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critically-sane

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Posted: 17 years ago

#261

JC hun...

the song the mood the setting the people..! all perfect..!

Awww.. michi dancing makes me want to see them do that on screen.. damn nag man..1

loved it hun..

loved Bobby for playing saviour.. lol..!

update soon hun..

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@-JC-

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Posted: 17 years ago

#262

Originally posted by: critically-sane
JC hun...

the song the mood the setting the people..! all perfect..! Reeely😃Danx. i luv you and thanx for the list. now i have 3 more songs to add to my ipod.😛

Awww.. michi dancing makes me want to see them do that on screen.. damn nag man..1
mee too. As i was writing it, i was wishing Michi to dance like that in real...so i could make mixes on them. *sniffles* i miss michi moments so much.😭
loved it hun.. Thanks😛

loved Bobby for playing saviour.. lol..!
There is someone else you need to thank for that.
update soon hun.. ya rite. I am drained. It 3 am here. Going to sleep. haha. Maybe tomorrow....i am on vacation this week...so possibly will update a lot.

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Opti

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Posted: 17 years ago

#263

JC, I am totally foxed as usual, but now my guess is that Anju is the mysterious person who will be the connection between Milsi and Prachi. Wonder whether she is Prachi's simbling. Maybe she is the one Milsi was in love with and he may have seen Prachi with her. For some strange reason he has forgotten Prachi but I guess once he sees Anju (which I dont think will be before Michi's marriage it will all come back to him). Again I dont seem to be making any sense but I am at it again (the guessing game, that is!).

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Opti

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Posted: 17 years ago

#264

By the way both chapters were excellently written as always. The characters just come to life as I read your prose. Can well imagine Michi dancing. But you did not tell us how Prachi felt throughout the dance. Did she have butterflies in her stomach, feeling Milsi's arms around her?

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Opti

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Posted: 17 years ago

#265

Sorry JC, just read Chapter 17 (which by the way you had jointly dedicated to me!). I never realised that I have missed this chapter and had gone on directly to Chapter 18 (blame it on all the FF currently in the site, it is difficult to keep track). Well this chapter does clear a lot of cob webs. Well written. Thanks.

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tweety_me14

@tweety_me14

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Posted: 17 years ago

#266

Both parts were very well written JC! I loved the way first Neev stared at Ayesha and the Michi dance was pricless!! 😛

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@-JC-

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Posted: 17 years ago

#267

Originally posted by: optimist
JC, I am totally foxed as usual, but now my guess is that Anju is the mysterious person who will be the connection between Milsi and Prachi. Wonder whether she is Prachi's simbling. Maybe she is the one Milsi was in love with and he may have seen Prachi with her. For some strange reason he has forgotten Prachi but I guess once he sees Anju (which I dont think will be before Michi's marriage it will all come back to him). Again I dont seem to be making any sense but I am at it again (the guessing game, that is!).

I can tell you this much. You got one part right. Which part that is...will have to wait and watch.

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@-JC-

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Posted: 17 years ago

#268

Originally posted by: optimist
By the way both chapters were excellently written as always. The characters just come to life as I read your prose. Can well imagine Michi dancing. But you did not tell us how Prachi felt throughout the dance. Did she have butterflies in her stomach, feeling Milsi's arms around her?

The reason i didn't include too much of Prachi's POV is because i still desperately want to keep something a secret. Maybe in one of the chapters i'll reveal what she felt during that dance as a flashback.

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Rima

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Posted: 17 years ago

#269

I applogize for those who waited and fell asleep. I hope this part is good enough to make up for it. Do leave your comments.

😆

Just woke and this was the first thing I saw! Am V. Happy now... 😊

Thank you sooo much hun! LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!

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@-JC-

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Posted: 17 years ago

#270

Originally posted by: tweety_me14
Both parts were very well written JC! I loved the way first Neev stared at Ayesha and the Michi dance was pricless!! 😛

If you liked the way Neev was staring...haha..just wait till you see what I have him doing.