ehsaas tumhara:FF; CD upd pg 2

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hi everyone...this is my first time on fanfictions..so please bear with me..and please don't hesistate to correct me in any way.... and please comment on my work....thanxs...luv margi😳

ChArAcTeRs AnD DeScRiPtIoNs.

chandani: sweet homely girl, loves everything and everyone one around her,her eyes can be described as the twinkle stars in the sky and her smile which can brighten up the nights darkness....she is the youngest of all her 4 brothers and sisters including her....grew up in a very loving and rich family.her only desire in life is to marry and spend her life with the right person....she always stuck to salwa kamizasses...a simple girl...very shy but has a big heart.

Mr.sanjay khurana: he is the provider of the house, chandani's father...he loves his family more than his own life...and can and will do anything for them...he is a business tycoon, he owns more then 10 companies in the country....he might look strict and a romantic at heart...a happy go lucky guy...his ideal clothes sence suit tie and pants..that for business days but at home it's more like t-shirts, shorts, jeans.....for him family comes first....

Mrs.devika khurana: she is the housewife and a loving mother of chandani...she is an idol to anyone...she sleeps, eats and thinks about her kids and her husband...she alwasys thanxs god for what she has been given....chandani is her life....she always wears sari's with sindoor and mangalsutra....at the age of 50 she looks more like 30....

ishan khurana: the middle born son...a brat...loves flirting with anyone anywhere and anytime....his day starts with a flirt with his priyanka chopra poster...his dream girl...he has graduated with a degree...but has no interest in joining his fathers business....he loves his sister chandani and sides with her for any matter...he would do anything for her but can't see a tear in her eye....his dresses like any normal guy..but vey stylishly but unfortunately the only son in the family who is stuck between his 3 sisters...

nishma khurana: she is the oldest of all...well married off...with nihal saberwal...her life starts with nihal and ends with nihal....she and nihal are both doctors and met at the hospital mistakenly on day..fell in love and got married...then they moved to london and settled down there...

pooja khurana: she is the second oldest after nishma...she is disabled...her life began with the wheelchair....she is loved by all her brother and sisters...she only has one regret in life...why did she have to be disabled..cause of that she could never get married or in more clear words no one would marry her...her dream had always been to get married and have her own children....

chaman: he is the butler of the family...his only problem is that he asks to many questions...that might not be his only problem because he also has a sickness of forgetting....he is treated like a family member....his dream is to find the girl of his dream...

mrs.d'souza: she is the caretaker of the house....she is also a nanny to pooja..she mostly takes care of her...pooja has basically become her daughter and now her life...

kumar family:

boman kumar: sanjay khurana's childhood friend...he lives in australia...he has two sons....one who is a widower and one who is not, but helps him in the company..

karan kumar: boman's youngest son...he loves speed cars....loves his father to much...lost his mother when he was really young....his only ambition in life is to touch the sky....he is a very fun loving guy..would never hurt anyboy's heart purposly....

naman kumar: he is the oldest son...after his mom's death..it is seemed like he has forgotten how to smile and after his wife's death he has forgotten to live....

ok guys so the character descriptions so far are done...as i add more characters i'll keep added them to the list....so the first episode will be up later for u guys to enjoy....have fun...

lots of luv margi😳

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Posted: 18 years ago
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thanxs i really hope that u like the story as well...it's up now to enjoy...please comment on it....

luv margi😳

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Plz post your stories nd all other things related
to it in one place! 😊
Plz do not make individuale posts for each things as
it is spamming. 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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aww nice job....im looking forward to this ff 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mimi_Rani

aww nice job....im looking forward to this ff 😳

thanxs alot...i read your tanhai ff and i really enjoyed it....good job...

luv margi😳

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: gujugurl

thanxs alot..no need to thank me, its ur work...that deserves it....i read your tanhai ff and i really enjoyed it..thanx hun...im glad you liked it..good job...you too😳

luv margi😳

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Good description...but where is the bitchy vamp in the tale?
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Posted: 18 years ago
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oh she'll come soon....



luv margi 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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episode one.

the show begins with crackling thunderstorm and lighting....the camera moves towards a police station..in the jail where there are investigations going on...the spotlight is flashing on a scared girl dressed in white sari...her hair tied in a low ponytail...tears rolling down her eyes...she looked very innocent...but yet had alot of questions but no answers....

policeofficer: apka naam kya hai??? apna yeh kiske kehne paar kiya???apne yeh kyun kiya????jawab do???apna apne pati ka katal kyun kiya????

the questions continued...and the policeman got harsher....

girl: baas...she said as she covered her ears....please band kar....maine apne pati ka katal nahi kia.....she cried out loud shouting that she was innocent........

policeman #2: stop this right now...wat kind of a way is this to talk to a lady... please ap rona band kijeye.....or shanti se bataye...apka naam kya hai...

the girl: as she wiped her tears..and drank a bit of water..she replied...mera naam chandani khurana hai....

policeman #2: apne apke pati to kyu mara....mujhe puri kahani bataye.....

chandani: meri duniya khushi se phari hui thi....mera ek parivar tha...ek bhai tha, do behane or mujhe buhat pyaar karne wale mama or papa...jime me pyar se ma or pa bulaya kartitey...

flash back 5 years back.....

starts with the sunrising in the morning...mrs.khurana waking up....starting her day with the kitchen....making tea for mr.khurana...so she enters the kitchen and sees chaman sleeping on the kitchen floor..snoring his way about....

devika: chaman...chaman....chaman...

chaman: as he shouts out kya hai kitna accha sapna dekh rata...mere sapno ki rani mujhe mil rahi thi or ab woh sapna tot kaya....eh..yeh kya me yaha kese aya...

devika: yehi to mein tumse pooch yehi who ...tum hai kesi.....zaroor tum phol kaye hunge...chaldi otho or nasta banow...

chaman: nasta kyu....dinner kyu nahi...

devika:chaman....it's morning so breakfast....

so while making tea she shouts out chandani,ishan, otha....subha hogayehai....

ishan twirls in his bed...

ishan: kya yaar...main kitna accha sapna dekh raha tha...oh priyanka....

as he gets of his bed his phone alarm rings..with priyanka's voice saying wake up honey...wake up honey..

ishan: he looks at priyanka's poster and kisses it...i love u...

then devika shouts again....

then the camera moves to another room....blue walls..wind chimes hanging...stuffed animals in th showcase...and they show her sleeping like a princess....

she slowly lifts her blanket and sits upright....devika enters the room and calls her name out....chandani...she turns around....episode ends...

ok guys hope u enjoyed it....if it sounds boring please don't hesistate to tell me...please comment...

lots of luv margi


episode 2.
episode#2...
chandani=chand.

she turns around with a big smile on her face...
devika: chand chaldi freshup hoke neje aoo.....
chand noods and walks away....

meanwhile ishan in his bathroom...shaving....
ishaan: mere sapno ki rani kaab aye gi to.....
at that instant chaman appears from the back and continues...

chaman: mein aye aye.....aja

ishan: chamn tu...mere bathroom me kya kar yaha hai...

chaman: yeh sawal mein ap se bhi phuj sakta hu...ap
mere bathroom mein shave kyu kar rehe hai.....
ishan: oh god not again...mrs.d'souza....

mrs.d'souza: kya hua son...aur chaman tum yahaan kya
kaar rehen ho....jao apna kaam karo kitchen mein...

chaman: jarahon na kyu chila rahi ho....
he leaves the room

downstairs everyone is eating breakfast...and having common family discussions.....

sanjay: devika tum nahi lagta ke ab chand ki shaadi kar deni jahiye....koi accha sa ladka dond ke...

dekika: sayad ap tik kehrahe ho....

chand walks down the stairs approaches the table....greets good morning....

chand: pooja di nahi aye....

devika: woh apne kamremein karahe breakfast....

then ishan comes down.
he picks up a rose from the vase and walks towards his mom...

ishan: wah, kya khubsurat chehra hai....bilkool is phool ke jehsa....
he hands the rose to his mom...and his mom slightly touches his face...

devika: badmash....
the phone rings and chaman picks it up....

chaman: hello.

the person: hello mein khurana se baat kar sakta hoon...chaman...

chaman: unse kyun baat kerne hai...mujhse kyun nehein...

the person: unse kaho kein unke purane dost ka phone hai australia se...

chaman: australia se kyun...india se kyun nahi...
then sanjay gets up and takes the phone....

sanjay: hello kun bul raha hai...

the person: hello..sanjay....mujhe pehjana nahi...itna chaldi phool kaya....

sanjay: boman tum..kaise hoon....
the door bell rings at that time and chand goes to open the door

boman: yaar sab tik hai....maine kuch important baat karne kileye phone kiya tha...mere beta karan waha ana wale hai...

sanjay: that's great but kab....so hum use lene jasake

boman:don't worry about picking him up he will come on his own....woh ab tak waha phoj jana jahiye...

at the door
chand: yes, apko kise milna hai....
karan: wow...how beautiful
chand: excuse me...kitne batamis inse hai....
karan: woh mein..
chand: please mein ap jese ladko ko janti ho...kabhi bhi kahi bhi flirt karne lagte hoon...or ab to hadh hi hogaye ab ghar tak ane lage....
karan: nahi ap mujhe kalat...

before he could finish she slammed the door on his face.

sanjay: kon tha chand...
chand: patanahi da...yeh ladke...
sanjay:ladka...in his mind woh karan to nahi...chand woh karan hoga...boman uncle ka bata...
chand: feeling very embarresed she opens he door...but he is not there....
episode ends...

luv margi


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Posted: 18 years ago
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wonderful job hun, continue soon 😛

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