FF: Rishtey(MP-NA)- new prt updtd 12/25 new thread - Page 170

Originally posted by: Anhdara13

Firstly, I read your entire story in about a week sometime back, Wah Wah. I commend you on that achievement. 😃but never got down to commenting.. Its ok..ur doing it now. I just care that you do at some point. I absolutely adore the way you have fleshed out each and every character.. All your characters are flawed in some way or another which makes them all the more relatable and human, and I love that, because it makes the story so much more realistic.. Thankyou.😛 You've given me one more reason to smile today. Thanx.
Loving the development of the relationships, and the characters, and hoping to see more of Kavya soon! (I loved that show, it was the first show I really started watching from the beginning, so I have a soft spot for it..) Yes he'll be back soon. After the next chapter is over i guess. Actuallly after December i will no longer be in school...so time hi time hai. I'll be updating more frequently then. I've even started to like Alaap's character now that you've made him repent, and the fact that he's married a mentally challanged girl.. he's actually accepted such a girl, is a very remarkable one.. Yup i didn't see any other way that everyone would unanimously be ok with forgiving him. He has to suffer that much. Will wait till December for your update if I have to! I love your story that much!Thankyou so much. Very sweet of you. I really do feel terrible for not being a good updater.

Love,

Radz

p.s. do you have a PM list? if yes, could you add me to it? i don't really have a PM list because most of the readers (that i know of) are from this forum. So when i update they know. But i just added you to my buddy list so i'll remember to PM you when i update.

Originally posted by: zcbcc34

I read and I conquered... Congrats yaar.😆 And finally..thanx.

The most engrossing part of that update was the whole Ritwik, Sukriti and Vishal bit at the hospital...I dont know whether it was because it was stupidly late when I was reading but I was tearing up...just everything about that part was wonderful. I would like to think that i did a good job of writing and thats why you were tearing up...but to be honest its more likely that its because it was too late.😆😆😆 That part seems to be the readers favorite...and i though it was so so.

I especially appreciate the honest with which you wrote about Vishal's feelings👏, this part mainly...

She wasn't the dream he had when he had first learned of becoming a father'but he had learned to accept her in whatever form she came'she was his'and she was going to make it'because he wasn't about to loose her too.

😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
Ya usually its hard for parents to come to terms with such things. In the romantic notion of things you'd think parents will love their kids no matter what..but the truth is that they usually need a period of adjusting to the way their baby looks when its not the usual newborn. Its a bit tragic but reality. Usually though most parents bond with their kids eventually especially when they are able to hold them.

Thank you!!!! for giving Prachi back her picture...dil ko chain mila thoda sa...🤗...also did like the whole convo between Sukriti and Prachi was very well done.... Thanx that part also gave me a hard time cause i wanted to keep it as short as possible. I had to rewrite that so many times. Grrr...just glad that that part is over.

I must confess when Anjali popped out of nowhere, I was like wth...😆 lolz...i had to mention her because she too came back with the rest of them...but ya it was a bit abrupt. I really didn't edit the last part much since after PL and Alaap came back. It was last minute writing. but the news of Ayesha's pregnancy is out😍...but Premlata's feelings are perfectly acceptable...I hope that nothing will happen to either Ayesha or the Baby...😒 hehe...Rimz that emoticon is so cute. for some reason i am smiling.😕 I can't say what'll come of Neesh next. I can't have them just be bland..something gotta be happening on their front too otherwise it'll be like i forgot them.

Alaap married SUYESHA🤣....why was I thinking this would happen but then actually got surprised when it did😆... Oh now you say it. I was wondering why no one thought of the possiblity. poor poor guy....I hope that she can be reformed...hehe...Suyesha be reformed..hehe...good one.he is repentent and I think he should be given a chance at happiness too...hmmm...i would just say "Trust me" 😉 very good explaination btw of why Bushanji would marry his daughter to Alaap... Well there is more to Bhushanji but later...there's no way he'd hand over his precious baby girl without proper investigations. 😆 Alaap ke bhaag. What can i say.

Now Milind...I'm so so glad he's taking incentive to sort out the truth with Prachi and I completely understand now why you found that bit difficult to bring about... Thats it...since you understand why it was difficult...can you tell me how i could have done it better.😕 It'll help me in the next part.😃
I suspect this is the Big SHABANG now soon! 🥳The mysterious Chapter 50🤔Now I have no expectations...so you better WOW me for making me wait a MONTH???????😡 Look who's talking.😡 But ya..i hope to more than WOW you ppl. Just hope i'll be able to run fast enough after the update...cause i am sure everyone will want their hands on my throat.😆

...If I didn't need you to write this fic, I'd kill ya! Same to you darling. 😆

Great great writing JC👏...you're making me very jealous! Grrrrrrrrrrr 😳 WHAT??????????? Rimzi i think something wrong with you.
but LOVED it....Thank you!🤗Thankx. I loved the comments. Now i need more insight into Milind. HELP ME>😔

Originally posted by: bidnai

When will u update next JC 😍

Originally posted by: jinc118

I am really trying dear...maybe in the next 24 hours.