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Posted: 17 years ago
Loved it BC! That was a much needed conversation. Really liked Riley's name story. Riley Jenson seems funny too. 😃 Can't wait for Milind to get his memory back now.
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: sailat

haha!! LOVED IT!! my thoughts exactly....since this sequel started i always wondered....y was his son named Riley....well, wudn't make a difference if he'd been outisde india but that's sooo cute and Milind is soo adorable and such an honourable person!! love him!!

I just really wanted to give their son an English name but it would make no sense if there wasn't a reason behind it hence the flashback. 😃 Thank you!

Originally posted by: $weet Ema

Brilliant, 😊 soo thats the story behind Riley's name..aww..I think that is very sweet of Milind to have kept the promise to that guy Riley.. 😳 lol..Prachi wishing the baby was a girl, 😆 I loved the whole conversation between Milind and Prachi in the present.
Thanks BC =]

I'm so glad you liked the conversation between Milind and Prachi cos I really struggled to find the right words there. Thank You. 😊

Originally posted by: canadianbeauty

oh my gosh! you have no idea how adorable that part was! keep up the wonderful work! i am already excited for the next part 😛

Thank you so much, So glad you liked it and I'm also really excited for the next part of your FF.

Originally posted by: tweety_me14

This part was brilliant CB! Im so glad Milind and Prachi had that conversation..It was needed, especially for Milind...He ought to know everything...
And the Riley bit was very cute! It was very sweet of Milind..!
Waiting for the next update!!

He did need to know everything but first he had to be willing to listen with an open mind, not clouded by any of his suspicions. Thank you! 😛

Originally posted by: shabzc1

brilliant part BC...so the reason behind Riley's name has been revealed...loved the flashback. i also love the way michi are finally begining to talk 😳
thanx for the update 😃

Yep, they have cleared the air and now they are going to find it a lot easier to communicate. Thanks

Originally posted by: alveera

luv this part BC,
its superb,brilliant.
that story behind riley's name was so sweet.
and glad that they r talking.
waiting for the next bit. 😛

Thank you so much ! 😃 Really appreciate it.

Originally posted by: zcbcc34

BC..I had read this part at night but couldn't keep my eyes open to comment. Reading the part where Prachi re-told the story of how they met etc just bought back really fond memories of your previous one and I must say I went back to read it all over again this morning.

I thought the line where she says "dont you dare get angry at me, look what you done to me..." was hilarious and I could imagien the whole scene.

I really liked Riley Jenson too...seemed like a sweet guy, maybe waaaay to excited lol but thats a good thing...

Thank you 😊

😆 In my Gen Leap FF, some of the orignal Riley's personality has definitely rubbed off on his namesake.😆 Wow, you actually re-read the first part, I'll take that as a huge compliement especially from a wonderful writer like yourself. 😊

Originally posted by: wande

wow BC awesome thank u dear 👏 and Prachi getting angry at Milind wow now that's news to me😆

😆 She had every reason to be angry with him. She is in labour and he tells her that he intends giving their son some outlandish American name. 😆 Thank you.

Originally posted by: blind horizon

I read quite a few parts together and I must say BC you've done an excellent job at identifying bot their sides of the pain. It was very obvious that Milind would try shutting himself from the current stream of events. Wat I found particularly sad was Prachi's plight the poor woman had to bear it all without any sense of comfort. It's just as well that they vented their anger at each other. The flashbacks were really nice especially the Riley Jenson one. 😆 I could just imagine Prachi giving Milind killer looks when disclosed his intention of naming his son after that American to her. 😆

Glad both come across as sympathetic. It's no one's fault really, just a bad situation.😔 Thank you for the comments. 😛

Originally posted by: jinc118

Yahoo...finally i know the secret behind Riley. That was an awesome part BC. I am glad Milind finally got the right answers. Are you planning on continuing this FF cause i remember you said that this one would only be a few parts...so just wondering. I really loved the flashback parts...it was too funny.

I keep saying there is only 3 or more 4 parts left but then I keep finding out that I need to add extra parts 😆 so I'm going to stop predicting when I'm going to end this FF but I do have a definite end in mind. Thank you for commenting and I am very eagerly awaiting the next part of your FF. 😊

Originally posted by: swetha10

Hey BC wonderful part... 👏 Nice to c them speak n finally Milsi is trying to knw the entire truth abt their married life.... 😊 Riley's story was sunny but cute.... 😉 i really enjoyed reading it...plzz continue soon 😊

Yes, he now knows the whole truth and more importantly, he is appreciative of the life he had with his wife and children. Thank you so much for reading and commenting. 😊

Originally posted by: Charmed...

Loved it BC! That was a much needed conversation. Really liked Riley's name story. Riley Jenson seems funny too. 😃 Can't wait for Milind to get his memory back now.

Mmmph, will Milind get his memory back? Got to admit struggling to come up with a plausible solution to all of that. Thank you for the comments. 😃

Part 9 is up. Once again guys, thank you so very much for reading and I really appreciate your comments and encouragement.

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Posted: 17 years ago
Wonderful update BC!
Im so glad Prachi's uncle came on time and helped her to make the right decision...
Plus Im loving the way Milind is beginning to feel for his kids and shouldering responsibilities...His actions make his all the more lovable! I really adore Milind- even with amnesia!
I think more than loving Prachi, i admire your in your FF...She is a woman of great mettle and I love her courage and patience...!
Will wait for your next update...I loved this part!
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Posted: 17 years ago
nice part BC, 😛
luv milind interaction with kids and u really potrayed his emotions and feelings so perfectly.
eager to know wat next .
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Posted: 17 years ago
thank you so much, loved the part! (sorry for a late reply, exams! 😆 ) it kept me wondering about what was up next, please, please, update soon! i kind of want a scene where prachi accidentally hugs mills, just over a moment of happiness!!! bring something like that up. that would so cute & so sweet, anyway love everything that is going on. loved mills interaction with kids if only he was proper like that with prachi! 😆 when r updating next, please tell?
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Posted: 17 years ago
awesome,awesome,awesome,awesome,beautiful,beautiful,beautifu l,beautiful,wonderful,wonderful,wonderful,wonderful and u my darling r just too lovely and simply the best thank u sweetheart👏and it so look like Milind is getting there with his family once again me very happy about that😃 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
lovely part JC...its so nice to see michi behave like any other normal couple. its also nice to see milsi bonding with his kids...its evident that payal is indeed a daddy's little girl 😊 the last part about football and saif was nice.. i could just imagine michi cosying up on the couch watching a footie match or a saif starrer 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
Nice part BC..... 👏 Michi behaving like a normal couple is really very cute....finally Prachi's uncle is there to help her....Milind's bonding with Payal n riley is very sweet... 😳 waiting for the next part..plzz continue 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
Bc just read the update oh man it was so nice. I just couldn't help feeling touched by the fact that Milind felt proud of his children yes he may have forgotten them but their love persists in his heart. Prachi made a good decision and I'm glad it was the right one. I hope Milind is able to return to the office too. Poor Paayal still not over Mr Snuggles. 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
Really nice FF
You write very well
This PA track is way better than the show
You have handled it beautifully

Thanks a lot
Can't wait for the next part

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