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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: jinc118



IF you want more of Sukriti and Prachi alone...and maybe a bit of Ritwik darling. Still haven't written for Michi...and Alaap's sudden decision to marry someone else also needs to be clarified. What say?

oh noway JC,after waiting 4 like so many weeks for u 2 update...u will now only give us SP and a lil bit of R and ofcourse Alaapstill thanks dear🤗I will continue to wait for as long as it take for Michi's part to come along someday soon I hope,but darling when u finally did do the update that has Michi init....Michi's part must be really and real long plzzzzzzzzzzz😳
thanks a lot hun.
@chituku I will continue to wait like u said😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
OK girlies....very unhappy with myself right now for not doing homework when i am supposed to and finishing the update so fast. Now if it lacks things its not my fault.

Tho i did make it long and is filled with songs and all...hope its not too boring without Michi.
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Posted: 16 years ago
thankoo thankooo me off to read
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: chituku

thankoo thankooo me off to read



Ok granted i took more than 2 weeks to write this up...but i dont think it takes more than 2 hours to read it does it?😆 Are you still not back.😕
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Posted: 16 years ago
Beautiful update JC. Loved the way you gave importance to all the supporting cast. So Suyesha is here? Loved her in the show. She really lightened up the otherwise grim show with her antics and here too I am sure her arrival at this juncture when all the skeletons are going to role out from the closet, will do the story good. So Milind has finally realised there is more to his enigmatic wife than meets the eye. Pl's apprehension on hearing Ayesha's pregnancy is understandable considering she lost one of her daughters not long ago to complications in delivery. It is a huge penance indeed for Alaap to have married a mentally challenged girl knowing about her condition. I suspected this when you mentioned about his decision to marry. Suki and Vishal seem to be bonding quite well and their offsprings are going to ensure they do. Afterall both have been through so much and will surely understand and help each other out. A nice little family developing there.
So is this the last part to this chapter or is there more? I am dying to read your Chapter 50 to see how far my guesses are right. Hope you will get there before Christmas.
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Posted: 16 years ago
JC, brilliant update!! Loved everything about it.

Awww....Ritwick is so sweet. He unknowingly asked Suk to be mom to Saaya. The four of them will surely make a happy family.

Now as u have said Ritwick looked like mini Milind, I am imagining Azaan as Ritwick. Mama-bhanja must be rocking. So Milind comes to know about Ritwick's illness...good. Now he will go and sort out things with Prachi. Cant wait for that.

The best part i liked in this update is the scene where Alaap sings, Prachi plays piano and PL remembers Inder singing with the kids. That was touching. I like that song "Zindagi"...had heard it long ago.

So Alaap married Suyesha. I like her...they make a cute pair. Suyesha running behind him with guitar reminded me of the scene in the serial where she asks him to play dandiya with her.😆

Enjoyed reading the update. Waiting for the next part.

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: optimist

Beautiful update JC. Loved the way you gave importance to all the supporting cast. Thankyou for being so sweet akka. Not many will see this part with the same fondness. But rest assured (to everyone) Michi will be there next time very much there. So Suyesha is here? Yup..how could i forget her😳 Loved her in the show. Me too She really lightened up the otherwise grim show with her antics and here too I am sure her arrival at this juncture when all the skeletons and going to role out from the closet, will do the story good. Umm...i definitely have a plan up my sleeve for her but thats for much later...so far she'll be serving the same purpose that she did in the show...irritating Alaap😆 So Milind has finally realised there is more than meets the eye as far as his enigmatic wife is concerned. uh-uh....hehe...aage aage dekho hota hai kya😃 Pl's apprehension on hearing Ayesha's pregnancy is understandable considering she lost one of her daughters not long ago to complications in delivery. Yup its going to be something riding on everyone's mind regarding Ayesha's pregnancy. Lets c where it leads.😉 It is a huge penance indeed for Alaap to have married a mentally challenged girl knwoing about her condition. Maine kahaa tha...I hope his reasons for the marriage are well understood now. I suspected this when you mentioned about his decision to marry. really hehe..i was surprised everyone forgot Suyesha and didn't even mention the posibility when i hinted that Alaap was marrying for money. Suki and Vishal seem to be bonding quite well and their offsprings are going to ensure they do. Afterall both have been through so much and will surely understand and help each other out. A nice little family developing there.Yup...i especially like Ritwik and Saayah's relationship. I think they'll make a cute family too.

So is this the last part to this chapter or is there more? I am dying to read your Chapter 50 to see how far my guesses are right. Hope you will get there before Christmas. lolz..no chapter 49 is over. This was the last part to it. Now its onto ch 50...but do keep in mind ch 50 will have at the least 3 parts and i'll update part by part. And December 2nd is what i had marked as a target. Lets c if it goes beyond. Hopefully not. But even if i break my promise like usual...my finals end on Dec 17th...so it'll definitely come before christmas.😆😆😆

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: dipsyworld

JC, brilliant update!! Loved everything about it. me smiling my 100 wts.😃

Awww....Ritwick is so sweet. He unknowingly asked Suk to be mom to Saaya. The four of them will surely make a happy family. yup someday...but they'r not there yet.

Now as u have said Ritwick looked like mini Milind, I am imagining Azaan as Ritwick. Mama-bhanja must be rocking. So Milind comes to know about Ritwick's illness...good. Now he will go and sort out things with Prachi. Cant wait for that. actually Azaan is not the kid i had in mind writing for Ritwik. Ritwik is much younger looking than Azaan...he is shorter in height...shorter curly hair...big brown puppy eyes...and when he smiles, he has dimples so his cheeks are fluffy and full. When i wrote he looked like Mini Milind i only meant in attire. Maybe someday i'll find a pic of a kid that resembles my Ritwik.😳 I've actually been thinking that i'll give faces to all the characters that are not casted in KYM.

The best part i liked in this update is the scene where Alaap sings, Prachi plays piano and PL remembers Inder singing with the kids. That was touching. I like that song "Zindagi"...had heard it long ago. Oh thanx hun. Actually that part came as a revelation to me....honestly i had planned to write it another way but this is how it turned out and i was surprised myself but this is way better than what i had thought about first. So i left it. If found that part really sweet too.

So Alaap married Suyesha. I like her...they make a cute pair. Suyesha running behind him with guitar reminded me of the scene in the serial where she asks him to play dandiya with her.😆 lolz...haha...yup i remember that. Wasn't it always one thing or the other that she asked Alaap to do for her. I really wished they hadn't made her disappear from the show. She was a pleasure to watch with Alaap.

Enjoyed reading the update. Waiting for the next part. You'll be waiting for a month.😆 Thanx for the comments Deeps.

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Posted: 16 years ago
soory hun.. went to feed the kids...ok now let me shout my lungs out first..AAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH.COZ OF UR LAST LINE.OK IAM IN LUV WID ALAAP NOW..he may used to be spoit brat..but he too has feeling ..so nice of him to take care of wife...really liked suki and prachi's scene luved that atleast one misunderstanding got cleared...really felt bad for vishal.i had tears when he brokedown in bathroom..ritwick is a sweety..awww he lend his mom to saaya...ok i hate u for doing this to me really, whats wid authors touturing readers..is it really that fun😆ok y did ashatai ask millsi to wait for 2 days.it wud hav been if u show millsi being restless and wanted to talk to prachi asap..hey hun luved the update,ok hun will wait till dec 2nd coz i don't want to spoil ur assainments plzz keep ur word ,dec2nd is deadline for next update...😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
Happy you updated at last I still JC something was amiss, maybe your heart. It's so interesting how I can understand exactly what a laborious job this update has been to you it reflects in your writing. I liked it though the scene at the hospital being the best..... I was touched when Sukriti sang that song for Saayah and Rhitvick called her mummy made it all the more better. Alaap I understood Prachi still an enigma I'm not complaining though I'm kinda used to it now. Will look forward to the next update.

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