FF: Rishtey(MP-NA)- new prt updtd 12/25 new thread - Page 167

Originally posted by: chituku

soory hun.. went to feed the kids...ok now let me shout my lungs out first..AAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH.COZ OF UR LAST LINE.OK IAM IN LUV WID ALAAP NOW.. lolz...yes the change in Alaap started pretty much when i started to fall in love with Bharat.😳 Now that i am at the peek of missing my old KYM crew, you'll see it reflect in my writing.😆
he may used to be spoit brat..but he too has feeling ..so nice of him to take care of wife...ofcourse...though he is doing it more like a duty and a promise he made to her father rather than love for her ...at least for now. Its his penance...and he'll take the pains for messing up the lives of others. really liked suki and prachi's scene luved that atleast one misunderstanding got cleared...Thankyou. I thought i might go overboard with that. Wanted to keep it short and sweet. really felt bad for vishal.i had tears when he brokedown in bathroom.. He'll be better soon. 😃 but ya sucks to be him right now. ritwick is a sweety..awww he lend his mom to saaya lolz...isn't he the sweetest.😳 Such a match maker hamaara Ritwik baba is.😆 First it was Michi now he is playing between Vishal and Suki.
...ok i hate u for doing this to me really, whats wid authors touturing readers..is it really that fun😆 Honestly you think you are tortured...ok i know the torture because i am waiting endlessly for updates by others too...lekin sach mein the writer is more tortured not being able to update...especially when the likes of you, angel and Sumu are constantly after our neck. 😆 ok y did ashatai ask millsi to wait for 2 days.it wud hav been if u show millsi being restless and wanted to talk to prachi asap.. haha...no one will guess why. You'll see next update.😳 The two days do make a difference.
hey hun luved the update Thankyou.,ok hun will wait till dec 2nd coz i don't want to spoil ur assainments plzz keep ur word ,dec2nd is deadline for next update...😃 Ya...school comes first. can't believe i'll be done in a month and a half...and the closer i get to finishing...the lazier i become.

Originally posted by: blind horizon

Happy you updated at last I still JC something was amiss, maybe your heart. I think this update was missing my heart in parts but there were parts that really did come naturally. I wouldn't like to take away all the credit because of that.
It's so interesting how I can understand exactly what a laborious job this update has been to you Really can you😆 it reflects in your writing. Oh Munee....koi gal nahi kudiye...agle update mein fatte chak denge.😳 I liked it though the scene at the hospital being the best..... I was touched when Sukriti sang that song for Saayah and Rhitvick called her mummy made it all the more better. 😭 yesh that part was written and redone a few times already. I love that lullaby. Cho chweet na. Unfortunately or fortunately my mom only knows Mallu songs. So i had to go searching for lullabys in hindi.😆
It was the part involving Alaap and PL and the ending with Milind that i did today without much effort. though for some reason it was those parts that i liked better. Maybe not in terms of writing but in terms of satisfaction with the way the story was shaped. Alaap I understood Prachi still an enigma I'm not complaining though I'm kinda used to it now. Lolz...dont' tell me you expected all solutions together. Dheere Dheere Munee...Prachi will make sense too. Next whole chapter being dedicated to making sense out of her. Will look forward to the next update.

Originally posted by: jinc118

Thanx for the comments yaar and for the attempt at helping.😆 I know i am very difficult...but then what are friends for, right.😃

Originally posted by: blind horizon

I hope you've understood Milind by now I'd hate him being portrayed any other way if you need further help I'll be glad to be of assistance.😊

Originally posted by: jinc118

I believe i understand the guy in the show...maybe more than i do my own creation in the FF. That makes me admit that the Milind in this FF...at least so far has been different if not vastly at least slightly from the Milind in the show. And thats ok (for me😆) because if he was another way he'd not be able to tolerate whats to come. So my Milind must be the way he is going to be. Though if you are hinting at his rather passive stance in things (and i am partly to blame for that) he'll be acting less so soon. I'll definitely PM you for more stuff when i start writing.😃

Originally posted by: blind horizon

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Ok hun though your portrayal of him makes him look like a man devoid of emotions a passionless person ouch...a bit harsh don't you think??? who fails to understand anything under the sun That maybe ...but he only fails to understand Prachi and he is not alone in that...you don't understand her either do you...and what are your emotions for her....and you know more than he knows about her...how do you want him to act like he knows her inside out and understands everything she does, that wouldn't make sense???? He knows very little about her...whatever he knows is from observation and inferance....more like his instincts on her and not what she has shared with him....and there is so much that a man can rely on insitincts and assumptions. Milind is not one who solely go by what his heart tells him. He is a bit more practical. He needs to see clearly what is what and he is that way becuase he himself is someone who doesn't hide things...he shows what he is and so he expects that from others too. I treasure Milind very very much it's really very hard for me to see him this impassive.... anyways I understand it was important for the story line. He is not impassive...umm...but when choosing to act between his sister and the woman he cares for a lot....i think its a tough spot for him and he couldn't have done anything in that situation. As for his feelings for Prachi...he had taken his time to realize his own feelings for her and yes he has no clue of her feelings for him...and that is definitely because its required for the story.

Originally posted by: shivgauri

I know, that I said I won't comment till you reveal Prachi's mystery... but I just couldn't help it😳.... I really loved today's update... hohhooo...so sweek kuku dear. i had tears in my eyes at some parts☺️............ I am not good with words so I am just going to blabber😆😆..... OK 😆 loved Sukriti, Vishal,Rithwick and Saayah scene...it was very touching, and I guess Sukriti and VIshaal are gonna be together in the end😳looks like,..... specially loved Rithwick's concern for Saayah, and Sukriti's reaction to Rithwick calling her mother... that was beautifully written. Thankyou.
PL's reaction to Ayesha's news was beautiful and real.... loved Milind also, the fact that he has conflicting thoughts on Prachi itself shows tht he never gave upon her... and loved his comparison on Prachi and Asha Tai, specially the last line of both leaving him confused😆 I was trying to show a lighter mood with the Mishras...they've been too depressed lately.
great part hun.... i guess the next part is showdown..waiting for tht😃 Next chapter is showdown...not just next part.😃