Bidaai - Part 1 - Pg 2 (06-12-08)

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Sapna Babul Ka….Bidaai

Guys…. I have read many fan-fictions on Michi so I have decided to write one with two of my favourite show together meaning Kaymath and Bidaai… I hope you guys like it! And also I am not going to continue Kkoi Dil Mein Hai anymore because; I just want to focus on this fan-fic…

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Character Sketch

Mishra Family



Milind Mishra - Head of the family; loves his wife Prachi a-lot and his two daughters Sadhna and Kaajal (who he loves a-lot and can not see tears in their eyes).


Prachi Milind Mishra - Married to Milind and loves her family a-lot even her daughter Sadhna and Kaajal (who are her strength and weakness after Milind).


Sadhna Mishra - Eldest daughter of Milind and Prachi Mishra; loves her family a-lot and her sister Kaajal, (who is studying in London) while she is completing her education in India because she didn't want to leave her parents so she didn't except her scholarship to London. One more thing you need to know about Sadhna and that is… Sadhna is her mother's parchhain in many ways - like being a, scarifies queen.


Kaajal Mishra Youngest daughter of Milind and Prachi Mishra; and loves her family a-lot meaning her mother and father and her sister Sadhna (who is always there for her).

Shergil Family


Neev Shergil - was married to Ayesha, but now he is married to Bani (his love of his life after Prachi) and loves his wife a-lot, but after her death; Ayesha came back in his life and promise to take care of his sons Alekh and Ranvir. Neev didn't have a choice and married her again…


Bani Shergil - Neev's second wife; mother of his sons Alekh and Ranvir, but died in a terrible accident.


Ayesha Shergil - was married to Neev than left his life because she loved Milind a-lot but realizes that he loves Prachi so she moved out of his life but promised to return back to take her revenge from Prachi (her stepsister). So the only way to keep a eye on Prachi she married Neev again and promise to take care of his sons Alekh and Ranvir, (who are the biggest kaanta in her life and she is responsible for Alekh's condition) anyways Ayesha still wants to take her revenge from Prachi so she pretends to be nice to her so she can keep a eye on them (meaning Milind and Prachi) anyways she loves her son Naveen a-lot and can do anything for his future even if she had to kill Alekh or Ranvir to get her son's right in Shergil family's property.


Alekh Shergil - Eldest son of Neev and Bani, but raised, by Ayesha; and also Alekh's character is similar to his character on Bidaai (if anyone watched Bidaai than they might know what I mean) Alekh isn't like normal people, but a special person, who is loved by his father and his Choti-Maa (meaning Bani's mother).


Ranvir Shergil - Youngest son of Neev and Bani, but raised, by Ayesha; and loves his father a-lot but mostly stays in London with his best friend Monty and hardly comes to India and if he does, he stays at Mishra house than his own house because he hates his stepmother Ayesha a-lot for taking his mother's place in his father's life.

Naveen Raichand - Only son of Ayesha and Vijay Raichand, but raised by Neev and considers him his father and hates his real father. Anyways he is like his mother, who always learned to steal his right from anyone even from Alekh his stepbrother, who he hates, but loves Sadhna a-lot.

Other Characters


Rithwick Shah or Shergil - Only son of Alaap and Sukriti…

Sagar Shah or Shergil - Only son of Saket and Sukriti, but raised by Alaap


Krishnatulsi - She is Sadhna's best friend….

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I hoped you guys will like it and I only need three replies to continue and also please forgive me 😭 if I upset anyone over here but I want to try something different...

Kaajal






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Posted: 17 years ago
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awwww I love and watch that show as well thank u👏and I'm sure that I'm going to love this FF of urs thanks😃 😃
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i think this story will rock!! 😃 aaawww milind and prachi have two daughters!!how cute! 😊 i want them to have sons too!do u think u can put that in the story too kajal or have u already decided the plot?
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awww , sounds very interesting. Please continue soon 😃 😃 😃
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Wow sounds really interesting cant wait for part 1 plz update soon!


-Shriya
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Originally posted by: wande

awwww I love and watch that show as well thank u👏and I'm sure that I'm going to love this FF of urs thanks😃 😃



Thanks...a-lot! You don't know how much it means to me...

Kaajal
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Originally posted by: tofeeees

i think this story will rock!! 😃 aaawww milind and prachi have two daughters!!how cute! 😊 i want them to have sons too!do u think u can put that in the story too kajal or have u already decided the plot?



Thanks...a-lot! You don't know how much it means to me... well...I don't know about Michi having a son, but Rithwick is like their son....

Kaajal

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Originally posted by: ambul30

awww , sounds very interesting. Please continue soon 😃 😃 😃



Thanks...a-lot! You don't know how much it means to me...

Kaajal
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Originally posted by: sweet_JAY_FAN

Wow sounds really interesting cant wait for part 1 plz update soon!


-Shriya



Thanks...a-lot! You don't know how much it means to me...

Kaajal
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Sapna Babul Ka….Bidaai

Part One - Sadhna is born in India and also Alekh is born in America

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Middle of the night, Prachi gets admitted to the hospital; same time Bani was also admitted in the hospital in America.

Sixty minutes later, Prachi gives birth to a baby girl and Bani gives birth to a baby boy.

Neev was so happy holding his son and Milind was also happy in holding his daughter that he gave Prachi a kiss on her forehead saying "thank you, for completing our family"

Prachi just lets out a smile while Milind hugs his daughter than leaves her beside Prachi and goes to deliver the news to his family and Prachi's family.

Milind calls his family and tells them that Prachi gave birth to a baby girl few minute along…

Milind's father was so happy even Prachi's entire family and told him to take care of Prachi and the new born…

Afterwards Milind hangs up the phone; Neev calls and inform Prachi's mother that Bani gave birth to a baby boy few minute along. Premlata was so happy that she keeps a small puja for Bani's child and Prachi's child.

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Three weeks later, Prachi comes home with her daughter and they named her Sadhna… Neev also named his son Alekh and both kids are lucky for their parents.

Five months later, Sadhna started learning how to crawl and talk a-little…. Each day Milind time would pass when he see's his daughter's face and how she is trying to say a word…

"Milind, I bet you that Sadhna will say mother first than father" said by Prachi, who was putting Sadhna's clothes in Milind's cupboard

Milind: how can you be sure? What if she says Papa first than Ma?

Prachi: she won't
She will say Ma first than Papa

Milind: she will say Papa first

Prachi: no she will say Ma first than Papa

Milind: no she will say Papa fist

Prachi: she will say Ma first

Both Milind and Prachi are arguing in what will Sadhna say first, but Sadhna said "Michi" instead of Mummy and Papa….

Both Milind and Prachi stop arguing and picked up Sadhna and said "Michi" and Prachi said "what does Michi mean?"

Milind looked at Sadhna than gave Prachi a kiss on her forehead and said "Michi means Milind and Prachi & from know on Sadhna will call us Michi instead of Mummy and Papa"

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~ Scene Shifts to Alaap in Sukriti's room playing with his son and Saket's son ~

Rithwick was playing with his toys when Alaap came into Sukriti's room with whole bunch of toys for Rithwick and Sagar, (who is Saket and Sukriti's son, who considers Alaap his father because when he was born his real father wasn't beside him only Alaap was….even Sukriti is starting to get depended on Alaap after her marriage broke with Saket).

Rithwick grabbed all the toys from Alaap and said "thank you, Papa" and runs out of the room saying "you are the worlds best Papa"

Alaap smiled than picked up Sagar in his arm saying "no matter what's the truth you're my son" and gives him a kiss on his forehead when Sukriti comes in with glass of milk for Sagar and Rithwick, but Rithwick wasn't in the room. Sukriti gave a smile to Alaap than takes Sagar in her arms and says "thanks Alaap for everything and I never knew that you would change so much"

Alaap: you're the one, who changed me and taught me the true meaning of responsibilities

Sukriti just smiled at Alaap than she leaves with Sagar while Alaap stays behind saying "everything is going according to my plans" and gives out a wicked smile

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~ This scene with shift back and fourth to Alekh's first birthday and Sadhna's first birthday ~

Finally the day came when Sadhna turned 1 and also Alekh turned 1; both families are celebrating their kids' first birthday in a hotel (Sadhna's birthday party is in her father's hotel and Alekh's in Raichand's hotel)

"Milind, don't worry everything will go fine?" Said by his sister, who was hold Sagar in her arm

Milind: I am not worried but I'm scared if anything will go wrong in my daughter's first birthday after-all whenever we get any khushi (meaning happiness) it brings gam (meaning sad) along with it…

Sukriti: Bhaiyya forget the past…and look at your future with Prachi and baby Sadhna, who is prateek of your guys relationship and no third person can come between you guys.

Milind hugged his sister when little Sadhna pulls on her father's pant; Milind lets go of Sukriti than picks up Sadhna is his arms saying "you are the ghar ki lakshmi" and gives her a kiss afterwards Prachi takes Sadhna so she can get her ready while Neev was playing with his son Alekh.

"Bani, hurry up we are getting late for our son's first birthday in St. Peter's hotel" Said by Neev, who was busy getting his son ready

Bani: Just two minutes

Neev: Alright and when you come bring Alehk's dipper bag from the room in-case we will needed at the party

Bani: Anything else

Neev: No

Mishra Family and Shah Family arrive at Green-view Hotel; were Sadhna's first birthday is kept.

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Prachi couldn't believe that her daughter is turning one and a year pass even Milind couldn't believe that his daughter is one now.

Suddenly lights go off….and a young boy dance on a song from Kisna while another small girl dance on the same tune and her name is Krishnatulsi.

Neev was walking with his family when he bumps into the owner of St. Peter's Hotel.

"Mr. Raichand, I'm extremely sorry" Said by Neev

Mr. Raichand: It's okay and please call, me Vijay instead of Mr. Raichand

Neev: Nice to meet you Mr. Raichand…I mean Vijay (Neev shakes his hand)

Vijay: What a lovely family you got? (Touches Alekh on his forehead)

Neev: Thank you, Vijay

Vijay: Aren't you going to introduce your family to me?

Neev takes his son in his arm and says "this is my son Alekh" and puts his arm round Bani and says "this is my wife Bani"

Vijay: Nice to meet you….Mrs. Neev Shergil

Bani: Nice to meet you

All of a sudden Alekh start crying so Bani takes him out in the garden while Neev talked with Mr. Raichand….

"Ladies and Gentlemen;

Thank you, for coming to my daughter's first birthday so please join my family and Shah family to cut my daughter's birthday cake" Said by Milind

Everyone gathered around Neev, Bani and Baby Alekh & sang his birthday song after Neev blew the candles for his son, who tried many times….

Happy Birthday to you!
Happy Birthday to you!
Happy Birthday dear Sadhna
Happy Birthday to you

Prachi blows the candles….when a figure stood out in the dark saying "Prachi Shah, this isn't the beginning of your happiness, but this is the end of your happiness and I promise that I will come back one day to take my Milind back from you…."

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So guys...tell me how was the first part... Also I need two or more replies to continue...

Kaajal




Edited by kajal_arjun - 17 years ago

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