Bigg Boss 19: Daily Discussion Thread - 24th Sep '25
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TRAUMA KAHA 🤧24. 9
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Abhira is most pathetic character in gen4
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Part two : Too far yet too close
scene:1, saachi's room:
"Taai chaliye na. Sab log jaa rahe hai duwa maangne.."
Addu requested her.
"Mujhe kahi nahi jaana.." came Saachi's reply.
Nani, Aaji entered her room and were moved to see Saachi in such a mess. Her hair was untidy, her clothes thrown haphazardly across the room, her food untouched.
"Jaake aa na Puttar! Har saal tho jaati hai tu Peer Baba k dar par.."
Nani's voice was laced with concern.
"Kahi nahi Jaana hai mujhe.." Saachi's reply was much firm.
"Jaake aa na baraa.." Aaji came and sat beside her, touching her head lovingly.
Her touch untied days of anguish and pain she had been supressing that she broke into tears.
"I'm sorry. Aaji.. Main mujhe maaf kardo. Aaji, Naani aap k siva mere koi nahi hai. Aap mere sab kuch hai. Agar aap naraz rahenge mujhse tho.. main seh nahi sakti please. Mujhse bohot badi Galati hogai. mujhe maaf kardo.."
Aaji was at loss of words but Nani spoke for her.
"pyar karna koi guna nahi hai puttar. Par hume tho bataana chahiye tha tumhe.. iss tarah Ulka k muu se sunke bohot bura laga.. hum tho chahte hi the ki koi aisa tumhare zindgi mein aaye jo tujhe khush rakhein. Par DV? DV baccha hai puttar.. aur tu bhi bacchii ki tarah.." Naani spoke finally breaking her silence on the issue.
Ever since the news of DV-Sachi's relation reached them both Aaji, Nani started avoiding Sachi despite her efforts to apologise.
"Khair.. Ab jo hua usse badal nahi sakte. Tho usse bhool jaana hi thik hai..."
Dilz arrived just then; followed by Ulka kaku.
"Woh main Saachi ko dekhne aayi thi. Hum peer baba k yaha se aa rahe hai. Saachi tum gayi nahi?" Dilz asked.
"Nahi mera mann nahi hai Dilz. Mujhe akela chod do please." Saachi was quiet.
It was Aaji's turn to break the silence.
"Bara.. jo hua usse bhool jao. Aur Addu k saat darga jao. Sab thik hojayega..."
"Chalo shukar manao ki yeh sab char diwaron k beech hua. Agar kisi ne undono ko waise dekhte jaise maine.." Ulka's words stung like thorns.
Aaji cut her off swiftly.
"Bas karo Ulka. Hum Sachi ko sambhal sakte hai. Aur hume pura yakin hai ki humari bacchii aisi koi kaam nahi karegi jisse hume sharminda hona pade.."
Saachi wiped her tears and hugged Aaji.
"I'm sorry Aaji. Ab se main aapko bina bataaye, koi kaam nahi karungi. I promise. Ab waisa hi hoga jaise aap chahti hai..."
"Bas bas puttar. Aur aasu mat bahaao. Ab aur mafi mat mango. Humne tumhe kab ka maaf kardiya.. Ab jaldi se tayyar hojao aur Addu ko leke jao. Sab thik hojayega." Nani and Aaji together consoled her.
Dilshaad gave her a hug n left with Ulka.
Scene: 2: Peer Baba's Darga:
Ishq woh bala hai
Ishq woh bala hai
Jisko chhuaa isne woh jala hai
Dil se hota hai shuru
Dil se hota hai shuru
Par kambakht sar pe chadha hai
Kabhi khud se, kabhi khuda se
Kabhi zamaane se lada hai
Itna hua badnaam phir bhi
Har zubaan pe ada hai
DV, Saachi both entered the darga and background music starts. they crossed their paths and the song goes on.
Ishq ki.. saazishein
Ishq ki.. baaziyaan
Haara main khel ke
Do dilon ka juaa
DV was sad and looked lost.
Saachi ties the holy thread (sorry dunno what they call it) and was about to walk off when Addu stopped her. Unknown to both of them DV was watching from a few feet away.
"yeh kya Taai. Aapne dhaga thik se nahi bandha.. waise kya dua maanga hai aapne?"
"kuch nahi. Aur waise bhi maangi hui duwa k bare mein kisi ko nahi bataate.. ab chalo.."
"offo Taai, aap har saal bataati hai. Tho iss saal bhi bataana hoga. Kya maanga aapne?"
"aur kya maang sakti hu. Bas yahi ki meri zindgi se saari pareshaniyan duur hojaye aur main DV ko jaldi bhool-"
"KYA? Yeh kya maangliya aapne Taai? Aur aap tho jaanti hai na ki wohi duwa qubool hoti hai jo pure dil se maangi jaye. Mujhe nahi lagta ki aapne yeh duwa pure dil se mangi hai.. tabhi tho properly nahi baandha.."
"What rubbish.."
Saachi got irritated and began to walk only to bump into DV.
Addu followed her shouting, "come on Taai I know you love him! DV tum yaha?"
Sachi gave him a sad look, then an angry one and walked out.
DV shook his head questioning himself as to why he was here. Sure he was here on Dilshaad's insistence, to pray for himself. But what would he ask?
Saari duniya se jeet ke main aaya hoon idhar
Tere aage hi main haara kiya tune kya asar
He wanted nothing more than to get back Saachi in his life forever. But could he be that selfish, thinking about his happiness? It hurt him that he was letting go of his love; doing something for the first time against his heart. Addu noticed that he was in immense pain. Before he could ask him something, DV jumped to catch the thread that Saachi had tied before it could hit the floors of the darga.
Caressing it in his hands, DV closed his eyes praying silently, the thread still in his hand.
"Kya duwa maanga tumne DV?" Addu asked him, unable to find right words to speak.
"apne liye duwa maangna maine kab ka chod diya hai Addu.." his voice was rough, laced with pain which could surface at any moment.
Meanwhile Saachi came back to take Addu along.
"dekha Taai aapne dhaga thik se bandha nahi woh neeche gir gaya. ab aapki duwa kaise qubool hogi? Accha hua girgaya, I mean DV chota hai tho kya hua.. aap dono tho-"
"bas Advait! Bacche ho tho bacche ki tarah baat karo.. samjhe? Ab chalo..."
It was the first time she called Addu by his full name. Glaring at him, She pulled him roughly by his hand and began walking off. DV retied the thread, finished praying and rushed out remind her something.
"Maine aapka dhaga fir se baandh liya hai. Aur duwa bhi maanga ki aapki sari duwayein qubool hojaye..."
Main dil ka raaz kehta hoon
Ke jab jab saansein leta hoon
Tera hi naam leta hoon
Ye tune kya kiya
Saachi ignored him again and rushed to sit in her jeep.
"Taai, bas ek baat kehna tha aapse.. I know main chota hu. But mujhe lagta hai aap bohot galat kar rahi hai. DV ne apne liye nahi aap k liye duwa maanga. You know what it means Taai? DV se zyada pyar aapse koi karpayega. I hope aap ek saat hojao.. humesha k liye.."
Hot tears streamed down her eyes and she silently cursed herself for hurting DV so much. But did he know how much it hurt her to ignore him this way?
"Taai.. maine kuch galat kaha kya?" Addu asked innocently.
Saachi shook her head and they drove back home.
Scene: 3: two days later
Things were turning out to be normal at Prabhu Nivas. Aaji, Nani were delighted to hear from Rajiv, Saachi's childhood friend.
"Saachi puttar! Teri saari duwayein qubool hogai. Upar wale ne tujhe rasta dikhaaya. Woh Rajiv yaad hai? Jo bachpan se tera deewana hai? Usne phone kiya! Usski tho abhi tak byah nahi hua.. aur woh tum se milna chahta hai. Haye rabba! Main bohot khush hu..."
Saachi gave a fake smile to Aaji and Nani as they finished dinner. Rajiv wanted to meet her? But why? All these years he was still in love with her? She remembered how Rajiv used to playfully tell her aayi baba that he'd marry her when he grew up and smiled at those memories. He was six when he said that. Now he might be around 35. How could he marry her now? That was just a childish act, she thought. Rajiv was her best friend besides Dilz and it would be nice to have him by her side.
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That night DV had made up his mind. He was prepared to make his move. He needed to make her believe he did not love her; that was the only way she would move on in life.
He took Dilz and went to talk to Aaji & Nani who were shocked to see him.
"ghabraayiye mat.. main aapko pareshaan karne nahi aaya hu."
He was thankful they dint shut the door on his face. He went on.
"Aaji.. Naani Ji. I'm sorry. Meri waje se aapko aur Saachi ji ko bohot taqleef hua. Main aapko yakin k saat keh sakta hu ki uss din kitchen mei humne aisa kuch bhi nahi kiya jisse aapko sharminda hona pade. Main bas Saachi ji se kuch personal batein kar raha tha, aur Ulka kaku ne hume dekhliya. Aap jaanti hai na woh baat ka kitna bada bakhera banaati hai..."
Aaji Naani couldn't help but listen to his words which were full of honesty.
DV went on.
"Main behak gaya tha. Dosti aur pyar ka fark nahi dekhpaya. Saachi ji ne humesha mujhe apna dost maana. Aur woh ithni acchi thi, sab ka ithna khayal rakhti thi, mujhe ithni acchi lagi ki main unkeliye ladka dhundne k alwa, khud ko unkeliye imagine karne laga. Ab main sochta hu ki woh tho pyar hi nahi tha. I didn't love her! It was more of an attraction. I was attracted to her angel like qualities, sochne laga meri wife ko bhi aisa hona chahiye. Bas aur kuch nahi socha.. mehsus hi nahi kiya ki woh sirf attraction tha. Aaj woh acchi lagi kal ko koi aur acchi lagegi. Har kisi se shaadi tho nahi kar sakte na.. I know stupid lagta hai ab. I was a stupid. Jo bhi hua uss mei meri hi Galati thi.. aur aap tho jaanti hai, saachi ji kabhi galat ho hi nahi sakti. Uss din bhi main hi unhe force kar raha tha baat karne k liye.."
DV finished biting back his tears. He looked around wanting to see Saachi but she was gone. Little did he know she ran at the moment he said attraction.
Saachi's room:
She was crying unable to digest what she heard.
I didn't love her! It was more of an attraction.
Aaj woh acchi lagi kal ko koi aur acchi lagegi.
How could DV do that! Did this mean all his sweet words, his promises, that ring he gave her mean nothing? She was nothing but a crush; a toy to play with? With each passing second, her heart broke into more number of pieces. It hurt so much.
Back in the hall:
DV touched Aaji, Nani's feet. Aaji just patted him on the shoulder and walked away while Nani lifted him up.
"Main Mumbai wapis jaana chahta tha. Lekin.. aise nahi. Saachi ji ke life settle hone k baad hi jaunga. Unki shaadi karaake hi jaunga. I promise my zohra and jabi.. apni Galati ko sudharunga main. Aap log ek mauka doge na? please?"
Nani pulled him into a hug and he cried letting those tears fall that he had been holding back.
"Bas bas! Arey mard hoke rothe ho? Huh? galati sab se hoti hai, usse sudharne ki koshish acche log hi karsakte hai. Arey mere shehzade, accha hua tumne sach ko samja.. tujhe Saachi nahi mili tho kya hua. Usse aur bhi acchi aur jawan ladkia milegi dekhna.."
"jee.. main.. chalta hu.."
DV escaped quickly from there.
Scene: 4: the same night, DV's room.
"thanks Dilz.. tum saat nahi khadi hoti tho main toot jaata.."
"jhoot kisse bol rahe ho DV? Tum puri tarah se toot chuke ho.. kyu kar rahe ho DV? Kyu aisa kar rahe ho? Kya tum Saachi se pyar nahi karte? Kya woh sach mei ek Mazak tha, kyu tumne.. apni mohobbat ko is tarah"
"Mardiya apni mohobbat ko maine.." He looked away from her, with tears in his eyes.
"DV.. DV look at me! Aise nahi ho tum DV! Tum woh DV ho jisse kuch bhi mil sakta hai.. kaha gaya woh DV! Kaha gaya uska confidence!"
"DV usee waqt margaya jab usne pane pyar ko maardiya hai Dilz! Ab sirf Dhruv hai, woh Dhruv jisne kabhi apne dost ko khoya tha.. jaanti ho Dilz. Dhruv se main DV tho bangaya, par meri kismet nahi badla. Aaj maine Saachi ji ko bho kho diya.."
He was facing the window silently crying at his loss. Before Dilz could respond, someone barged inside. Dilz assumed it was Ulka kaku but it was.. Saachi.
"DV.. DV dekho kaun aayi hai?"
DV turned around brushing his tears and was shocked to find Saachi who was super angry.
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Next part: Saruv's face off. Rajeev arrives in the city. Hope u liked this one. I personally wanted a darga scene in the show. This part was a bit filmy, slightly resembling some typical darga scenes. That resemblance is completely unintentional n random.
how was it? I know a bit lame.. but then do lemme know what u think.😛
Originally posted by: tinatartari
besutiful..it ws just 2 beautiful
i really loved it..superb...the dargah scene ws fab nd the end wen saachi overheard it all just stole my heart away..thnks 4 updating..hoping the next update is coming soon
Originally posted by: tinatartari
its nt lame nd the way u shaped up tat dv z tryng 2 make her realize she ws a mere attraction so she cn move on ws superb...
nd the face off...yay!!i really love face offs...it d b a treat 2 read the face off..
Ohhh wowww...well I hope SARUV end up teogetehr...
Originally posted by: vinee_vinee
PV it was nothing short of amazing...I was imagining the scenes while reading it and trust me the dialogues you have given them are actually what they would be given enacting this scene...DV to mujhe har jagah impress kar deta hai...is SS mein bhi kar gaya...
your story is too good...I hope they take this forward in the serial tooo...I am so happy that you wrote and more happy how you wrote...coz every line carried meaning. So yes...not may be not perhaps but definately...I love your SS
Originally posted by: tinatartari
awesome...
i loved the way u write bt plx dnt strangle me if i dnt come up wid the update z smthng i cant do!!sorry bout tat...u ll hv 2 update on time nd i thnk tat wont b 2 hard as its an ss so u dnt need 2 make so much topics nd u cn update regularly...plx pm me wen u update so i cn read it on time nd cmnt 2..otherwise its difficult 2 find the post u knw...plx dnt mind...
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