FF: Ahista (SP) Final Pt/Pg106 26/03

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Pori

@Pori

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 17 years ago

#211

"Damn" is all i can get out of mi mouth right now.. this part was fabulous.

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Rima

@PourQuoi

Rocker

Posted: 17 years ago

#212

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Edited by PourQuoi - 16 years ago

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Panache

@ppanache

Sparkler

Posted: 17 years ago

#213

Rima..Another brilliant piece!!
Enjoyed it so much! the characters you have sketched out is like a fantasy coming to reality! But great job! Sweetie...
Loved it! 😳

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Heeba

@Heeba

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 17 years ago

#214

another superb part... 😃
it was completely brilliant... 👏 👏

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Monu-SunNaa

@Monu-SunNaa

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 17 years ago

#215

Sweet part, like the mischievous side of Prachi 😊 I wonder how long before the rest of the world including Prachi's mom will be kept in the dark, people are bound to find out sooner or later no matter how much Shabbir and Panchi try to keep schtum about their relationship :)

Please continue soon 😳

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-Deepa-

@-Deepa-

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#216

Awesome!!! Loved this part as well.

It feels like reading a nice romantic novel. Panchi trying to hide Shabbir behind the door when her mom comes, is quite funny😆...how long will she hide it 😆.

Please continue soon 😳

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Pori

@Pori

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 17 years ago

#217

hahaa.. this part was romantic, sweet and funny.. you are an awsome writer babes.. contine soon

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jdots

@jdots

Explorer

Posted: 17 years ago

#218

good job..it was gr8 as usual.... 😃 😃 😃

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Bhavisa

@Charmed...

Navigator

Posted: 17 years ago

#219

I was really looking forward to your ff last night Rima but stupid keysurf wouldn't let me log onto the internet.

Anyway, loved this part. Thought it was funny when Panchi got all nervous when her mum turned up. Can't wait for the next bit. 👏 👏 👏