Tanhai (FF) Short Part p3 - Page 2

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Posted: 17 years ago
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ur doing a fantastic job... plz continue
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Character Intro's:

The Husseins:

zayad: a successful businessman…but unfortunately isn't able to give enough time to his kids..

Nisha: a loving mother…and her first priority are her kids..

azaan: 23 years old, loves to sing…is waiting for the love of his life but until then he flirts around….

aaliya: 21 years old, very sweet…loves her family a lot…

The khans:

amanat: loving father…successful businessman…friend of zayad

maya: loving mother….and loves amanat a lot…

afreen: 22...used to be very bubbly, happy but do to an accident she changed forever….

The Agrewals:

roshan- 22..azaan's best friend…flirty…loves aaliya

Kabir - 22...you will find out more about him later….

Prithivi: 23, is in love with....😃 is an orphan

Edited by Mimi_Rani - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#13
awsomee fic!its going really guud! 😃 👏 👏
cant wait 4 more!
nd imm gunna guess prithivi luvz afreen?? 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
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thanx you guys...😉
Edited by Mimi_Rani - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part 4:

amanat: doctor what should we do…doh saal ho chuke hai…and in these two years..,she's forgotten how to live…
Doctor: im sorry lekin this is beyond my knowledge….she needs unconditional love…all I can say is send her to a mental asyulum or rehab center.
maya: nahin doctor, my daughter will not go anywhere…
amanat: lekin maya…(is cut off)
maya: bas keh diya so keh diya…and walks away

[(SCENE CHANGES)]

afreen: kabir, wapas ah jaho please ek baare, please

[(SCENE CHANGES)]

maya: mujhe patha mujhe kya karna chaaye
amanat: maya tum…
maya: nahin amanat…afreen ko teek karne ka sir ek tareeka hai...aur woh yeh, ki hum afreen ki zindigi mein pyaar wapas leh kar aayein…
amanat: lekin maya…kon badle gah afreen ki zindigi…
maya: hai koi…jise maine apna hamesha samja hai…ek minute main abhi osihe phone lagathi hoon
Person: hello
maya: Hello bheta, main afreen ki ammi bhole rahiye hoon..
Person: aunty, aap…salaam …kaise hai aap?
Maya: waale koom aslaam (sorry guys dont know how to spell) main bilkul teek hoon…she then tells him about afreen's state but not the reason..
Person: ji aunty…toh aap mujhse kya chaate hai…
maya: yehi…ke tum afreen ko phirse jeena Sikh ado
Person: okay aunty…main jaldi wahaan ponche tha hoon…
maya: teek hai bheta…thank you..bye

[(SCENE CHANGES)]

afreen: "I love you kabir"
afreen then grabs a picture of kabir and thinks of her past again, those happy moments. Waqt moved on but left afreen behind.

~ IN THE BACKGROUND ~
Aa Aaa Aaa Aaa Aaa
Aa Aaa Aaa Aaa Aaa
Sajna Aa Bhi Jaa Sajna Aa Bhi Jaa
Sajna Aa Bhi Jaa Sajna Aa Bhi Jaa
Nai Lagda Tere Bina Dil Mera
Hai Nai Lagda Tere Bina Dil Mera
Nai Lagda Tere Bina Dil Mera
Hai Nai Lagda Tere Bina Dil Mera
Sajna Aa Bhi Jaa Sajna Aa Bhi Jaa
Wow O O Wo Ae Ae
Bindiya Mehndi Kangna Chudi Jhumar Gehna
Pyaase Pyaase Naina Sune Padein Tere Bina
Bindiya Mehndi Kangna Chudi Jhumar Gehna
Pyaase Pyaase Naina Sune Padein Tere Bina
Nai Lagda Tere Bina Dil Mera
Hai Nai Lagda Tere Bina Dil Mera
Sajna Aa Bhi Jaa Sajna Aa Bhi Jaa

Palko Pe Khwab Sajana
Aankhiyo Se Neeind Churana
Roothe Piya Ko Haske Mana Na
Palko Pe Khwab Sajana
Aankhiyo Se Neeind Churana
Roothe Piya Ko Haske Mana Na
Yeh Haqeeqat Hai Ya Ke Fasana
Yeh Haqeeqat Hai Ya Ke Fasana
Sajna Aa Bhi Jaa Sajna Aa Bhi Jaa
Sajna Aa Bhi Jaa Sajna Aa Bhi Jaa
Nai Lagda Tere Bina Dil Mera
Hai Nai Lagda Tere Bina Dil Mera
Nai Lagda Tere Bina Dil Mera
Hai Nai Lagda Tere Bina Dil Mera
Sajna Aa Bhi Jaa Sajna Aa Hi Jaa
Sajna Aa Bhi Jaa Sajna Aa Hi Jaa

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ycuRr3k7xb0

preview - cant remember😃

Edited by Mimi_Rani - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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sorry guys, i totally forgot to edit that i had added part 4, dumb me 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awww no comments is it really that bad 😭
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CHAPTER 5:

roshan: mujhe jaana ho ga…
Azaan: lekin kahaa
roshan: afreen ke ghar…
Azaan: dude, nice name is she hot?
roshan: shut up angad, this is serious
Azaan: chill man, just messing
roshan: okay, im going for a couple of months
azaan: WHAT?!?!
roshan: meri choti behen ko meri zaroorat hai
azaan: aur mujhe…
roshan: THIS IS SERIOUS! OSIHE KUCH BHI HO SAKTA HAI..DUDE SHE'S MY LIFE, SHE TAUGHT ME HOW TO LIVE AND NOW SHE NEEDS ME! HER BROTHER!
azaan: shocked at his behavior just walks away fuming
roshan: shit...afreen, main aa rahaa hoon
Prithivi: aareh roshan, azaan ko kya hua
roshan: nothing man
Prithivi: roshan, are you leaving me that too with azaan?!?!
roshan: yes, ia m…she needs me…I have to go..
Prithivi: who needs you!?
roshan: afreen! She's killing herself…
Prithivi: you mean the afreen…
roshan: ha…she keeps living in the past, doctors are saying she might not survive…(cries)
Prithivi: (thinks) oh no, afreen ko kuch nahin ho sakta, kuch bhi nahin…agar osihe…nahin

[(SCENE CHANGES)]

Azaan: afreen...tumhari wajaa se…aaj maine aur afreen ne jaghra kiya…main tumhe nahin chodoonga…


DOES Azaan TAKE REVENGE FROM Afreen FOR HAVING A FIGHT WITH roshan?

Edited by Mimi_Rani - 17 years ago

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