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vinee_vinee

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Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: chweetu
Nyc 1...liked it..😊

Thanks

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vinee_vinee

@vinee_vinee

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#22

i have updated it more...please read and comment how it can be improved

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Ana

@..oneOone..

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#23

superb writing yaar...
loved it so much...
DV n sanchi love is surly so mesmerizing n above that ur lines...
i trully loved this story...cont soonn...

ana

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mila112

@mila112

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#24

Nice one, I would not be really surprised if he is the first one to tell them.😊

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Koms9

@Koms9

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Perfect, it's as if written by original story writer of khdjlz, lovely

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vinee_vinee

@vinee_vinee

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: ..oneOone..
superb writing yaar...
loved it so much...
DV n sanchi love is surly so mesmerizing n above that ur lines...
i trully loved this story...cont soonn...

ana

thanks dear...i would be more inclined to now see Saanchi's intensity as we have not seen that much yet.

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vinee_vinee

@vinee_vinee

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: desigabru
Perfect, it's as if written by original story writer of khdjlz, lovely

Thank you so much...but please give your ideas as to how it should progress

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tina tartari

@tinatartari

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#28

Awesome update...loved it...
thnks 4 the pm..
yeh dhruv na mera b dil le gya...hayye dhruv...
plx continue nd nxt tym b plx pm kerdena update ker k...
thnks nd its superb vinee

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vinee_vinee

@vinee_vinee

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: tinatartari
Awesome update...loved it...
thnks 4 the pm..
yeh dhruv na mera b dil le gya...hayye dhruv...
plx continue nd nxt tym b plx pm kerdena update ker k...
thnks nd its superb vinee

Promise to pm you...and thanks for liking the update.