Prem Heer finally 2gether!!!!

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Posted: 17 years ago
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SCENE 1
Heer turns around 2 have a last look at Lalit & finally goes and sits inside the train compartment.
Lalit is frantically searching 4 her peeping through each window.Suddenly Prem enters & sights his father.
"Bauji.."
"Mujhe sab pata hai Prem,rok le use woh nahin jaanti woh kya kar rahi hai."
Prem has a lost look on his face & doesn't know where 2 find Heer.Lalit sits down defeated.
SCENE 2
Heer is sitting near the window with tears rolling down her cheeks.She has a strange feeling that Prem is somewhere around her.Suddenly a hand wipes her tears. Heer looks up & is stunned 2 find Prem standing.
Song here"Ooooo...Baakhuda tumhi ho, har jagah tumhi ho,haan main dekhun jahan jag us jagah tumhi ho,tumhi ho beshuba,tum hi ho mujhmein haan tumhi ho,...." from Kismat Konnection.
Prem holds out his hand.His eyes r in tears.Heer turns his face away.Prem kneels down before her still holding out his hand.But Heer behaves as if Prem is a stranger 2 her. Prem finally holds her wrists and pulls her out of the compartment.
They r out on the platform.
"Kya saabit karna chahti ho?Mujhe khud se door karne chali ho. Mujhe?Prem has a look of anger as well as pain in his eyes.
"Main itni khudgarz nahin ki apne rishte ki buniyaad ek rishte ko tod kar rakhoon."
"Rishton ki buniyaad to maine todi hai.Khudgarz to main hoon."Lalit enters the scene.
"Meri ankhein apno ko nahin pehchaan sakin aur main begano ko apna samajhta raha.Main apni hi nazron mein gir gaya hoon. Meri wajah se tune kyaa kya nahi saha Heer,lekin tune phir bhi apni asliyat mere saamne zaahir nahin hone di. Magar isme teri koi galti nahin, galti to meri hai.Aaj agar Balraj zinda hota toh woh yeh rishta kabhi nahin karta. Uski amaanat ko thukra kar maine apni dosti ko dhokha diya hai, mujhe maaf kar de Heer,main gunaahgaar hoon tera."
"Bade choton se maafi nahin maangte chachaji, woh to sirf aashirwaad dete hain."Heer holds Lalit's hands.They hug each other in tears.Prem has tears of happiness in his eyes.
"Prem mujhe ghar jaana hoga, bahut kuch sahi karna baaki hai,magar ghar par kisi ko bhi abhi is baat ka pata nahin chalna chahiye.Main chalta hoon,tum thodi der baad Heer ko saath lekar aana."
"Par Bauji.."
"Main sab samhaal loonga."Lalit assures & leaves.
SCENE 3
Prem turns around 2 leave without Heer.Heer has a frightened look on her face 2 c Prem leaving without her.
"Prem.."Heer calls out. Prem halts in his way. He turns around 2 look at Heer. He stretches out his arms beckoning Heer 2 come 2 him.
Heer slowly walks towards him,as if her feet r too heavy to walk.She finally embraces Prem and starts crying with her head resting on his shoulders.
"Kab se is dard ko apne dil mein samete thak chuki hoon Prem,aaj in aansuon ke saath sab kuch bhula dena chahti hoon."
"Kya zaroorat thi ye sab karne ki."
"Main tumhaari zindagi barbaad nahin karna chahti thi."
"Aur meri zindagi tum ho.Maine toofano se ladkar tumhaari zindagi nahin bachayi,main maut se apni zindagi cheen kar laya hoon.Tumhaara beeta hua kal dard tha,aur Prem tumhaara aaj hai."
Prem lifts her face up.
"Main adhoora hoon tumaare bina,tumhaare bina main khud ko bahut kamzor mehsoos karta hoon,saansein chalti hain par zindagi thehar jaati hai.Aaj mujhse waada karo ki tum mujhe chod kar kabhi nahin jaogi,waada karo."Heer silently nods in affirmation. Prem kisses her face.

My frndship day treat 4 all my frnds,do post in ur comments.Luv u all enjoy!!!

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Posted: 17 years ago
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mindblowing.....
really hope smthg likethis happens on monday...........
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Posted: 17 years ago
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gr8........👏.really hope smthg likethis happens on monday
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Posted: 17 years ago
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i just wrote few scenes for other topic premn heer scene on a piece of paper didnot posted yet your topic is what was in my heart or mind
. i am crying tears r coming out of my eyes very nice i wish this happen👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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lol.. tht wuz reli gud.. am expecting a similar thing to happen on mondai lol.. hopefully.. thanks for posting!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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OMG
This is awesome
Would love it if that happens
Its beyond words to praise this piece of work
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Amazing.............simply mindblowing ..............I just hope something like that happens on Monday. Wish you would be on the creative team 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
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reli good!
hope this actually happens on monday! x
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Posted: 17 years ago
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thanks .......happy friendship day to u and all my friend in IF ........
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Posted: 17 years ago
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ur awesome!!! i can totally survive the weekend after reading this

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