Originally posted by: zcbcc34
GOLDY!!!! Bauhat tarsaya tha tumne...sach main!!! ๐ก Sowie!!!๐ ๐ but jaanu THANK YOU soooooo much!! ๐ค and I forgive you because you were having having Michi moments of your own ๐ณ ๐ haaye mujhe sharam aa gayi.....โบ๏ธ
okay...this is rather inconsequential but I thought this was so cute when I was imagining it... This part was just for michi moments only ๐..My fic is just a breezy love story....I don't think I can handle something serious like u. Only the NP marriage part here was something which was needed for the story ahead. I m writing the next part..hope to post it soon...
She smiled as Milind big strong hands held her tiny ones. ๐ so cuteeeeeeee ๐ณ
Hai...dono ki dil kaise mil gaye haina?...I LOVE Milind for sneaking in at night...oh my god...my heart just beat so fast when he grabbed her from behind...actually reminds me of an incident but thats for another day... ๐ ... Ok now u have me intrigued...I wanna know it..tell me fast fast....
Prachi is so cute na?...I LOVED LOVED LOVED when Milind said...I dont need anything to remember you by....that was Brilliant... Oh thankyou...U made my day!!!
Hai...got to give it to you...you made Daadi useful in this...LOL..I know, I used to love daadi in the beginning of the serial. she seemed to be so mature and intelligent aur jab thali ke baingan ke tarah... kabhi neev kabhi milsi...๐ก.Bechare Neev Prachi...kisi aur ke sapno mein khoye hue hain aur yahan Inder or Pranay ๐ก ๐ ๐ ...But I love Inder so I cant hate him even for that... ๐ณ Its not the parents fault. They want what is best for the children except fo Neharika..
Jaanu...pleaseeeeee dont get annoyed at me..Annoyed at you??? kabhi nahin...๐..tinsy bit of constructive criticism... ๐ณ ...up...some of the english translations are missing I know I forgot....sowie......and some of the sentences are disjointed...e.g. dont seem like they're in paragraphs...SOWIEEEEEEEEEEE ๐ญ But you love me so you'll forgive meeeeeeee ๐ GOD!!! I wrote in such a hurry...everybody was breathing down my neck,,and on top of that u gave me an ultimatum that u won't update..so I just wrote quickly and posted it, didn't even proof read...sorry ๐ญ๐ญ