**Bidaai -P 9 pg14-Milind - Prachi talk** - Page 8

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: shabzc1

hi, read ur fanfic today and i love ur concept...cant wait to read the next part 😃

I know the concept is pretty nice and different 😳
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Originally posted by: blind horizon

Hey sweety I just read the last part. Good going girl ofcourse we can't forget you or your ff it's a very nice piece of work. Do continue soon. 😊

Thanks a-lot for keeping up my courage 😊 Thanks again and hope you'll like this part 😛.

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Originally posted by: swetha10

Hey nice part...gr8 goin keep it up...Looking forward for da next part... 😊

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Originally posted by: AnjaliThapar

Indeed, it was mindblowing 👏

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Originally posted by: shabzc1

hi, read ur fanfic today and i love ur concept...cant wait to read the next part 😃

Thanks 😛
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Originally posted by: AnjaliThapar

I know the concept is pretty nice and different 😳

Once again Thank-You 😛 And also cheering up my mood cuz I got into a fight with my brothers (who are pain in the ass 😡/ sometime I wish u were here Anjali - I miss you sis - come back soon 😭 ) Anyways thanks
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Originally posted by: candyfloss

read today.continue soon. 👏

Thanks and here is the next part 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part – VIII (This part is mainly involes - Naina, Navin, Milind and Prachi mostly Prachi and Naina and Navin no Neev today)

Recap - Prachi knew she can't live without Neev so she decides to kill herself.

"Mammmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmaaaaa aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa"

"Mammmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmaaaaa aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa"

"Naina, Naina, what's the matter?" asked by her brother

"Bhaiyya, woh, woh, Mamma (points at Prachi jumping off) without completing the sentence Navin went running into Mishra house to stop Prachi but it was too late.

"Mammmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmaaaaa aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa"

"Thank! God! Sir you saved my mother" said by Naina

On the other hand, Milind was confused that same age girl is calling the person he is holding in his arm Mother after few second a guy comes calling her Mother too.

"Will you put me down?" asked by Prachi (who was cursing him for saving her life even more ruining her life).

Milind place Prachi down and Naina and Navin both hugged her and asked her "what she was doing?"

"You-You-both-know-that-that-that-how-much-I-love-you-guys-e ven-Shagun-Tanu-Manthan-Bhoomi-than-why-is-god-pushing-me-?" (None-stop Crying Prachi)

"Ma, what's the matter and did Nanu say something?" asked by Navin

Prachi just shook her head saying "yes" because of him her life is ruin now because she doesn't have any other option left but just to except Milind as her husband even though she loves Neev.

"Mamma, (Naina shook Prachi) Mamma, what did Nanu say? And why were you killing yourself?" said by Naina

"Naina, you know when ever you kids are gone life doesn't make sense…………………………………………………"right"………………………………………………well – I wish that your Nanu had some brain few years before making a huge crime."

"Ma, are you talking about Ayesha Auntie?" asked by Navin

"Navin remember one thing – we live in Shah Mansion, but there is no one ours only except for Ma, Dadi, Sonia and Alaap or else no one."

"Mamma, why are you thinking negative?" said by Naina looking worried and sick that her mother is hiding something

Prachi also knows that she can't hide anything from Navin, Naina, and Manthan because they can read her mind without question her so no use Prachi confess everything in detail and Milind was shock because his wife was standing right in front of him.

"Mamma, what are you saying?"

"Naina, it's true your Nanu ruined my life and your Uncle's life."

"Ma, don't think negative – think positive"

"Navin I wish that I could think positive but it's hard to except the truth when you're married to someone at a young age without knowing them. Anyways forget about me and tell me "what are you doing here?"

"Mamma actually Bhaiyya brought me here for Navarati and I told him to inform Neev Uncle or you but he said "no""

"Navin, is that true?" Asked by Prachi

"Ma, it's not true.

I said let's call Uncle or you but Nikki said "no""

"When did I say not to call Mamma or Uncle?

It was you" Said by Naina

"No,

It

Was

You" Said by Navin

"No

It

Wasn't" (Naina)

"It

Was

You" (Navin)

"Will you both, both stop arguing? Now!" said by annoyed Prachi "Beta, how many times I told you not to wear short sleeves? You know very well about your allergy from the sun." said by a caring mother

"Ma, sorry and I'll remember next time" said by Navin (who thought he was a goner than remembered that Ma doesn't do anything only Uncle does).

"And you Nikki, what is this?" said by Prachi

"What Mamma and how many times I told you not to call me Nikki its Naina Virani Karan Virani's daughter?" said by annoyed Naina

"Indeed you are Karan Juju's daughter but even I'm your Mansi so listen up carefully – no more junk food for you or television for a week." Said by Prachi again (who was annoyed)

Navin was teasing Naina by calling her Nikki and about no television when Prachi also shuts him up by saying no parties at all and no going out on date with any of Naina's friend or Bhoomi's friend.

Milind was amazed by Prachi's sense of humour because a second ago she was upset about their marriage happened few years ago and now she is happy all again (found it weird).

"Navin, aren't you going to introduce us?" Said by Rajveer

"Sorry Man,

This is my dearest mother Prachi (who I told you about during KMA days) (Raj interrupts "Oh! Yes! So this mean she is you Mansi, who have token care of you and Naina when your Parents' died") (Navin continues – Yes Raj, she is our mother than Mansi anyways let's forget this topic and get some sleep cause I'm tired)."

Prachi smiled at her nephew than was about to leave when Milind stopped her from leaving and asked her if they can talk because this was the right time or else it will be too late even Prachi thought the same. Soon as Naina, Navin and Alekh left with Rajveer her and Milind both went inside his room and talked for several hours… … … … … … … … … … … … … … … … … … … … … … … … … … … … … … … … … … … … … … … …

Edited by Jai-Bani_Kasamh - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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PS: If Part 8 doesn't make sense than please forgive me like I said I had a agruement with my brothers so I feel deepress 😭 please forgive me if there is many mistake or anything else.
Edited by Jai-Bani_Kasamh - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hello sweety nice part atleast now both Milind and Prachi are aware of their relation to each other. So the kids save the day hmm good thing the confusion was cleared that they aren't Prachi's real kids. 😊 Even though written under stress it was very beautifully written keep updating. 😊

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