my 1st saruv os:feeling 4 u

4hi all saruvians!I m tina..
I wanted 2 c sme saruv os or ff here on this forum bt aftr finding none, I cudnt stop myself 4m writing 1..I dnt knw whethr am a gud writer or nt bt I hope this wud act as a foundation nd ll enciurage more writers 2 write on saruv..
this isnt smthng tat i made myself..just describing a scene in my own wrds in my way tat happened in the serial so tat gud writers come up nd produce sme wrks lots better than mine...its just 2 make a beginning nd others wud folow..cx right nw i cnt thnk of any idea owing 2 my exams...4 the os move directly 2 the next post...
enjoy reading :)

He ws burning wid fever..last night he kept standing in the rain 4 more than an hour nd they aftr he managed 2 jump in, he kept helping her till morning;all drenched wet nd widout sleep..he did all tat 4 her happines, yes he ws in love wid her, a lady 7 yrs older than him..he even confessed 2 her bt shhe took his confesion as a joke nd never took him srsly..she believed its his crush nd he wud soon b over wid it nd he z 2 immature 2 b in a relationship right nw...bt he ws adamant 2 prove this love, his passion 4 her z much more than a crush..
dilz came many a times 2 ask him 2 take meds nd eat smthng bt he ws adamant nt 2 take anythng till she, his sanchi came nd feed him wid her own hands..dilz told him tat its nthng more than his mere foolishness nd tat she wont come bt he has a hope, a faith in his true love tat she cares nd she ll come...
darknes ws setting in..his fever ws rising nd he ws getting into subconciousness...bt his hopes were still on the peak...
then his conciousness started dropping..nd he saw her entering..wid closing eyes he saw her putting her hands on his forehead 2 check his temperature nd ...dark...
he woke up nd opened his eyes 2 c her putting wet cloth over his forehead nd her tears wetting his face..he ws touched...
dark again...
he heard in his semiconcious state..
Plx wake up dv..I m sorry..its all my fault..I shudnt hav made u stay in the rain outside..I shud hv calld u in...plx come bck dv... this made him happy tat she cares 4 her...dark again
2 b contdd...my creativity ll come later..hope u bear wid me...