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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: tweety_me14

Hi JC...

Sorry I left mid way last time...
The update was so emotional...I could not help but cry, feelignt eh pain each one fo them must have gone through... Thats ok...i had intended to update part I and II together...but didn't get the time to finish part II and you guys had been waiting for an update. I understand, everyone was pretty shocked and emotional about Soumya's death.
Ayesha is pregnant :-) .. Thats great! yup she is😃
But Soumya was such a liveyl, bubbly girl- Im going to miss her too...! 😭 she was and yes she is going to be missed...but as all things move forward so will the characters of my FF...its tragic but life goes on.
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What I loved about this update was that you didn't forget any of the characters in your FF...
Each one of them was there to mourn Soumya's death...yes they all were needed there. Everyone related to Soumya was there.
Hope they come out of this trauma soon...everyone will at their own pace...as Soumya was related to each in a different way.
Waiting for the next :-)

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: blind horizon

You were right JC story seems to be moving at a snail's space. I believe they could create another serial out of it. I believe so too.🤣
I didn't expect Milind's concern for Prachi I guess it was her despicable condition that drove him to it. Mostly...plus Milind wouldn't be insensitive to Soumya's death...he has a sister too he loves dearly...and like i had mentioned before, he liked Soumya and had started to consider her family. He could understand the pain of loosing a loved one and what it does to people...so he wouldn't make a show of his anger or disappointment at such a situation...it would be very unlike Milsi to do that...tho later he did get reminded that he was still angry with the Shahs. The other reason was that in his heart, he still loves Prachi...he can't get rid of the feelings he has for her even though he thinks she betrayed him...a part of his still refuses to believe that she is evil.
Again the two apologies by Prachi poor guy I don't blame him am as confounded as he is. Ofcourse there's more depth and meaning to the two apologies but ofcourse those will be revealed in the 100th chapter itself. Lolz....maybe the 99th😆 ok jokes apart...i told you all secrets will be out in ch 50. I'll do my very best to keep that promise. Now you better start typing fast as in Gabbar's own words "Jab tak teri ungliyan chaleingi teri saansain chaleyngi" Hahahaha *evil laugh* to accompany. Don't mind me I'm become crazy recently credit PPP. Its ok Munee i won't take the threat personally...i've seen how crazy you are getting with PPP and i know my FF is no relief.😆

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: optimist

For the first time I actually wept hot tears reading a FF. aww😭 I am so touched...sachi??? Great job JC. Thankyou akka.🤗hug for making you cry. My heart went out to everybody but mostly to Prachi who was trying to put up a brave front for everyone and Milind who was trying to be her support . Despite his anger against Prachi he was the only one who looked out for her. The guy must have been as hurt as her to see her in so much pain given how much he loves her now. It wasn't that the rest of them ignored Prachi...but they had a different role to play and they had different emotions going through them at the time. PL was dipped in the sorrow of her daughter's death...her other daugher was not in sight at the moment...Asha tai first thought of PL because Asha tai too had lost a child and could relate...Ayesha too thought first of PL because she saw PL falling and also becuase PL is like a mother to her...and Ayesha also needed to deal with Soumya's death the same as others...by the time she could think of Prachi, Milind had done the job...because only Milind was there for whom Prachi was a primary concern...because no matter what...he still loves her.

I guess the baby being born prematurely would give Suki a taste of what it was to raise a sickly premature child, a trouble Prachi went through for Ritwik. Yes it will. Maybe it will help her make a tough decision later if required. It'll be an eye opener for Suki...but I have something else planned. Poor PL. It is cruel for a parent to see the loss of her child and that too in her prime. Can understand her lack of will to take care of herself in this state. PL i think will be the last to move on from this grief...if she ever is able to.
Alaap seems to have come all set to ask for Suki's hand in marriage but this mourning will postpone things for now. hmm...so you think...ahem..Surprise #3 coming your way.
Prachi seems to be determined to find out his true intentions though. Even at this moment she is thinking about Suki's well being and that is commendable. I didn't want it to seem that Prachi is moving on from ther sister's death too quickly but Prachi needs to get into action now for things to clear up quickly...so i had to make her strong..or...at least put up a strong front.
Anticipated Ayesha's good news even before you started this chapter. So no surprises there. Liked Ayesha's sensivity to the situation. This girl has come a long way in integrating herself with the Shahs. Yes, she's now pretty much integrated..she is Inder Shah's daughter, PL's step daughter...and older sis to all her siblings...except for Alaap maybe.

I wouldn't fault you for going slow on this one. After all grief cannot be hurried. Thankyou for your understanding. I thought you would join your partner Munee in cutting my unglis. Is there a Part III or is Chapter 49 the next? I think there is part III... I guess that will be about Kavya and Anjali. Milsi is surely going to blow the fuse once he gets to know Kavya intends to wed Anju, thinking what he does of her. I won't tell you now what is up next...but i'll tell you this much... Milind probably won't be blowing a fuse until Chapter 49. Awaiting your next update.

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Posted: 17 years ago
JC, that is what I meant. Milind will blow the fuse in Chapter 49. Didn't know this one is not yet over. Your chapterisation is really deceptive. I thik it is already equavalent to 100 chapters, what with so many parts for each. So Munee is right after all.
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: (**sia**)

JC...🤗....finally every1's here😃...nw the story wil definietly move on😆...hehe...every1s grief over soumya's death left me in tears...specially vishal😭...prachi's reaction was very surprisin to me...i never tote she'l try to bolt out like that...gud thing milind brote her back to reality before she takes a rong step😊...in short, this update was very touchin...plz contine soon JC (meanin VERY soon😉)😆😆



lolz..Vishal is ofcourse the most effected by Soumya's demise. He is not even in a position that i can describe what he is feeling. So i tried to stay as away as possible. Prachi's reaction shouldn't be surprising...becuase different people deal with loss in different ways and Prachi is...well different from the rest of us.😆😆😆 You'll understand her reaction more soon enough...Milind was really needed to ground her at that time...she was gonna go over the cookoo's next otherwise. I'll be continuing soon...no worries.
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: optimist

JC, that is what I meant. Milind will blow the fuse in Chapter 49. Didn't know this one is not yet over. Your chapterisation is really deceptive. I thik it is already equavalent to 100 chapters, what with so many parts for each. So Munee is right after all.

Well i can't make each part a different chapter...cuase i unified my chapters according to a theme or a particular event that is happening. I knew my FF was going to get long but even i am surprised by just how long its getting. And i am glad i did it the way i did ...cause when i need to go back and check on something...i know which chapter it is because of the name i gave...otherwise i would have gone crazy looking for what i put in what chapter. Plus this is unique to my FF no?..the name giving and several different parts.😃 Now don't crib..i am updating as fast as i can...and you guys don't even appreciate cause my school has started again...and i am still updating like this.
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Posted: 17 years ago
I appreciate u JC and thank u very much darling but please get Michi back together soon just like u did NA please babes.
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: wande

I appreciate u JC and thank u very much darling but please get Michi back together soon just like u did NA please babes.



hehe...thanx wandu...i become a baby sometimes too. Michi will solve their problems...soon very soon...its just around the corner.
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Posted: 17 years ago
Awww, JC, I actually had tears in my eyes when I read Premlata's reaction. I guess everyone does feel the most for the mother in such a situation, even though everyone is grieving equally. Seems like bit of a tug-of-war is developing between Prachi and Sukriti when it comes to Ritwik. But maybe it's only due to her grief that Prachi is holding onto Ritwik cos previously she seemed determined to let him go. Ayesha is pregnant but she was right, this is not the time to break the news. Honestly, I have no idea what you have in store next, so fingers crossed you do manage to update by this weekend. Really wonderful. 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
Me mouring for the death of soumya along with shah clan.😭.What is prachi upto what she want to sort out soon with the help of Alaap.

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