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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: pippa

I'd written a mini FF last week based on Prachi-Neev engagement and Milind's reaction to it. Some of you have already read it. I'm wondering if I ought to shift it here.

Panache, let me know.

Pippa, sure move it here!😳

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Posted: 17 years ago
the scenarios are brilliant girls..keep them coming 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
I would really like this line for Neev too please...hehe 😆

"Main muskarata hoon isse meri aadat mat samajna…bas gaam choopane ki aada hai." He laughed bitterly.
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Posted: 17 years ago
Here is one more from me...

This is after Ayesha's doubts from yesterday..

Prachi walks away a little bit angry and hurt at the way ayesha had treated her at the dinning hall..

Prachi was walking with her head bent as she bumped into Mishraji.

"Beti, yeh tu kya kar rahi hai.." Mishraji asked hurt at the possibility of his daughter in law getting engaged to Neev

Prachi just stood there hiccupping not able to answer his truthfully as she saw ayesha from the corner of her eyes. She knew that Ayesha was intently listening to the conversation.

"Is mein aap saab ka kushi hai aur milind ka bhi" she said with sorrow and sadness in her voice. Hearing this Ayesha with a smile on her face walked away from there.

"Paar beta..." Mishraji interrupted

"kya tu kush hai yeh saab kar ke?" Mishraji asked again..

Tears streamed down prachi's eyes. "Mujhe pata hai beta tu kabhi Milind ko chod kar kisi aur kai saath shaadi nahi kar payaegi. woh tho tere har sas mein, tere har dhadkan mein shamil hai..woh mein dekh sakta hoon, beta. Yeh saab tum kyun kar rahi ho...Kis keliyae kar rahi ho" Mishraji asked in a hurried voice seeing his daughter-in-law tears..

"Mein yeh saab sirf Milind keliyae kar rahi hoon baba. un ki kushi sirf is mein hai" saying she wiped away her tears and gave a sad smile to Mishraji and turned around.

Standing there was Milind who had heard the tail end of the conversation. Mishraji also looked up startled watching Milind there.

"Prachi, tumse kuch baat karni hai" saying he excused himself and Prachi from his father and took her with him to the pooja room.

"Prachi...."

"Boliyae Milind"

Milind did not know how to raise the issue that had been plaguing him for the past couple of days.

"Woh...kya hai na prachi...." Prachi looked up at him wandering what he was going to say...

"Kya tu bhi wahi mehasoos kar rahi hai jo mein kar raha hoon"

Prachi looked at him with confusion. What was he talking about?

"Kya, baat hai Milind?" she asked staring into his eyes. Milind for the first time saw the despair and pain that was hidden in those eyes.

"Prachi.....tu kush kai na...." he asked hesitantly

"Saab log kush hai, isiliyae mein bhi..." she said giving him a round about answer

"Mein saab loogon ki baat nahi Kar rahi hoon. Mein tumhari Kushi ki baat kar rahi hoon. Tu kush hai na" he asked with tension.

"Aap kyun itna fikar kartein hain Mere kushi ki barae mein" she asked looking into his eyes..

"Kyun, Milind"

Milind could not stop himself as his heart bled seeing her eyes. His hands took hold of her shoulders as he said.."Kyuki Mein tumse pyar karta hoon,Prachi" saying he pulled her into his embrace as her hands went around his hips.

"Mein bhi aap se bahut pyaar karti hoon, Milind...Mein Bhi aap se bahut pyaar karti hoon...aap ne itna dheer kyun kiya....." she said hiccupping and hugging him tightly...


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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: zcbcc34

I would really like this line for Neev too please...hehe 😆

"Main muskarata hoon isse meri aadat mat samajna…bas gaam choopane ki aada hai." He laughed bitterly.

Rima...absolutely beautiful line!😳

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Posted: 17 years ago
@Sangs...Thank you hun..Finally someone asks her something!!! and so glad it's Mishraji!!! Got to applaud that man...he's a sweetheart and he has amazing genes...he gave us the god that is Milind after all.

Liked that he took her to the mandir...such a pure place to declare such pure feelings...Sangs I was absolutely reminded of the old Milind when he said, "Woh...kya hai na Prachi..."

and for the follwoing what can I say but 👏 👏 👏 "Saab log kush hai, isiliyae mein bhi..." she said giving him a round about answer

"Mein saab loogon ki baat nahi Kar rahi hoon. Mein tumhari Kushi ki baat kar rahi hoon. Tu kush hai na" he asked with tension.
Edited by zcbcc34 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
Aww that was such a nice scenario...I really hope that Mishraji questions Prachi about the engagement...

Just like Rims...really like the line "Mein saab loogon ki baat nahi Kar rahi hoon. Mein tumhari Kushi ki baat kar rahi hoon. Tu kush hai na"...I can actually imagine him saying this...

I'm saying it again... I really hope those creatives come and take all these beautiful ideas....we wont even ask for copy writes...
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Posted: 17 years ago

"Mein bhi aap se bahut pyaar karti hoon, Milind...Mein Bhi aap se bahut pyaar karti hoon...aap ne itna dheer kyun kiya....." she said hiccupping and hugging him tightly...

Reminds me of the hug outside Shah house just before their engagement...oh I wish they take this scenario!!! 😊
Edited by milindkidewani - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
Goldy..and Heebs...you guys should come up with some more..... 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
If the creatives are not willing to finish their PA track anytime soon then this is a scenario I would not mind seeing (I had already given this in the ED thread and a seperate thread on the subject but as adviced by Yasmin am posting here too).

Ayesha sensing that Prachi is hiding something and NP may not be actually engaged decides to ensure their wedding so that Prachi does not get Milsi.

She will again harp on the double wedding but Milsi may prevaricate, insisting that they need to wait for some time. In fact he will want to avoid marrying WWW knowing how he feels for Prachi though he may not actually say this aloud.

Ayesha may accept this but will try to ensure that atleast NP wedding goes through.

Mamaji will again be assigned the task of getting the family to agree to a hasty NP wedding and he goes about brainwashing everybody.

NP wedding will be arranged and Prachi will increasingly be unhappy. Neev is disturbed to see Prachi in this state. So he comes up with his own plan but does not discuss it with anybody.

On the day of the wedding he writes a letter stating that although he thought he loved Prachi, actually he just realised that he never really loved her. He was always in love with some other girl (maybe that Tina he mentioned yesterday) and had decided to elope with her.

Prachi is left on the mandap all decked up as a bride with no groom. Baba steps in and says that he cannot see the Shah family honour go down this way and requests Milsi to take the place of the groom.

Milsi hesitates first but then accepts for the sake of his father (and for his own sake because he loves Prachi).

So the wedding of 'compulsion' takes place.

Ofcourse WWW may create a scene. But Milsi may ignore her. If Neev is really smart he may even get WWW kidnapped on that day so that she is not around when all this happens. By the time she escapes, everything would be over.

After the wedding Milsi will try to 'win' his wife's love and we can get to see the awkward courtship between Michi, each thinking that the other does not love him/her but has been forced into this marriage. They still try to make the best out of the situation.

This scenario will give Jai his decent exit from the show and also keep the Michi fans happy.

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