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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: shabzc1

wow BC..that was one intense part. prachi has finally cracked, im glad she got some of her frustration out, hopefully now milsi will try harder to get to know his family.


I'm glad everyone is being sympathetic to Prachi and not expecting her to be some sort of saint who will tolerate anything. Thank you for reading.

Originally posted by: Charmed...

BC, i still prefer part 6 to the creatives rubbish. It made me cry a bit and felt so bad for Prachi. She needed to vent her fustration for once. Does this mean that there's only one more part left?


This FF is turning out to be a lot bigger than I initially though, so now I'm estimating there to be at least 5 more parts. Thanks.

Originally posted by: sailat

awww, poor Prachi!! and then there's Milind....whom one feels bad for coz the guy can't recall the drastic changes that his later life had taken!! Hope all goes well! Prachi must be soo exhausted with her work, children and a non-responsive Milind (viz a big deal coz he was soo loving and used to dote on her)!! :(


I guess Prachi in this FF is like every modern working mum, having to juggle with the pressures of home and work. Thank you for reading.

Originally posted by: alveera

i luv this part, its not depressing and that showdown it was needed they both were in need to ventout their fustration or anger watever u say. will help them.
beautifully written.
waiting for the next part.


You're right, the showdown was needed and it proves to be a turning point for them. Thanks.

Originally posted by: Magno


So she did. That's a nice addition, I still remember how your Ayesha in this story was no where near 'evil', in fact she's quite kind but somewhat rather 'insensitive' towards other people's feelings and conditions. I think she somewhat had changed for the better, maybe her baby did it for her.

Great two parts, BC you're doing such a great work I can't really say it enough. Please don't even start comparing your work of PA with Kreative's, gaaah it's like the sun and earth, ice and fire etc etc. Kreative and what they're doing to PA track, Michi and this show in general are... not even tolerable.

You've exhausted your 'reserved post' spots. Great that you're going to make this longer, will be really disappointed if you finish it only in one or two more parts. Anyway I'm waiting for the next part.


Dear Magno, where are you?! Haven't seen you post in a really long while. 😔 Thank you for all the kind words and yes, motherhood really changed Ayesha for the better.

Originally posted by: wande

ok I don't like this Milind at all hands down I mean come on the guy is not even trying 2 remember anything at all but sit and watch TV all day!!me very angry with or at him for that anyway thank u very dear it really a beautiful and also a sad part but all the same dear u did a good job thanks a lot


I guess he has been rather unlikable till now but he does start to redeem himself from hereon. Thank you for all the sweet comments. 😛

Originally posted by: $weet Ema


What a an exciting update...Prachi finally lost it..with good reason ofcourse...poor Payal's Mr snuggles...

Thanks BC.


R.I.P Mr Snuggles. 😭 😆 Am so glad everyone, understands and empathises with Prachi. Thank you for always reading. 😊

Originally posted by: canadianbeauty

hi BC....it's me again...lol

i really like this FF....it's very interesting, plus I adore your writing style

can you please let me know when you're going to post the next part to this FF?

I am really looking forward to it


Thank you so much. Hope you enjoy Chapter 7. 😊

Hey guys, the first part of Chpt 7 is up, will try to get the second part done later today, provided there is no power cuts. 😡
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Posted: 17 years ago
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I liked chapter 7. I'm glad Milind's trying to make an effort. Looking forward to the second bit. 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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This is for Ali 👏 👏 for drumming some sense and giving Milind support. It was nice to see Milind fulfilling his responsibility towards the end.

Thanks BC, looking forward to second part soon,can't wait =]

Please no power cuts =[ lol.

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Yay!!!

Amazing job....you are a really talented writer! 👏

I am really impressed with the way you managed to depict Milind's inner turmoil...well done!

Can't wait for your next update :)
Edited by canadianbeauty - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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oh, absolutely loved it!! Love Payal...she's like a little lady...so grown up!! Thanx for updating!:D
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow BC it's lovely dear thank u very much 👏and please update another one soon dear 😳

awwwwww Milind it feel so good 2 read about him doing all that with his kids now he might not remember them or anything but he is trying and that's all that matter

thank u once again babe.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow BC..im so glad milsi and Ali had that chat. it has finally sunk ito milsi that alot has changed and i liked the two choices Ali gave milsi, and im happy milsi chose the option of going home and trying to know his family. the last scene in the kitchen must have been a surprise for prachi.

thanx for the update BC 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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BC I just read the last two updates..I really don't know how I missed them...They were simply amazing! I gueaa I'll fall short of words to describe what I feel! I feel really bad for Prachi, but again im very happy to see the way she's coping with everything..She really is putting up a very brave front...Can't blame Milind for anything...Just hope he gets his memory back soon!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: Charmed...

I liked chapter 7. I'm glad Milind's trying to make an effort. Looking forward to the second bit. 😊

Thank you, I think it's slowly dawning onto him that this is his life now and it's what he makes out of it.

Originally posted by: $weet Ema

This is for Ali 👏 👏 for drumming some sense and giving Milind support. It was nice to see Milind fulfilling his responsibility towards the end.

Thanks BC, looking forward to second part soon,can't wait =]

Please no power cuts =[ lol.

Yeah, Ali is a great friend. He wasn't afraid to be tough on Milind. Thank you and unfortunately we did end up having 3 power cuts in the week. 😆

Originally posted by: canadianbeauty

Yay!!!

Amazing job....you are a really talented writer! 👏

I am really impressed with the way you managed to depict Milind's inner turmoil...well done!

Can't wait for your next update :)

Thank you so much! Describing how the characters feel is actually one of the toughest parts for me to write. 😊

Originally posted by: sailat

oh, absolutely loved it!! Love Payal...she's like a little lady...so grown up!! Thanx for updating!:D

Awww, I prefer her as a little baby, even if she is bouncing of the walls on a sugar rush. Thank you. 😊

Originally posted by: wande

wow BC it's lovely dear thank u very much 👏and please update another one soon dear 😳

awwwwww Milind it feel so good 2 read about him doing all that with his kids now he might not remember them or anything but he is trying and that's all that matter

thank u once again babe.

You're right, the most important thing is that he is making an effort. Thanks. 😛

Originally posted by: shabzc1

wow BC..im so glad milsi and Ali had that chat. it has finally sunk ito milsi that alot has changed and i liked the two choices Ali gave milsi, and im happy milsi chose the option of going home and trying to know his family. the last scene in the kitchen must have been a surprise for prachi.

thanx for the update BC 😊

Yep, he could have just run away from his problems. And poor Prachi finally got a respite. Thank you for reading and commenting. 😃

Originally posted by: tweety_me14

BC I just read the last two updates..I really don't know how I missed them...They were simply amazing! I gueaa I'll fall short of words to describe what I feel! I feel really bad for Prachi, but again im very happy to see the way she's coping with everything..She really is putting up a very brave front...Can't blame Milind for anything...Just hope he gets his memory back soon!

I'm glad Prachi is so likable. I wanted a character who is strong but who we can still feel sympathetic towards. Thank you. 😊

Hi guys

Thank you for all your comments. Scrapped Part 2 of Chpt 7 and just made it Chpt 8 instead. Enjoy.

BC

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Posted: 17 years ago
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haha!! LOVED IT!! my thoughts exactly....since this sequel started i always wondered....y was his son named Riley....well, wudn't make a difference if he'd been outisde india but that's sooo cute and Milind is soo adorable and such an honourable person!! love him!!

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