Originally posted by: zcbcc34
JJJJJJJJJJJCCCCCCCCCC Bee🤗...That was an odd sort of update...LOL...not in a bad way...I felt as though I was riding an emotional rollacoaster for want of a better analogy...hmm...i guess the next update will be a bit more of an odd update...or at least give you shocks of minor degree.
I have to say, the way everyone handled the grief of Soumya's death was piercing and so so heartwrenching...especially PL...what it must do to a mother to see one of her children taken so cruelly away...Glad i was able to get thru what everyone was feeling. I didn't want to exclude any character from the display of their attachment to Soumya...but i think i didn't do a good job on behalf of Anjali and Bobby...but i'll try to make up for it in the next part...the actual reason i didn't focus on their feelings much was that they had the time to process the death during their journey home...so when they got home...they were ready to mourn the initial shock, anger and disbelief having subsided.
The strange thing is...I actually miss soumya, like she was part of a family I know...I guess thats the great thing about your Fic, the way we connect to your characters, they feel very real and alive... I am so touched...its such a compliment hun. Thanx. Strangely i don't miss Soumya (am i being cruel)...maybe its because i always knew that Soumya wouldn't make it and so didn't attach myself to her. But now seeing you all sad...makes me feel so guilty.
I LOVED how your portrayed Sukriti's sentiments...👏...she seems to be able to empathise greatly with the new baby, considering that her child was somewhat in a similar situation...now I hope that the baby will be cared for and loved much like Ritwik was despite the absense of his mother... i would never do injustice to a kid in my story hun...i love them too much. And Suki's reaction was something i felt the first time i walked into a NICU...so i knew exactly what to write. That moment of time will always stay with me...i dont' think i'll forget it even if i get alzheimers.
Where is Vishal going to go from here? you'll see in the very next update.
You know...just the other day, I was going to ask you..."whatever happened to Bobby..." lol but what sad circumstances force him to come home. hehehe...no I didn't forget him...😊
I have to admit, it was rather strange having most the characters together all of a sudden (why is Alaap back btw? hehe)...but I think I read that it's important for what you want to do next? yes...and you'll c why Alaap came back all of a sudden...let me just finish writing it.
Okie...I only have one quibble with you...I'm a little protective over them... I wanted Neesha pregnancy news to unfold in less difficult circumstances...i know...and i am protective of them too...and i too want the news to come out under better circumstances...thats the reason Ayesha decided not to confirm it even, right now.
I felt for Ayesha, does she feel guilty that she has something to be happy about when such a thing has happened to the family? Well i don't think its guilt really...she is genuinely mourning Soumya's death and though the pregnancy news is what she's been waiting for...even she herself is not ready to rejoice over it, forgetting that she lost a family member. Once she gets over Soumya's death, she'll be ready to share the news with someone else.
When will Neev find out...yaar...mujhe bauhat bura lag raha hain...dunno why...but I think the news maybe what the family needs to help them through this time... He'll find out ...just don't know when...I'll know after i finish the current update.
But thank you sooooooo much for the update! Please try update tomorrow...😭 I am trying...really...just can't promise.