**Bidaai -P 9 pg14-Milind - Prachi talk** - Page 7

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Posted: 17 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: pari911

awww sweet story just finished reading it now... keep it up... keep writing... looking forward to what happens to MP

In future there will be more Michi scenes, but now just tolerate Prachi's behavour toward Milind 😆

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Thanks for waiting along time to read Michi's scene, but you will have to wait for some more times 😆

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: Chor-Ki-Kashish

I finally read all the parts and they are just to good to come true...And I also like the idea of Prachi being married to Milind at a young age....keep up the good work.... 👏

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: AnjaliThapar

Indeed a great story you got so please continue soon as possible 😛

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: swetha10

Hey Kashish..i jus caught up with ur FF..itz jus fantastic... 👏 I really luved ur writing..looking forward for da next part..i mean da Michi scene..i'm sure itz goin to b very sensual... 😉 😉 😉
Gr8 goin...Plzz continue... 😊

Well thank you and please tolerate Prachi for her behavour toward Milind and his family........😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: blind horizon

I think it was a wonderful part and please don't be disappointed in yourself I really love your work. Do continue wen you get the time. Can't wait to know why Prachi fainted by the way. 😊

Indeed, it feels good to be back on track so enjoy .... the next part😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part – VII (This part is kindly for both group, but less Michi scene for now)

Recap - Milind saves Prachi from the thugs and Navin and his sister are going to Rajveer's place along with Cadet Alekh.

Milind was unsure, what to do with fainted Prachi so he took her to his house where many people asked him question, but Milind didn't bother to answer back because he cared less in what people thing only thing matters to him was humanity nothing else. Soon as Milind reached home with Prachi he asked both of his sisters to call a doctor while on the other side Neev felt like someone close to his heart was in pain, but, "who" After thinking a-lot Neev decided to call Manthan to see if he is fine than Bhoomi who is recently in London where he is going. Afterwards he called Kanchanjunga Military Academy, to see if Naina and Navin are fine but he was disappointed because they didn't inform him before leaving the academy. Next on list he called Shagun and Tanu who are enjoying their vacation. One thing he was amazed that each and everyone he called are fine except for Navin; Naina (who he didn't get to talk with) next was only left Prachi so he called Prachi but no answer. Neev was worried like hell for them while on the road Navin and his friends are enjoying themselves.

Halfway, of the journey, Navin was driving than Rajveer took over and let Navin and Alekh sleep in the back while Naina gave him company. They both talked about several things like: childhood, school life and academy life. Naina was happy to learn about her brother's carefree act because in a way he was similar to Neev Uncle and Manthan Bhai is like Mamma in a way rest was like his father rough, attitude problem just like Alekh Bhai and also sweet at same time. I wonder if Manthan still remember her – "of course silly you are his cute sister, but Shagun and Tanu, are cutie than you".

"Hey,

Naina, Naina, Naina" Said by Rajveer Sir

Slowly Naina came out of her thought when Raj stepped on the break hard but nothing disturbed Navin Bhaiyya and Alekh Bhai. Raj asked Naina sweetly "what were you thinking about?"

Naina looked into Rajveer Sir's eyes than said "Sir, I was thinking about my childhood where my real parents left us all alone, but god was great and gave us support of Mansi and Neev Uncle who have token our parent's place that now a days we don't even remember them, but for sure if anything happens to Mamma and Neev Uncle than we won't be able to live. It's like our lives are trapped in them. Isn't it funny that in early age my Mansi became mother of several kids for example, me, and bro are from Mansi's side than Shagun and Tanu are from Mamu's side and not but least Bhoomi Di and Manthan are from Neev Uncle's side and all these relationship mean a-lot to us. Sometimes, I wonder if blood relationship is stronger than the relationship we make. Isn't funny Sir?"

Raj also looked into Naina's eyes than says "indeed those relationships are precious to us in many ways for example, mine and Milind." Naina looked confused and asked "who is Milind?"

"Milind is my childhood friend, who I shared all my pain with and happiness after my parent's death, but Milind's father never let us feel lonely." Said by Raj and again Naina was confused in by "us" so she asked Sir in what he met by "us". Raj told her about his sister Simran who is living with Milind and his family like his sister when he is at the academy on duty."

"Oh! I see… … … … that's why you have great taste in buying female clothing?" said by Naina, (who was bushing by Alekh's comment about her and Rajveer).

Back to Neev, he was sitting in the plane, but before he a-boarded the flight he called Shah Mansion and found out that Prachi had left her cell-phone home before going to the mandir. Neev doesn't realize that Dadi lied to him about Prachi who didn't return home last night.

Back at Milind's place, Simran was taking care of Prachi while Prachi was thinking about the event that occurred few minutes ago, where her own husband saved her from those thugs, but her only concern is that she loves Neev a-lot and always will. Before anyone return back to check on her she decide to kill, herself because she can't live without Neev or she can't accept her husband, who she hardly knows, Without worrying, Prachi was about to jump off when, we hear someone scream "Mammmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa"

PS: Indeed, I feel good to be back on tack but i'll be able to update whenever i'm free so please don't forget to repley and also please make me feel welcome back casuse it been a-long time that i'm sacred if people forgot about this fan-fic due to my exams. Please leave your comments cause they are supportive 😳.

Edited by Jai-Bani_Kasamh - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#68
Hey sweety I just read the last part. Good going girl ofcourse we can't forget you or your ff it's a very nice piece of work. Do continue soon. 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
#69
Hey nice part...gr8 goin keep it up...Looking forward for da next part... 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
#70
hi, read ur fanfic today and i love ur concept...cant wait to read the next part 😃

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