Scenes - Ideas for the creatives at BT - Page 12

Originally posted by: chituku

tubelight is here hun.still blinking, don't know when will it light😛😳

I just fell off the chair reading that.....😆🤣

ok panache and rima...i tried and this is what i came up with. please dont bash me.

Prachi knocked on the door and waited for a reply. There was no reply and she knocked twice, than thrice. prachi assumed milind had fallen asleep "but what if he isn't asleep? What if he… " before she could finish the question a wave of panic went through her. She held the door knob and contemplated on whether or not to enter the room uninvited, but her worry got the best of her and she slowly opened the door making sure not to make a noise.

She entered the room carrying a tray of food and saw milind standing at the balcony with his hands in his pockets…the cold air was making his hair fly in all directions and a small smile played on her lips remembering the night they became one. She walked ahead and placed the tray on the table and slowly walked towards milind. She was 2 steps away from him when she saw him turn and look at her in a way which she had never seen him look at her before. It was almost a mixture of confusion, shock and…and love. Prachi shrugged off that notion and questioned herself on her foolishness.

She could see milind take his right hand out of his pocket and he was cautiously moving his hand towards her, she looked at him dazed and noticed that his hand was looming very closely to her cheek and she was just counting the seconds for his hand to finally touch her cheek. She felt his hand on her cheek and closed her eyes absorbing his touch but his hand quickly moved off her cheek as quickly as it touched it, she felt disappointed and opened her eyes to look at his face. She saw the shock on his face as he stammered… "prachi, tu" that shock quickly changed to guilt and he stammered an apology.

Prachi ignored the apology, and milind went on "is everything ok prachi, why are you here?"

Prachi smiled at his concern and said "milind you didn't finish your dinner, so I brought your food up for you" than thinking she might have crossed the line in their newfound friendship she quickly added.."I hope you don't mind?"

Milind shrugged the question off and thanked her. She was expecting him to go and eat but he looked back out in the balcony.
"Milind, your food is getting cold…please eat it"

Without waiting for a reply she made her way to where the food was and she could sense him following her. She waited for him to sit down, once they were seated she told him to tuck in.

Milind looked at her and wondered why she was doing all this. When he had first seen her in his room he thought she was another illusion but was brought out of that misconception once he felt her skin. The touch still lingered on his hand and he didn't want to eat lest that feeling went away. "milind please eat" she must have repeated that line a dozen times before he finally followed through. Milind listened to her and picked up the first morsel of food and was about to put it in his mouth when he stopped mid-way and asked her if she had eaten. She assured him that she had eaten and he began to eat his food in silence throwing a secret glance at her every few seconds. He looked at her sitting opposite him and it struck him how she made this room complete, how she made his life complete. But he knew she could never be his and with that thought he kept his gaze on the plate in front of him.
Once he had finished, he glanced at Prachi and saw how tightly her hands were clasped together, was she nervous? He wondered. Prachi picked up the tray, wished him a good night and left the room. As soon as she left the room felt empty and milind wished he could walk after her and be by her side but fate was not on his side and with a huge sigh he remained seated on the chair, closed his eyes and recollected all his memories of prachi and decided that although she could never be his, he would always be hers and he resolved to treasure those memories his whole life.

Prachi was in the kitchen thinking back to milind's touch and a silent tear rolled down her cheek thinking that that would be the last time he would ever touch her. But she quickly composed herself and reassured herself that if milind was happy than so was she. She knew that although milind would never be hers, she would always be his. With that thought she looked down at milinds left over food and, began to eat it, savouring each morsel as it had been touched by milind. A content smile was clearly visible on her face as she finished her meal and went to bed thinking of milind.

Like i said , i am no writer so please ignore any mistakes 😆

Shabz...oh my god...that was just beautiful...wow...seriously I feel like giving you a huge hug! 🤗 ...I'm actually speechless...that was just amazing... 😊 👏

Oh god..when he asked her whether she had eaten before he ate...that was just...god, how I wish this happens Shabz... 😳

In a word...PERFECT😊

Wow Shabz...that was sooo cute and touching...

Really beautiful...Aww this would be such a nice scenario...I hope they are reading all this...

Here is another one...

this is right after he hears about the engagement.

Prachi turned around to look at Milind. Why wasn't he happy? Wasn't this what he wanted, then why did he stand there as he got the shock of his life? She walked in his direction but before, she could say anything to him, he rushed out through the doors, leaving everyone confuse behind.

Getting into his car, he drove not knowing where to go. What the hell was wrong with him? He was in love with Ayesha and Prachi was his new friend and she loved Neev. He should be happy for her, then why did all this feel soo wrong. With his turmoil in his heart, he drove to the beach not knowing exactly why. It seemed familiar yet he couldn't remember anything.

He stepped out of his car and walked through the deserted beach. Prachi's thoughts were just not leaving his mind. It had in some way bewitched his mind and soul. Standing against the cold breeze of the ocean, he just couldn't take it anymore. He didn't care if she loved him or not but he would say it to her. This was the only way he could lighten his heart.

Prachi on the other hand was pacing around the living room waiting for Milind. It as late and he hadn't come back. Everyone else in the house went to sleep without even bothering about his whereabouts. On top of that, the weather was getting worse outside. She knew she couldn't stay like this; she had to find him and make sure everything was fine. Without even thinking she rushed out. But at her surprise, she saw his car entering through the gates. Seeing him getting out of the car, she ran to him not bothering about the rain

"Where have you been, main kitna perashaan thi…aap ek phone bhi nai kar sakte" she said standing in front of him already half soaked.

"Why do you care…tum mai kya farak parta…" he said as he placed his hands on her shoulder. She didn't answer him. He mattered to her, but for his sake she kept quiet.

When she didn't say anything, he shook her by the shoulders "Why does it matter Prachi…Why do you care so much for me…Why is that I can't take you off my mind?...I know that that you are in love with Neev but I still can't help it…I.." he said not able to finish the last words.

Milind stared at her. Was it tears in her eyes or was it the rain.

He let go of her and started to move away, but at his surprise, she took hold of his hand.

"You what Milind" she said looking up at him. He turned around to look at her. Her eyes were full of love. Not knowing if there were for him, he cupped her face in his hands "I…I love you" he said placing his head against hers.

Unable to hide her feelings anymore, her body crashed on his as she hugged him. How long had she waited for him to utter those three words. When she felt his strong arms around her, she knew that finally he was hers again.

Even if they stood there under the storm, they knew that in each others arms, their hearts were in peace. And this was how it would remain kayamath tak.

Awww, Shabz and Heebz, they're just simply beautiful! Btw, i posted another one on page 14.

@Bhav....aww cute is that...he see's her everywhere😊 I esspecially liked this bit...He walked up to her and held her in his arms. "You have no idea how much you haunt me." He whispered.

It was lovely Bhav, just so cuteeeeeee...lighthearted and romantic👏😊

@Heeba...taking a read...**Oh heebs...you got me dreaming about his big strong arms again😳...*sighs* but this part I really really liked Milind stared at her. Was it tears in her eyes or was it the rain👏

How heartbreaking...😭

Loved it...but you already know that😛😉

Shabz and Heebz - Brilliant!!! 👏
Shabz - you are very good! Don't put yourself down..your scene was great!! 😳
@ heebz as always it was very romantic...i will come up with another one in a bit! 😳

@Bhav...that was soo cute...after seeing yesterday's episode I can actually imagine Milind seeing Prachi everywhere..love the ending "You have no idea how much you haunt me." He whispered....awww simply beautiful 😊

@chits...still waiting 😳

During PA once again, imagine Prachi and Milind on the terrace...at any point after today...

Prachi let the cool night air caress her face and she stood against a rail watching the city lights ahead of her. She knew she was not alone tonight, she knew he had followed her but she did not dare move. She closed her eyes and willed him to come closer, though what she would do if he did she hardly knew. Milind moved towards her, he was certain she wasn't aware of his presence and he had been watching her for some time. He saw her arms wrap around herself as the wind hit her. He saw her hair fly in defiance and he saw the solitary tear that rolled down her cheek. He was behind her now and he could not stop the hand that reached out to touch her. He did not see any surprise in her eyes when she turned to him but she saw it in his.

His hand uncurled from his side and she saw it move towards her cheek. Her eyes were wide as though she had been startled and she felt him touch the skin above her cheek. His hand was shaking and Prachi covered it with her own. He wiped the tear that she didn't know she had shed and she felt his breath on her skin as he spoke, "In aankon ke aasoon, muje dard kyun deta hain?" Prachi did not speak but he did not expect her to. His hand flittered across her cheek to the stray strands of hair that fell across her face and Prachi lowered her eyes. His caught her hair between his fingers and slowly pushed it behind her ear; he savoured the feel of her skin as his hand glided across it, "In baaloon ki khushbo, itni jaani pechaani se kyun hain?" he whispered in her ear and Prachi felt her breath catch in her throat from the proximity and she felt as though she was frozen in time, "In saansoon ka thamna, itna bekaraar kyun karta hain?" he said this time more loudly, though it was still barely above a whisper and he moved so his face was close to hers now. His lips were so close, she thought she felt them press against hers for a moment but she couldn't be sure. He lowered his eyes to her mouth and he saw her lips part in response. He did not kiss her but she kept her eyes closed in anticipation. It was when she felt his thumb brush across her lower lip that she opened them. Her lips were soft and he saw them twist into a small smile though only he would know it and he spoke again, "In hooton ki muskuraahat, mere dil ki khushi kyun hain?" and he pressed his forehead against hers. He felt her chest rise and fall rapidly and his hand trailed from her temple and down her throat to the origin of her heartbeat. He could feel her heart thud violently against his hand and once again his mouth opened to speak but could it be true? Shaking his inhibitions, Milind uttered the words that had plagued his mind for so long, "In dhadkano pe, likhi hain meri kahaani aisa lagta kyun hain?" and with that he felt Prachi's arms rise from beside her and he pulled her to him fiercely, holding on to her in hope that she would keep him afloat but little did he know, he was already drowning.