Confession ke baad.FF on saruv updated last part on page 1 - Page 6

Originally posted by: ..lovepeace..

Wow...very nicely written👏...loved it.😊

Originally posted by: divi2013

So wonderfully written...

Hey vinnie just caught up your last few updates... I must say your words were flowing... you should take this talent of urs more seriously... and Loved that u made her dreaming the reality and DV how sweet and mature he can get? loved the updates

Originally posted by: preity_d

Hey vinnie just caught up your last few updates... I must say your words were flowing... you should take this talent of urs more seriously... and Loved that u made her dreaming the reality and DV how sweet and mature he can get? loved the updates

one suggestion... try to update in new page. u will get more likes and pages will increase and forum rank will also increase. and I was having problems while scrolling down... this problem will also get solved...

jus read the whole first part.. its long detailed n amazing!! Awesome yar.. I feel like I'm watching the show ; amazingly written..👏👏👏
Awesome work.. will read the rest soon❤️

edit: Puura padh liya.. it took me a while to understand u posted everything in ur first part! Fabulous! the way u have written the dialogues, portrayed emotions was amazing..👏👏 Lovely work again👏❤️

Originally posted by: Priyamvada

jus read the whole first part.. its long detailed n amazing!! Awesome yar.. I feel like I'm watching the show ; amazingly written..👏👏👏
Awesome work.. will read the rest soon❤️

Originally posted by: vinee_vinee

Firstly a big thanks for your sweet words...quiet an encouragement must say.

and secondly your suggestion is most welcome...since its my first FF i am not so aware of these nuances...will implement this suggestion for sure...

Loved your comment.

anytime and do read mine too 😉 for more of my works u can go here https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/77598515 give them a look when u have enough time 😉😆😆

Originally posted by: preity_d

anytime and do read mine too 😉 for more of my works u can go here https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/77598515 give them a look when u have enough time 😉😆😆

Thnks a lot vinee 4 fulfilling my wish..love u..it ws sosweet of u...
loved the beautiful end of scene 15..I must say it ws superb..the feelings sanchi felt made me shiver..nd I ws feeling the same..
hats off..
hope u update soon wenevr u r free..I knw u wud b busy 2 nd its nt nice 2 ask 4 it again n again bt ur writing z so irresistable...

Originally posted by: tinatartari

Thnks a lot vinee 4 fulfilling my wish..love u..it ws sosweet of u...
loved the beautiful end of scene 15..I must say it ws superb..the feelings sanchi felt made me shiver..nd I ws feeling the same..
hats off..
hope u update soon wenevr u r free..I knw u wud b busy 2 nd its nt nice 2 ask 4 it again n again bt ur writing z so irresistable...