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Posted: 17 years ago
Yeah Panache UR gr8 in ur creative ideas. Hope the creative team of Kayamath borrow from U. But lemme tell U guys it is not gona to be that easy. Milind thinks very strongly that Prachi and Neev are made for each other. He has made a promise to himself that he will not think about Prachi anymore. So the situations shall be created such that they meet each other accidentally many a times.
One of such scenarios I had posted as 'Prachi please apply balm to milind'
Well I will not go into it. Let us start from Milind coming out of shower in his room.
Well we all know that Prachi still takes care of all his things as a dutifull wife- so doesnt feel out of place in Milind's room but she normally comes when he is not around to send sometime in the room and feel him through his room. She comes to room and peeps and doesnt find Milind in the room and she has clothes to be put in the almirah. She is facing the almirah and he comes out in the towel and sees her from back and thinks "Arey mujhe kya horaha hai! Jitne bhi try karu I still see Prachi everywhere " and brushes off as if she is not there and shouts "Ramu Kaka mera dress kaha hai". Our Prachi dear turns around and is shocked to see Milind and says " Milind aap" Now it is his turn to get shocked now. He says " Prachi such mey tum ho" (I say their expressions are brilliant 👏 👏 👏 ) She will stammer as usual and say "Mai aap ki kapde almirah me rakne ke liye aayi hu" . He comes closer to her( now he forgets he is in towel bec our Milsi forgets everything when Prachi is before his eyes) and tells her" Prachi maine kitne baar kaha ki tu kaam karthe mujhe achcha nahi lagtha" with all his love in his eyes. Our Prachi dear says "Apno ke liye kaam akrne mey kushi milthi hai" Once again eye lock and flash back scens(Milind rememebers all scenes from snow fall to mandir and prachi remembers her good moments of life) She covers up saying " Aaap mere dosth ho"
He slowly unlocks and then realsies he is in towel and says "Iam sorry, let me take my clothes" Prachi babes doesnt feel bad bec she has seen him many times like that so she says" My dheti hu" and with co-incidence it will be the same dress which she gifts him. He says the dress is good and says Ayesha has changed my wardrobe completely. Prachi is like U duffer it is me. Then he wears it and finds one of his buttons not there. She says " Iam sorry I have not seen. My aapko ek our dress Dethi hu" He says "No I liked it and I will stich the button , mujhe thoda sui dho" She will say " OK then dont take it out I will stich it karke she will stich the button on his shirt (Now he seems to be getting the flashbacks in black & white of Prachi stiching button on his shirt) After she stiches he will say slowly "Thankyou" and she gets away from him with difficulty. She will say " BF lag gaya hai. ap neeche ayenge ya yeha bijwadhu". Milind will come out from trans and say "I will come" As she goes out of the room he looks at her staringly and longingly and thinks inside "Kaash Prachi tum mujhe pehle mil jathe" and then our Ayesha enters like a storm( Thank god she dint enter in between the cute scene)
He asks her "Tu yeh dress kahe se li" for which Ayesha thoughtlessly says "Timhe pasand nahi hai na. Us Prachi bhi . Uska selection hi ghatiya hai. Mera mistake tha ki use lekar ane ke liya kehna"( These days she is playing as a catalyst in bringing them togeether- rem- song, then Pune, etc.) Milind is surprised and says "Nai Mujhe bahut achcha laga and aur my thanks bholna chahratha tha" and goes out of the room with Ayesha looking shocked at the mistake she made

Episode ends Thadam thadam!

Howzatt..
So guys someone continue from there 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
This was a mini FF I'd posted sometime back....actually the day when Star Plus showed those 1 hr episodes of kyunki...so it's a little dated.
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She stood stunned by the announcement. Had she heard right? Did Ayesha actually say what she did? For a second, Prachi felt a swift flash of anger lance through her veins making her face flush. She quickly tampened her feelings.

Her eyes flew to Millind who stood there looking as stunned as she felt. He stared at Ayesha as though he was seeing her for the first time and not liking what he saw. Then he turned to her with an unreadable look on his impassive face. Yet , he seemed to be asking her something silently. She looked away…how could she show her dissent by a look or word? She didn't want to be responsible for exacerbating his delicate condition.

So, she turned to Neev with a smile on her face and held out her hand to him. Only he saw what an effort it was for her. He took her hand and pressed it reassuringly.

Milind turned away from the scene before him. He didn't see Prachi watch him go with her heart in her brimming eyes. He simply stared at the floor concentrating on putting one foot before the other. He couldn't understand the volcano of feeling bursting inside him. Why did he feel as though the earth had tilted under him when he heard Ayesha say those words? Why did they sound so damning to him? His heart had juddered to a standstill as though someone had cut off the blood supply to it. He'd felt cold for a second. He shook his head at this fantasy and ran up the stairs as though the hounds of hell were snipping at his ankles.

He closed his bedroom door and leaned back in exhaustion. The strain was too much. He was bleeding like an untended wound…and for some reason he felt as though he was bleeding inside as well. He went into the bathroom and washed away the grime and blood. He stared at himself and remembered what that policeman had called him. His mouth twisted in a smile. 'Lafanga…that was the word…shakal se to ye lafanga legte hai!' How true! Of course, he couldn't help his goonish looks but it hurt to hear someone actually say it to his face….he didn't know what embarrassed him more…actually hearing it said aloud and losing face or having Prachi hear it and saving his!

Another streak of pain seared through his head and he reeled back. What the heck was happening? The headaches were occurring too often for comfort. The worst one had hit him when Prachi had spoken to those strangers about their supposed union. The pictures that had kept flashing inside his brain then had caused a migraine of such proportion that he's actually thought he was dying. When Prachi told him that she'd simply spun a yarn so as not to seem out of place, he should have felt relieved. So why had he felt a deep sense of disappointment? He shook his thoughts away. It was time to shower and get dressed for the unexpected event downstairs.

Prachi stared at the gaghra choli laid out on the bed. It was a stunning combination of pastel blue and pink, her favourite colours. Ayesha had thought of everything, except consulting with the couple themselves. How could she go through with this? She loved no one else but Milind. She wanted no one else but him. How could she even contemplate exchanging rings with another person, even if that person was Neev, who understood her dilemma?

There was a knock on the door and Neev walked in. It never occurred to him to hesitate. Times out of number he'd walked in without a pause in the past. Suddenly, he stopped by the door and said, "Sorry, Prachi, I ought to have waited for your permission." Prachi looked up and smiled weakly, "It's ok Neev. I wanted to talk to you anyway. This engagement….it's not right and we both know it," she continued, missing the look of pain in his eyes. "But we have to go through with it. I nearly put milind's life in danger last night and am not about to let it happen again. No, listen to me, Neev,' she continued just as he was about to argue. She put her hand on his mouth as if to shut him up. His hands held her shoulders tenderly.

To the man standing by the door that stood slightly ajar, it looked as if he was eavesdropping on a private moment between lovers. Milind stood rooted to the spot…he knew he ought to move away but couldn't bring himself to do so.

"You know it has to happen and why. After waiting so long for things to work out and being careful that they don't go wrong, we can't possibly do otherwise. Please, Neev, don't say no. If this could save us from more pain and at the same time bring some happiness to the one I love, it's not wrong! I'll do anything….anything …" Prachi, paused on a choke.

Neev held her close in his arms and smoothed her hair. Outside, Milind turned away, myriad conflicting thoughts hitting him from all sides. What was that about? What did Prachi mean? It sounded as though she was persuading Neev to go through with the engagement. Why would he need persuading? Weren't they in love? The intimacy between them seemed to confirm that. Why should that make him feel uncomfortable? For a moment there, he'd wanted to thrust open the door and pull them apart. He couldn't forget the past few days he'd spent with Prachi….her presence was soothing somehow….she make a bad situation tolerable. This morning when he woke up and looked into those melting hazel eyes, he'd felt that everything was as it should be. Why did he never feel that way in ayesha's presence…she always seemed to agitate him…and irritate him specially of late when she was rude to Prachi. That made him feel protective towards the latter.

The party was in full swing by the time Prachi came down. She scanned the room for Milind and found him staring up at her with a peculiar expression on his face. He seemed to be blindsided and Prachi guessed, with some trepidation, that her appearance must have jolted his memory a bit. She wondered if that was a good thing or not.

Everyone was in a celebratory mood, especially Ayesha, who clung to Milind's arm like a leech, a satisfied smile playing on her face. Neev came up to Prachi and took her away to dance. The song playing was "Kaheno ko jashn manana hai from Jodha Akbar. " A fitting song for her mood," Prachi thought wryly. She danced half-heartedly, all the while watching Milind whose eyes seemed glued to her.

He couldn't take it anymore. The music, Prachi and Neev dancing, the oncoming headache and the accompanying flashes of images of him dancing with ….Prachi in his arms….was it what he wanted to see or what had actually happened before? Why was he so drawn to her and why was she looking at him like that? Why did he feel as though she was attracted to him too? Why did he feel that everything that was happening tonight was wrong? He turned abruptly and walked out.

She couldn't keep up this act for much longer, Prachi told herself desperately. She needed some fresh air or she'd faint. She realized she was tired beyond belief, both mentally and physically. She looked around and saw that nobody was looking at her. This was the right time to make her escape, she thought. She walked swiftly towards the French windows and disappeared into the enveloping coolness of the night air. She walked up the steps of the kiosk and allowed its darkness to close around her like a comfortable blanket. She sighed softly, "When will all this end? I can't take it anymore!" Unbidden tears slid down her cheeks. A small cry escaped her lips and she bent forward as if in pain.

Suddenly, she heard a movement to her side. A tall dark shadow detached itself and Milind stood before her. Her heart leapt in familiar joy and then took a nosedive when she saw the expression on his face. He looked angry, bewildered and pained, all at the same time.

He raised his hands to her shoulders and shook her slightly. "What's the matter, Prachi?" he rasped. "Why are you here and not dancing in bliss with Neev? That's what you always wanted, wasn't it? So, why are you behaving as though that's the last thing you desire?"

"…Milind….please, you're hurting me…let me go…" she whispered.

" Hurting you? What do you know about hurt except for delivering it?" he shouted unable to help himself. "You and your family are past masters at it….first my sister , then my father…now me…." he trailed into silence.

"You…Milind….what do you mean? " she replied, confused.

"Nothing….," he hesitated.

"Milind, please…" Prachi said worriedly.

"Please….that's what your family does always…please yourselves….that's what you're doing now aren't you….what game are you playing at? You come after me in a snow storm putting your life in danger for someone who says he hates you, you look after him as though he means something to you…then you talk about how much you care for Neev to your mother soon after that and then….and then yesterday in Pune….oh God! What am I saying…" Milind held his head as pain filled it.

Prachi tried to hold him but he pushed her away roughly, " No! Don't touch me….you can't and I can't allow you to….God! I'm going crazy…what are you doing to me….I'm engaged to be married to the love of my life and I can't take my mind off you! Your touch, your closeness, that look in your eyes…they haunt me….do you know that? Why do you do it if.... Watching you with him…Neev, kills me …..and it shouldn't!" he groaned.

"Milind..don't..I…." Prachi didn't know what to say or think…all she knew was that her heart had taken flight and was fluttering with both joy and fear.

She slipped her arms around his waist intending only to pacify him but the moment she touched him he came alive and held her to him tightly as if he was scared that she'd disappear.

"Prachi," he whispered in her ear, leaving a line of tiny desperate kisses along her neck. "Stop me please…this is not right but why does it feel so right?"

Prachi closed her eyes in pure delight and allowed herself to be lost in the sensations he was arousing in her. It was so long since she was in his arms like this.

But before she could fully enjoy the feelings he'd set in her, he fell backwards, holding on to the pillar behind him. He held his hands to his head and his whole body shook as if in fever.

Suddenly his right hand stretched before him as if trying to grasp someone and he yelled, "Look out, Prachi! The car……" and fainted into her arms.


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Posted: 17 years ago
Pippa hats off to U 👏 👏 . Kaash itna jaldi katham hota but it is not so dear. He will not gain his memory before Milind and Prachi are head over heels agaisnt each other.
So my story to the continuation of your story goes like this
Prachi is scared as to what happened to Milind. She looks down and everyone is busy in the party. Ramu kaka comes from somewhere and Prachi asks him to help take him to the room. Her room comes first and she says "Ramu Kaka Milind Ka room bahut door hai. till he gains consciousness let him be here". She puts water on his face and tries for the Doc( We are lucky that the line is busy). She remembers what milind told her and wonders why he spoke like that.She takes and massages his hands and slowly he opens his eyes. He holds his head tight and asks with broodiness " Where am I" . Prachi says " Milind are U Ok. How R U feeling" He slowly holds her hand tightly and agains loses consciousness.
Here enters our Ayesha in search of her Milind and looks angrily at Prachi" What are U doing" Prachi says" Milind fainted". She is wild and says "I will call the Doc. Mere Milind ko kuch nahi hoga. Thumne kya kiya. Maine kitne baar kaha ki Milind ke samne mat aa lekin thum mera kab sune ho. She taunts her till the Doc comes and rescues Prachi.
Doc says Milind needs rest and also instructs not to move him from there.
Though Ayesha resists Doc says dont disturb him and he will gain consciousness only tomorrow( As if the Doc knows everything)
Premlatha and Baba keep looking at each other and Baba says "Sab log bere beta ko aaram karne de. Prachi Beta thum Milind ke paas raho and agar kuch chahiye tho mujhe bulana. Please Milind ko koyi disturb mat karna and looks at Ayesha with dislike and she goes away angrily saying " Teek Hai Doctor ne kaha kal thak Hosh Nahi ayega"
Everybody leaves and Prachi looks at Milind with pain. She takes the dressing table drawer to keep medicines and finds the photoframe of Milind and hers. She remembers flashback in which Ayesha warns her to keep away all photos away from milind. She takes it and puts it back in almirah( Had she left it on dressing table maybe it would help Milind regain memory but is Prachi who is not as intelligent as Ayesha).
She massages his hands and legs and sits by his bed. Milind stirs uncomforatably on the bed and she puts a hand on his forehead. He is still not stable and she says "Milind . Kaya hai. Kuch chahiye". He doesnt answer but holds her hand tight on the forehead and pulls her closer. She is almost on him and can hear his breath. He is restless and she is lost in his thoughts. She tries to steady him but he says in his sleep "Mujhe nmath chodo please. Mere paas raho" and hearing that she sits on the bed and takes his head on her lap and he embraces ehr tight clinging on to her stomach. Slowly he dozes. Prachi steadies him but their hands are locked. She can see a calmness on his face with peace. He sleeps like a baby and slowly she runs her fingers through his hair and caresses him. She feels drwsy and slowly sleeps in sitting position.
Slowly she falls on him.
Premlatha who comes to check if everything is OK notices this and tears roll down her eyes and prays to god to bring them together.
To not let others see she pulls the dooe from outside and locks it( As usual without any logic).
Milind slowly opens his eyes and sees Prachi with him. He is shocked and wonders if he is dreaming. He then recollects what he has told Prachi yesday and upto fainting. He moves a little to take his hand from her and she gets up
"Milind aapko kaisa lagraha hai" and she moves away from him.
He with his ususal and excellent expressions gives a look at Prachi and says "Mai teek hu. Lekin main yeha teri kamre main".
She says " Kal aap behosh ho gaye aur hamara kamara bagal mein hai tho yeha lekar aye. Doctor told not to disturb so U R here."
He says "Prachi kal main jho kaha use thum bura mat mana na. My kuch bakwas kararaha tha. Shayad mai jyada Peeli( He thinks inside thats why I told the truth out which I should not have done)" She gives a concerend look and says " Milind I feel good UR OK now. Forget it. Hum sab apke liye bahut pareshan the."
He tries to get up and tells her that he will go to his room. She asks him to take rest but he wants to go away as he cannot be away from Prachi anymore and he wants to run away. he finds the room locked and says what is this. She tells amybe someone must have locked as doc told that UR not to be disturbed. She tells "Milind U sleep on the bed and I will sleep on the Sofa."
He comes back to bed and says " Iam not feeling sleepy Prachi. I dont know why but I felt I slept for days together and felt very peacefull after many days.( Duffer Ur Prachi was with U)
She gives him medicine and he will ask her " Is it Ok that at this time UR with me" She will reply " All our concern is Ur health so dont argue and just listen to me" and she treats him like a baby and puts a blanket over him.
He gives a naughty smile and says
"Prachi aisa kaisa horaha hai hamara kismet me ki ham dhono ko ek saath raath bitana padtha hai. Agar thumara Neev objection lega tho" The mention of Neev brings a sad face to her and says "Neev understands but what about Ayesha?"
He looks at her and tells " U know I dont care abt others"
He asks her " Prachi if Ur feeling sleepy better sleep, U have already not slept at all". She will say "Even Iam not sleepy. Its OK"
Milind will tell her " Aisa hai tho kuch baath karo na Prachi. Thumare bare me bahut kam janthe hhu and I want to hear about you. Evertime I feel UR a bundle of surprise and I want to know everything about you. Hamara tho chawl ka zindagi hai lekin tumhare tho bahut rangeen hoga"
She looks with a painfull look at him and says something and the door opens to find Ayesha's angry entry"

Episode ends her. Continue from here.
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Posted: 17 years ago
Hi guys this is my first attempt at writing a scene or a moment....for me MICHI have always personified intense love and passion more than any other couple..so my scene is based on that .....hope you like it 😊even if balaji thinks it over i think they can provide us with a edited version or show curtians flying all around them 😉

Premlata rushed towards her room as she remembered that she had forgotten Mishraji's medicines in her purse itself.. She stopped when she came across prachi's room. Her daughter was sitting before the mirror but her eyes were looking beyond the reflection that stared back at her. She was deeply engrossed and her mother knew the object of her deep thoughts. It saddened her to see her daughter like this.PL looked fondingly at her daughter's angelic face filled with innocence and her long black hair and her tiny frame wrapped in the grey chiffon sari embroidered with fine white Lucknow work. At present the colour of the sari aptly described prachi's emotions.PL sighed praying that everything be fine between prachi and milind and the sham of an engagement would end soon. She knew her daughter very well to know that she would never get betrothed or even think about another man besides milind ever but also knew that it was impossible to make her mother in law see this or understand this. Hence she had decided to keep quite about this whole engagement farce. She turned towards her daughter wanting to speak to her but decided against it and walked past.

Prachi smiled remembering the time when milind would come from behind and surprise her, she looked at the mirror hoping to see him .Her eyes seeked him every moment every where….suddenly her gaze stopped at the clock and she remembered she had to give milind medicine. She got up and rushed towards the kitchen to get warm milk.

After the accident she had taught herself to knock at their bedroom whenever she entered it. She gently knocked at the door hoping to hear milind's voice but got no response she tried again and wondered if milind fell asleep. She gently turned the knob and looked in the room ,it was dimly lit and the windows were left open. The winds were gushing in but there was no sign of milind .Prachi walked in towards the bedside table wondering were milind went at this time of the night. There was a heavy rain approaching if the MET dept were to be believed. She removed his medicines and kept it along side the milk.

Prachi turned towards the window to close them; the wind was very strong making it difficult for her to close the window. In her struggle and the loud whining of the winds she did not hear the door open, nor did she see Milind barge in. He was dressed in casuals, his hair was disheveled as usual, he stopped the moment he saw her. He had been trying to stay away from her, he tried to erase every thought about her knowing it was wrong and futile but his heart refused all the excuses he provided, it refused to let go of her sweet face, her beautiful eyes, her fragrance .There was not a moment he did not think of her, he rushed home just to see her once again, he promised himself he would not ask for anything more but just a glimpse of her. He sought her as soon as he entered the house, but she was no where, he peeped into her room but it was empty, resltless he rushed into his room only to find her standing there. Her hair was flying uncontrollably; she was struggling with the windows. He slowly closed the door lest it banged and stood there mesmerized.Prachi finally gave in the struggle and turned to call ramu kaka for help. She simply stood rooted to the spot forgetting the wind, windows and ramu kaka as she saw milind staring at her. She wanted to ask him where he went but words refused to come out. He wanted to ask her what was she doing here at this time but words refuse to come out.

Milind walked towards her as if bewitched, prachi slowly moved towards him as if some magnetic pull was drawing her to him. The windows were banging hard, it threatened to break, and heavy clouds covered the sky for a moment masking the equally intense desire in both their eyes. The weather was as restless as these two souls.Prachi was so mesmerized that she did not see the shoes lying on the floor and tripped on it.Milind reached out to help her and prachi found herself locked in a pair of arms against strong hard chest.Milind lost his balance trying to hold her and both of them landed on the bed.Milind found himself on top of Prachi .A sigh escaped his lips as he looked down at her. She always managed to take his breath away. But there was a strand of hair disturbing his view, his hands moved towards her face to remove the strand. His mind told him to stop but still he found himself catching the strand twiddling it between his fingers...They were as soft and silky as he thought it would be, he pushed it behind her ears. I should get up now, I should, he thought ….his hands caressed the outline of her heart shaped face as he drank in her fragrance. His entire body was screaming for her, he needed her….he would go insane otherwise….why oh why it felt as it was right as if everything happening was the most beautiful moment of my life.

Prachi clutched on his shirts as she looked up at him. Was it the lights playing or did she see that look in his eyes…her hands relaxed on his chest…I should leave but her hands refused to let go, she found herself caressing his chest …I would leave in a few minutes after ages I am with Milind in his arms, touching him, let me live this moment please please…I would leave she kept on fighting with her inner turmoil.

His thumb moved towards her lips as he wondered how it would be to kiss them and as if sensing his thoughts Prachi's lips parted in response and Milind felt desire rushing in like never before. Her eyes held him ,he found himself drowning in them as he moved in closer to remove even a bit of space between them….the wind was caressing her face ,her hair, he felt a spurge of raging jealousy and cupped her face with both his hands. He could not bear anyone else looking at her, touching her.

The phone was ringing but it seemed the owner was in a different world altogether, the rain splashed across the window pane and there was a sudden thunder across the sky.Prachi clutched him tightly as the sound of the thunder rocked the sky. He looked at her and fiercely pulled her in his arms, caressing her hair reassuring her that he is there ….he lightly touched his lips on her hair, then moved towards her temple, then rained kisses across her forehead, cheeks …Prachi closed her eyes as she felt life infuse in her once more, she wanted him more than breathe itself, her hands locked in his soft curls as she pulled him closer.Milind finally sought her lips with untold passion. The rain was pouring heavily outside, it seems the storm would last for a long long time, the rain would soak up the night itself and with it two souls who thirst for each other and who in their hearts were hoping that the night would never end and this moment would live forever………..




Edited by sun29 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago

@k_sarla,
I was stuck for ideas after my scenario...thanks for carrying it thro....loved it plus ur rvery funny side comments!!

@sun25.....are u kidding? Is this really ur first attempt? I can't believe it. U are a natural writer.....that was hot and romantic.....oh wow! I WANT to see this on screen and soon!!

Edited by pippa - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
Well here is a scene I thought of:

Mamaji's double wedding plan is going full swing. Milsi's heart is totally not into this but he goes along thinking that is what Prachi wants. Ayesha is in seventh heaven needless to say.

On the wedding day:

Prachi is dressed in full bridal finery. She looks at herself in the mirror but does not really see her reflection. Instead she sees her entire life with Milsi played before her eyes and huge drops of tears gather in her eyes as she weeps uncontrollably. She looks up heavenwards and asks what wrong did she do to deserve this punishment. She so wanted to scream to Milsi and tell him she is his wife and can never be any body else's but she cannot risk losing him forever. At the same time she cannot bear the thought of sitting through an entire wedding ceremony, taking the sacred marriage vows with another man. She prayed for some miracle to happen to change the course of her life, to bring back her love to her.

No, she will not go through with this sham of a marriage. She gritted her teeth and pulled the drawer open. She slowly removed the bottle of sleeping pills from it and was about to pop them into her mouth. A small voice in her head was asking her whether she would be a coward and give up the fight. She kept telling herself silently that she was not taking away her life, which was not her right anyway considering her life was his, but is only buying more time in the hope that Milsi will recover.


Out on the corridor, Neev was watching Prachi's back as it shook and knew she was crying her eyes out. His heart went out to her. He hesitates outside her door wondering what next to do when he sees Milsi climb up the stairs with his head bent down, lost in thoughts. Making up his mind in a split second Neev barges into her room and drags Prachi up by gripping her upper arm tightly. Prachi who had the pills in her hand drops them in the sudden jerk this motion caused. Her eyes flew wide open as she stared at Neev. "Neev..." she uttered, but before she could continue he hugs her tightly and says in a loud voice he loves her so much and was so happy that they were finally going to be one. He cannot wait for the wedding to get over. So saying he proceeds to draw her face close and is about to kiss her.

Milsi reaches Prachi's room by then and is about to pass it when he heard Neev's words. He turned to see him bend his head towards Prachi. His heart constricts at the sight and his stomach churns as he feels a wave of revulsion hit him hard. His head pounds and he turns away unable to bear the agony of seeing the woman he loved in the arms of her future husband. Just as he was about to take the next step, he hears a resounding thud as though someone had been slapped hard. Lifting his head he sees a furious Prachi stare back at Neev with eyes burning up. Neev holds his cheek in his hand and is about to say something. Prachi raises her hand in warning to stop him and breaks into a tirade. She screams her lungs out at him.

"How dare you Neev, How dare you."

Neev tried to say something feebly "Prachi..."

"Dont you dare try this with me. I may have agreed to this wedding for the sake of Milind but dont for a moment think that I will ever go through with this. Dont think I will let any man other than my husband touch me. This body and soul belongs only to HIM. I will never let it be sullied by anyone."

Milsi hearing these words looks confused. Who is she speaking about? Who was her husband? Was Neev not going to be her husband? Then what was all this about? Before he can go any further in these thoughts he heard her continue.

"My husband may not remember me. That does not mean I have forgotten him. My love for him will never die. I can give up my life gladly for him but I cannot give myself to anyone but him. He is my life, my breath, my heartbeat, my soul, the very purpose of my existence. I cannot dream of a life without him. I cannot live without, without......"

She whimpers, as tears streamed down her cheeks.

Feeling drained she crumbles to the floor.

" ....Milind, my husband. I cannot live without him," she finished and passed out.

Before Neev could react, Milsi rushes in,picks her up and lays her on the bed. Her words keeps ringing in his head.

"I cannot live without, without....Milind, my huband".

What does that mean? Was he really her husband? Does she love him? When did they get married. Why could he not remember anything. Thoughts go racing through his mind but he pushes them aside for now. All he wants is for her to open her eyes. He frantically calls her name and rubs her hands. He gently slaps her cheeks in the hope of reviving her. He finds a glass of water next to the table and sprinkles the water on her face. She gently opens her eyes and stare back at the face she loves the most. She looks at the concern in his eyes and notices the quiver of his lips as he repeatedly calls out to her. She tries to get up and he immediately supports her body.

"Prachi, is it true? Do you love me?"

He wanted to ask a thousand questions. He wanted an explanation for all this but those can wait. All he wanted to hear was that she loved him. That will do for now. She looks into his eyes and for the first time notices the love brimming in them for her. Why did she not see this before? Was it always there? Ws she too cuaght up in her pain at what she thought Miind wanted that she did not notice it? As she revels in the joy at seeing his love she realises that Milind was repeating the question since she had not yet answered. She then slowly nods her head as as she looked deep into his eyes, her eyes reflecting the same love found in his. He heaves a sigh of relief and happiness as he feels a big load lift from his heart. He pulls her into a tight embrace as she smiles through the tears that had welled up again. Only these are happy tears at being reunited with her husband.

Neev had stepped out as soon as Milsi entered the room. He witnesses the scene before his eyes and rubs a tear from his eyes as he smiles at the two lovebirds. The smile was a mixture of happiness at finally being instrumental in reuniting the lost lovers and sadness at losing his one true love. He may have well lost her friendship too after what he did to her today. But he would do it again if he had to for her sake. Milsi will regain his memory. His wife will see him through this phase -not from afar but up close. That is what mattered at the end. With these thoughts he leaves the place and goes to his room to start packing his bag. The life outside was calling to him. It is hightime he made a clean break from the past and start his life afresh.   ; ;   ; ;
Edited by optimist - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
👏 👏 opti dear u deserve a bow and since i cannot locate those icons it is applaud...beautiful it really brought tears in my eyes especially the last para abt neev 😭 😭 .....i am so tired of waiting i hope we see michi minus the witch for sometime atleast
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: panache

Here, I will go first...i want to see Milind in a towel.. I know i am shameless!! 🤣

me too😆 but first he has to take shower😳 ask p for a towel maybe try pull her in😳😳

and then chasing her in bedroom in towel ofcourse😳😳😳😆😆

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Posted: 17 years ago
opti, sun and k_sarala, gr8 scenarios 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago

@Opti...Hun, I really like the wedding of complusion Idea...in fact I think that seems like the most likely scenerio and wouldn't be surprised if it happened. I actually think its quite sweet. I still dont know if thats a perfect exit for Neev...only because the family will think he has run away and he should have to feel ashamed for his actions though he knew why he did it. But other than that...I love it! 😊

@K sarla...again hun!! lovely scenerio...hai if only Milind would fall asleep on her🤗😍but I love this but...yes indeed our Shabbir is excellent at it...He with his ususal and excellent expressions😆 aaaaaaah that Ayesha!! needs a tight slap man!! lol I like how Milind gave it back to her in this bit...He asks her "Tu yeh dress kahe se li" for which Ayesha thoughtlessly says "Timhe pasand nahi hai na. Us Prachi bhi . Uska selection hi ghatiya hai. 😡Mera mistake tha ki use lekar ane ke liya kehna" Milind is surprised and says "Nai Mujhe bahut achcha laga and aur my thanks bholna chahratha tha" and goes out of the room with Ayesha looking shocked at the mistake she made😳

@Sun...wow...that was just beautiful hun👏perfect!!!!😊I especially liked this bit...Milind walked towards her as if bewitched, prachi slowly moved towards him as if some magnetic pull was drawing her to him. just perfect!

@Pippa...Hun, though I've read it before, I could just go on and on and on reading it...Loved it...my fav bit was the confrontation and when he asks her to stop him...but they're both drawn to each to such an extent that even if they wanted, it wouldn't have been possible...😊Loved it!

Edited by zcbcc34 - 17 years ago

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