FF-Laaga Chunari Mein Daag-PT17/Pg131-25/10 updt - Page 17

Originally posted by: dipsyworld

This is an emotional part.😭😭 Very well-written, Sangeetha.

What is Milind going to do to bring her back to his life? Even if he succeeds in his attempts, i dont think she will be able to forget what he did to her. 😭 - you are absolutely right...its going to take a long time for her to forgive him...

Waiting for the next part.

Sangs as always a well written Chapter but it left me pretty confused. I am not sure of the setting of this story. Are they not in Delhi now or are they in Mumbai. I was under the impression that Prachi went to Delhi with her baby son. If it is, then where was she during the pregnancy, child birth and the initial months of Ritwik? Who took care of her since she just seems to have taken up a job? And if they are in Delhi, how come Milsi ended up at the beach?

A couple of more doubts:

Originally posted by: panache

Those same eyes that had once looked at him with aching need and love now looked at him with hatred.

I thought Prachi had not yet started loving Milsi when the rape happened or had she? How come Milsi was aware of it?

From where did this thought come from. Had he fallen in love with his wife or had it been always been there simmering in the farthest corner of his mind and he was just realizing it. Beads of sweat formed in his forehead as he slowly wiped it away with his hand.

What thought had come? Is he thinking that he had raped Prachi because deep down he loved her? I dont think rape has anything to do with love. It is purely an act of violence. Or is it that he had realised that he loved Prachi now?

I am sorry I am asking all these questions but they do not belittle your writings. I simply loved it. This is for my own understanding given that my brain is pretty muddled with so many FFs.

Originally posted by: optimist

Sangs as always a well written Chapter but it left me pretty confused. I am not sure of the setting of this story. Are they not in Delhi now or are they in Mumbai. - Actually they are in Delhi!!! I somehow missed that while i wrote the rest... I was under the impression that Prachi went to Delhi with her baby son. If it is, then where was she during the pregnancy, child birth and the initial months of Ritwik? - That will be revealed as the story progresses....She was not with him after the rape... Who took care of her since she just seems to have taken up a job? - That will be revealed in subsequent parts....And if they are in Delhi, how come Milsi ended up at the beach? - That my fault...i have PA...totally forgot that they are meeting in a different city...probably, i should have said madras..at least that way the beach could have made sense..Thanks for catching the glitch in my story!!😆 Will correct it...maybe i will make it the banks of the river.....rather than the beach!!!!😆

Originally posted by: optimist

Sangs as always a well written Chapter but it left me pretty confused. I am not sure of the setting of this story. Are they not in Delhi now or are they in Mumbai. I was under the impression that Prachi went to Delhi with her baby son. If it is, then where was she during the pregnancy, child birth and the initial months of Ritwik? Who took care of her since she just seems to have taken up a job? And if they are in Delhi, how come Milsi ended up at the beach?

A couple of more doubts:

I am sorry I am asking all these questions but they do not belittle your writings. I simply loved it. This is for my own understanding given that my brain is pretty muddled with so many FFs.

Originally posted by: wande

I'm coming back soon sis 😃 😉and I'm back and better than ever😆

first of all sis I'm really sorry I that couldn't say anything for part 4 and that's because I was really sad and mad at Milind for doing that to his own wife,how could he?😡but that is gone now, - Good..that part was necessary for me to continue this ff....but good that it is passed now...

and this is now so I'm saying it with all my heart thank u my sweet sister u r beautiful-lovely and ur FF r wonderful,wow and awesome👏👏and this one is really touching my heart because it tallk about some women or wife out there who does not know how to fight back because they think that it's there husband's right 2 do as he like and want with them😭😭so thank u very much my sweet angel🤗I love it😃 - I love you too hun...I really think that the only reason i want to write about this is because it is perfectly alright for a woman to stand up and move on after things like this happen to them....and i want that to be the message for this ff..I think woman should be strong and walk ahead in life even after something like this happens to them...😳