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Rima

@PourQuoi

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Posted: 17 years ago

#501

Originally posted by: bbb999
Hey Rimahey B...all I can say is you must be as crazy as me...up at this hour...😃😆....amazing updatethank you hun... I am lovin the bond neev and pl share its so sweet.I love that too...I feel like she is the one person (sometimes only) he can turn to..neev is such a charmer when he got Ayesha to slap his cheek it was so adorableawww good good im lovin his lovable and comical character and am glad that he kinda knows whats going on with Ayesha and hopefully find out the whole truth...
yes I love him like that too...but you'll deff see a chnage in him once he knows the truth...

Liked how you focused on Neev-Ayesha in your update and hopefully Milind will make an apperance in the next update😆. yes he will...time constraints forced me to make this all Neehsa...😊Feeling so sad for Prachi the pain which she is getting from Milind and now having to go out with Avinash!!!I know right...not fair I tell you!

Rima I love you have combined so many emotions in your writing one minute its all tearful and the next minute im bursting with laughter!! Thank you and a fantastic update👏👏👏awww thanks so much B! how sweeeeeeet😃...you really think so...awwwwwww

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soul76

@soul76

Sparkler

Posted: 17 years ago

#502

Hey Rims...... no Michi!!!! great yeh Avinash kyun tapka kabab main haddi. I want Michi in the next update it feels incomplete without them. Ok now Neesha excellent part I was touched from Ayesha's concern for Prachi to her slight start in an attempt to run after her. There's such a beautiful bond both share. The attic scene was marvellous Neev was quick to notice her apprehension even subtle movements don't escape him her trembling fingers her quick aversion on finding her picture it was beautiful. What touched me was the fact that he feels responsible for her her tears her fears even her simple smile mean so much to him. The fact that he gauged her relationship with Inder was so bang on I was surprised really he's one smart man but how could he be so sure? Anyways loved the banter between Premlata and him they both share a lovely sweet relationship. I hope with time it is strengthened more still I'd hate to see Premlata choose sides when eventually she'll get to know of Ayesha's reality and when Neev will side with her though I don't think Inder will have anything against the match. Update soon please....

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tweety_me14

@tweety_me14

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#503

Lovely update Rima!

I loved the Neev-Ayesha-Premlata bit....I guess more so because Im already missing Ayesha in the show... Wish they hadn't killed her off...Infact after reading your FF I wish we were'nt deprived of a Neesha track!

Neev was as usual at his adorable best! Felt really bad for Ayesha...Hope she gets the happiness she deserves soon!

Michi....hmmm well, all I hope is that Milind's anger cools down and he makes upto Prachi.... Waiting for their reconciliation!

And whats with Avinash?? Hope Prachi doesn't agree to marry him :-(

Loved your update Rima!

Waiting for the next one.. :-)

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@-JC-

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 17 years ago

#504

Rimz...😔 MEin sorry hai...Kal ke exitement mein comments likhna bhool gayi.Or did i write comments and forget that i wrote it. Ok i am hurting my brains now..

newho...i remember what the update was about...thats an accomplishment.

Ok here goes...
I was really sad for Prachi for having to go with that sadela Avinaash...Ayesha should feel guilty...that was the right thing to feel.😡 Michi ke aade joh bhi aaye usse ehsaas hona chahiye that its wrong thing to do. Avinaash ko baad mein dekh lenge. And Prachi still hurting from that duffer's behavior🥺... *Crying* meri doll ko itna kyun rulati ho...she maybe strong...but i am not. *Crying harder*

Neevuuuuuuuuuuuuu🤗 I missed him sooooooooooo much. *snif snif* lolz...him and PL are one of a kind. :) Lets c what Inder will say if he ever witnesses this jodi.🤣

Hai...khud ko kitne thapad maare...mere tamaatar ka gaal laal laal....
But you know why i love it...Ayesha's reaction to it. Tho she said to use jooti next time...meri tarah voh bhi rone vaali thi, seeing him do that to himself. I don't know how she can still sit there and resist him. Koi baat nahi Neevu..just come to me, i'll give your laal laal gaal some soothing kisses.☺️
But i truly truly loved Ayesha's small movements throughout the update...first her wish to go after Prachi..then her reaction to seeing Prachi's photo with Inder and then her attempt to catch a glimpse of her own photo to make sure if it was her...she really craves so much for her father's acceptance...and then trying to hide it and finally running away from being caught...it was her update like last one was Prachi's.

And another thing that stayed with me...Neev holding her hand and not letting go and he kept staring at the floor...determined...and she back and sat next to him. I love him to death.

Thanx yaar.

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sidra

@Sidra.W

Voyager

Posted: 17 years ago

#505

thanx for the update rima...... fantastic part.......do update soon!!

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KaneBC

@KaneBC

Voyager

Posted: 17 years ago

#506

Rima, I just love Ayesha in this FF. Of course she is angry and bitter with Inder. And no one can blame her. But she is not willing to make Prachi and Premlata suffer cos of it. She doesn't even seem to want to have anything to do with Inder. Have to be honest, if I was in her situation I would have made him pay up big time. 😆 She has her pride and integrity. Your FF just makes me hate those creatives even more for messing up her character. 😡 As for Neev, how sweet can he get. Love him to bits. 🤗Have to confess, I think I love Neesha far more than Michi in this FF.

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sweet_JAY_FAN

@sweet_JAY_FAN

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#507

oh wow great part Rima👏

u write the best FFs😃

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Rima

@PourQuoi

Rocker

Posted: 17 years ago

#508

Originally posted by: blind horizon
Hey Rims...... no Michi!!!! I know Munee😲...apologies...apologies...🤗great yeh Avinash kyun tapka kabab main haddi.Kisi ko tou bann na tha... I want Michi in the next update it feels incomplete without them. I willl...I just didn't have time this update...Ok now Neesha excellent part I was touched from Ayesha's concern for Prachi to her slight start in an attempt to run after her. There's such a beautiful bond both share. Yes there is...I think they both feel kinda lost without each other now...I guess Prachi-Ayesha track shuru ho gaya in my fic😆The attic scene was marvellous Neev was quick to notice her apprehension even subtle movements don't escape him her trembling fingers her quick aversion on finding her picture it was beautiful. awww glad you liked it...well he likes to watch her closely I guess thats why he can notice these things...partly because he was probably also looking out for them...What touched me was the fact that he feels responsible for her her tears her fears even her simple smile mean so much to him. Yes it does...thats why I love Neev's character...its as though he feels its his responsibility to make people smile...now soemthing Sonia said to me once was...when will there be someone to make him smile? I hope Ayesha can be that person soon...😊The fact that he gauged her relationship with Inder was so bang on I was surprised really he's one smart man but how could he be so sure?I guess it's just one of the theories he probably had in his hdea since the time he saw Inder coming out from the Chawl...since he's been working with him...he's perhaps noticed a few things too... Anyways loved the banter between Premlata and him they both share a lovely sweet relationship. me too...in fact it's my favourite here and even in the show...she's the only one he always turns to...I hope with time it is strengthened more still I'd hate to see Premlata choose sides when eventually she'll get to know of Ayesha's reality and when Neev will side with her though I don't think Inder will have anything against the match.wait and see for what happens with Inder...but Premlata wont chose sides...atleast I hope not... Update soon please....

Thanks Munee...I'll try update soon!😃

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Rima

@PourQuoi

Rocker

Posted: 17 years ago

#509

Originally posted by: tweety_me14
Lovely update Rima!
awww Thanks Tweets😃I loved the Neev-Ayesha-Premlata bit....I guess more so because Im already missing Ayesha in the showsame here hun...same here...will missing the prospect of Neesha😆... Wish they hadn't killed her offI'm hoping they'll bring her back for sure......Infact after reading your FF I wish we were'nt deprived of a Neesha track!awww...thats how I felt with JCssss..

Neev was as usual at his adorable best! Felt really bad for Ayesha...Hope she gets the happiness she deserves soon!Something is gonna happen with them soon...I hope it'll be unexpected...😊

Michi....hmmm well, all I hope is that Milind's anger cools down and he makes upto Prachi.... Waiting for their reconciliation!oooo...yep...that'll be pretty soon too...just gotta see what happens with them too...😃

And whats with Avinash?? Hope Prachi doesn't agree to marry him :-(Lol...well....😆

Loved your update Rima!awww good good

Waiting for the next one.. :-)will try write asap.