Jazu meri jaan,
Where shall I start? You know what is the best thing about your work? It's genuine portrayal of truth. Often times, we get so caught up in fantasies and/or our fast paced lives that we forget to think about reality as others live it. The way you have defined Prachi and Milind's characters, their compassion, their distance yet closeness... it's all mindblowing yaar! I'm simply speechless... But tum toh jaanti ho ke speechless hone ke bawajood mein kaisi hoon😃 The brutality of Prachi's situation is stirring... so horrorific, yet a horrible reality of many women out there. MP's magnetism towards each other despite only having shared one night... well, in the one night that they had actually "lived". I'm repeating myslef na? Look what you've done now! Its just simply amazing... I'm a fan of your writing... the descriptions. You know, most people groan upon details... but since I'm a freak, I appreciate the subtlety and each detail... and its simply splendid!👏👏 The way you described the emotions turmoiling within Prachi after that "encounter" with her monster husband, was just... *sniffles* Kya yaar, tu ne toh... 😭😭 Its hard to describe something like that and as I read it, I kinda got a sense of numbness almost until she breaks down... and I think that was well crafted, *whistles*... And the way you describe the Pier... souns like Heaven on Earth... a place for souls to meet I suppose... and your writing boasts of experience with the area... and perhaps more. Whatever it is, its magical. So, you better continue!
And of course you wanna kick me for not commenting earlier... I'll tell you my story some other time... Excuses are a part of life, but they don't have to be a big part of it😳 😆
Cheers,
dc