FF:Aankhein(MP/NA) Complete, Pages 1, 2 and 3 - Page 28

Awww Rimz! Ok, like JC's im going to find it hard which jodi i like best. Atm, it's neck and neck. I'll reply properly after my exam. 😕

Hey Rima juts LOVED your update...! Neev and Ayesha's scene was cute! I hope Neev gets to kiss her again really soon...! 😆
Michi's scene was very romantic...! The way he said Teri dhadkan mereko sunayi de rahi hain' was so amazing..! Prachi blushing and Milind not wanting her to go...Everything was very romantic...!
I really liked PL and Ayesha's portion too..I hope PL accepts Ayesha as a part of the family after she gets to knwo the truth...[Knowing PL's nature she will...! Hopefully....!!]..
Loved the update...! Waiting for the next bit...!!

Loved the update rims!
As i have said before that i have never ever liked ayesha and neev's jodi but the last update was just too cute to not like them anymore! I love them both so much now and you have made that happen with your ff!!!
i think neev would be the perfect guy for ayesha, that scene between was just too cute!
coming to Michi, now that was something as miland just wanted for prachi to touch his face! that was very well written, i could just picture the scene properly.
oh so, prachi is going to meet them tom too! can't wait any longer for the next update, please update soon! thanks!!!!! 😊

OMG rimz i loved the update!! it was really nice!!

And Neev is sooo cute!!!Well i can see ayesha is starting to fall for him cos she missed him coming to the room! I wish he would pick me up like that! 😳 😳 😳

Milind prachi scenes remind of Fanaa scenes, wen kajol touches amir's face. But this so beautifully described i can imagine it in my head!

curios to know how u build the story and i reli love ur NA scenes!!!

Update soooooooon!!!!!!!!!!! 😉

Rima Jaani...That was so beautiful 😊 😊 😊
I love Ayesha in this. She is touched with PL's motherly nature. Poor thing never had her own mother to take care of her instead she had been taking care of her. Neevuuuuuuuuuu 😍 picking her up and taking her down...haaye...mar jaawan!!!

Hmmm...So Prachi wants to meet Milind lekin naam suki ka leti hai...😉 I love the way how she is showing Milind the world the way she sees it. And now I can't wait for Milind to show her the world full of colors.

I love both the couples!!! One is so innocent and the other fultu badmaash!! Can't wait for the janmastmi celebrations....
Love u jaani 🤗 Awesome update!!!

Originally posted by: Charmed...

Awww Rimz! Ok, like JC's im going to find it hard which jodi i like best. Atm, it's neck and neck. I'll reply properly after my exam. 😕

Oh Hun...hope it went well...If I recall correctly..your LASTTTT🥳hope you have a great end of exams event coming up...😃...Thanks hun...

Originally posted by: candyfloss

i read only michi part.its very touching.both r bonded so much. 😳 😳

Thanks hun...you should really read the whole story...it's actually quite good😊

Originally posted by: tweety_me14

Hey Rima juts LOVED your update...! Neev and Ayesha's scene was cute! I hope Neev gets to kiss her again really soon...! 😆 Oh my tweetypie...only you would say that...how cuteeeeeeeee😃😳
Michi's scene was very romantic...! The way he said Teri dhadkan mereko sunayi de rahi hain' was so amazing..! Prachi blushing and Milind not wanting her to go...Everything was very romantic...! ahaha...oh glad you thought so...hope it wasn't too forward of Prachi eithe.r...😉
I really liked PL and Ayesha's portion too..I hope PL accepts Ayesha as a part of the family after she gets to knwo the truth...[Knowing PL's nature she will...! Hopefully....!!].. You'll see what happens with all of them soon...😳
Loved the update...! Waiting for the next bit...!!

Thanks hun😊

😃

Originally posted by: azam12neelab

Loved the update rims! Thank Neelab...
As i have said before that i have never ever liked ayesha and neev's jodi but the last update was just too cute to not like them anymore! I love them both so much now and you have made that happen with your ff!!! aaha...I feel quite proud...actually you should give JC's ff a read...you'll fall in love with them even more...😃
i think neev would be the perfect guy for ayesha, that scene between was just too cute! awwww
coming to Michi, now that was something as miland just wanted for prachi to touch his face! that was very well written, i could just picture the scene properly. LOL...yep, well not his face exactly...he just wanted her to be close...😉...
oh so, prachi is going to meet them tom too! can't wait any longer for the next update, please update soon! thanks!!!!! 😊Will try as soon as I can hun

Thank you sooo much😃

Originally posted by: fahimataq

OMG rimz i loved the update!! it was really nice!! aww thanks hun...😃 glad you liked it...😉

And Neev is sooo cute!!!Well i can see ayesha is starting to fall for him cos she missed him coming to the room! I wish he would pick me up like that! 😳 😳 😳 ahahaa..a.little....not exactly falling falling...yet😉....I wish he would pick me up like that and never let go😆😆😆...

Milind prachi scenes remind of Fanaa scenes, wen kajol touches amir's face. But this so beautifully described i can imagine it in my head! Yeh, I can see comparisons actually...glad you could see it that way though...I liked the way they did it in the film too😳

curios to know how u build the story and i reli love ur NA scenes!!! LOL...Wow...good good...NA, I love too...I want them all to get coser first and then the story will unfold...

Update soooooooon!!!!!!!!!!! 😉

Will try asap...Thanks hun...😊