Confession ke baad.FF on saruv updated last part on page 1

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vinee_vinee

@vinee_vinee

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: tinatartari
Awesome vinee...loved it..
all the scene ws running b4 my eyes nd hw ruslaan ll perform 2 it if he has 2?
Plx continue wid aaji s reaction nd then addu nd prachi...
nd plx pm me ur update...plx plx...
its superb

sure dear.. i will update more with all of yours imputs

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vinee_vinee

@vinee_vinee

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: ak75
Very nice Vinee. I expect something like this to happen. Unless a new proposal comes Saruv romance will be a secret.

i too want it to be a secret atleast for sometime and we enjoy the rain of love like our saruv

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vinee_vinee

@vinee_vinee

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: sanaya4all
really nice. I hope CVs will show such kind of emotional breakdown of saanchi coz it will suit perfectly with the title JEE LA ZARA

they have already shown it when she had gone wit dils to identify the body in the hospital...she is more passionate than dhruv

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prodipto18

@prodipto18

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

wel i loved the last few lines

dhruv and saachi

ab toh aap aur saacchi ji ka the end hona hi chahiye

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vinee_vinee

@vinee_vinee

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: prodipto18
wel i loved the last few lines
dhruv and saachi
ab toh aap aur saacchi ji ka the end hona hi chahiye

DV se Dhruv better lagta haina sunne mein.

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hemakalai

@hemakalai

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Hi vinee its really nice yaar I could visualise the scene yaar, and pls write in english ma iam tamil like me everybody should understand the concept naa dont mistake me if u can u r8 otherwise dont anyway thank u for this , thisone make me to feel as I was watching the episode in the boring weekend

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vinee_vinee

@vinee_vinee

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: vinaya123
Hi vinee its really nice yaar I could visualise the scene yaar, and pls write in english ma iam tamil like me everybody should understand the concept naa dont mistake me if u can u r8 otherwise dont anyway thank u for this , thisone make me to feel as I was watching the episode in the boring weekend

I started to write in English but then changed it to hindi coz this serial is in hindi and while writing I could visualise in hindi more I.e the language in which I hear these actors speak...I have used English to explain the scenes in between. I will try to rewrite it in English or maybe create another ff in English...thanks for your suggestion.

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tina tartari

@tinatartari

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Wow..u turned it 2 ff...yay..
awesome update tat u madeaftr I had read the previous 1..lovex the last dhruv saanchi part
Plx continue soon nd plx pm..plx pm dude

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vinee_vinee

@vinee_vinee

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: tinatartari
Wow..u turned it 2 ff...yay..
awesome update tat u madeaftr I had read the previous 1..lovex the last dhruv saanchi part
Plx continue soon nd plx pm..plx pm dude

i have updated only a bit more...will pm you once there is a substantial update