FF: WOH AJNABEE: Update:Part 48:Dec 6th 2009:p 172 - Page 31

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Posted: 17 years ago
hitting myself with a stick.....
sorry hunny forgot to leave a comment for your wonderfull part...
love the saala part...
mills better comes in action against ayesha...
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Posted: 17 years ago
To everyone who comments:

Thank you so much for everyone's comments. Lately, I have been trying to reply to everyone who posts here, because I am honestly so grateful that you guys are liking this FF.

Please continue posting your wonderful comments, thought, and ideas.

Love, CanadianBeauty
Edited by canadianbeauty - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago

Recap: Milind and Prachi's trip is cut short because they find out that Ayesha tried to commit suicide. They arrive back in Mumbai.

Part 21:

Prachi stepped out of the car, holding Milind's hand and walked to the house, as the driver took out their luggage. Alaap walked behind the couple, surprised to see how loving his sister and brother-in-law were acting towards each other.

Prachi opened the door, and was surprised to see her mother waiting there anxiously. Wasting no time, Premlatha wrapped her arms around her daughter in a tight hug and smiled. Premlatha also looked at Milind and smiled. Sukriti came running up to her brother and hugged him and then turned and hugged her sister-in-law.

"Bhabhi, thank God you are home. Everything has been so crazy here," explained Sukriti.

Before Prachi could reply to Sukriti, she saw a figure approaching her from a nearby room, and quickly moved towards him.

"Namaste Baba," she quickly greeted him as she bowed down to get his ashirwad. Stopping her half-way, he hugged her and looked up to see Milind staring back at him.

Earlier, on the flight home, Prachi had told Milind that Mishra Ji was no longer angry at him. Prachi explained that her mother had told Mishra Ji, that what he had witnessed at the picnic was simply a misunderstanding between Milind and Prachi, and that everything was fine now. Milind had been so relieved to hear the news from Prachi. However, now that he was standing in front of his father, he did not know how to react, especially knowing that the news of Ayesha's suicide attempt had probably affected his father.

"Baba…" Milind started to say, but was interrupted when his father held up his hand to silence his son.

"It's okay Milind. You do not have to say anything. I am just happy to see that you and my bahu are happy."

Thankful that his father did not need to hear anything from him, Milind rushed towards Mishra Ji and enveloped him in a great bear hug.

"Sorry to interrupt this family moment," said a smug voice from behind Milind, "but Milind, Ayesha really wants to see you." Milind knew that voice belonged to Alaap, and turned around to give his brother-in-law a very intense glare.

Before Milind could reply, Prachi slipped her hand into Milind's grasp, and softly whispered, "Chalo. Let's go upstairs." Milind nodded in agreement and was about to start walking up the stairs, when he saw Neev standing with Bobby.

"Prachi, hold on a moment. You go on ahead, and I will be up shortly," he stated, as he stared in Neev's direction.

Prachi nodded in agreement, not realizing why Milind needed to stay downstairs for a little bit longer.

As Prachi made her way upstairs, towards Ayesha's room, Milind walked over to Neev. Neev noticed Milind approaching and was extremely confused.

"Neev. Can I talk to you for a second," he asked, interrupting Neev's conversation with Bobby.

"What do you want Milind?" asked Neev in a no-nonsense type manner. Neev was no idiot. He knew that Milind hated him and barely ever talked to him. "Why is he trying to talk to me?" thought Neev.

"Sorry to interrupt your conversation with Bobby, but I need to speak with you," answered Milind.

"What is going on?" thought Neev. Neev knew that Milind never acted cordial to him, and right now he was even apologizing for interrupting his conversation with Bobby. "Something is definitely up," thought Neev. "Fine, Milind. What do you need to talk to me about?," responded Neev.

Suddenly feeling very uncomfortable in his own home, Milind responded, "Let's go out to the garden to talk."

Shrugging his shoulders, Neev followed Milind outside, wondering exactly what Milind had to say.

***

In the mean time, Prachi knocked on Ayesha's open bedroom door, hoping Ayesha would let her in.

"Come in Prachi Shah," responded Ayesha, who was lying in bed, with her head hoisted up by a couple pillows. Ayesha turned the television off and looked directly at Prachi.

Prachi was happy to see that Ayesha was talking, and feeling a bit better. However, Prachi could tell from the glare Ayesha was giving her, that this conversation was not going to be easy.

"Ayesha, I am so glad you are okay," said Prachi, with a smile on her face.

"Are you?" asked Ayesha, with sarcasm imminent in her tone.

Prachi continued smiling, ignoring the icy tone that Ayesha spoke in. Prachi moved towards Ayesha's bed.

"Don't come near me," snapped Ayesha.

Prachi froze a couple feet away from Ayesha's bed. "Lekin Ayesha…mein.."

"Shut up Prachi Shah! Just shut up!" yelled Ayesha.

Calming down a little, Ayesha composed herself, as Prachi stood there in fear.

"Tell me something Prachi Shah, did you sleep with him?"

"What?!" responded Prachi loudly, with shock in her voice.

"Are you deaf? Did you sleep with Milind?," asked Ayesha again, this time her voice getting loude a.

Prachi found herself getting surprisingly defensive, and confident. "That, Ayesha," she responded in a stern voice, "is none of your business."

"You bitch!" yelled Ayesha, "It is my business! Milind is my life!!!" Ayesha was getting agitated, and Prachi knew that her presence was causing it. Thankfully, Sukriti ran into the room.

"What's going on here?" asked Sukriti, who had been prompted to come into the room when she heard Ayesha yelling.

"Nothing, Sukriti," responded Prachi calmly, "I have to go unpack. Can you please stay with Ayesha?" As soon as Prachi said the sentence, she turned around and started walking away.

"Okay Bhabhi," responded Sukriti as Prachi left the room.

***

"What is it?" asked Neev, as he walked into the garden with Milind.

Milind stared at Neev, and finally answered, "Look Neev, I really don't know how to say this…so I'm just going to say it."

"What?" asked Neev curiously.

"I am sorry."

"WHAT?!?" exclaimed Neev.

Milind suddenly felt agitated, "I SAID that I'm sorry."

"Are you joking?" asked Neev seriously.

Milind sighed. He knew this was not going to be easy. "Look Neev," he spoke, "I'm serious. I blamed you for a lot of things, and even humiliated you. I am sorry. I hope we can bury the hatchet and put our pasts behind us."

Neev did not know what to say. He was shocked at the very fact that Milind had just expressed regret.

"Look, Neev," continued Milind, "I love Prachi. I love her more than anything else in the world, and I know her friendship with you means a lot to her. So, for her sake, I want us to be friends."

Neev finally responded, "Milind, it's true that I loved Prachi, and I don't know, I think I still do. But, as painful as this is for me to say, I know that she only loves you. I've known this for a while now, and I'm trying to move ahead with my life too. Hopefully, I can be as happy as you two seem to be now."

Milind had not expected Neev to react like this, but he was glad that Neev was talking to him honestly. "Man," spoke Milind, "I hope you and Ayesha can be happy too."

"Well, Milind, I don't think Ayesha is made for me, and I don't think I am made for her. But I know that you and Prachi are made for each other. I honestly just want her to be happy. Prachi may not have been the girl for me, but she's still my best friend. I just want you to keep her happy," stated Neev, surprised to see himself opening up to Milind.

"Neev, I promise you. I will keep Prachi happy for as long as I live."

"Good!" laughed Neev, "Or else…I might come out and take her away!"

Milind found himself laughing, "I don't think so buddy!"

"Friends?" asked Neev, as he placed his hand out in Milind's direction.

Milind reached in and shook Neev's hand. "Friends!" replied Milind with a smile on his face.

***

Hi guys! I tried to update as soon as I found time! Please leave your comments.

I've noticed that every time I post a new part, there are over a 1000 views for the post, but not everyone leaves a comment. Please please leave your comments! I love reading them and they motivate me to update faster. And for those who have been leaving comments, thank you!! (I have been trying to reply to each post!)

Edited by canadianbeauty - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
me first 😃

haila...mp back and prachi standing up to ayesha...woo hoo...that was just great...i loved it...👏...and how sweet milind and neev are friends...thats cool...that is just great...

JAZ
Edited by jnawaz - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
ohhhhh i luv reading ur ff. 😃 how dare ayesha ask such a personal question 😡 iam 😲 at prachi's reply.she is really gr8 in mrs misra mode i like it 😆 😆 and neev and millsi bcame frnds gr8 woooowwwwwwww. already waiting for the next part 😉 update sooooooooon😳
Edited by chituku - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
Honey...don't worry about ppl leaving comments... 😳
People who are genuinely interested will leave their opinions and comments... 😳

So, here i go...I loved this part...is this like a filler part for the next one..was just wondering about it...As i read the part it just stuck me that way...

Now that you have cleared Milind and Neev's misunderstanding and left ayesha as she is....What is going to happen next!!

Honey..you are brilliant..as i have said previously your FF rockz!!

There is one more person whose FF i used to love on the Kayamath forum..blind horizon aka Muneeza.. you both are on a league of your own..

Another well written part from you..!! Expecting to see the next part soon! 😳



Edited by panache - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago

Haiiiiiiii this FF is sooo freaking good!

im addicted...im really sorry if i didnt comment before..im a silent reader..and i just love your FF...

finally my milind and neev are friendsss!!😆
loved the part where milind and neev are talking:

"Neev, I promise you. I will keep Prachi happy for as long as I live."

"Good!" laughed Neev, "Or else…I might come out and take her away!"

Milind found himself laughing, "I don't think so buddy!"

"Friends?" asked Neev, as he placed his hand out in Milind's direction.

Milind reached in and shook Neev's hand. "Friends!" replied Milind with a smile on his face.

Love thiss FF..its awesome..please continueee!!!

love, jess<3

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Posted: 17 years ago
Hey CB,

AWSOME update... just loved it and im glad tht u did something different with Neev and Miland's relationship.. their starting of friendship seems to be good and i hope they become tight friends soon w/o any further misunderstandings 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey i am soo glad that u updated. lovely part cont soon
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Posted: 17 years ago

it was beatifual and very nice part.

i love to read this FF and you write very nice parts.

love the part about neev and milind becoming friends.

ayesha milind is married man, ayesha you have no right to ask prachi about milind and prachi's married life.

please do write soon.

Edited by sam78 - 17 years ago

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