Mmm, maybe an FF. . .||UPDATED 11th august| - Page 7

Originally posted by: sakeena

Sunayna, that was awwweeesommmeee!!!!

I just found your FF, and its totally ammaazzing!

grreeaattt jobb!

please do continue soon, whenever you find the time

best of luck on your exammss 😉

- Deena

Hey everyone!

Here's the next chapter!

Prem: Do you mind if I sit here?

Chapter 3

Heer looked up, she recognized him, she couldn't believe it, Prem was standing in front of her. They looked at each other which turned into an eye locking session. She tried to look away but she couldn't, there was something about him that was different, like he was someone she had known for her entire life. She shut down all these thoughts, how could she have known Prem for all her life?? She was just a middle class girl supporting her younger sisters education and he was some big businessman spending as much money that he wanted too, their societies never mixed. Prem sat down a few inches away from her. He didn't wait for an answer because he was sure he wouldn't get one. She finally looked away from him, thinking about their hotel incident. He continued staring at her, he couldn't think what it was but there was something definitely. He couldn't stand the silence he couldn't tell she was thinking about their incident so he said

Prem: Don't worry, you were right, rich people do tend to be snobby, I'm not like that though.

Heer: Tumhara point kya hain? Huh?

Prem: I'm not that bad!

Heer: Why would I care? You're some big business man!

Prem: You seem to know everything about me! (he said sarcastically)

Heer pretended that she hadn't heard him. Prem smiled at that. He was curious though, about why she hadn't said sorry about what happened. He knew it wasn't her fault but she wanted to know anyway. He asked her. . . . Heer replied

Heer: Because I wasn't at fault I have no need to say sorry. If my parents were still in this world I would have had to of said sorry, but they aren't no one is here except for Ayesha and I.

Heer had tears in her eyes; she wanted to run away from where they sat on the park bench. The tears ran down her cheeks like waterfalls. She loved her parents more than anyone in the world and still does. Prem saw her tears even though she was trying to hide them, he wiped them away. For some reason he was finding it hard to see her like that. He felt so sorry for her, she had no one but her sister and he didn't even know if she was in California.

Prem: Ssshhh, it's okay, I didn't expect you to say sorry, Please, don't cry!

Heer continued crying she couldn't stop thinking about her parents, she had missed her parents so much. She picked up a locket that hung on a chain around her neck. It was in the shape of a heart, she opened it and looked at a picture of her mother and father. She kissed it remembering all the happy thoughts she had. This always made her feel better when she was crying about her parents.

Prem watched her, he could tell how much she loved them.

Prem got up he picked up Heer's hand from her lap and helped her up. She didn't know what to do, she just followed his lead.

Okay, so whats going to happen know???

Please comment, I love your comments and they encourage me to keep writing!

I will update ASAP!

I have an exam tomorrow, so will be able to work on it after that!

xXx

Sunayna

Originally posted by: Vibs

Wow, I just read your ff from part 1, you are seriously a great writer! Continue soon, will be waiting eagerly!

do cont soon dear i will be waiting it was superb

Originally posted by: tanyaaaa26

do cont soon dear i will be waiting it was superb

Originally posted by: blushpink13

its awsome yaar...cont sooon. i luved it...hmmm first meeting of ph it was great...can't wait for more.

and best of luck for ur exams.

luv iqra