped, same thing happened with the second car. All of them were in the middle of the road where they could see no sign of anything. Along the side of the roads.. all they saw was jungles. They did not know where to go wat to do. Preet said "PB i think we are lost.."😕😕😕






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very good start...i like your story..continue soon
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hm another ff..rele exciting...and i liked it its awsome plz write the next part soon...
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great first part and Charecter sketch!

Cont. soon!

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hey there love this ff of yours.nice start will eb looking forward to read the next update.and read more about ladoo
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oooohhhH!!!!! great first prt!!!! continue soon!!!!

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2nd part??

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G888 job!!!
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great going!!! conitnue soon :)
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thanks for replying and reading every11111!!!!!!!

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