FF: Ahista (SP) Final Pt/Pg106 26/03

Bhavisa

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Posted: 17 years ago

#201

OMG! Double treat! That was outstanding Rima! I'll end up thinking about this all day now. 😃 That kiss was mindblowing. I kinda feel bad for Jay but i'll bet he'll figure it out in the next part.

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tweety_me14

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Posted: 17 years ago

#202

Omg Omg Omg!!! This is the best thing ever!
I so love this bit!
The last two parts were mindblowing yaar!
Great work!!!!
Please post the next part soon! I really cannot wait!!

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soul76

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Posted: 17 years ago

#203

Rima dear wat else can I say but ...."Fantabulous!" words cannot explain how beautifully you've written down all parts I read four in a go and I enjoyed every bit of it. I'm a die hard romantic and I just loved the birthday kiss Shabbir gave to Panchi it was so soulful , the single red rose so very thoughtful. I am so surprised to see Shabbir so tolerant and so gentle in love Panchi I understand is fragile and cautious but it's Shabbir that has me mesmerized I think it's very aesthetically written and I really wish it were for real.Thx sweety for writing such a beautiful ff. 😊

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Posted: 17 years ago

#204

Oh goodness..Rima u r amazing..i'm really spellbound after reading da two parts..they r absolutely wonderful...really luved it a lot..i liked da wicked Prachi....so wht abt Arav now??dying to read da next bits..plzz continue....nyways gr8 job.. 👏

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Posted: 17 years ago

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Oh goodness..Rima u r amazing..i'm really spellbound after reading da two parts..they r absolutely wonderful...really luved it a lot..i liked da wicked Prachi....so wht abt Arav now??dying to read da next bits..plzz continue....nyways gr8 job.. 👏

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Posted: 17 years ago

#206

i'm sorry for da repeated posts...

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