Saaruv Kiss OS - My first attempt

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As I promised to someone on this forum, here is how, according to me, DV and Saachi might share a kiss the first time. Also, as I have maintained, the first kiss will most probably be after DV's parents have agreed to their relationship.

"DV has manaofied his parents for their relationship. They have agreed that Saachi and DV will get married on 1st January, 2014. First day of the year will also be the beginning of a new chapter in DV and Saachi's life. So, as Aajji had promised, she allows DV to take Saachi on an official date. DV decides to take her on a date on 25th December and he also plans a surprise for Saachi. As we know, Panchgani is a beautiful hill station, DV has purchased a wood cottage on the banks of a small stream in the foothills of the mountains. So, on the 25th, DV takes Saachi on an official date after promising Aajji and Naani that they will be back before 12 in the night. First DV and Saachi go for a long ride in Sher Singh...and DV purposefully takes the vehicle towards this wood cottage. After reaching near the cottage, DV stops the vehicle and tells Saachi that he needs a break as he has been driving for such a long time. DV and Saachi then start eating the yummy aaloo parathas that Naani had packed for them. Saachi then sees the cottage and tells that it is so beautiful and the place is so mesmerizing. DV tells Saachi that lets go and check out the cottage (DV has already made prior arrangements for a bonfire and also got all items to run a household arranged). As DV and Saachi approach the cottage, DV makes an excuse that he forgot his jacket and tells Saachi to wait for a few minutes while he goes and fetches it. Its dat time of the evening when the sun is setting and its dying light make the water in the stream glow with a hue of its own, the rays of the sun kiss the droplets of water and turn them into small diamonds, the wind blowing through the leaves and creating a tune of its own...Saachi is lost in all dis and when she suddenly realizes that it has been sometime and DV has not returned, she looks back but DV is nowhere to be seen. Saachi gets tensed and starts looking here and there for DV...she tries calling DV but his phone is not reachable. Saachi is really tensed bcz DV has the keys for Sher Singh. Saachi starts walking towards the vehicle and decides to call Naani to get a vehicle arranged and at that time DV comes and holds her from behind and then tells that I know you were mesmerized by the charm of the place, your eyes are telling me that, the faint lines of smile on your face are telling me that...so, my darling, I decided that we will spend our lives, knowing the answer to why I love you so much, here and hands over the keys to the cottage to her. 😊

Saachi is shocked and DV kisses her on the cheek and on the nape of her neck but Saachi breaks away from DV's hug and runs to the cottage. She opens the cottage and is even more amazed when she finds that every item of house hold is neatly and properly arranged in the cottage. DV comes up behind her and says that, here, we will get privacy, you will still be able to drive to work and also visit Naani and Aajji whenever you want and also do "thoda yeh" and "thoda woh" without the fear of anyone disturbing us. Saachi feels shy and blushes and DV moves closer to her and they embrace each other passionately. Then, they break away from each other and Saachi says that she will prepare coffee for them and DV says that he will get the bonfire started. DV finishes lighting up the bonfire and at that moment Saachi comes with two mugs of hot coffee and a blanket as the weather is cold. Saachi sits next to DV and DV wraps the blanket around them and wraps his left arm around Saachi's waist. Saachi places her head on DV's shoulder and then DV says, watch the last rays of the sun kiss the water droplets and turn them into small sparkling diamonds, watch the last rays and feel the warm glow of the fire spread warmth through you as they create an atmosphere of light and yet no light (roshani ho par ujaala na ho), listen to the sound of water gushing down the mountain and the wind rushing through the leaves (dhun ho par awaaz na ho) and Saachi is completely floored. They stare at each other for a long time and then DV kisses her on her forehead, then both her eyes, then her ears, then on her cheeks, on her nose, then on her Adam's Apple, chin and finally, when Saachi is prepared they smooch passionately." 😳 ☺️(And the show ends with the precap showing Saachi blushing and looking at DV with a sly smile on her face and her face glowing in the light from the fire)

Note; Brick bats are most welcome. I am writing a piece after a gap of almost 3 years and that too bcz someone made me promise that I will write, so, I know dat it's not good. But, trust me, I have made a sincere attempt. Please do let me know how you all feel. Your feedback will be much appreciated whether good or bad. Bad feedback will tell me where I am lacking and good will encourage me.