Hamesha tumko chaha -MichiFF Pt 12/Pg13(06/08) - Page 7

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Posted: 17 years ago
#61
She knew Milind was adjusting the view mirror to get a better view of her and blushed unknowingly...awww, thats soo adorable!! i wish neev wasn't pursuing the very-married Praachi...its just unnatural and uncomfortable!! Loved milind tho...well, no surprises here!!:P
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Oh i loveeeeeeee Milind! He's just so cute!
You've written it very well! And Prachi likes Milind! Yay!!! 😃
Please update soon!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#63

Don't know if I've commented before, but great FF 😊 Neev's character is interesting.

Off to read part 7 :)

Read it, Neev is bit chaloo with his thoughts about Prachi ..Prachi is very much adorable in this part.

Edited by $weet Ema - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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PART-8


Neev tossed around in his sleep.he cud not wipe off the image of a very happy milind while they were returning.Unable to sleep further he gave up his attempts and walked to the Corridor.he could still see the lights in Milind's room on.he walked slowly towards Milind's room and looked past the door which was half open.Milind was seeing the photograph in which Prachi was smiling while neev was panting due to the chilli.

Neev instanlty felt very guilty.This is not right..he thought..what i am doing is not right..but then Ayesha's words flashed in his mind..

"Neev..you are Prachi's first love..you are the only one who cud ever keep her happy..did u not notice how many times Milind has insulted her in front of everybody? how can u do that to a person whom you claim to love? Milind doesnt love her..he is just possessive of her..I agree Milind is a good at heart and also cares for Prachi..but he is only fulfilling his duties as her husband because of his father not out of his love for prachi..only you could keep her happy Neev..God has wiped out all her bad memories she had with Milind..now you can start off giving her good memories to cherish for ever..doesnt Prachi deserve to be happy?"

Neev closed his eyes tightly.what I am to do now? If Ayesha was right..then what i am seeing now must be wrong..what is the truth? How could i fall for Ayesha's words so easily..No..I have to confirm my doubts first..Having resolved firmly in his mind Neev walked towards his room while Milind was busy zooming on Prachi's picture and observing her dimple.

Prachi was getting ready for the office hurriedly. Milind's words flashed in her mind.She stepped outside the chawl hoping to find a taxi soon when a car stopped right infront of her .

she was still staring at it when the driver got down and opened the door for her and said " Saab ne bheja hain".

"Mere liye?" Prachi asked in shock.She didnt want Milind to do any special favours for her.

"Saare female staff ke liye madam" the driver smiled.

"Kya..saare female staff keliye?" Neev almost shouted.

"haa..agar sirf prachi ke liye bhejtha tho woh manaa kar dhethi na" Milind replied with a smile.

Now is the moment thought Neev.

"Milind,ab prachi ko kuch bhi yaad nahi hain na..toh.. agar..woh tumko nahi balki kisi aur ko chaahane lage toh??"

"toh main jaan leloonga"

"us aadmi ki yaa prachi ki?"Neev asked thouroughly shocked.

"apni" Milind replied coolly.

Neev felt as if a thousand cyclones had hit him in an instant.

"Waise bhi Prachi ke bina zindagi bhi kya zindagi hain?" Milind said as a matter of fact.

"Neev..office aagayaa hain..kya soch rahe ho?" Milind had not even completed that sentence when Neev turned around and hugged him.tears were flowing down uncontrollably from his eyes.

"Neev..tum kya..are u ok??"

"im sorry brother..mujhse ek bahuth badi galthi hone waali thi..math poochna ki woh kya hain..i wont be able to tell you..but im really sorry" having said so Neev got down in a hurry and rushed towards the office leaving a confused Milind behind.

"Thankyou God..you have showed me the right path now.I shud never have listened to that witch in the first place.Yes..prachi deserves to be happy and no one in this world can keep her happy than Milind..ill unite them and please help me in this" Neev closed his eyes as in silent prayer.

Prachi sat down and began her work somewhat angrily. Somehow she felt or rather knew she was the reason for the change in transport but why? May be im imagining things..she thought.. but then she had a sudden flash of yesterday's incident when Milind had touched her.Was he attracted to her? is that the reason he is doing this so that he cud impress her? Prachi brushed it off as a mere impossibility..why wud he get attracted to me when there are so many beautiful girls drooling over him? aur waise bhi im not interested..she reminded herself.


Meanwhile Milind entered his office not even casting a sideglance at her.Prachi who had half expected him to stop by quickly overcame her disappointment and got started with her work.

It was almost lunch time when someone had forcibly pulled out a file that she was reading from her hands.

"Neev..give it back"

"No..listen its almost lunch time..lets go to my favourite restaurant today..the lunch is on me dont worry" He smiled

"but Neev.."

"listen,i have one more important thing to tell you.. prachi,you are my best frnd and Milind also is a very good frnd of mine.so i want both of you to be frnds.yesterday i have noticed that both of you were cold towards each other.you have any problem with him?"

Prachi remained silent.what wud she answer neev when she herself didnt know the answer!

"He is very good at heart though he does not show it prachi,I want you to be friendly with him during the lunch"

"Lunch?is he cooming to.." Prachi immediately shut her mouth up as she saw Milind approaching her.

"hey Milind,ab jaldi chalo..mujhe bahuth bhook lag rahi hain" Neev dragged both of them along.

The food was delicious but was accompanied by long "excuse me for a moment" by Neev.But the moments were so long that Prachi got bored and ended up conversing with MIB.By the time Neev returned he found both of them laughing over some joke.Milind might have said something very nasty as prachi hit him on the shoulder laughing.she immediately turned red realising what she had done right now.

"sorry..yeh meri aadat hain..jab bhi Neev.."

"its ok..par tumhe itni zor se maarne ki kya zaroorat thi?" he asked touching his hand and faking pain.

"dard ho raha hain kya?" prachi caressed his arm soflty with her hand.

Milind placed his hand on top of hers and said

"ab nahin ho raha "

They stared into each others eyes.Milind found himself drowning in those beautiful eyes.Prachi was being pulled towards her MIB but was unable to figure out why.He held her hand in his and asked "Friends?"

"Friends" replied prachi closing her fingers around his hand.

"Friends" Neev shouted startling both of them and placing his hand on top of theirs.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#65
Hi guys,

I didnt have the time to proof read this part.so kindly ignore the spelling mistakes if any.and also plz give me ur valuable criticism/comments.they encourage me to improve/write further. 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
#66
Glad Neev's gonna help get Prachi back for Milind. Thought MP scene was cute.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#67
brill i loved it!!!!!!! 😊 😃
yaaaaay!!!!! 😃 😊
glad to know u posted another update 😃 😊
i thought u might take another loooong break!
Neev is such a sweetheart!!! 😳 😃
i loved him finally figuring out his mistake and saying sorry to millind!! 😃 👏
that witches jadoo didnt work!!! thank god!!!! 👏
that was sooo sweet what millind said 😳 😳
glad he's gonna help them get back together!! 😃 😊
but i am alittle annoyed he ruined their little special moment 😡
but gotta admit was alittle funny too! 😆 😆
but good to know she's definately falling for him 😃 😳
i was in a bit of a bad mood but ur FF has brought a smile back on my face 😃 😃
thankyou!!!!! 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
#68
lilyattitude gr8 part...im so glad neev has given up on wooing prachi and that he's using all his energy in hooking michi together. the michi eyelock at the end was so cute 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
#69
Oh wow wonderful...Neev is such a cutie pie..he taking all the pains to reunite Michi...the last bit in the restaurant was really very sweet.. 😊 Finally Prachi n her MIB are frnds... 😆 Hey gr8 goin...plzz continue.. 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
#70
hay loved it:)
UPDATE fast
na plzzz.....
i like friend ship of michi....
its so sweet

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