FF: MP Zindagi ka safar Pt 14/pg 14 05/07 - Page 7

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Posted: 17 years ago
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amazing part
too cute 😳
cont soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#62
you are a darling ,such a good writer,i guess nagpal uncle should learn script writing from you,i think you must be very romantic person,your romantic part between michi is soooo goooood,i feel like the entire scene is just playing before my eyes,one knd requst pls update the parts daily but provided if you have time,thank.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#63
nice part becoz it was a surprise. 👏 😆 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
#64
thank you all for your sweet messages.

I really wished all our FF's are read by Mr. Nagpal uncle. We don't mind he stop writting and copy our scripts.

Ekta will get free lancers for this job.

i hate the present track running MA & NP.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#65
okk now plllz continue soon. 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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plllllls continue soon bcoz i don't know what's ur name.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part - 11

Milind & Prachi were disturbed by a phone call. Prachi picked the call.
Prachi: Hello
Premlatha: Hello beta? How r u? how is Milind
Prachi: I'm Fine ma. Milind is also fine
Premlatha: When are you guyz coming? We all are waiting for you.
Prachi: Ma but I told you we will join you for dinner. It is only 2 PM.
In the mean time, Milind is getting very cousy 😳with prachi. He is not allowing her to talk.
Prachi: Stop it milind😡.
Premlatha: kya huwa beta?
Prachi: nothing ma. Fine we will try to come by 4 PM.
Premalatha: Yes beta I want you to come home early as everybody is here. They want to spend time with you as you will not be available for 2 months
Prachi: What 2 months! Who said u Ma?
Premlatha: Beta Milind had called in the morning, and he said you are going to Turkey for 2 months.
Prachi: Ok fine ma, we will reach there.
Prachi was silent for sometime.
Milind: Kya huwa jaan? Wat happened to you?
Prachi: you always hide things from me.
Milind: I have never hidden anything.
Prachi: you have milind. You never said you called ma and told that we are going to Turkey for 2 months
Milind: arey woh. Yes jaan I had told you we are going to honeymoon for 1 month but then I changed my plan to 2 months. That set.
Prachi: That set milind. One month only was more but two months I have to bare you 24/7?
Milind: what am'I such a pain for you.
Prachi: yes, obviously milind. Its such a pain 😛to tolerate you.
Milind was now mischievous. 😳
Milind: wait my dear wife. I will take care of you in Turkey and for now also I am not going to leave you.
Prachi, screamed out, stop it milind. Let me go.
They played for some time and around 3.00 PM both were ready to leave for SHAH Mansion. Milind & Prachi had planned to do some shopping and then go home.
Prachi purchased some gifts for Ayesha, ma & dadi. Milind purchased some required items for their journey to turkey.
Around 4.10 PM both arrived at SHAH Mansion..
All the family members were there to welcome them. It was for the first time prachi was visiting them after marriage.
Premlatha: Milind beta andar aao
Prachi: Ma can I also come in.
Premlatha: Milind see your wife is getting jealous.
On the other side, Ayesha took prachi inside.
Milind: Ma, you know something. Your daughter is not as pretty as you are.
Premlatha: Stop it milind?
Ayesha: Prachi tera yeh junglee Maa ko chane ke jhaad pe kyu chada raha hein.
Milind heard ayesha's verdict and immediately placed his hand around Ayesha's shoulder
Milind: Oh! My beautiful saali, you are worried why I praised your mom.
Ayesha: Yes
Milind: becoz you both sisters look like Chipkalis🤢 (Lizard) and my Mother-in-law looks like Madhubala (actress).
Prachi & Ayesha frowned at Milind😡.
Dadi called Milind and he left the place.
Ayesha: Prachi how do you tolerate this guy
Prachi: No ayesha. He is the best husband in the world.
She contd., I do not know what good things I have done, that god blessed me with such a good husband
Ayesha: Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, you are so fond of Milind that you are praising him and forgotten us.
Prachi: I can never forget you people. My family is always my pride and milind is my life.
Ayesha: OK OK, now common lets go upstairs to our favorite room.
Ayesha & Prachi made a move to their room, which both of them had shared since childhood.
Ayesha: SO prachi what all happened after marriage.
Prachi: Nothing
Ayesha: what do you mean nothing. I was eagerly waiting to hear from you.
There was a voice over.
Milind: can I tell what and all happened after marriage, Ayesha😆.
Ayesha: What are you doing here?
Milind: obviously hearing to your gossips
Prachi: that is bad manners milind.
Milind: what to do, if my wife is away for a second also I get restless and start searching her
Ayesha: your wife is not running anywhere now please leave us alone.
Ayesha pushed milind out of the room and while closing the door she called milind and said "I need to talk to you Jijaji, but not now, later"
Milind: Is it about what happened after-----
He did not continue also, ayesha banged the door.
Ayesha came back to prachi and sat beside her.
Ayesha: Prachi are you happy.
Prachi: ofcourse Ayesha. I am really happy. I remember a time where Maa would be worried about us. About our marriage & right life partner, but today I feel parents blessings always helps children. I wish even you get a perfect life partner like milind
Ayesha blushed and changed the topic.
Both came down. Milind was making funny faces for Prachi.
Dadi saw milind with funny tricks, she passed a comment.
Milind should be tired, prachi take him up.
Milind came to rest in the bedroom.
Milind: Prachi your dadi is really clever.
Prachi: you are making such funny faces and she could sense that you are gone mad
Milind: what mad. You are surrounded by your family and I m not getting a chance to speak to you.
Prachi: speak to me. What is that so important.
Milind: that is nothing else, but
He placed his finger on his lips pointing to state what he wants
Prachi: milind you are too much, its hardly sometime we are here and you are such a lalchi (greedy) man.
Milind: Yes I am lalchi. Now common don't waste time and give me a kiss or else your family members will come to trouble us.
Prachi made a way back stating noooo, but milind hands pulled her towards him and he kissed her😛, prachi wanted to reply back, but Ayesha walked in…
It was such an embrassing situation, ayesha immdtly closed her eyes with her hand. Milind & Prachi disbursed within a second.
Ayesha: Oh god you guyz cannot lock the door is it.
Milind: and you cannot knock and come.
Ayesha: I thought as the door is not locked I can make an entry
Milind: stop it. After your marriage we will not disturb you people like this.
Ayesha: fine. Next time onwards I will knock and come. Now can I speak to you.
Prachi: Yes ayesha you can speak
Ayesha: No prachi, I wanted to discuss only with Milind
Prachi: What milind and what have I done to you.
Ayesha: Its nothing concerned with you prachi. I will fast discuss with Jiju and then tell you.
Contd: JIJAJI chale
Milind not willing to leave prachi alone😕,
Milind: do you need to talk to me now.
Ayesha: Yes now, becoz Maa will call you for dinner.
Milind unwillingly along with ayesha walked out.
Prachi was left wondering "is it the same ayesha who did not like Milind and always called him JUNGLEE"
Milind & Ayesha were out in the garden.
Milind: So ayesha what is that you want to discuss with me.
Ayesha: Jiju I do not know where to start with
Milind: Tell me ayesha. Infact I am very happy that you wanted to discuss your problem with me. From now on I will be ur friend, ur brother and as well ur father.
Ayesha: Thanx Jiju. I wanted to discuss about Neev
Milind: about Neev, I didn't get you
Ayesha: Yes I meant Neev, i hardly know him. I met him in your marriage, and he is always finding some bahanas to call me and speak. Infact I am a bit worried.
Milind: Ayesha plz don't get tensed. I know Neev, since childhood. He is very important to me. And I know him well, that he has not fallen in luv. But after hearing to you I feel he is really in luv with you.
Ayesha: I cannot call this as luv but I would like to know more about him then I will be able to take a decision.
Milind: don't worry ayesha. Everything will be fine. I wish you both get married. And I promise I will help you.
Ayesha: Thanks jiju. But one thing Prachi should not know about this.
Milind: fine she will not come to know. But even you should promise me on e thing " once you feel that you luv hime" that day you will tell me.
Ayesha: she blushed and replied, yes I will?
Milind: OK now shall we go in, everybody should be waiting for us.
Inside prachi was distributing the gifts they purchased. Each one liked it. Premlatha called everyone for dinner.
The dinner ended. Milind was of all praises for food. They wanted to make a move, as it would be too late by the time they reach home.
Milind: Thank you for the delightful dinner
Dadi: its our pleasure. We inturn would like to thank you that our daughter looks so happy. That shows how much luv you have endeavoured on her.
Milind: She is my wife. And I want her to be happy for ever
Everybody accompanied them to the door. Premlatha was missing.
Milind: Arey where is Maa?
Premlatha: I am coming…..wait don't go?
Dadi: so when are you pople leaving for turkey?
Milind: Tomorrow night Dadi.
Premlatha arrived with packets of snacks for milind.
Premlatha: Milind beta, this is for you. Some snacks, so that you can carry it for turkey. For two months this should be enough.
All laughed in loud.
Prachi & Milind took blessing and left for home.
Ayesha accompanied them till the car.
Ayesha muttered in prachi's ear "go and enjoy 😳and take good care of my Junglee jiju".
Prachi was shy. Milind shall we leave prachi.
Prachi: Yes milind, she hugged Ayesha and sat in car.
Milind: Take care ayesha.
Ayesha: Bye jiju, take care of Prachi.
Both left:

Next: Trip to turkey

Leave ur comments. I enjoy reading them. Bear with spelling if any with error. have not done spell check.
Edited by Kekta-jadu - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#68
great part
love the jiju-saali relationship
cont soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#69
love ur michi,,,cont please.. 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
#70
nice part continue soon
sorry to say cant surf on net for atleast 2-3 weeks
balance is just 5rs in the account.

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