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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: zcbcc34

Okay...Fustration out!!...JC...how could you do this to me yaar? Maine baby ki salmati maangi thi, woh tou tumne di...lekin badle mein kya kiya?😡 hehe...i shouldn't be laughing..but kya karoon...i expected this...everyone focused on the child and no one thought of Soumya...so sad.

Why was there no other way? *Rima wonders* Are you trying to draw paralelles between Ritwik growing up without a mother and the new baby? I dont know why I thought of that...just thought I'd ask anyway...*looks stupid* lol lolz Rimz..you'll c why i did this way

Chalo now fasht fasht unravel this mystery or I'll never forgive you...will do
on a different note...That was brilliantly done. Hontesly...that update was very very very good! According to me atleast...hehe ok if you say so.
I've said it before but you've perfected Milind! Was a word spoken by him? No! yet every emotion was perfectly put across! Especially the dignity he maintains in front of Prachi's family, I thought that was commendable. I am glad i re wrote it then...the first draft had a lot of dialogs that seemed unnecessary later.
Now everyone thinks Neesha are expecting...ARE THEY?!!! omg...please tell me!! I thought that look was that they're trying or something...because Neev didn't betray anything in the beginning...am I just being DENSE as anything ...again lolz rimz..hehe i don't know why ppl assumed that Neesha are expecting..the look really did mean that they are only trying...but i guess i wasn't too clear.
JC...despite the sad turn of events...I think that was a very well done update...now I'm only looking forward to the next because I expect it will be a highly charged one...I cant even imagine the reaction of the others. I wish you luck with that! Cant wait for it! Thank you so much for this one!...🤗 i've started writing it and really i need the good luck..its tough.

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Posted: 17 years ago
wow nice part....soumya dead?did PL know about it in advance?thanks for posting
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Posted: 17 years ago
😭
Soumya died awww poor Vishaal and the baby

Interesting part JC
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Posted: 17 years ago
😭😲omg JC...u killed soumya?? i ddn c this one comin...poor vishal and the baby...my heart cries for the baby😭😭...i bet vishal knew before he came out frm the theater right...but he remained quiet just to keep the family happy..hats off to him👍🏼...and the way michi maintained their dignity also is very understanding...hope u're gonna reveal the mystery of the mysterious prachi very soon. as now both michi had knwn abt sowmya's death i hope they clear out their differences soon😊
wonderful update hun..very touchin🤗..update soon JC...cant wait for the next one...and oh..du u mind givin a precap?😉 hope m nt askin for the moon😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
Deepa, Jdots, and Anushka: you'll see the reason for Soumya's death eventually.
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: (**sia**)

😭😲omg JC...u killed soumya?? i ddn c this one comin...poor vishal and the baby...my heart cries for the baby😭😭.Mine does too.😭..i bet vishal knew before he came out frm the theater right...but he remained quiet just to keep the family happy..hats off to him👍🏼 Actually he didn't...but you'll see that now that i've updated.

...and the way michi maintained their dignity also is very understanding...hope u're gonna reveal the mystery of the mysterious prachi very soon. as now both michi had knwn abt sowmya's death i hope they clear out their differences soon😊 they won't clear things...but Milind will find out a few things real soon...with you guys.

wonderful update hun..very touchin🤗..update soon JC...cant wait for the next one...and oh..du u mind givin a precap?😉 hope m nt askin for the moon😆



lolz...no more precaps hun...as i'll be updating faster now.
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Posted: 17 years ago
Hi JC...
Sorry I left mid way last time...
The update was so emotional...I could not help but cry, feelignt eh pain each one fo them must have gone through...
Ayesha is pregnant :-) .. Thats great!
But Soumya was such a liveyl, bubbly girl- Im going to miss her too...!
What I loved about this update was that you didn't forget any of the characters in your FF...
Each one of them was there to mourn Soumya's death...
Hope they come out of this trauma soon...
Waiting for the next :-)
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Posted: 17 years ago
You were right JC story seems to be moving at a snail's space. I believe they could create another serial out of it. I didn't expect Milind's concern for Prachi I guess it was her despicable condition that drove him to it. Again the two apologies by Prachi poor guy I don't blame him am as confounded as he is. Ofcourse there's more depth and meaning to the two apologies but ofcourse those will be revealed in the 100th chapter itself. Now you better start typing fast as in Gabbar's own words "Jab tak teri ungliyan chaleingi teri saansain chaleyngi" Hahahaha *evil laugh* to accompany. Don't mind me I'm become crazy recently credit PPP.
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Posted: 17 years ago
For the first time I actually wept hot tears reading a FF. Great job JC. My heart went out to everybody but mostly to Prachi who was trying to put up a brave front for everyone and Milind who was trying to be her support . Despite his anger against Prachi he was the only one who looked out for her. The guy must have been as hurt as her to see her in so much pain given how much he loves her now. I guess the baby being born prematurely would give Suki a taste of what it was to raise a sickly premature child, a trouble Prachi went through for Ritwik. Maybe it will help her make a tough decision later if required. Poor PL. It is cruel for a parent to see the loss of her child and that too in her prime. Can understand her lack of will to take care of herself in this state. Alaap seems to have come all set to ask for Suki's hand in marriage but this mourning will postpone things for now. Prachi seems to be determined to find out his true intentions though. Even at this moment she is thinking about Suki's well being and that is commendable. Anticipated Ayesha's good news even before you started this chapter. So no surprises there. Liked Ayesha's sensivity to the situation. This girl has come a long way in integrating herself with the Shahs.
I wouldn't fault you for going slow on this one. After all grief cannot be hurried. Is there a Part III or is Chapter 49 the next? I guess that will be about Kavya and Anjali. Milsi is surely going to blow the fuse once he gets to know Kavya intends to wed Anju, thinking what he does of her. Awaiting your next update.
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Posted: 17 years ago
JC...🤗....finally every1's here😃...nw the story wil definietly move on😆...hehe...every1s grief over soumya's death left me in tears...specially vishal😭...prachi's reaction was very surprisin to me...i never tote she'l try to bolt out like that...gud thing milind brote her back to reality before she takes a rong step😊...in short, this update was very touchin...plz contine soon JC (meanin VERY soon😉)😆😆

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